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Zeref

Zeref

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Name : Zeref A. Yuki
Age : 21
Race : Human
Faction : Marine
Crew : Divine Order
Ship : Haven
Haki Level : 2
Attack (ATK) : 0
Defense (DEF) : 0
Reflex (RX) : 0
Willpower (WP) : 0
Level : 10
Experience Points : 1000
Berries : 50,000
Posts : 21

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PostSubject: Elite Fighting Style   Elite Fighting Style EmptySat Aug 10, 2019 5:20 pm


Elite Fighting Style


Fighting Style: Elite Fighting Style
Weapon Utilization: Sword and Martial Arts
Description: A style of swordsmanship refined by years of adventure and battler, passed from Master Higurashi to Zeref as a young teenager of Snow-Hawk Island. For years Master Higurashi had perfect a beautiful combination of martial arts and rapier swordsmanship, though finding only one who would be able to bother use and even refine the art itself, young Zeref.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:

Passive Ability: Through refining the craft through his years as a Marine, Zeref is capable of increasing his Reflexes with his sharpened focus by 10% however when he focuses it equally weakens his defensiveness by 10%.


Techniques



Light Techniques:
 

Medium Techniques:
 

Heavy Techniques:
 

AoE Techniques:
 






Last edited by Zeref on Sun Aug 11, 2019 8:54 pm; edited 5 times in total
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Gray

Gray

Elite Fighting Style Cool-t10
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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 25,000,000,000
[baneoftheweak][childofdestiny][bookworm]
[windcaller][punchoutguru][endgameboss]
Posts : 1640

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PostSubject: Re: Elite Fighting Style   Elite Fighting Style EmptySun Aug 11, 2019 2:55 pm

[You're on the right track, just need a revision. Please see the comments and adjust accordingly. Thanks! (Comments in brown.) ]

@Zeref wrote:

Elite Fighting Style


Fighting Style: Elite Fighting Style
Weapon Utilization: Sword and Martial Arts
Description: A style of swordsmanship refined by years of adventure and battler, passed from Master Higurashi to Zeref as a young teenager of Snow-Hawk Island. For years Master Higurashi had perfect a beautiful combination of martial arts and rapier swordsmanship, though finding only one who would be able to bother use and even refine the art itself, young Zeref.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:

Passive Ability: Through refining the craft through his years as a Marine, Zeref is capable of increasing his Reflexes with his sharpened focus by 10% however when he focuses it equally weakens his defensiveness by 10%.


Techniques



Light Techniques:
 

Medium Techniques:
 

Heavy Techniques:
 

AoE Techniques:
 





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Zeref

Zeref

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Name : Zeref A. Yuki
Age : 21
Race : Human
Faction : Marine
Crew : Divine Order
Ship : Haven
Haki Level : 2
Attack (ATK) : 0
Defense (DEF) : 0
Reflex (RX) : 0
Willpower (WP) : 0
Level : 10
Experience Points : 1000
Berries : 50,000
Posts : 21

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PostSubject: Re: Elite Fighting Style   Elite Fighting Style EmptySun Aug 11, 2019 7:37 pm

I edited, please have a second look and let me know if I got them all.
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Gray

Gray

Elite Fighting Style Cool-t10
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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 25,000,000,000
[baneoftheweak][childofdestiny][bookworm]
[windcaller][punchoutguru][endgameboss]
Posts : 1640

Elite Fighting Style Empty
PostSubject: Re: Elite Fighting Style   Elite Fighting Style EmptySun Aug 11, 2019 8:22 pm

Please remove the duration field from all Flat (non-hybrid) techniques.
The duration of a Flat technique is not 1 post because it deals its damage immediately. (You can have effects from its flavour text last longer, but the mechanical damage should still be dealt immediately.)
Cooldown for Divine Justice should be 9 posts. (5 base cooldown + 4 duration)
Cooldown for both AoEs should be 11 posts. (7 base cooldown + 4 duration)

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Zeref

Zeref

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Name : Zeref A. Yuki
Age : 21
Race : Human
Faction : Marine
Crew : Divine Order
Ship : Haven
Haki Level : 2
Attack (ATK) : 0
Defense (DEF) : 0
Reflex (RX) : 0
Willpower (WP) : 0
Level : 10
Experience Points : 1000
Berries : 50,000
Posts : 21

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PostSubject: Re: Elite Fighting Style   Elite Fighting Style EmptySun Aug 11, 2019 8:34 pm

Re-edited, Please let me know how to proceed further. Also thanks for your time.
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Gray

Gray

Elite Fighting Style Cool-t10
Tracker

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 25,000,000,000
[baneoftheweak][childofdestiny][bookworm]
[windcaller][punchoutguru][endgameboss]
Posts : 1640

Elite Fighting Style Empty
PostSubject: Re: Elite Fighting Style   Elite Fighting Style EmptySun Aug 11, 2019 8:56 pm

Approved! Thanks for your patience.


@Zeref wrote:

Elite Fighting Style


Fighting Style: Elite Fighting Style
Weapon Utilization: Sword and Martial Arts
Description: A style of swordsmanship refined by years of adventure and battler, passed from Master Higurashi to Zeref as a young teenager of Snow-Hawk Island. For years Master Higurashi had perfect a beautiful combination of martial arts and rapier swordsmanship, though finding only one who would be able to bother use and even refine the art itself, young Zeref.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:

Passive Ability: Through refining the craft through his years as a Marine, Zeref is capable of increasing his Reflexes with his sharpened focus by 10% however when he focuses it equally weakens his defensiveness by 10%.


Techniques



Light Techniques:
 

Medium Techniques:
 

Heavy Techniques:
 

AoE Techniques:
 





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