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Makaze
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Age : 0
Haki Level : 2
Hitpoints (HP) : 140
Attack (ATK) : 40
Defense (DEF) : 40
Reflex (RX) : 40
Willpower (WP) : 80
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Makaze's First Style Empty Makaze's First Style

on Tue Aug 20, 2019 1:23 pm

Strong Style Fishmen Karate
   


   Fighting Style: Strong Style
   Weapon Utilization: No
   Description: This form of Style. Is Offense and Defense. It rallies on Internal blows, and devastating attacks. It constants of Mostly Punches and Kicks for offense, and Blocking with Feet and And Elbows.


   Toggled and Passive Abilities: Strong Style Devastator: The User takes a Stance, in a Offensive Manner. Does not leave any openings. It's a Iron Clad Stance. This Stance grants the User.It gives a 10%  To Willpower, 5% Strength and Defense ANd a -20% To Reflex. This does Stack with Haki. if the User chooses too use Haki.
   


   Techniques
   




   
Light Techniques:

   Strong Uok
   Technique Type: Flat
   Technique Level: 1
   Maximum Base Range: 5m
   Cooldown: 1
   Duration: N/A
   Buffs: None
   Debuffs: None
   Description:Once the Enemy is with close Range. a Swing of his right Hand would be given to the enemy, And would send them flying based on the User Strength,


Strong Uak
   Technique Type: Flat
   Technique Level: 1
   Maximum Base Range: 3m
   Cooldown: 1
   Duration: N/A
   Buffs: None
   Debuffs: None
   Description:Once within Range, The User Drops low and does a Sweeping Kick.

Strong Jumpokg Uqk
   Technique Type: Flat
   Technique Level: 1
   Maximum Base Range: 10m
   Cooldown: 1
   Duration: N/A
   Buffs: None
   Debuffs: None
   Description:A Jumping kick is give once the enemy is close.
   

   
Medium Techniques:

   Super Strong Jumpoka Uqk
   Technique Type: Flat
   Technique Level: 1
   Maximum Base Range:10
   Cooldown: 3
   Duration: N/A
   Buffs: None
   Debuffs: None
   Description: A much more powerful attack then the previous version, this one is a Swift Jumping Hook kick to whatever Limb the User decides to target.
   

   
Heavy Techniques:

   Pressure Cooker
   Technique Type: Hybrid Dot
   Technique Level: 1
   Maximum Base Range: 10
   Cooldown: 8
   Duration: 3
   Buffs: None
   Debuffs: Enemy suffers 10% Defense and Reflex, And Willpower(lost) For the fight. each turn for the rest of the duration of the technique,.
   Description: Using the Fishermen Internal Technique. Makaze sends in invisble Wave in a form of a Punch towards the Enemy if contacted with a specific Limb or body part they would feel their insides Burn.
   

   
AoE Techniques:

   Super Pressure Cooker
   Technique Type: Hybird DOT
   Technique Level: 1
   Maximum Base Range:10
   Maximum Base AoE Radius: 12.5(Width And Length) In Meters
   Cooldown: 11
   Duration: 4
   Buffs: None
   Debuffs: Enemies lose 15% Reflex,5% Defense, and 5% Attack, Willpower  if struck Each turn during the Duration.
   Description: Sends a Kicks across the air. Sending an Invisible attack in shape of air, in the form of a Kick towards the enemies within the User's line of vision. If connected the enemies will have their insides hurting.
   


   


   


Last edited by Makaze on Wed Aug 21, 2019 6:16 pm; edited 3 times in total
Gray
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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" / 310 cm
Weight : 1043 lbs / 473 kg
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 9
[[haospec]][[busospec]][[kenbunspec]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 700
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Shop Discount : -20%
Berries Berries : 25,000,000,000
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Makaze's First Style Empty Re: Makaze's First Style

on Tue Aug 20, 2019 8:40 pm
[Comments in brown. Please review and correct.]
@Makaze wrote:    

Strong Style Fishmen Karate
   


   Fighting Style: Strong Style
   Weapon Utilization: No
   Description: This form of Style. Is Offense and Defense. It rallies on Internal blows, and devastating attacks. It constants of Mostly Punches and Kicks for offense, and Blocking with Feet and And Elbows.


   Toggled and Passive Abilities: Strong Style Devastator: The User takes a Stance, in a Offensive Manner. Does not leave any openings. It's a Iron Clad Stance. This Stance grants the User. 5% will, Reflex, Attack and Defense This does Stack with Haki. if the User chooses too use Haki. [Toggled abilities need to have stats balanced out. So, if you have a total of +20% buffs, you need to have a total of -20% debuffs.]
   


   Techniques
   




   
Light Techniques:

   Strong Uok
   Technique Type: Flat
   Technique Level: 1
   Maximum Base Range: 5
   Cooldown: 1
   Duration: 2 [ Flat techniques do not get a duration. They are instantaneous (as in, they deal their damage immediately. This comment applies to all subsequent Flat techniques that you have durations for. ]
   Buffs: None
   Debuffs: None
   Description:Once the Enemy is with close Range. a Swing of his right Hand would be given to the enemy, And would send them flying based on the User Strength,


Strong Uak
   Technique Type: Flat
   Technique Level: 1
   Maximum Base Range: 3 [ I'm assuming this is in meters. ]
   Cooldown: 1
   Duration: 2
   Buffs: None
   Debuffs: None
   Description:Once within Range, The User Drops low and does a Sweeping Kick.

Strong Jumpokg Uqk
   Technique Type: Flat
   Technique Level: 1
   Maximum Base Range: 10
   Cooldown: 1
   Duration: 2
   Buffs: None
   Debuffs: None
   Description:A Jumping kick is give once the enemy is close.
   

   
Medium Techniques:

   Super Strong Jumpoka Uqk
   Technique Type: Flat
   Technique Level: 1
   Maximum Base Range:10
   Cooldown: 2 [ Minimum cooldown for MTs is 3. ]
   Duration: 3
   Buffs: None
   Debuffs: None
   Description: A much more powerful attack then the previous version, this one is a Swift Jumping Hook kick to whatever Limb the User decides to target.
   

   
Heavy Techniques:

   Pressure Cooker
   Technique Type: DOT
   Technique Level: 1
   Maximum Base Range: 10
   Cooldown: 5
   Duration: 3
   Buffs: None
   Debuffs: Enemy suffers 10% Defense and Reflex(lost) For the fight. each turn for the rest of the duration of the technique,. [ Pure DoTs can't apply debuffs. See DoT hybrids in the combat guide. ]
   Description: Using the Fishermen Internal Technique. Makaze sends in invisble Wave in a form of a Punch towards the Enemy if contacted with a specific Limb or body part they would feel their insides Burn.
   

   
AoE Techniques:

   Super Pressure Cooker
   Technique Type: Dot
   Technique Level: 1
   Maximum Base Range:10
   Maximum Base AoE Radius: 12.5(Width And Length) In Meters
   Cooldown: 7
   Duration: 4.
   Buffs: None
   Debuffs: Enemies lose 15% Reflex, Defense, and 5% Attack if struck Each turn during the Duration. [ See my comment for your HT and apply it here also. ]
   Description: Sends a Kicks across the air. Sending an Invisible attack in shape of air, in the form of a Kick towards the enemies within the User's line of vision. If connected the enemies will have their insides hurting.
   


   


   


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Makaze
Tracker

Age : 0
Haki Level : 2
Hitpoints (HP) : 140
Attack (ATK) : 40
Defense (DEF) : 40
Reflex (RX) : 40
Willpower (WP) : 80
Level : 1
Experience Points : 100
Berries Berries : 50,000
Posts : 19
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Makaze's First Style Empty Re: Makaze's First Style

on Tue Aug 20, 2019 11:22 pm
I hope I fixed it right??? Please let me know <3
Gray
Makaze's First Style Cool-t10
Tracker

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" / 310 cm
Weight : 1043 lbs / 473 kg
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 9
[[haospec]][[busospec]][[kenbunspec]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 700
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Shop Discount : -20%
Berries Berries : 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[freakofnature]][[childofdestiny]]
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Makaze's First Style Empty Re: Makaze's First Style

on Wed Aug 21, 2019 1:55 am
Cooldown for HT should be 8 (base 5 cooldown + 3 because of duration).
Cooldown for AoE should be 11 (base 7 cooldown + 4 because of duration).

Also, I'm assuming the stat debuffs in the AoE are as follows: 15% Reflex, 5% Attack, 5% Defense, 5% Willpower. Correct me if I'm mistaken.

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Makaze
Tracker

Age : 0
Haki Level : 2
Hitpoints (HP) : 140
Attack (ATK) : 40
Defense (DEF) : 40
Reflex (RX) : 40
Willpower (WP) : 80
Level : 1
Experience Points : 100
Berries Berries : 50,000
Posts : 19
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Makaze's First Style Empty Re: Makaze's First Style

on Wed Aug 21, 2019 6:14 pm
Fixed.

The answer to your question is yes.
Gray
Makaze's First Style Cool-t10
Tracker

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" / 310 cm
Weight : 1043 lbs / 473 kg
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 9
[[haospec]][[busospec]][[kenbunspec]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 700
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Shop Discount : -20%
Berries Berries : 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[freakofnature]][[childofdestiny]]
[[punchoutguru]][[windcaller]]
[[atkt6_sp]][[deft6]][[rxt6]][[wpt6]]
Posts : 2093
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Makaze's First Style Empty Re: Makaze's First Style

on Wed Aug 21, 2019 6:17 pm
Approved.

@Makaze wrote:

Strong Style Fishmen Karate
   


   Fighting Style: Strong Style
   Weapon Utilization: No
   Description: This form of Style. Is Offense and Defense. It rallies on Internal blows, and devastating attacks. It constants of Mostly Punches and Kicks for offense, and Blocking with Feet and And Elbows.


   Toggled and Passive Abilities: Strong Style Devastator: The User takes a Stance, in a Offensive Manner. Does not leave any openings. It's a Iron Clad Stance. This Stance grants the User.It gives a 10%  To Willpower, 5% Strength and Defense ANd a -20% To Reflex. This does Stack with Haki. if the User chooses too use Haki.
   


   Techniques
   




   
Light Techniques:

   Strong Uok
   Technique Type: Flat
   Technique Level: 1
   Maximum Base Range: 5m
   Cooldown: 1
   Duration: N/A
   Buffs: None
   Debuffs: None
   Description:Once the Enemy is with close Range. a Swing of his right Hand would be given to the enemy, And would send them flying based on the User Strength,


Strong Uak
   Technique Type: Flat
   Technique Level: 1
   Maximum Base Range: 3m
   Cooldown: 1
   Duration: N/A
   Buffs: None
   Debuffs: None
   Description:Once within Range, The User Drops low and does a Sweeping Kick.

Strong Jumpokg Uqk
   Technique Type: Flat
   Technique Level: 1
   Maximum Base Range: 10m
   Cooldown: 1
   Duration: N/A
   Buffs: None
   Debuffs: None
   Description:A Jumping kick is give once the enemy is close.
   

   
Medium Techniques:

   Super Strong Jumpoka Uqk
   Technique Type: Flat
   Technique Level: 1
   Maximum Base Range:10
   Cooldown: 3
   Duration: N/A
   Buffs: None
   Debuffs: None
   Description: A much more powerful attack then the previous version, this one is a Swift Jumping Hook kick to whatever Limb the User decides to target.
   

   
Heavy Techniques:

   Pressure Cooker
   Technique Type: Hybrid Dot
   Technique Level: 1
   Maximum Base Range: 10
   Cooldown: 8
   Duration: 3
   Buffs: None
   Debuffs: Enemy suffers 10% Defense and Reflex, And Willpower(lost) For the fight. each turn for the rest of the duration of the technique,.
   Description: Using the Fishermen Internal Technique. Makaze sends in invisble Wave in a form of a Punch towards the Enemy if contacted with a specific Limb or body part they would feel their insides Burn.
   

   
AoE Techniques:

   Super Pressure Cooker
   Technique Type: Hybird DOT
   Technique Level: 1
   Maximum Base Range:10
   Maximum Base AoE Radius: 12.5(Width And Length) In Meters
   Cooldown: 11
   Duration: 4
   Buffs: None
   Debuffs: Enemies lose 15% Reflex,5% Defense, and 5% Attack, Willpower  if struck Each turn during the Duration.
   Description: Sends a Kicks across the air. Sending an Invisible attack in shape of air, in the form of a Kick towards the enemies within the User's line of vision. If connected the enemies will have their insides hurting.
   


   


   

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