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Ghost
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Name : Ghost AnDha Shell
Epithet : The Reaper Of The Marine
Age : 24
Height : 5'8
Weight : 160
Species : Human
Faction : Marine
Crew Position : Navigator
Devil Fruit : Bomu Bomu no Mi (Bomb-Bomb Fruit)
Haki Level : 1
Hitpoints (HP) : 100
Attack (ATK) : 110
Defense (DEF) : 85
Reflex (RX) : 100
Willpower (WP) : 110
Level : 10
Experience Points : 1000
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Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) Empty Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)

on Wed Sep 18, 2019 12:16 pm

Bomb Bomb no mi


Devil Fruit:Bomb Bomb no mi
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance: The bomu bomu no mi looks just like a yellow and orange pear with spikes all around it.
Devil Fruit Description: Allows the user to turn his body and body parts into explosives. Which the user is not harmed by. He could also eat gun power properties. Causing damage to all in his range.


Fighting Style: Bomb Voyage
Weapon Utilization: Air grenades filled with the user sweat allows him to bomb people from away.
Description: This devil fruit fighting style allows the user to create bombs of all sizes. From any part of his body of things off of his body such as sweat hair or even his breathe etc. By doing this he will be able to cause such high level explosions keeping his enemies at bay and destroying the surrounding landscape at large.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Passive
*The user and people he deem his allies are not harm by the bomb bomb no mi power of explosions.
*Upon hitting 59% hp or less the user gets a full 15%
attack  power up and a 15% defense deubff



Techniques



Light Techniques:

Big Bang Boom
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 1
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The user snaps his fingers as the sweat in his fingers directly we he was aiming at. Aiming to hit his target. The explosion will travel the meters giving and will be as large as ten feet tall.


Bomb Wave
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 1
Duration: N/A
Buffs:  N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: Swiping his his both left and right the user will cause an explosion to take place. Knocking all who is caught up in his attack back hurting them. He will swipe left and right a total of four times meaning two left and two right.


Exhake Destruction
Technique Type: Flat hybird
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 3
Duration: 2
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: 10% reflex reduction
Description: The user will breathe his target way causing a massive explosion. Blowing back all in his range if he could.  Causing a 10% reduction in reflex for the duration limit.

Bomb Takeoff
Technique Type: Dot/hybird
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50 meters
Cooldown: 3
Duration: 2
Buffs:  10% reflex
Debuffs: N/A
Description: flicking his hair or sweat from his hands. The user will cause his hands to explode. Allowing him to take off into the air. By keep repeating this it will allow him to stay airborne for the duration of the time. Those who are caught up in its after effect will take 3 hp Dot once per post.  As the user gains a 10% reflex buff

Medium Techniques:

Exploding Tastebuds
Technique Type: Flat hybird
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 6
Duration: 3
Buffs: 15% attack buff
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The user will grab his target by the face. Then by using his sweat he will cause his bomb to go explode right on his target face at full impact. He would be so pumped up he will gain a increase in attack.


Bomb Wave X2
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50 meters
Cooldown: 3
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The user will swing his body in a 360 motion. Letting off his sweat hair etc. Causing an explosion wave to come about all around himself.



Heavy Techniques:

United State Of Bombs
Technique Type: Flat hybird
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range: 100 meters
Cooldown: 9
Duration: 4
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: 30% to Defense
Description: The user will jump up to 20 meters within the air. Then he will take a lock of his hair and shake it out. Causing it to slowly fall. Soon each hair piece about 100 in total would start to explode all around the giving area in meter range. Causing a 30% Defense reduction.


Earth Shaker
Technique Type: Flat hybird
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50 meters
Cooldown: 9
Duration: 4
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: 10% to reflex
Description: The user will touch the very ground with his sweaty palms. Causing an explosion to come about. Causing the ground to shake rapidly. Making his foes trip over each other in the chaos.


Hug It Out
Technique Type: hybrid/DOT
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: contact
Cooldown: 9
Duration: 4
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: 5% to Defense
Description: The user will hug his target with his body. Then explode on impact causing DOT damage over time.  


AoE Techniques:

Bomb Voyage
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range:10
Maximum Base AoE Radius: 2.5
Cooldown:7
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: Using is his sweaty hands the user has worked up he will unleash an explosion wave . The bomb will quickly engulf what is in it's meter range causing massive damage all around him.


Bomb Voyage 2nd Coming
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range:100
Maximum Base AoE Radius: 25
Cooldown:7
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: Using is his sweaty hands the user has worked up he will unleash an explosion wave ten times that of the normal one. The bomb will quickly engulf what is in it's meter range causing massive damage all around him. Making this an even bigger version of the 1st wave.






Last edited by Ghost on Wed Oct 02, 2019 3:10 am; edited 26 times in total
Frenzy
Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) UVys34J
Tracker

Name : Papillon D. Fran
Epithet : Frenzy Eyes
Age : 19
Height : 196cm
Weight : 73kg
Species : Human
Faction : Bounty Hunter
Haki Level : 0
Hitpoints (HP) : 138
Attack (ATK) : 100
Defense (DEF) : 90
Reflex (RX) : 150
Willpower (WP) : 75
Level : 11
Experience Points : 1113
Berries Berries : 29,437,500
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Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) Empty Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)

on Sat Sep 21, 2019 3:04 am
Comments made in red. I would also suggest having another glance at the Combat Guide, if not to simply  have a better idea of the different technique types there are available for you to make use of.

@Ghost wrote:

Bomb Bomb no mi


Devil Fruit:Bomb Bomb no mi
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance: The bomu bomu no mi looks just like a yellow and orange pear with spikes all around it.
Devil Fruit Description: Allows the user to turn his body and body parts into explosives. Which the user is not harmed by. He could also eat gun power properties. Causing damage to all in his range.


Fighting Style: Name of your fighting style. [You forgot to fill this out.]
Weapon Utilization: Air grenades filled with the user sweat allows him to bomb people from away.
Description: This devil fruit fighting style allows the user to create bombs of all sizes. From any part of his body of things off of his body such as sweat hair or even his breathe etc. By doing this he will be able to cause such high level explosions keeping his enemies at bay and destroying the surrounding landscape at large.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Passive
*The user and people he deem his allies are not harm by the bomb bomb no mi power of explosions.
*Upon hitting 59% hp or less the user gets a full 20% power up. [All buffs from passives must be balanced out appropriately with an equal debuff to the user.]



Techniques



Light Techniques:

Name of the techniqueBig Bang Boom [Please replace where it says "Name of the technique" with the name of your technique instead of putting it after it.]
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 2
Duration: 1 [Flat techs don't require a duration. Please fix your cooldown in accordance. Please also go through your entire fighting style and fix all your durations.]
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The user snaps his fingers as the sweat in his fingers directly we he was aiming at. Aiming to hit his target. The explosion will travel the meters giving and will be as large as ten feet tall.


Name of the technique Bomb Wave
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 30 [The maximum base range for your techs are 10 times the technique level. Please go through your entire fighting style and fix all your max ranges.]
Cooldown: 2
Duration: 1
Buffs:  N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: Swiping his his both left and right the user will cause an explosion to take place. Knocking all who is caught up in his attack back hurting them. He will swipe left and right a total of four times meaning two left and two right.


Name of the technique Exhale Destruction
Technique Type: Flat [This should be a stat morph or flat hybrid.]
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 50
Cooldown: 4 [Cooldown only needs to be 3.]
Duration: 2
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: 15% reflex reduction [If this is a flat hybrid technique, the maximum stat morph you can do is 10%. Of course, if this tech is a stat morph, then feel free to leave it as it is.]
Description: The user will breathe his target way causing a massive explosion. Blowing back all in his range of he could.  Causing a 15% reduction in reflects for the duration limit.

Medium Techniques:

Name of the technique Exploding Tastebuds
Technique Type: Flat [This should be a stat morph or flat hybrid.]
Technique Level: 5 [All your technique level should correspond with the level you obtained them at. Since you are lvl 1, your techniques should all be lvl 1.]
Maximum Base Range: 5 meters
Cooldown: 3 [Duration needs to be added onto the cooldown.]
Duration: 1 [Duration for a MT stat morph is 3.]
Buffs: 15% attack buff
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The user will grab his target by the face. Then by using his sweat he will cause his bomb to go explode right on his target face at full impact. He would be so pumped up he will gain a increase in attack.

Heavy Techniques:

Name of the technique United States Of Bombs
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 10 [Comment made earlier on tech level apply here too.]
Maximum Base Range: 50 meters
Cooldown: 8 [Cooldown for HT flat techs is 5.]
Duration: 4
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The user will jump up to 20 meters within the air. Then he will take a lock of his hair and shake it out. Causing it to slowly fall. Soon each hair piece about 100 in total would start to explode all around the giving area in meter range. Causing a 30% reflex reduction. [If this is a stat morph or flat hybrid, please fill out the debuff section and change the "Technique Type" to the appropriate type.]

AoE Techniques:

Name of the technique You The Bomb
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 100
Maximum Base AoE Radius: 50 [The max base range for an AoE is 25% of the max base range.]
Cooldown:7
Duration: 2
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: Using is his sweaty hands the has worked up he will unless an explosion wave ten times that of the normal one. The bomb will quickly engulf what is in it's meter causing massive damage all around him.




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Ghost
Tracker

Name : Ghost AnDha Shell
Epithet : The Reaper Of The Marine
Age : 24
Height : 5'8
Weight : 160
Species : Human
Faction : Marine
Crew Position : Navigator
Devil Fruit : Bomu Bomu no Mi (Bomb-Bomb Fruit)
Haki Level : 1
Hitpoints (HP) : 100
Attack (ATK) : 110
Defense (DEF) : 85
Reflex (RX) : 100
Willpower (WP) : 110
Level : 10
Experience Points : 1000
Berries Berries : 25,050,000
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Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) Empty Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)

on Sat Sep 21, 2019 6:29 pm
Ok it's ready for part 2 grading

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Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) 214-94
I'll Give You To The Count Of Boom I Mean Three
Gray
Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) Cool-t10
Tracker

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" / 310 cm
Weight : 1043 lbs / 473 kg
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 9
[[haospec]][[busospec]][[kenbunspec]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 700
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Shop Discount : -20%
Berries Berries : 25,000,000,000
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Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) Empty Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)

on Sun Sep 22, 2019 11:55 am
[ Comments in red. ]

@Ghost wrote:

Bomb Bomb no mi


Devil Fruit:Bomb Bomb no mi
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance: The bomu bomu no mi looks just like a yellow and orange pear with spikes all around it.
Devil Fruit Description: Allows the user to turn his body and body parts into explosives. Which the user is not harmed by. He could also eat gun power properties. Causing damage to all in his range.


Fighting Style: Bomb Voyage
Weapon Utilization: Air grenades filled with the user sweat allows him to bomb people from away.
Description: This devil fruit fighting style allows the user to create bombs of all sizes. From any part of his body of things off of his body such as sweat hair or even his breathe etc. By doing this he will be able to cause such high level explosions keeping his enemies at bay and destroying the surrounding landscape at large.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Passive
*The user and people he deem his allies are not harm by the bomb bomb no mi power of explosions.
*Upon hitting 59% hp or less the user gets a full 15%
attack  power up and a 15% defense deubff



Techniques



Light Techniques:

Big Bang Boom
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: [ Cooldown should be 1 here. ]
Duration: 1 [ Frenzy already pointed this out, but the purely Flat techniques do not have a duration. They are instantaneous. ]
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The user snaps his fingers as the sweat in his fingers directly we he was aiming at. Aiming to hit his target. The explosion will travel the meters giving and will be as large as ten feet tall.


Bomb Wave
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10
Cooldown: 1
Duration: 1 [ ...Please read the above comment. ]
Buffs:  N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: Swiping his his both left and right the user will cause an explosion to take place. Knocking all who is caught up in his attack back hurting them. He will swipe left and right a total of four times meaning two left and two right.


Exhake Destruction
Technique Type: Flat hybird
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 50 [ Since all your techniques are level 1, all of the maximum base ranges should be no more than 10m. Please apply this to all ranges below too. ]
Cooldown: 3
Duration: 2
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: 15% reflex reduction [ Flat Hybrid LTs can have a maximum of 10% stat alteration. ]
Description: The user will breathe his target way causing a massive explosion. Blowing back all in his range if he could.  Causing a 15% reduction in reflex for the duration limit.

Medium Techniques:

Exploding Tastebuds
Technique Type: Flat [ I think you meant for this to be a Flat Hybrid? ]
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 5 meters
Cooldown: 3 [ If this is a Flat Hybrid, cooldown should 6 posts. For stat morphs and hybrids, the cooldown is increased by the duration. ]
Duration: 3
Buffs: 15% attack buff
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The user will grab his target by the face. Then by using his sweat he will cause his bomb to go explode right on his target face at full impact. He would be so pumped up he will gain a increase in attack.

Heavy Techniques:

United State Of Bombs
Technique Type: Flat hybird
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 50 meters
Cooldown: 5 [ Cooldown should be 9 posts. ]
Duration: 4
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: 30% to Defense
Description: The user will jump up to 20 meters within the air. Then he will take a lock of his hair and shake it out. Causing it to slowly fall. Soon each hair piece about 100 in total would start to explode all around the giving area in meter range. Causing a 30% Defense reduction.

AoE Techniques:

Name of the technique You The Bomb [ Fix this too please. ]
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 100 [ See my comment above regarding maximum base range. ]
Maximum Base AoE Radius: 10 [ The maximum base radius for AoEs should be no more than 25% of the maximum base range. ]
Cooldown:7
Duration: 2 [ No durations for Pure Flats. ]
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: Using is his sweaty hands the has worked up he will unless an explosion wave ten times that of the normal one. The bomb will quickly engulf what is in it's meter causing massive damage all around him.




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Ghost
Tracker

Name : Ghost AnDha Shell
Epithet : The Reaper Of The Marine
Age : 24
Height : 5'8
Weight : 160
Species : Human
Faction : Marine
Crew Position : Navigator
Devil Fruit : Bomu Bomu no Mi (Bomb-Bomb Fruit)
Haki Level : 1
Hitpoints (HP) : 100
Attack (ATK) : 110
Defense (DEF) : 85
Reflex (RX) : 100
Willpower (WP) : 110
Level : 10
Experience Points : 1000
Berries Berries : 25,050,000
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Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) Empty Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)

on Sun Sep 22, 2019 6:22 pm
Alright I fixed it

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I'll Give You To The Count Of Boom I Mean Three
Acacia
Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) Badge10
Tracker

Name : Grimm Aldous Acacia
Epithet : Kurotane (Black Seed)
Age : 27
Height : 6'7" / 201 cm
Weight : 240 lbs / 109 kg
Species : Human
Faction : New Revolutionary Army
Crew : Bonbon X
Ship : Wonderland Hatch
Crew Position : First Mate
Devil Fruit : Mochi Mochi no Mi
Haki Level : 5
Hitpoints (HP) : 250
Attack (ATK) : 395
Defense (DEF) : 250
Reflex (RX) : 350
Willpower (WP) : 300
Level : 70
Experience Points : 7063
Bounty : 250,000,000
Berries Berries : 582,800,000
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Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) Empty Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)

on Sun Sep 22, 2019 6:29 pm
Your maximum base ranges for the HT and AoE are still incorrect. They should be no more than 10 meters. And your AoE's base radius should be no more than 2.5m.

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Ghost
Tracker

Name : Ghost AnDha Shell
Epithet : The Reaper Of The Marine
Age : 24
Height : 5'8
Weight : 160
Species : Human
Faction : Marine
Crew Position : Navigator
Devil Fruit : Bomu Bomu no Mi (Bomb-Bomb Fruit)
Haki Level : 1
Hitpoints (HP) : 100
Attack (ATK) : 110
Defense (DEF) : 85
Reflex (RX) : 100
Willpower (WP) : 110
Level : 10
Experience Points : 1000
Berries Berries : 25,050,000
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Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) Empty Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)

on Sun Sep 22, 2019 6:37 pm
I forgot to change my seeing as I can start at level 10 this should do it.

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Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) 214-94
I'll Give You To The Count Of Boom I Mean Three
Ghost
Tracker

Name : Ghost AnDha Shell
Epithet : The Reaper Of The Marine
Age : 24
Height : 5'8
Weight : 160
Species : Human
Faction : Marine
Crew Position : Navigator
Devil Fruit : Bomu Bomu no Mi (Bomb-Bomb Fruit)
Haki Level : 1
Hitpoints (HP) : 100
Attack (ATK) : 110
Defense (DEF) : 85
Reflex (RX) : 100
Willpower (WP) : 110
Level : 10
Experience Points : 1000
Berries Berries : 25,050,000
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Posts : 75
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Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) Empty Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)

on Mon Sep 30, 2019 10:18 pm
This is ready

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Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) 214-94
I'll Give You To The Count Of Boom I Mean Three
Baltroy
Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) Coolte12
Tracker

Name : Alice Baltroy Ronx
Epithet : Flying Dart
Age : 22
Height : 170 cm
Species : Human
Faction : New Revolutionary Army
World Position : Commander
Crew : Bonbon X
Ship : Wonderland Hatch
Crew Position : Captain
Haki Level : 5
Hitpoints (HP) : 265
Attack (ATK) : 290
Defense (DEF) : 300
Reflex (RX) : 355
Willpower (WP) : 330
Level : 72
Experience Points : 7225
Bounty : 300,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries Berries : 594,800,000
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Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) Empty Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)

on Mon Sep 30, 2019 10:49 pm
Since you are starting at lvl 10, you are entitled to start with the following techniques:

Level 1: 1 AoE, 1 HT, 1 MT, 3 LTs
Level 5: 1 HT, 1 MT, 1 LT
Level 10: 1 AoE, 1 HT

The level of your techniques are determined by the level you obtain them at.

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Ghost
Tracker

Name : Ghost AnDha Shell
Epithet : The Reaper Of The Marine
Age : 24
Height : 5'8
Weight : 160
Species : Human
Faction : Marine
Crew Position : Navigator
Devil Fruit : Bomu Bomu no Mi (Bomb-Bomb Fruit)
Haki Level : 1
Hitpoints (HP) : 100
Attack (ATK) : 110
Defense (DEF) : 85
Reflex (RX) : 100
Willpower (WP) : 110
Level : 10
Experience Points : 1000
Berries Berries : 25,050,000
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Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) Empty Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)

on Tue Oct 01, 2019 1:10 pm
Ok igs all set

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Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) 214-94
I'll Give You To The Count Of Boom I Mean Three
Baltroy
Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) Coolte12
Tracker

Name : Alice Baltroy Ronx
Epithet : Flying Dart
Age : 22
Height : 170 cm
Species : Human
Faction : New Revolutionary Army
World Position : Commander
Crew : Bonbon X
Ship : Wonderland Hatch
Crew Position : Captain
Haki Level : 5
Hitpoints (HP) : 265
Attack (ATK) : 290
Defense (DEF) : 300
Reflex (RX) : 355
Willpower (WP) : 330
Level : 72
Experience Points : 7225
Bounty : 300,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries Berries : 594,800,000
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Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) Empty Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)

on Wed Oct 02, 2019 2:31 am
Comments in red ^^

@Ghost wrote:

Bomb Bomb no mi


Devil Fruit:Bomb Bomb no mi
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance: The bomu bomu no mi looks just like a yellow and orange pear with spikes all around it.
Devil Fruit Description: Allows the user to turn his body and body parts into explosives. Which the user is not harmed by. He could also eat gun power properties. Causing damage to all in his range.


Fighting Style: Bomb Voyage
Weapon Utilization: Air grenades filled with the user sweat allows him to bomb people from away.
Description: This devil fruit fighting style allows the user to create bombs of all sizes. From any part of his body of things off of his body such as sweat hair or even his breathe etc. By doing this he will be able to cause such high level explosions keeping his enemies at bay and destroying the surrounding landscape at large.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Passive
*The user and people he deem his allies are not harm by the bomb bomb no mi power of explosions.
*Upon hitting 59% hp or less the user gets a full 15%
attack  power up and a 15% defense deubff



Techniques



Light Techniques:

Big Bang Boom
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 1
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The user snaps his fingers as the sweat in his fingers directly we he was aiming at. Aiming to hit his target. The explosion will travel the meters giving and will be as large as ten feet tall.


Bomb Wave
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 1
Duration: N/A
Buffs:  N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: Swiping his his both left and right the user will cause an explosion to take place. Knocking all who is caught up in his attack back hurting them. He will swipe left and right a total of four times meaning two left and two right.


Exhake Destruction
Technique Type: Flat hybird
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 3
Duration: 2
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: 10% reflex reduction
Description: The user will breathe his target way causing a massive explosion. Blowing back all in his range if he could.  Causing a 10% reduction in reflex for the duration limit.

Bomb Takeoff
Technique Type: Dot [This should be a DoT Hybrid]
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50 meters
Cooldown: 5 [Cooldown should be 6.]
Duration: 3 [DoT durations are all fixed at 5.]
Buffs:  10% reflex
Debuffs: N/A
Description: flicking his hair or sweat from his hands. The user will cause his hands to explode. Allowing him to take off into the air. By keep repeating this it will allow him to stay airborne for the duration of the time. Those who are caught up in its after effect will take 3 hp Dot once per post.  As the user gains a 10% reflex buff

Medium Techniques:

Exploding Tastebuds
Technique Type: Flat hybird
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 6
Duration: 3
Buffs: 15% attack buff
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The user will grab his target by the face. Then by using his sweat he will cause his bomb to go explode right on his target face at full impact. He would be so pumped up he will gain a increase in attack.


Bomb Bomb Wave
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50 meters
Cooldown: 6 [Cooldown should be 3.]
Duration: 3 [Remember, flats don't require duration.]
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The user will swing his body in a 360 motion. Letting off his sweat hair etc. Causing an explosion wave to come about all around himself.



Heavy Techniques:

United State Of Bombs
Technique Type: Flat hybird
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range: 100 meters
Cooldown: 9
Duration: 4
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: 30% to Defense
Description: The user will jump up to 20 meters within the air. Then he will take a lock of his hair and shake it out. Causing it to slowly fall. Soon each hair piece about 100 in total would start to explode all around the giving area in meter range. Causing a 30% Defense reduction.


Earth Shaker
Technique Type: Flat hybird
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50 meters
Cooldown: 6 [Cooldown should be 9.]
Duration: 4
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: 10% to reflex
Description: The user will touch the very ground with his sweaty palms. Causing an explosion to come about. Causing the ground to shake rapidly. Making his foes trip over each other in the chaos.


Hug It Out
Technique Type: Flat/DOT [This should be a Hybrid DoT.]
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 1 meters
Cooldown: 4 [Cooldown should be 10.]
Duration: 3 [DoT duration is fixed at 5.]
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: 5% to Defense
Description: The user will hug his target with his body. Then explode on impact causing DOT damage over time.  


AoE Techniques:

Bomb Voyage
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range:10
Maximum Base AoE Radius: 2.5
Cooldown:7
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: Using is his sweaty hands the user has worked up he will unleash an explosion wave . The bomb will quickly engulf what is in it's meter range causing massive damage all around him.


Bomb Voyage 2nd Coming
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range:100
Maximum Base AoE Radius: 25
Cooldown:7
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: Using is his sweaty hands the user has worked up he will unleash an explosion wave ten times that of the normal one. The bomb will quickly engulf what is in it's meter range causing massive damage all around him. Making this an even bigger version of the 1st wave.





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Name : Ghost AnDha Shell
Epithet : The Reaper Of The Marine
Age : 24
Height : 5'8
Weight : 160
Species : Human
Faction : Marine
Crew Position : Navigator
Devil Fruit : Bomu Bomu no Mi (Bomb-Bomb Fruit)
Haki Level : 1
Hitpoints (HP) : 100
Attack (ATK) : 110
Defense (DEF) : 85
Reflex (RX) : 100
Willpower (WP) : 110
Level : 10
Experience Points : 1000
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Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) Empty Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)

on Wed Oct 02, 2019 3:14 am
Ok that should do it

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Name : Alice Baltroy Ronx
Epithet : Flying Dart
Age : 22
Height : 170 cm
Species : Human
Faction : New Revolutionary Army
World Position : Commander
Crew : Bonbon X
Ship : Wonderland Hatch
Crew Position : Captain
Haki Level : 5
Hitpoints (HP) : 265
Attack (ATK) : 290
Defense (DEF) : 300
Reflex (RX) : 355
Willpower (WP) : 330
Level : 72
Experience Points : 7225
Bounty : 300,000,000
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Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) Empty Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)

on Wed Oct 02, 2019 3:37 am
Approved!

I just made some minor edits to your DoT Hybrids because I misinformed you on the durations. The durations are actually applied to the duration of the stat morph and not the the duration of the DoT themselves because the effect of the DoT itself is always fixed at 5, regardless of the technique's class.

Thank you very much for you patience in completing your fighting style! I understand it must have been frustrating with how complex the combat system is, but I assure you that it is the way it is for a reason and I hope you can respect that or come to do so in time :3

@Ghost wrote:

Bomb Bomb no mi


Devil Fruit:Bomb Bomb no mi
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance: The bomu bomu no mi looks just like a yellow and orange pear with spikes all around it.
Devil Fruit Description: Allows the user to turn his body and body parts into explosives. Which the user is not harmed by. He could also eat gun power properties. Causing damage to all in his range.


Fighting Style: Bomb Voyage
Weapon Utilization: Air grenades filled with the user sweat allows him to bomb people from away.
Description: This devil fruit fighting style allows the user to create bombs of all sizes. From any part of his body of things off of his body such as sweat hair or even his breathe etc. By doing this he will be able to cause such high level explosions keeping his enemies at bay and destroying the surrounding landscape at large.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Passive
*The user and people he deem his allies are not harm by the bomb bomb no mi power of explosions.
*Upon hitting 59% hp or less the user gets a full 15%
attack  power up and a 15% defense deubff



Techniques



Light Techniques:

Big Bang Boom
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 1
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The user snaps his fingers as the sweat in his fingers directly we he was aiming at. Aiming to hit his target. The explosion will travel the meters giving and will be as large as ten feet tall.


Bomb Wave
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 1
Duration: N/A
Buffs:  N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: Swiping his his both left and right the user will cause an explosion to take place. Knocking all who is caught up in his attack back hurting them. He will swipe left and right a total of four times meaning two left and two right.


Exhake Destruction
Technique Type: Flat hybird
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 3
Duration: 2
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: 10% reflex reduction
Description: The user will breathe his target way causing a massive explosion. Blowing back all in his range if he could.  Causing a 10% reduction in reflex for the duration limit.

Bomb Takeoff
Technique Type: Dot/hybird
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50 meters
Cooldown: 3
Duration: 2
Buffs:  10% reflex
Debuffs: N/A
Description: flicking his hair or sweat from his hands. The user will cause his hands to explode. Allowing him to take off into the air. By keep repeating this it will allow him to stay airborne for the duration of the time. Those who are caught up in its after effect will take 3 hp Dot once per post.  As the user gains a 10% reflex buff

Medium Techniques:

Exploding Tastebuds
Technique Type: Flat hybird
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 6
Duration: 3
Buffs: 15% attack buff
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The user will grab his target by the face. Then by using his sweat he will cause his bomb to go explode right on his target face at full impact. He would be so pumped up he will gain a increase in attack.


Bomb Wave X2
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50 meters
Cooldown: 3
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The user will swing his body in a 360 motion. Letting off his sweat hair etc. Causing an explosion wave to come about all around himself.



Heavy Techniques:

United State Of Bombs
Technique Type: Flat hybird
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range: 100 meters
Cooldown: 9
Duration: 4
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: 30% to Defense
Description: The user will jump up to 20 meters within the air. Then he will take a lock of his hair and shake it out. Causing it to slowly fall. Soon each hair piece about 100 in total would start to explode all around the giving area in meter range. Causing a 30% Defense reduction.


Earth Shaker
Technique Type: Flat hybird
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50 meters
Cooldown: 9
Duration: 4
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: 10% to reflex
Description: The user will touch the very ground with his sweaty palms. Causing an explosion to come about. Causing the ground to shake rapidly. Making his foes trip over each other in the chaos.


Hug It Out
Technique Type: hybrid/DOT
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: contact
Cooldown: 9
Duration: 4
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: 5% to Defense
Description: The user will hug his target with his body. Then explode on impact causing DOT damage over time.  


AoE Techniques:

Bomb Voyage
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range:10
Maximum Base AoE Radius: 2.5
Cooldown:7
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: Using is his sweaty hands the user has worked up he will unleash an explosion wave . The bomb will quickly engulf what is in it's meter range causing massive damage all around him.


Bomb Voyage 2nd Coming
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range:100
Maximum Base AoE Radius: 25
Cooldown:7
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: Using is his sweaty hands the user has worked up he will unleash an explosion wave ten times that of the normal one. The bomb will quickly engulf what is in it's meter range causing massive damage all around him. Making this an even bigger version of the 1st wave.





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