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Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) Empty Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)

This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Sep 18, 2019 12:16 pm

Bomb Bomb no mi


Devil Fruit:Bomb Bomb no mi
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance: The bomu bomu no mi looks just like a yellow and orange pear with spikes all around it.
Devil Fruit Description: Allows the user to turn his body and body parts into explosives. Which the user is not harmed by. He could also eat gun power properties. Causing damage to all in his range.


Fighting Style: Bomb Voyage
Weapon Utilization: Air grenades filled with the user sweat allows him to bomb people from away.
Description: This devil fruit fighting style allows the user to create bombs of all sizes. From any part of his body of things off of his body such as sweat hair or even his breathe etc. By doing this he will be able to cause such high level explosions keeping his enemies at bay and destroying the surrounding landscape at large.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Passive
*The user and people he deem his allies are not harm by the bomb bomb no mi power of explosions.
*Upon hitting 59% hp or less the user gets a full 15%
attack  power up and a 15% defense deubff



Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:



Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:





Last edited by Ghost on Wed Oct 02, 2019 3:10 am; edited 26 times in total
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Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) Empty Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sat Sep 21, 2019 3:04 am
Comments made in red. I would also suggest having another glance at the Combat Guide, if not to simply  have a better idea of the different technique types there are available for you to make use of.

Ghost wrote:

Bomb Bomb no mi


Devil Fruit:Bomb Bomb no mi
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance: The bomu bomu no mi looks just like a yellow and orange pear with spikes all around it.
Devil Fruit Description: Allows the user to turn his body and body parts into explosives. Which the user is not harmed by. He could also eat gun power properties. Causing damage to all in his range.


Fighting Style: Name of your fighting style. [You forgot to fill this out.]
Weapon Utilization: Air grenades filled with the user sweat allows him to bomb people from away.
Description: This devil fruit fighting style allows the user to create bombs of all sizes. From any part of his body of things off of his body such as sweat hair or even his breathe etc. By doing this he will be able to cause such high level explosions keeping his enemies at bay and destroying the surrounding landscape at large.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Passive
*The user and people he deem his allies are not harm by the bomb bomb no mi power of explosions.
*Upon hitting 59% hp or less the user gets a full 20% power up. [All buffs from passives must be balanced out appropriately with an equal debuff to the user.]



Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:



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Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) Empty Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sat Sep 21, 2019 6:29 pm
Ok it's ready for part 2 grading
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
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Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) Empty Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Sep 22, 2019 11:55 am
[ Comments in red. ]

Ghost wrote:

Bomb Bomb no mi


Devil Fruit:Bomb Bomb no mi
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance: The bomu bomu no mi looks just like a yellow and orange pear with spikes all around it.
Devil Fruit Description: Allows the user to turn his body and body parts into explosives. Which the user is not harmed by. He could also eat gun power properties. Causing damage to all in his range.


Fighting Style: Bomb Voyage
Weapon Utilization: Air grenades filled with the user sweat allows him to bomb people from away.
Description: This devil fruit fighting style allows the user to create bombs of all sizes. From any part of his body of things off of his body such as sweat hair or even his breathe etc. By doing this he will be able to cause such high level explosions keeping his enemies at bay and destroying the surrounding landscape at large.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Passive
*The user and people he deem his allies are not harm by the bomb bomb no mi power of explosions.
*Upon hitting 59% hp or less the user gets a full 15%
attack  power up and a 15% defense deubff



Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:



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Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) Empty Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Sep 22, 2019 6:22 pm
Alright I fixed it
Acacia
Acacia
Kurotane (Black Seed)
[tracker=/t897-grimm-aldous-acacia#4096]
Name : Acacia
Epithet : "Black Seed" ("Kurotane")
Age : 27
Height : 8'5" / 257 cm
Weight : 351 lbs / 159 kg
Species/Tribe : Human
Faction : New Revolutionary Army
Devil Fruit : Mochi Mochi no Mi
Bounty : [ber=r] 250,000,000
Balance : [ber] 582,800,000
[[childofdestiny]]
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Posts : 124

Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) Empty Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Sep 22, 2019 6:29 pm
Your maximum base ranges for the HT and AoE are still incorrect. They should be no more than 10 meters. And your AoE's base radius should be no more than 2.5m.
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Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) Empty Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Sep 22, 2019 6:37 pm
I forgot to change my seeing as I can start at level 10 this should do it.
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Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) Empty Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)

This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Sep 30, 2019 10:18 pm
This is ready
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Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) Empty Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)

This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Sep 30, 2019 10:49 pm
Since you are starting at lvl 10, you are entitled to start with the following techniques:

Level 1: 1 AoE, 1 HT, 1 MT, 3 LTs
Level 5: 1 HT, 1 MT, 1 LT
Level 10: 1 AoE, 1 HT

The level of your techniques are determined by the level you obtain them at.
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Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) Empty Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Oct 01, 2019 1:10 pm
Ok igs all set
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Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) Empty Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)

This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Oct 02, 2019 2:31 am
Comments in red ^^

Ghost wrote:

Bomb Bomb no mi


Devil Fruit:Bomb Bomb no mi
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance: The bomu bomu no mi looks just like a yellow and orange pear with spikes all around it.
Devil Fruit Description: Allows the user to turn his body and body parts into explosives. Which the user is not harmed by. He could also eat gun power properties. Causing damage to all in his range.


Fighting Style: Bomb Voyage
Weapon Utilization: Air grenades filled with the user sweat allows him to bomb people from away.
Description: This devil fruit fighting style allows the user to create bombs of all sizes. From any part of his body of things off of his body such as sweat hair or even his breathe etc. By doing this he will be able to cause such high level explosions keeping his enemies at bay and destroying the surrounding landscape at large.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Passive
*The user and people he deem his allies are not harm by the bomb bomb no mi power of explosions.
*Upon hitting 59% hp or less the user gets a full 15%
attack  power up and a 15% defense deubff



Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:



Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:



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Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) Empty Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)

This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Oct 02, 2019 3:14 am
Ok that should do it
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Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) Empty Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)

This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Oct 02, 2019 3:37 am
Approved!

I just made some minor edits to your DoT Hybrids because I misinformed you on the durations. The durations are actually applied to the duration of the stat morph and not the the duration of the DoT themselves because the effect of the DoT itself is always fixed at 5, regardless of the technique's class.

Thank you very much for you patience in completing your fighting style! I understand it must have been frustrating with how complex the combat system is, but I assure you that it is the way it is for a reason and I hope you can respect that or come to do so in time :3

Ghost wrote:

Bomb Bomb no mi


Devil Fruit:Bomb Bomb no mi
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance: The bomu bomu no mi looks just like a yellow and orange pear with spikes all around it.
Devil Fruit Description: Allows the user to turn his body and body parts into explosives. Which the user is not harmed by. He could also eat gun power properties. Causing damage to all in his range.


Fighting Style: Bomb Voyage
Weapon Utilization: Air grenades filled with the user sweat allows him to bomb people from away.
Description: This devil fruit fighting style allows the user to create bombs of all sizes. From any part of his body of things off of his body such as sweat hair or even his breathe etc. By doing this he will be able to cause such high level explosions keeping his enemies at bay and destroying the surrounding landscape at large.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Passive
*The user and people he deem his allies are not harm by the bomb bomb no mi power of explosions.
*Upon hitting 59% hp or less the user gets a full 15%
attack  power up and a 15% defense deubff



Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:



Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:



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