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Ghost

Ghost

Tracker

Name : Ghost AnDha Shell
Epithet : The Reaper Of The Marine
Age : 24
Race : Human
Faction : Marine
Crew Position : Navigator
Devil Fruit : Bomu Bomu no Mi (Bomb-Bomb Fruit)
Haki Level : 1
Attack (ATK) : 110
Defense (DEF) : 85
Reflex (RX) : 100
Willpower (WP) : 110
Level : 10
Experience Points : 1000
Berries : 5,050,000
[childofdestiny]
Posts : 62

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PostSubject: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)   Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) EmptyWed Sep 18, 2019 12:16 pm


Bomb Bomb no mi


Devil Fruit:Bomb Bomb no mi
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance: The bomu bomu no mi looks just like a yellow and orange pear with spikes all around it.
Devil Fruit Description: Allows the user to turn his body and body parts into explosives. Which the user is not harmed by. He could also eat gun power properties. Causing damage to all in his range.


Fighting Style: Bomb Voyage
Weapon Utilization: Air grenades filled with the user sweat allows him to bomb people from away.
Description: This devil fruit fighting style allows the user to create bombs of all sizes. From any part of his body of things off of his body such as sweat hair or even his breathe etc. By doing this he will be able to cause such high level explosions keeping his enemies at bay and destroying the surrounding landscape at large.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Passive
*The user and people he deem his allies are not harm by the bomb bomb no mi power of explosions.
*Upon hitting 59% hp or less the user gets a full 15%
attack  power up and a 15% defense deubff



Techniques



Light Techniques:
 

Medium Techniques:
 



Heavy Techniques:
 

AoE Techniques:
 





Last edited by Ghost on Wed Oct 02, 2019 3:10 am; edited 26 times in total
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Frenzy

Frenzy

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Tracker

Name : Papillon D. Fran
Epithet : Frenzy Eyes
Age : 19
Race : Human
Faction : Bounty Hunter
Haki Level : 0
Attack (ATK) : 100
Defense (DEF) : 90
Reflex (RX) : 150
Willpower (WP) : 75
Level : 10
Experience Points : 1000
Berries : 3,250,000
[untouchable] [childofdestiny]
Posts : 78

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PostSubject: Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)   Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) EmptySat Sep 21, 2019 3:04 am

Comments made in red. I would also suggest having another glance at the Combat Guide, if not to simply  have a better idea of the different technique types there are available for you to make use of.

@Ghost wrote:

Bomb Bomb no mi


Devil Fruit:Bomb Bomb no mi
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance: The bomu bomu no mi looks just like a yellow and orange pear with spikes all around it.
Devil Fruit Description: Allows the user to turn his body and body parts into explosives. Which the user is not harmed by. He could also eat gun power properties. Causing damage to all in his range.


Fighting Style: Name of your fighting style. [You forgot to fill this out.]
Weapon Utilization: Air grenades filled with the user sweat allows him to bomb people from away.
Description: This devil fruit fighting style allows the user to create bombs of all sizes. From any part of his body of things off of his body such as sweat hair or even his breathe etc. By doing this he will be able to cause such high level explosions keeping his enemies at bay and destroying the surrounding landscape at large.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Passive
*The user and people he deem his allies are not harm by the bomb bomb no mi power of explosions.
*Upon hitting 59% hp or less the user gets a full 20% power up. [All buffs from passives must be balanced out appropriately with an equal debuff to the user.]



Techniques



Light Techniques:
 

Medium Techniques:
 

Heavy Techniques:
 

AoE Techniques:
 




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Ghost

Ghost

Tracker

Name : Ghost AnDha Shell
Epithet : The Reaper Of The Marine
Age : 24
Race : Human
Faction : Marine
Crew Position : Navigator
Devil Fruit : Bomu Bomu no Mi (Bomb-Bomb Fruit)
Haki Level : 1
Attack (ATK) : 110
Defense (DEF) : 85
Reflex (RX) : 100
Willpower (WP) : 110
Level : 10
Experience Points : 1000
Berries : 5,050,000
[childofdestiny]
Posts : 62

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PostSubject: Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)   Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) EmptySat Sep 21, 2019 6:29 pm

Ok it's ready for part 2 grading

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Gray

Gray

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Tracker

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 25,000,000,000
[baneoftheweak][childofdestiny][bookworm]
[windcaller][punchoutguru][endgameboss]
Posts : 1641

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PostSubject: Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)   Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) EmptySun Sep 22, 2019 11:55 am

[ Comments in red. ]

@Ghost wrote:

Bomb Bomb no mi


Devil Fruit:Bomb Bomb no mi
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance: The bomu bomu no mi looks just like a yellow and orange pear with spikes all around it.
Devil Fruit Description: Allows the user to turn his body and body parts into explosives. Which the user is not harmed by. He could also eat gun power properties. Causing damage to all in his range.


Fighting Style: Bomb Voyage
Weapon Utilization: Air grenades filled with the user sweat allows him to bomb people from away.
Description: This devil fruit fighting style allows the user to create bombs of all sizes. From any part of his body of things off of his body such as sweat hair or even his breathe etc. By doing this he will be able to cause such high level explosions keeping his enemies at bay and destroying the surrounding landscape at large.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Passive
*The user and people he deem his allies are not harm by the bomb bomb no mi power of explosions.
*Upon hitting 59% hp or less the user gets a full 15%
attack  power up and a 15% defense deubff



Techniques



Light Techniques:
 

Medium Techniques:
 

Heavy Techniques:
 

AoE Techniques:
 




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Ghost

Ghost

Tracker

Name : Ghost AnDha Shell
Epithet : The Reaper Of The Marine
Age : 24
Race : Human
Faction : Marine
Crew Position : Navigator
Devil Fruit : Bomu Bomu no Mi (Bomb-Bomb Fruit)
Haki Level : 1
Attack (ATK) : 110
Defense (DEF) : 85
Reflex (RX) : 100
Willpower (WP) : 110
Level : 10
Experience Points : 1000
Berries : 5,050,000
[childofdestiny]
Posts : 62

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PostSubject: Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)   Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) EmptySun Sep 22, 2019 6:22 pm

Alright I fixed it

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Acacia

Acacia

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Tracker

Name : Grimm Aldous Acacia
Epithet : Kurotane (Black Seed)
Age : 27
Race : Human
Faction : New Revolutionary Army
Crew : Bonbon X
Ship : Wonderland Hatch
Crew Position : First Mate
Devil Fruit : Mochi Mochi no Mi
Haki Level : 5
Attack (ATK) : 370
Defense (DEF) : 250
Reflex (RX) : 335
Willpower (WP) : 300
Level : 50
Experience Points : 5000
Bounty : 160,000,000
Berries : 14,050,000
Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) Child_11
Posts : 86

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PostSubject: Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)   Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) EmptySun Sep 22, 2019 6:29 pm

Your maximum base ranges for the HT and AoE are still incorrect. They should be no more than 10 meters. And your AoE's base radius should be no more than 2.5m.

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Ghost

Ghost

Tracker

Name : Ghost AnDha Shell
Epithet : The Reaper Of The Marine
Age : 24
Race : Human
Faction : Marine
Crew Position : Navigator
Devil Fruit : Bomu Bomu no Mi (Bomb-Bomb Fruit)
Haki Level : 1
Attack (ATK) : 110
Defense (DEF) : 85
Reflex (RX) : 100
Willpower (WP) : 110
Level : 10
Experience Points : 1000
Berries : 5,050,000
[childofdestiny]
Posts : 62

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PostSubject: Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)   Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) EmptySun Sep 22, 2019 6:37 pm

I forgot to change my seeing as I can start at level 10 this should do it.

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Ghost

Ghost

Tracker

Name : Ghost AnDha Shell
Epithet : The Reaper Of The Marine
Age : 24
Race : Human
Faction : Marine
Crew Position : Navigator
Devil Fruit : Bomu Bomu no Mi (Bomb-Bomb Fruit)
Haki Level : 1
Attack (ATK) : 110
Defense (DEF) : 85
Reflex (RX) : 100
Willpower (WP) : 110
Level : 10
Experience Points : 1000
Berries : 5,050,000
[childofdestiny]
Posts : 62

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PostSubject: Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)   Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) EmptyMon Sep 30, 2019 10:18 pm

This is ready

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Baltroy

Baltroy

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Tracker

Name : Alice Baltroy Ronx
Epithet : Flying Dart
Age : 22
Race : Human
Faction : New Revolutionary Army
World Position : Commander
Crew : Bonbon X
Ship : Wonderland Hatch
Crew Position : Captain
Haki Level : 5
Attack (ATK) : 290
Defense (DEF) : 300
Reflex (RX) : 355
Willpower (WP) : 330
Level : 52
Experience Points : 5225
Bounty : 198,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 18,800,000
[baneoftheweak][bookworm]
Posts : 222

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PostSubject: Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)   Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) EmptyMon Sep 30, 2019 10:49 pm

Since you are starting at lvl 10, you are entitled to start with the following techniques:

Level 1: 1 AoE, 1 HT, 1 MT, 3 LTs
Level 5: 1 HT, 1 MT, 1 LT
Level 10: 1 AoE, 1 HT

The level of your techniques are determined by the level you obtain them at.

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Ghost

Ghost

Tracker

Name : Ghost AnDha Shell
Epithet : The Reaper Of The Marine
Age : 24
Race : Human
Faction : Marine
Crew Position : Navigator
Devil Fruit : Bomu Bomu no Mi (Bomb-Bomb Fruit)
Haki Level : 1
Attack (ATK) : 110
Defense (DEF) : 85
Reflex (RX) : 100
Willpower (WP) : 110
Level : 10
Experience Points : 1000
Berries : 5,050,000
[childofdestiny]
Posts : 62

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PostSubject: Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)   Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) EmptyTue Oct 01, 2019 1:10 pm

Ok igs all set

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Baltroy

Baltroy

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Tracker

Name : Alice Baltroy Ronx
Epithet : Flying Dart
Age : 22
Race : Human
Faction : New Revolutionary Army
World Position : Commander
Crew : Bonbon X
Ship : Wonderland Hatch
Crew Position : Captain
Haki Level : 5
Attack (ATK) : 290
Defense (DEF) : 300
Reflex (RX) : 355
Willpower (WP) : 330
Level : 52
Experience Points : 5225
Bounty : 198,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 18,800,000
[baneoftheweak][bookworm]
Posts : 222

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PostSubject: Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)   Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) EmptyWed Oct 02, 2019 2:31 am

Comments in red ^^

@Ghost wrote:

Bomb Bomb no mi


Devil Fruit:Bomb Bomb no mi
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance: The bomu bomu no mi looks just like a yellow and orange pear with spikes all around it.
Devil Fruit Description: Allows the user to turn his body and body parts into explosives. Which the user is not harmed by. He could also eat gun power properties. Causing damage to all in his range.


Fighting Style: Bomb Voyage
Weapon Utilization: Air grenades filled with the user sweat allows him to bomb people from away.
Description: This devil fruit fighting style allows the user to create bombs of all sizes. From any part of his body of things off of his body such as sweat hair or even his breathe etc. By doing this he will be able to cause such high level explosions keeping his enemies at bay and destroying the surrounding landscape at large.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Passive
*The user and people he deem his allies are not harm by the bomb bomb no mi power of explosions.
*Upon hitting 59% hp or less the user gets a full 15%
attack  power up and a 15% defense deubff



Techniques



Light Techniques:
 

Medium Techniques:
 



Heavy Techniques:
 

AoE Techniques:
 




________________________________________________________
Alice B. Ronx at your service~

Check out the crew!

Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) R7Cwalu
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Ghost

Ghost

Tracker

Name : Ghost AnDha Shell
Epithet : The Reaper Of The Marine
Age : 24
Race : Human
Faction : Marine
Crew Position : Navigator
Devil Fruit : Bomu Bomu no Mi (Bomb-Bomb Fruit)
Haki Level : 1
Attack (ATK) : 110
Defense (DEF) : 85
Reflex (RX) : 100
Willpower (WP) : 110
Level : 10
Experience Points : 1000
Berries : 5,050,000
[childofdestiny]
Posts : 62

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PostSubject: Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)   Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) EmptyWed Oct 02, 2019 3:14 am

Ok that should do it

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Baltroy

Baltroy

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Tracker

Name : Alice Baltroy Ronx
Epithet : Flying Dart
Age : 22
Race : Human
Faction : New Revolutionary Army
World Position : Commander
Crew : Bonbon X
Ship : Wonderland Hatch
Crew Position : Captain
Haki Level : 5
Attack (ATK) : 290
Defense (DEF) : 300
Reflex (RX) : 355
Willpower (WP) : 330
Level : 52
Experience Points : 5225
Bounty : 198,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 18,800,000
[baneoftheweak][bookworm]
Posts : 222

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PostSubject: Re: Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage)   Bomb bomb no mi ( Bomb Voyage) EmptyWed Oct 02, 2019 3:37 am

Approved!

I just made some minor edits to your DoT Hybrids because I misinformed you on the durations. The durations are actually applied to the duration of the stat morph and not the the duration of the DoT themselves because the effect of the DoT itself is always fixed at 5, regardless of the technique's class.

Thank you very much for you patience in completing your fighting style! I understand it must have been frustrating with how complex the combat system is, but I assure you that it is the way it is for a reason and I hope you can respect that or come to do so in time :3

@Ghost wrote:

Bomb Bomb no mi


Devil Fruit:Bomb Bomb no mi
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance: The bomu bomu no mi looks just like a yellow and orange pear with spikes all around it.
Devil Fruit Description: Allows the user to turn his body and body parts into explosives. Which the user is not harmed by. He could also eat gun power properties. Causing damage to all in his range.


Fighting Style: Bomb Voyage
Weapon Utilization: Air grenades filled with the user sweat allows him to bomb people from away.
Description: This devil fruit fighting style allows the user to create bombs of all sizes. From any part of his body of things off of his body such as sweat hair or even his breathe etc. By doing this he will be able to cause such high level explosions keeping his enemies at bay and destroying the surrounding landscape at large.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Passive
*The user and people he deem his allies are not harm by the bomb bomb no mi power of explosions.
*Upon hitting 59% hp or less the user gets a full 15%
attack  power up and a 15% defense deubff



Techniques



Light Techniques:
 

Medium Techniques:
 



Heavy Techniques:
 

AoE Techniques:
 




________________________________________________________
Alice B. Ronx at your service~

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