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PoppaLeaf
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Name : PoppaLeaf
Age : 18
Height : 10"3
Weight : 82Kgs
Species : Human
Faction : Civilian
Haki Level : 0
Hitpoints (HP) : 113
Attack (ATK) : 85
Defense (DEF) : 55
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Art of The Singing Bamboo Empty Art of The Singing Bamboo

on Sun Dec 22, 2019 1:44 pm

Singing Bamboo


Fighting Style: Art of The Singing Bamboo
Weapon Utilization: Wooden based weapons. This can range from sticks to tantos to wooden swords.
Description: A unique form of swordsmanship, a self-taught self-utilized form that incorporates aspects from the musical aspect of Poppaleaf with the one sword style known as Ittoryu, though the most unique aspect of this form of style is that the wielder does not typically use metal-based weaponry. This does not mean they can not it simply means they have not done so. Instead, they wield wooden weapons that typically don't even have a bladed edge, yet this style still allows them to cut as if they were wielding normal swords.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:

Bamboo Dance: Wooden swords seem more balanced than that of their metal counterpart, she feels much more at ease when holding one and by taking deep breaths, Poppa's reflexes are buffed by 20% but her defense is debuffed by 20%



Techniques




Light Techniques:

X slash
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 1
Duration: Instant
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: A simple double slash attack, usually wielded with a club or some form of wooden weapon that doesnt have an edge.


Bamboo Song
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: INstant
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs:N/A
Description: As if she channels her vocals into her blade, Poppaleaf hums, her blade seems to shake as she does, allowing her to release an echo of sound from her blade that takes the form of a five-inch thick and five-meter wide slicing blade of air. The flavor of this ability is that the song she sings seems to cause a ghostly echo as this song is released.


Bamboo Ghost Song
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs:N/A
Description:The Bamboo Ghost Song is one of Poppaleafs favorite techniques. It doesn't require force thus making the technique itself look harmless. The user simply rubs their weapon against an opponent, a structure etc. As they do so they release a gentle note from their mouth, the bamboo seems to shudder in the user's grasp. There is no immediate effect. Now this is where it differs, The user can stop singing their ghostly note on the same post as they touched a person, upon their singing ending the slash of the length of the weapon used appears where they touched a foe etc with the weapon.

Medium Techniques:

Bamboo Blues
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 6 posts
Duration: 3 posts
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: 30%% Reflexes, 20% Attack
Description: With inhuman reflexes, the user strikes multiple points on the body with the point of her blade, five or six different spots where one tends to always end with the eyes to cause a disturbance of the body.

Heavy Techniques:

Musical Wounds
Technique Type: D/O/T
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 5 Posts
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The user sings, the weapon in hand begins to shiver, seemingly echoing the sentiments of her vocals. The user then proceeds to strike their foe, each strike causing a song to erupt from each strike. No cut or wound appears on the body of the thing that is struck, every post a wound appears, releasing a beautiful tone from each slice for the duration of the five posts.

AoE Techniques:

Conducting Bamboo
Technique Type: AOE/Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 2.5 Meter Radius
Cooldown: 7
Duration: Instant
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: Placing her weapon to her mouth, Poppaleaf sings a beautiful song, the song seems to follow the blade as she moves, by spinning the blade in her hand she begins to rotate, creating a dome of wind like slicing sound that produces itself in a dome-like fashion, She maintains the ability via her voice.






Last edited by PoppaLeaf on Mon Dec 23, 2019 6:16 pm; edited 2 times in total
Kouen Miyamoto
Tracker

Name : Kouen Miyamoto
Epithet : Blue Brat
Age : 20
Height : 5'9"
Weight : 73 kg
Species : Human
Faction : World Government
Crew : Marines
Crew Position : Captain
Devil Fruit : Kiri Kiri no Mi
Haki Level : 4
Hitpoints (HP) : 230
Attack (ATK) : 255
Defense (DEF) : 255
Reflex (RX) : 260
Willpower (WP) : 260
Level : 41
Experience Points : 4113
Berries Berries : 9,100,000
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Art of The Singing Bamboo Empty Re: Art of The Singing Bamboo

on Sun Dec 22, 2019 9:53 pm
Hello there, I will be reviewing your fighting style. It's an interesting one and I like the idea of it, but just a few fixes have to be made. Comments will be bolded via the techniques.

@PoppaLeaf wrote:

Singing Bamboo


Fighting Style: Art of The Singing Bamboo
Weapon Utilization: Wooden based weapons. This can range from sticks to tantos to wooden swords.
Description: A unique form of swordsmanship, a self-taught self-utilized form that incorporates aspects from the musical aspect of Poppaleaf with the one sword style known as Ittoryu, though the most unique aspect of this form of style is that the wielder does not typically use metal-based weaponry. This does not mean they can not it simply means they have not done so. Instead, they wield wooden weapons that typically don't even have a bladed edge, yet this style still allows them to cut as if they were wielding normal swords.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:

Bamboo Dance: Wooden swords seem more balanced than that of their metal counterpart, she feels much more at ease when holding one and by taking deep breaths, Poppa's reflexes are buffed by 20% but her defense is debuffed by 20%



Techniques




Light Techniques:

X slash
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 1
Duration: Instant
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: A simple double slash attack, usually wielded with a club or some form of wooden weapon that doesnt have an edge.


Bamboo Song
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: INstant
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs:N/A
Description: As if she channels her vocals into her blade, Poppaleaf hums, her blade seems to shake as she does, allowing her to release an echo of sound from her blade that takes the form of a five-inch thick and five-meter wide slicing blade of air. The flavor of this ability is that the song she sings seems to cause a ghostly echo as this song is released.


Bamboo Ghost Song
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 2 Posts - Change to 1 if this is going to be a Flat type technique.
Duration: 2 posts - If this is going to be a flat technique type, this technique will have no duration.
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs:N/A
Description:The Bamboo Ghost Song is one of Poppaleafs favorite techniques. It doesn't require force thus making the technique itself look harmless. The user simply rubs their weapon against an opponent, a structure etc. As they do so they release a gentle note from their mouth, the bamboo seems to shudder in the user's grasp. There is no immediate effect. Now this is where it differs, The user can stop singing their ghostly note on the same post as they touched a person, upon their singing ending the slash of the length of the weapon used appears where they touched a foe etc with the weapon. The user can sing for an extra post to keep the effect hidden until they stop singing [maximum of two posts]. - Since this technique type is a Flat, any "delayed" attacks as described in this description would purely be IC flavor and will still be delivered in the same round. As long as you're aware of that, this technique is okay. Otherwise I'd suggest turning this technique into a DoT technique type.

Medium Techniques:

Bamboo Blues
Technique Type: Debuff 50% - Change this to stat morph
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 3 posts - Since the duration is 3 posts, that adds 3 to the cooldown. The cooldown has to be 6.
Duration: 3 posts
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A - Please mention here what you're trying to debuff on the opponent, reflex? attack? defence?
Description: With inhuman reflexes, the user strikes multiple points on the body with the point of her blade, five or six different spots where one tends to always end with the eyes to cause a disturbance of the body.

Heavy Techniques:

Musical Wounds
Technique Type: D/O/T/Flat - Change this to Flat or DoT Hybrid, considering the nature of the description, I assume it'd be a DoT hybrid.
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 6 Posts - The base cooldown for HT techniques are 5, meanwhile the max duration for stat morphs/hybrid stat morphs are 4 for heavy techniques. If you're planning to have the highest duration, this cooldown would be 9.
Duration: 5 Turns - As stated in the previous comment, if you're trying to have the highest duration, this should be 4 instead.
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A - As previously stated in the medium technique, please describe what you're trying to debuff.
Description: The user sings, the weapon in hand begins to shiver, seemingly echoing the sentiments of her vocals. The user then proceeds to strike their foe, each strike causing a song to erupt from each strike. No cut or wound appears on the body of the thing that is struck, every post a wound appears, releasing a beautiful tone from each slice for the duration of the five posts.

AoE Techniques:

Conducting Bamboo
Technique Type: AOE - This needs a proper technique type, i.e. flat, DoT
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: - The range of this technique would be 10 meters, but if you're trying to have a radius attack, 25% of 10 meters is 2.5 meters, so this would be a 2.5 meter radius attack.
Cooldown: The Cooldown can range from a minimum of Seven Posts to a maximum of 11 Posts - The base cooldown for AoE's is 7, but this can increase depending on what your technique type will be once you update it.
Duration: The duration of this attack can range from a singular post to four posts maximum - As above, this can be dependant on what your technique type will be.
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: Placing her weapon to her mouth, Poppaleaf sings a beautiful song, the song seems to follow the blade as she moves, by spinning the blade in her hand she begins to rotate, creating a dome of wind like slicing sound that produces itself in a dome-like fashion, The unique ability of this is it seemingly controlled by her voice, the longer she sings for the longer the technique remains active when she stops singing the technique falters.




PoppaLeaf
Tracker

Name : PoppaLeaf
Age : 18
Height : 10"3
Weight : 82Kgs
Species : Human
Faction : Civilian
Haki Level : 0
Hitpoints (HP) : 113
Attack (ATK) : 85
Defense (DEF) : 55
Reflex (RX) : 60
Willpower (WP) : 25
Level : 1
Experience Points : 100
Berries Berries : 20,050,000
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Posts : 20
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Art of The Singing Bamboo Empty Re: Art of The Singing Bamboo

on Sun Dec 22, 2019 10:08 pm
Edited.

I made Musical Wounds simply a D/O/T. Thats what I intended it to be and not a debuff.
Kouen Miyamoto
Tracker

Name : Kouen Miyamoto
Epithet : Blue Brat
Age : 20
Height : 5'9"
Weight : 73 kg
Species : Human
Faction : World Government
Crew : Marines
Crew Position : Captain
Devil Fruit : Kiri Kiri no Mi
Haki Level : 4
Hitpoints (HP) : 230
Attack (ATK) : 255
Defense (DEF) : 255
Reflex (RX) : 260
Willpower (WP) : 260
Level : 41
Experience Points : 4113
Berries Berries : 9,100,000
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Posts : 148
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Art of The Singing Bamboo Empty Re: Art of The Singing Bamboo

on Sun Dec 22, 2019 10:30 pm
Okay, were getting there, but just one or two more things! Sorry, comments will be bolded as before.

@PoppaLeaf wrote:

Singing Bamboo


Fighting Style: Art of The Singing Bamboo
Weapon Utilization: Wooden based weapons. This can range from sticks to tantos to wooden swords.
Description: A unique form of swordsmanship, a self-taught self-utilized form that incorporates aspects from the musical aspect of Poppaleaf with the one sword style known as Ittoryu, though the most unique aspect of this form of style is that the wielder does not typically use metal-based weaponry. This does not mean they can not it simply means they have not done so. Instead, they wield wooden weapons that typically don't even have a bladed edge, yet this style still allows them to cut as if they were wielding normal swords.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:

Bamboo Dance: Wooden swords seem more balanced than that of their metal counterpart, she feels much more at ease when holding one and by taking deep breaths, Poppa's reflexes are buffed by 20% but her defense is debuffed by 20%



Techniques




Light Techniques:

X slash
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 1
Duration: Instant
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: A simple double slash attack, usually wielded with a club or some form of wooden weapon that doesnt have an edge.


Bamboo Song
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: INstant
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs:N/A
Description: As if she channels her vocals into her blade, Poppaleaf hums, her blade seems to shake as she does, allowing her to release an echo of sound from her blade that takes the form of a five-inch thick and five-meter wide slicing blade of air. The flavor of this ability is that the song she sings seems to cause a ghostly echo as this song is released.


Bamboo Ghost Song
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs:N/A
Description:The Bamboo Ghost Song is one of Poppaleafs favorite techniques. It doesn't require force thus making the technique itself look harmless. The user simply rubs their weapon against an opponent, a structure etc. As they do so they release a gentle note from their mouth, the bamboo seems to shudder in the user's grasp. There is no immediate effect. Now this is where it differs, The user can stop singing their ghostly note on the same post as they touched a person, upon their singing ending the slash of the length of the weapon used appears where they touched a foe etc with the weapon.

Medium Techniques:

Bamboo Blues
Technique Type: Debuff 50% - Change this to "Stat Morph"
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 6 posts
Duration: 3 posts
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: 30%% Reflexes, 20% Attack
Description: With inhuman reflexes, the user strikes multiple points on the body with the point of her blade, five or six different spots where one tends to always end with the eyes to cause a disturbance of the body.

Heavy Techniques:

Musical Wounds
Technique Type: D/O/T
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 6 Posts - This should be 5.
Duration: 5 Turns - This should be set to none, as all DoT's are automatiaclly 5 turns.
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The user sings, the weapon in hand begins to shiver, seemingly echoing the sentiments of her vocals. The user then proceeds to strike their foe, each strike causing a song to erupt from each strike. No cut or wound appears on the body of the thing that is struck, every post a wound appears, releasing a beautiful tone from each slice for the duration of the five posts.

AoE Techniques:

Conducting Bamboo
Technique Type: AOE/Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 2.5 Meter Radius
Cooldown: 7
Duration: 1 - Since this technique is a Flat technique type, it should have no duration.
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: Placing her weapon to her mouth, Poppaleaf sings a beautiful song, the song seems to follow the blade as she moves, by spinning the blade in her hand she begins to rotate, creating a dome of wind like slicing sound that produces itself in a dome-like fashion, She maintains the ability via her voice.




Kouen Miyamoto
Tracker

Name : Kouen Miyamoto
Epithet : Blue Brat
Age : 20
Height : 5'9"
Weight : 73 kg
Species : Human
Faction : World Government
Crew : Marines
Crew Position : Captain
Devil Fruit : Kiri Kiri no Mi
Haki Level : 4
Hitpoints (HP) : 230
Attack (ATK) : 255
Defense (DEF) : 255
Reflex (RX) : 260
Willpower (WP) : 260
Level : 41
Experience Points : 4113
Berries Berries : 9,100,000
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Posts : 148
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Art of The Singing Bamboo Empty Re: Art of The Singing Bamboo

on Mon Dec 23, 2019 7:54 pm
Sorry for all the trouble, but it looks good to me! Approved.

@PoppaLeaf wrote:

Singing Bamboo


Fighting Style: Art of The Singing Bamboo
Weapon Utilization: Wooden based weapons. This can range from sticks to tantos to wooden swords.
Description: A unique form of swordsmanship, a self-taught self-utilized form that incorporates aspects from the musical aspect of Poppaleaf with the one sword style known as Ittoryu, though the most unique aspect of this form of style is that the wielder does not typically use metal-based weaponry. This does not mean they can not it simply means they have not done so. Instead, they wield wooden weapons that typically don't even have a bladed edge, yet this style still allows them to cut as if they were wielding normal swords.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:

Bamboo Dance: Wooden swords seem more balanced than that of their metal counterpart, she feels much more at ease when holding one and by taking deep breaths, Poppa's reflexes are buffed by 20% but her defense is debuffed by 20%



Techniques




Light Techniques:

X slash
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 1
Duration: Instant
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: A simple double slash attack, usually wielded with a club or some form of wooden weapon that doesnt have an edge.


Bamboo Song
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: INstant
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs:N/A
Description: As if she channels her vocals into her blade, Poppaleaf hums, her blade seems to shake as she does, allowing her to release an echo of sound from her blade that takes the form of a five-inch thick and five-meter wide slicing blade of air. The flavor of this ability is that the song she sings seems to cause a ghostly echo as this song is released.


Bamboo Ghost Song
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs:N/A
Description:The Bamboo Ghost Song is one of Poppaleafs favorite techniques. It doesn't require force thus making the technique itself look harmless. The user simply rubs their weapon against an opponent, a structure etc. As they do so they release a gentle note from their mouth, the bamboo seems to shudder in the user's grasp. There is no immediate effect. Now this is where it differs, The user can stop singing their ghostly note on the same post as they touched a person, upon their singing ending the slash of the length of the weapon used appears where they touched a foe etc with the weapon.

Medium Techniques:

Bamboo Blues
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 6 posts
Duration: 3 posts
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: 30%% Reflexes, 20% Attack
Description: With inhuman reflexes, the user strikes multiple points on the body with the point of her blade, five or six different spots where one tends to always end with the eyes to cause a disturbance of the body.

Heavy Techniques:

Musical Wounds
Technique Type: D/O/T
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Contact
Cooldown: 5 Posts
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The user sings, the weapon in hand begins to shiver, seemingly echoing the sentiments of her vocals. The user then proceeds to strike their foe, each strike causing a song to erupt from each strike. No cut or wound appears on the body of the thing that is struck, every post a wound appears, releasing a beautiful tone from each slice for the duration of the five posts.

AoE Techniques:

Conducting Bamboo
Technique Type: AOE/Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 2.5 Meter Radius
Cooldown: 7
Duration: Instant
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: Placing her weapon to her mouth, Poppaleaf sings a beautiful song, the song seems to follow the blade as she moves, by spinning the blade in her hand she begins to rotate, creating a dome of wind like slicing sound that produces itself in a dome-like fashion, She maintains the ability via her voice.




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