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Privera Davis
Tracker

Name : Privera Leo Davis
Epithet : "Harsh Cough"
Age : 13
Height : 3'7"
Weight : 63 lb
Species : Human
Faction : Marines
Haki Level : 1
Hitpoints (HP) : 155
Attack (ATK) : 110
Defense (DEF) : 90
Reflex (RX) : 80
Willpower (WP) : 110
Level : 10
Experience Points : 1000
Berries Berries : 5,050,000
Posts : 11
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Crackdown Zealot Empty Crackdown Zealot

on Fri Feb 21, 2020 12:25 pm


Fighting Style: Crackdown Zealot
Weapon Utilization: Long Mace, Club, Non-bladed Pole Weapons, etc.
Description: A simple style used by fighters with no time for fancy flourishes, Crackdown is in essence not much more than the user putting all of their strength into their attacks and not holding back, but with a mace.

The Zealot half of crackdown Zealot is related almost entirely to using “belief” to push the body harder. Force of will and conviction used as fuel for the fire and allowing limits to be overcome for a time, though their zeal can also be pushed outwards to inspire others.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Zealot Stance: By abandoning your sensibilities, you allow your beliefs to come out and play. You may be wilder, but you won't be able to defend yourself. Defense -20%, Willpower +20%

Crackdown Stance: By suppressing your will and focusing its energy elsewhere you can find new strength to pull on. Attack +20%, Willpower -20%



Techniques



Light Techniques:

Pauper
Technique Type: Flatl
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Melee
Cooldown: 1 turn
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: A simple technique, but effective. The user keeps a loose grip on their weapon and attacks suddenly, often in an effort to make themselves seem unprepared but still deal a little bit of damage


Rhenania
Technique Type: DoT
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Melee
Cooldown: 1
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: An “anatomical”strike, of sorts. The user attacks directly into the lower ribcage of the enemy with the intention of causing a minor breakage or bleeding.


Zealots Wall / Ramshackle Barricade
Technique Type:Stat Morph
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Self / Single Allied Target within 10m
Cooldown: 3
Duration: 2
Buffs: Defense +25%
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The user pulls on their reserves to push themselves through the enemies attacks, though they aren’t going to just bunker up and protect themselves. It’s more like forcing the body to ignore pain than actually lessening damage but it works nonetheless.

The variant that targets allies is significantly harder to use, since it’s less about control of the body and more like brute-forcing your willpower into helping someone else… It’s like, pulling on your own reserves of energy for someone else? Weirder things have happened.

Zealots Siege Ladder
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50 meters
Cooldown: 1
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The user uses their pole weapon like a vaulting pole, flinging themselves and their weapon 50 meters through the air to land near an enemy with a light attack, usually with the intention of landing a subsequent heavier attack or another light attack.

Medium Techniques:

Prince
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Melee
Cooldown: 3
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: A heavy blow which must be performed with a professional stance, the user takes a firm hold on their weapon and attacks with the intent to harm or kill.

Zealots Battlements
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: self
Cooldown: 6
Duration: 3
Buffs: Attack +10% Defense +40% for user.
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The user tries to emulate the great castle walls of old, they convince themselves that they are unbreachable and that they MUST strike back at those who attack them.

Heavy Techniques:

Faint Hearted
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Melee
Cooldown: 5
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The pinnacle of one-target attacks in the Crackdown Zealot style, the user puts all of their force into a series of terrible blows. Faint Hearted has so much put into it that it forces the user to subconsciously control all of their bodily functions in a primitive/instinctual version of Life Return (or Seimei kikan if you prefer).

This total usage of the body's power leaves the user literally faint-hearted for a little bit after the attack.

Peter
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50m
Cooldown: 7
Duration: 2
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: Reflex -75%
Description: When someone looks into your eyes why do they recoil? Somewhere deep inside your soul your true determination lurks, and that deep lurking presence can be seen through the eyes.

Requires eye contact, forces the muscles of a single enemy to freeze up.

I’m in Your Path, Right? / Stand and fight!
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range: Self / Single Allied Target (100 m)
Cooldown:  9
Duration: 4
Buffs: Defense +75%
Debuffs: N/A
Description: You aren’t a wall, you aren’t a living barricade or some kind of fortress. But that isn’t what you need to be, is it? You’ll stand in the enemies path yourself!

/

Your ally is standing against something ghastly, but they aren’t doing it alone are they? Even if you can’t be right next to them you can still help them!



AoE Techniques:

Viking
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Maximum Base AoE Radius: 2.5m
Cooldown: 7
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: Viking is less an attack meant to damage an enemy than it is an attack meant to damage the ground, blasting away a huge chunk of whatever platform an enemy is standing on almost always leaves you with an advantage, especially when fighting on a pier, dock, or boat.

This is it
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range: 100m
Maximum Base AoE Radius: 25m
Cooldown: 11
Duration: 4
Buffs: Willpower +75%
Debuffs: N/A
Description: In a desperate situation you can find something inside you that won’t give up… it’s purple for some reason. This is it, release it into the world and use it to push yourself and your allies beyond what you could before.


Last edited by Privera Davis on Fri Feb 21, 2020 7:44 pm; edited 3 times in total (Reason for editing : Red text!)
Francis Charlemagne
Crackdown Zealot Z0Pbi6w
Tracker

Name : Francis Charlemagne
Epithet : The Golden Ogre of Tequila Wolf
Age : 28
Height : 5'10" (178 cm)
Weight : 198 lbs (90 kg)
Species : Human
Faction : Marines
World Position : Rear Admiral
Crew : 69th Battalion
Ship : The Silver Ending
Crew Position : Fleet Commander
Haki Level : 8
[[haospec]][[busospec]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 482
Attack (ATK) : 520
Defense (DEF) : 400
Reflex (RX) : 515
Willpower (WP) : 450
Level : 80
Experience Points : 8000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries Berries : 120,050,000
[[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]]
[[atkt6]][[deft6]][[rxt6]][[wpt6]]
Posts : 102
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Crackdown Zealot Empty Re: Crackdown Zealot

on Fri Feb 21, 2020 7:28 pm
[ Excellent work for your first attempt! Just a few comments in red. Also, your bold tags seem to be broken after the first few LTs (everything is in bold). May want to fix that! ]

@Privera Davis wrote:

Fighting Style: Crackdown Zealot
Weapon Utilization: Long Mace, Club, Non-bladed Pole Weapons, etc.
Description: A simple style used by fighters with no time for fancy flourishes, Crackdown is in essence not much more than the user putting all of their strength into their attacks and not holding back, but with a mace.

The Zealot half of crackdown Zealot is related almost entirely to using “belief” to push the body harder. Force of will and conviction used as fuel for the fire and allowing limits to be overcome for a time, though their zeal can also be pushed outwards to inspire others.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Zealot Stance: By abandoning your sensibilities, you allow your beliefs to come out and play. You may be wilder, but you won't be able to defend yourself. Defense -20%, Willpower +20%

Crackdown Stance: By suppressing your will and focusing its energy elsewhere you can find new strength to pull on. Attack +20%, Willpower -20%



Techniques



Light Techniques:

Pauper
Technique Type: Flatl
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Melee
Cooldown: 1 turn
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: A simple technique, but effective. The user keeps a loose grip on their weapon and attacks suddenly, often in an effort to make themselves seem unprepared but still deal a little bit of damage


Rhenania
Technique Type: DoT
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Melee
Cooldown: 1
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: An “anatomical”strike, of sorts. The user attacks directly into the lower ribcage of the enemy with the intention of causing a minor breakage or bleeding.


Zealots Wall / Ramshackle Barricade
Technique Type: Flat/DoT/Stat Morph/(Flat or DoT) Hybrid/Heal [ You missed this. ]
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Self / Single Allied Target within 10m
Cooldown: 3
Duration: 2
Buffs: Defense +25%
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The user pulls on their reserves to push themselves through the enemies attacks, though they aren’t going to just bunker up and protect themselves. It’s more like forcing the body to ignore pain than actually lessening damage but it works nonetheless.

The variant that targets allies is significantly harder to use, since it’s less about control of the body and more like brute-forcing your willpower into helping someone else… It’s like, pulling on your own reserves of energy for someone else? Weirder things have happened.

Zealots Siege Ladder
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50 meters
Cooldown: 2 [ Cooldown for LT Flats is 1. ]
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The user uses their pole weapon like a vaulting pole, flinging themselves and their weapon 50 meters through the air to land near an enemy with a light attack, usually with the intention of landing a subsequent heavier attack or another light attack.

Medium Techniques:

Prince
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Melee
Cooldown: 3
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: A heavy blow which must be performed with a professional stance, the user takes a firm hold on their weapon and attacks with the intent to harm or kill.

Zealots Battlements
Technique Type: Flat/DoT/Stat Morph/(Flat or DoT) Hybrid/Heal [ You missed this. ]
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: self
Cooldown: 6
Duration: 3
Buffs: Attack +10% Defense +40% for user.
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The user tries to emulate the great castle walls of old, they convince themselves that they are unbreachable and that they MUST strike back at those who attack them.

Heavy Techniques:

Faint Hearted
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Melee
Cooldown: 7 [ Cooldowns for HT Flats are 5. ]
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The pinnacle of one-target attacks in the Crackdown Zealot style, the user puts all of their force into a series of terrible blows. Faint Hearted has so much put into it that it forces the user to subconsciously control all of their bodily functions in a primitive/instinctual version of Life Return (or Seimei kikan if you prefer).

This total usage of the body's power leaves the user literally faint-hearted for a little bit after the attack.

Peter
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50m
Cooldown: 7
Duration: 2
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: Reflex -75%
Description: When someone looks into your eyes why do they recoil? Somewhere deep inside your soul your true determination lurks, and that deep lurking presence can be seen through the eyes.

Requires eye contact, forces the muscles of a single enemy to freeze up.

I’m in Your Path, Right? / Stand and fight!
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range: Self / Single Allied Target (100 m)
Cooldown:  9
Duration: 4
Buffs: Defense +75%
Debuffs: N/A
Description: You aren’t a wall, you aren’t a living barricade or some kind of fortress. But that isn’t what you need to be, is it? You’ll stand in the enemies path yourself!

/

Your ally is standing against something ghastly, but they aren’t doing it alone are they? Even if you can’t be right next to them you can still help them!



AoE Techniques:

Viking
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Maximum Base AoE Radius: 2.5m
Cooldown: 7
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: Viking is less an attack meant to damage an enemy than it is an attack meant to damage the ground, blasting away a huge chunk of whatever platform an enemy is standing on almost always leaves you with an advantage, especially when fighting on a pier, dock, or boat.

This is it
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range: 100m
Maximum Base AoE Radius: 25m
Cooldown: 11
Duration: 4
Buffs: Willpower +75%
Debuffs: N/A
Description: In a desperate situation you can find something inside you that won’t give up… it’s purple for some reason. This is it, release it into the world and use it to push yourself and your allies beyond what you could before.

________________________________________________________
Francis Charlemagne
Crackdown Zealot Z0Pbi6w
Tracker

Name : Francis Charlemagne
Epithet : The Golden Ogre of Tequila Wolf
Age : 28
Height : 5'10" (178 cm)
Weight : 198 lbs (90 kg)
Species : Human
Faction : Marines
World Position : Rear Admiral
Crew : 69th Battalion
Ship : The Silver Ending
Crew Position : Fleet Commander
Haki Level : 8
[[haospec]][[busospec]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 482
Attack (ATK) : 520
Defense (DEF) : 400
Reflex (RX) : 515
Willpower (WP) : 450
Level : 80
Experience Points : 8000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries Berries : 120,050,000
[[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]]
[[atkt6]][[deft6]][[rxt6]][[wpt6]]
Posts : 102
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Crackdown Zealot Empty Re: Crackdown Zealot

on Fri Feb 21, 2020 7:48 pm
You do quick work! Approved! Go swat some flies.

@Privera Davis wrote:

Fighting Style: Crackdown Zealot
Weapon Utilization: Long Mace, Club, Non-bladed Pole Weapons, etc.
Description: A simple style used by fighters with no time for fancy flourishes, Crackdown is in essence not much more than the user putting all of their strength into their attacks and not holding back, but with a mace.

The Zealot half of crackdown Zealot is related almost entirely to using “belief” to push the body harder. Force of will and conviction used as fuel for the fire and allowing limits to be overcome for a time, though their zeal can also be pushed outwards to inspire others.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Zealot Stance: By abandoning your sensibilities, you allow your beliefs to come out and play. You may be wilder, but you won't be able to defend yourself. Defense -20%, Willpower +20%

Crackdown Stance: By suppressing your will and focusing its energy elsewhere you can find new strength to pull on. Attack +20%, Willpower -20%



Techniques



Light Techniques:

Pauper
Technique Type: Flatl
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Melee
Cooldown: 1 turn
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: A simple technique, but effective. The user keeps a loose grip on their weapon and attacks suddenly, often in an effort to make themselves seem unprepared but still deal a little bit of damage


Rhenania
Technique Type: DoT
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Melee
Cooldown: 1
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: An “anatomical”strike, of sorts. The user attacks directly into the lower ribcage of the enemy with the intention of causing a minor breakage or bleeding.


Zealots Wall / Ramshackle Barricade
Technique Type:Stat Morph
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Self / Single Allied Target within 10m
Cooldown: 3
Duration: 2
Buffs: Defense +25%
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The user pulls on their reserves to push themselves through the enemies attacks, though they aren’t going to just bunker up and protect themselves. It’s more like forcing the body to ignore pain than actually lessening damage but it works nonetheless.

The variant that targets allies is significantly harder to use, since it’s less about control of the body and more like brute-forcing your willpower into helping someone else… It’s like, pulling on your own reserves of energy for someone else? Weirder things have happened.

Zealots Siege Ladder
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50 meters
Cooldown: 1
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The user uses their pole weapon like a vaulting pole, flinging themselves and their weapon 50 meters through the air to land near an enemy with a light attack, usually with the intention of landing a subsequent heavier attack or another light attack.

Medium Techniques:

Prince
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Melee
Cooldown: 3
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: A heavy blow which must be performed with a professional stance, the user takes a firm hold on their weapon and attacks with the intent to harm or kill.

Zealots Battlements
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: self
Cooldown: 6
Duration: 3
Buffs: Attack +10% Defense +40% for user.
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The user tries to emulate the great castle walls of old, they convince themselves that they are unbreachable and that they MUST strike back at those who attack them.

Heavy Techniques:

Faint Hearted
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Melee
Cooldown: 5
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The pinnacle of one-target attacks in the Crackdown Zealot style, the user puts all of their force into a series of terrible blows. Faint Hearted has so much put into it that it forces the user to subconsciously control all of their bodily functions in a primitive/instinctual version of Life Return (or Seimei kikan if you prefer).

This total usage of the body's power leaves the user literally faint-hearted for a little bit after the attack.

Peter
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50m
Cooldown: 7
Duration: 2
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: Reflex -75%
Description: When someone looks into your eyes why do they recoil? Somewhere deep inside your soul your true determination lurks, and that deep lurking presence can be seen through the eyes.

Requires eye contact, forces the muscles of a single enemy to freeze up.

I’m in Your Path, Right? / Stand and fight!
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range: Self / Single Allied Target (100 m)
Cooldown:  9
Duration: 4
Buffs: Defense +75%
Debuffs: N/A
Description: You aren’t a wall, you aren’t a living barricade or some kind of fortress. But that isn’t what you need to be, is it? You’ll stand in the enemies path yourself!

/

Your ally is standing against something ghastly, but they aren’t doing it alone are they? Even if you can’t be right next to them you can still help them!



AoE Techniques:

Viking
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Maximum Base AoE Radius: 2.5m
Cooldown: 7
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: Viking is less an attack meant to damage an enemy than it is an attack meant to damage the ground, blasting away a huge chunk of whatever platform an enemy is standing on almost always leaves you with an advantage, especially when fighting on a pier, dock, or boat.

This is it
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range: 100m
Maximum Base AoE Radius: 25m
Cooldown: 11
Duration: 4
Buffs: Willpower +75%
Debuffs: N/A
Description: In a desperate situation you can find something inside you that won’t give up… it’s purple for some reason. This is it, release it into the world and use it to push yourself and your allies beyond what you could before.

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