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Crackdown Zealot Empty Crackdown Zealot

This post has assessment comments.Fri Feb 21, 2020 12:25 pm


Fighting Style: Crackdown Zealot
Weapon Utilization: Long Mace, Club, Non-bladed Pole Weapons, etc.
Description: A simple style used by fighters with no time for fancy flourishes, Crackdown is in essence not much more than the user putting all of their strength into their attacks and not holding back, but with a mace.

The Zealot half of crackdown Zealot is related almost entirely to using “belief” to push the body harder. Force of will and conviction used as fuel for the fire and allowing limits to be overcome for a time, though their zeal can also be pushed outwards to inspire others.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Zealot Stance: By abandoning your sensibilities, you allow your beliefs to come out and play. You may be wilder, but you won't be able to defend yourself. Defense -20%, Willpower +20%

Crackdown Stance: By suppressing your will and focusing its energy elsewhere you can find new strength to pull on. Attack +20%, Willpower -20%



Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:


Last edited by Privera Davis on Fri Feb 21, 2020 7:44 pm; edited 3 times in total (Reason for editing : Red text!)
Francis
The Golden Ogre of Tequila Wolf
Tracker

Name : Francis Charlemagne
Epithet : The Golden Ogre of Tequila Wolf
Age : 28
Height : 5'10" (178 cm)
Weight : 198 lbs (90 kg)
Species : Human
Faction : Marines
World Position : Rear Admiral
Crew : 69th Battalion
Ship : The Silver Ending
Marine Rank : Rear Admiral
Crew Role : Fleet Commander
Haki Level : 8
Hitpoints (HP) : 415
Attack (ATK) : 455
Defense (DEF) : 400
Reflex (RX) : 500
Willpower (WP) : 450
Level : 70
Experience Points : 7000
Income Bonus : +0.10
Berries : [ber] 120,050,000
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Crackdown Zealot Empty Re: Crackdown Zealot

This post has assessment comments.Fri Feb 21, 2020 7:28 pm
[ Excellent work for your first attempt! Just a few comments in red. Also, your bold tags seem to be broken after the first few LTs (everything is in bold). May want to fix that! ]

Privera Davis wrote:

Fighting Style: Crackdown Zealot
Weapon Utilization: Long Mace, Club, Non-bladed Pole Weapons, etc.
Description: A simple style used by fighters with no time for fancy flourishes, Crackdown is in essence not much more than the user putting all of their strength into their attacks and not holding back, but with a mace.

The Zealot half of crackdown Zealot is related almost entirely to using “belief” to push the body harder. Force of will and conviction used as fuel for the fire and allowing limits to be overcome for a time, though their zeal can also be pushed outwards to inspire others.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Zealot Stance: By abandoning your sensibilities, you allow your beliefs to come out and play. You may be wilder, but you won't be able to defend yourself. Defense -20%, Willpower +20%

Crackdown Stance: By suppressing your will and focusing its energy elsewhere you can find new strength to pull on. Attack +20%, Willpower -20%



Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:
Francis
The Golden Ogre of Tequila Wolf
Tracker

Name : Francis Charlemagne
Epithet : The Golden Ogre of Tequila Wolf
Age : 28
Height : 5'10" (178 cm)
Weight : 198 lbs (90 kg)
Species : Human
Faction : Marines
World Position : Rear Admiral
Crew : 69th Battalion
Ship : The Silver Ending
Marine Rank : Rear Admiral
Crew Role : Fleet Commander
Haki Level : 8
Hitpoints (HP) : 415
Attack (ATK) : 455
Defense (DEF) : 400
Reflex (RX) : 500
Willpower (WP) : 450
Level : 70
Experience Points : 7000
Income Bonus : +0.10
Berries : [ber] 120,050,000
[[baneoftheweak]][[freakofnature]][[childofdestiny]]
[[atkt6]][[deft6]][[rxt6]][[wpt6]]
Posts : 103
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Crackdown Zealot Empty Re: Crackdown Zealot

This post has assessment comments.Fri Feb 21, 2020 7:48 pm
You do quick work! Approved! Go swat some flies.

Privera Davis wrote:

Fighting Style: Crackdown Zealot
Weapon Utilization: Long Mace, Club, Non-bladed Pole Weapons, etc.
Description: A simple style used by fighters with no time for fancy flourishes, Crackdown is in essence not much more than the user putting all of their strength into their attacks and not holding back, but with a mace.

The Zealot half of crackdown Zealot is related almost entirely to using “belief” to push the body harder. Force of will and conviction used as fuel for the fire and allowing limits to be overcome for a time, though their zeal can also be pushed outwards to inspire others.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Zealot Stance: By abandoning your sensibilities, you allow your beliefs to come out and play. You may be wilder, but you won't be able to defend yourself. Defense -20%, Willpower +20%

Crackdown Stance: By suppressing your will and focusing its energy elsewhere you can find new strength to pull on. Attack +20%, Willpower -20%



Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:
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