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 Alf Dolnstein's Style (Hana no Gijutsu) Empty Alf Dolnstein's Style (Hana no Gijutsu)

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Apr 07, 2020 10:15 pm

Hana no Gijutsu


Fighting Style: Hana no Gijutsu
Weapon Utilization: Sword
Description: Alf's style uses a unique blend of quick and focused strikes that will leave the opponents guessing which sword will come first




Techniques




Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:






Last edited by TheFlorist on Thu Apr 16, 2020 12:25 am; edited 2 times in total
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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 Alf Dolnstein's Style (Hana no Gijutsu) Empty Re: Alf Dolnstein's Style (Hana no Gijutsu)

This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Apr 08, 2020 8:05 am
[ Honestly man, your lack of diligence is frustrating. After seeing your stuff so far, I think you might end up having the same experiences with staff as you did on the site you were complaining about. And it's you, not us. See my comments below.]

TheFlorist wrote:

Name your Fighting Style
[ Fix this. ]


Fighting Style: Name of your fighting style. [ And this. ]
Weapon Utilization: Sword
Description: Briefly describe how your fighting style works. [ Also this. ]


Toggled and Passive Abilities: List any and all passive abilities and properties your devil fruit/fighting style gives you. This cannot include any damage-dealing special attacks, as those will be included under techniques. Passive/toggled abilities cannot give buffs/debuffs higher than 20%. You may have no more than 2 buffing/debuffing toggled abilities. [ And this. If you don't want toggles, remove this section. ]


Techniques


(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)

Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:

[ Also,this fighting style only has level 1 techniques. If you're starting at level 10, you need the following techniques still:
1 more level 5 LT
1 more level 5 MT
1 more level 5 HT
1 more level 10 HT
1 more level 10 AoE
See approved fighting styles of level 10 characters for reference. ]



Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3977

 Alf Dolnstein's Style (Hana no Gijutsu) Empty Re: Alf Dolnstein's Style (Hana no Gijutsu)

This post has in-line assessment comments.Fri Apr 17, 2020 7:06 pm
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TheFlorist wrote:

Hana no Gijutsu


Fighting Style: Hana no Gijutsu
Weapon Utilization: Sword
Description: Alf's style uses a unique blend of quick and focused strikes that will leave the opponents guessing which sword will come first




Techniques




Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:




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