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TheFlorist
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Age : 0
Haki Level : 0
Hitpoints (HP) : 100
Attack (ATK) : 0
Defense (DEF) : 0
Reflex (RX) : 0
Willpower (WP) : 0
Level : 10
Experience Points : 1000
Berries Berries : 50,000
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 Alf Dolnstein's Style (Hana no Gijutsu) Empty Alf Dolnstein's Style (Hana no Gijutsu)

on Tue Apr 07, 2020 10:15 pm

Hana no Gijutsu


Fighting Style: Hana no Gijutsu
Weapon Utilization: Sword
Description: Alf's style uses a unique blend of quick and focused strikes that will leave the opponents guessing which sword will come first




Techniques




Light Techniques:

Slash
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 Meters
Cooldown: 1T
Buffs:None
Debuffs: None
Description: Alf swings Hanabira with full force


Ryūketsu no bara (Blodletting Rose)
Technique Type: DoT
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Turn
Description: With Tsuru, Alf gets a quick slash on his opponent, not drawing immediate damage, but hurting over time.  

Sword Throw
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50
Cooldown: 1
Description: Alf throws Tsuru at his opponent like a dagger


Parry
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10
Cooldown: 1 Turns
Description: Alf counters a move with one of his katanas, and delivers a rapid slash with the other.  

Medium Techniques:

Kōgōsei (photosynthesis)
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 Meters
Cooldown: 6 Turns
Duration: MT: 3
Buffs: +50% Reflexes
Debuffs: None
Description: Alf will stand with his hands on his hit, eyes open, and eyes piercing the opponents soul. At this point, Alf will enter a hightend state of awareness, and will react quicker than he normally does to his surroundings, as if attuned to the earth itself.  

Flash Strike
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50
Cooldown: 3 Tuns
Description: Alf Dashes forward, and slashes upwards faster than the normal eye can see.  

Heavy Techniques:

Rirī no azayakana saku (Lily's Vibrant Blooming
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 1
Cooldown:  5t
Description: In a second,  Alf dashes forward at his opponent, and delivers multiple strikes within a second.  The blood splatter of the opponent will fall down in a   flower like pattern

Muketsu bara (Bloodless Rose)
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range: 100
Cooldown: 5
Description: Finding an opening in his opponent, Alf slashes with both Katanas in one quick and clean motion, causing no pain to his opponent as they are struck down

AoE Techniques:

Natsu no megumi (Summer's Blessing)
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range:10 Meters
Maximum Base AoE Radius: 2.5 Meters
Cooldown:  7 turns
Description: Alf enters a hyper focused state of being, almost like his Kōgōsei form, and almost blissfully moves in a circle around him with his two swords, dealing damage to anyone that is in his radius.  

Natsu no meikai-sa (Summer's Clarity)
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range: 100
Maximum Base AoE Radius: 25  Meters
Cooldown: 7
Duration: 4
Buffs: +75% Reflex to all allies
Description: All of Alfs allies will feel a sense of calm and confidence that will allow them to  follow through with their decisions.    






Last edited by TheFlorist on Thu Apr 16, 2020 12:25 am; edited 2 times in total
Gray
 Alf Dolnstein's Style (Hana no Gijutsu) Cool-t10
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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Height : 10'1" / 307 cm
Weight : 1043 lbs / 473 kg
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 9
[[haospec]][[busospec]][[kenbunspec]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 700
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Shop Discount : -20%
Berries Berries : 25,000,000,000
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 Alf Dolnstein's Style (Hana no Gijutsu) Empty Re: Alf Dolnstein's Style (Hana no Gijutsu)

on Wed Apr 08, 2020 8:05 am
[ Honestly man, your lack of diligence is frustrating. After seeing your stuff so far, I think you might end up having the same experiences with staff as you did on the site you were complaining about. And it's you, not us. See my comments below.]

@TheFlorist wrote:

Name your Fighting Style
[ Fix this. ]


Fighting Style: Name of your fighting style. [ And this. ]
Weapon Utilization: Sword
Description: Briefly describe how your fighting style works. [ Also this. ]


Toggled and Passive Abilities: List any and all passive abilities and properties your devil fruit/fighting style gives you. This cannot include any damage-dealing special attacks, as those will be included under techniques. Passive/toggled abilities cannot give buffs/debuffs higher than 20%. You may have no more than 2 buffing/debuffing toggled abilities. [ And this. If you don't want toggles, remove this section. ]


Techniques


(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)

Light Techniques:

Slash
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 Meters
Cooldown: 1T
Buffs:None
Debuffs: None
Description: Alf swings Hanabira with full force


Ryūketsu no bara (Blodletting Rose)
Technique Type: DoT
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Turn
Description: With Tsuru, Alf gets a quick slash on his opponent, not drawing immediate damage, but hurting over time.  

Parry
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10
Cooldown: 1 Turns
Description: Alf counters a move with one of his katanas, and delivers a rapid slash with the other.  

Medium Techniques:

Kōgōsei (photosynthesis)
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 Meters
Cooldown: 3 Turns [ Cooldown for stat morphs is increased by the duration. This should be 6 turns. ]
Duration: MT: 3
Buffs: +50% Reflexes
Debuffs: None
Description: Alf will stand with his hands on his hit, eyes open, and eyes piercing the opponents soul. At this point, Alf will enter a hightend state of awareness, and will react quicker than he normally does to his surroundings, as if attuned to the earth itself.  

Heavy Techniques:

Rirī no azayakana saku (Lily's Vibrant Blooming
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 1
Cooldown:  5t
Description: In a second,  Alf dashes forward at his opponent, and delivers multiple strikes within a second.  The blood splatter of the opponent will fall down in a  

AoE Techniques:

Natsu no megumi (Summer's Blessing)
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range:10 Meters
Maximum Base AoE Radius: 2.5 Meters
Cooldown:  7 turns
Description: Alf enters a hyper focused state of being, almost like his Kōgōsei form, and almost blissfully moves in a circle around him with his two swords, dealing damage to anyone that is in his radius.  

[ Also,this fighting style only has level 1 techniques. If you're starting at level 10, you need the following techniques still:
1 more level 5 LT
1 more level 5 MT
1 more level 5 HT
1 more level 10 HT
1 more level 10 AoE
See approved fighting styles of level 10 characters for reference. ]




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Gray
 Alf Dolnstein's Style (Hana no Gijutsu) Cool-t10
Tracker

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Height : 10'1" / 307 cm
Weight : 1043 lbs / 473 kg
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 9
[[haospec]][[busospec]][[kenbunspec]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 700
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Shop Discount : -20%
Berries Berries : 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[freakofnature]][[childofdestiny]]
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 Alf Dolnstein's Style (Hana no Gijutsu) Empty Re: Alf Dolnstein's Style (Hana no Gijutsu)

on Fri Apr 17, 2020 7:06 pm
[ Comments in red. ]


@TheFlorist wrote:

Hana no Gijutsu


Fighting Style: Hana no Gijutsu
Weapon Utilization: Sword
Description: Alf's style uses a unique blend of quick and focused strikes that will leave the opponents guessing which sword will come first




Techniques




Light Techniques:

Slash
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 Meters
Cooldown: 1T
Buffs:None
Debuffs: None
Description: Alf swings Hanabira with full force


Ryūketsu no bara (Blodletting Rose)
Technique Type: DoT
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Turn
Description: With Tsuru, Alf gets a quick slash on his opponent, not drawing immediate damage, but hurting over time.  

Sword Throw
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50
Cooldown: 1
Description: Alf throws Tsuru at his opponent like a dagger


Parry
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10
Cooldown: 1 Turns
Description: Alf counters a move with one of his katanas, and delivers a rapid slash with the other.  

Medium Techniques:

Kōgōsei (photosynthesis)
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10 Meters
Cooldown: 6 Turns
Duration: MT: 3
Buffs: +50% Reflexes
Debuffs: None
Description: Alf will stand with his hands on his hit, eyes open, and eyes piercing the opponents soul. At this point, Alf will enter a hightend state of awareness, and will react quicker than he normally does to his surroundings, as if attuned to the earth itself.  

Flash Strike
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50
Cooldown: 3 Tuns
Description: Alf Dashes forward, and slashes upwards faster than the normal eye can see.  

Heavy Techniques:

Rirī no azayakana saku (Lily's Vibrant Blooming
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 1
Cooldown:  5t
Description: In a second,  Alf dashes forward at his opponent, and delivers multiple strikes within a second.  The blood splatter of the opponent will fall down in a   flower like pattern

Muketsu bara (Bloodless Rose)
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range: 100
Cooldown: 5
Description: Finding an opening in his opponent, Alf slashes with both Katanas in one quick and clean motion, causing no pain to his opponent as they are struck down

[ You're missing a level 10 HT. ]

AoE Techniques:

Natsu no megumi (Summer's Blessing)
Technique Type: Flat
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range:10 Meters
Maximum Base AoE Radius: 2.5 Meters
Cooldown:  7 turns
Description: Alf enters a hyper focused state of being, almost like his Kōgōsei form, and almost blissfully moves in a circle around him with his two swords, dealing damage to anyone that is in his radius.  

Natsu no meikai-sa (Summer's Clarity)
Technique Type: Stat Morph
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range: 100
Maximum Base AoE Radius: 25  Meters
Cooldown: 7 [ Cooldown should be 11. ]
Duration: 4
Buffs: +75% Reflex to all allies
Description: All of Alfs allies will feel a sense of calm and confidence that will allow them to  follow through with their decisions.    





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