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Suna Suna no mi Empty Suna Suna no mi

This post has assessment comments.Thu Sep 03, 2020 2:01 pm

Suna Suna no mi


Devil Fruit: Suna Suna no mi
Devil Fruit Type: Logia

Devil Fruit Appearance:  It's a bright yellow with strange black zig zags coursing along its body like waves.
Devil Fruit Description: The Suna Suna no mi allows the control, create, and become sand. This fruit in the canon story has created sand storms, create giant blades made of sand, and drain the moisture out of living and non living beings(except metal). In addition to this, the fruit seems to make sand an extension of him/herself allowing the user to become more powerful and sense anything touching the connect sand under the user's control.

Fighting Style: Desert scourge
Weapon Utilization: no
Description: The fighting style ultimately revolves around the creation and manipulation of sand from his body and from the environment. Since it is the early stages of Steins career with the fruit, he is not capable fully realizing his fruit's full potential. Although the main tenants of his fighting style are creating constructs made of sand, absorbing an objects moisture to through them off balance, and firing sand like a weapon. Along with using the sand as a tool for infiltration since he can sense movements at this level, when someone or someone passes by sand.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:

Toggle 1: The more the merrier

Stein begins to grind non-metallic material in order create more sand. This results in a 20 percent attack buff and a -20% reflex debuff.



Techniques


(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)

Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:

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Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror / Black Fist
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 10
[[haoasc]][[busoasc]][[kenbunasc]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 750
Attack (ATK) : 800
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 715
Willpower (WP) : 650
Level : 100
Prestige : 8
Experience Points : 18000
Bounty : [ber] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Berries : [ber] 25,000,000,000
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Suna Suna no mi Empty Re: Suna Suna no mi

This post has assessment comments.Fri Sep 04, 2020 2:44 pm
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Stein wrote:

Suna Suna no mi


Devil Fruit: Suna Suna no mi
Devil Fruit Type: Logia

Devil Fruit Appearance:  It's a bright yellow with strange black zig zags coursing along its body like waves.
Devil Fruit Description: The Suna Suna no mi allows the control, create, and become sand. This fruit in the canon story has created sand storms, create giant blades made of sand, and drain the moisture out of living and non living beings(except metal). In addition to this, the fruit seems to make sand an extension of him/herself allowing the user to become more powerful and sense anything touching the connect sand under the user's control.

Fighting Style: Desert scourge
Weapon Utilization: no
Description: The fighting style ultimately revolves around the creation and manipulation of sand from his body and from the environment. Since it is the early stages of Steins career with the fruit, he is not capable fully realizing his fruit's full potential. Although the main tenants of his fighting style are creating constructs made of sand, absorbing an objects moisture to through them off balance, and firing sand like a weapon. Along with using the sand as a tool for infiltration since he can sense movements at this level, when someone or someone passes by sand.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Toggle 1: Basic flight

Stein's legs turn into sand which allows him to fly. -20% ref [ Flight can be a "passive" ability in that it doesn't need to give you a debuff. And, if you still wanna make it a Toggle, then, please balance the debuff with an equivalent buff to another stat. ]

Toggle 2: Sand screen

Stein creates a particles of sand that linger within a 20 foot radius, that alert him of movement. +20% ref -20% def [ I actually think you have your toggles backwards. I would suggest making Basic Flight a toggle that gives you +20% RX and -20% DEF (flight increases your movement capacity but also makes you vulnerable to attacks from more angles). And for Sand Screen, I'd actually suggest making that a toggle with +20% DEF and -20% RX as you could say it impedes any attacks coming your way but also slows your own movements. ]



Techniques


(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)

Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:

[/b]



Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror / Black Fist
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 10
[[haoasc]][[busoasc]][[kenbunasc]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 750
Attack (ATK) : 800
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 715
Willpower (WP) : 650
Level : 100
Prestige : 8
Experience Points : 18000
Bounty : [ber] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Berries : [ber] 25,000,000,000
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[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
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[[1needlelog]][[3needlelog]]
Posts : 3307
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Suna Suna no mi Empty Re: Suna Suna no mi

This post has assessment comments.Fri Sep 04, 2020 7:16 pm
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Stein wrote:

Suna Suna no mi


Devil Fruit: Suna Suna no mi
Devil Fruit Type: Logia

Devil Fruit Appearance:  It's a bright yellow with strange black zig zags coursing along its body like waves.
Devil Fruit Description: The Suna Suna no mi allows the control, create, and become sand. This fruit in the canon story has created sand storms, create giant blades made of sand, and drain the moisture out of living and non living beings(except metal). In addition to this, the fruit seems to make sand an extension of him/herself allowing the user to become more powerful and sense anything touching the connect sand under the user's control.

Fighting Style: Desert scourge
Weapon Utilization: no
Description: The fighting style ultimately revolves around the creation and manipulation of sand from his body and from the environment. Since it is the early stages of Steins career with the fruit, he is not capable fully realizing his fruit's full potential. Although the main tenants of his fighting style are creating constructs made of sand, absorbing an objects moisture to through them off balance, and firing sand like a weapon. Along with using the sand as a tool for infiltration since he can sense movements at this level, when someone or someone passes by sand.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:

Toggle 1: The more the merrier

Stein begins to grind non-metallic material in order create more sand. This results in a 20 percent attack buff and a -20% reflex debuff.



Techniques


(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)

Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:

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