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This post has in-line assessment comments.Sat Jul 16, 2016 10:49 am
Mori's Rokushiki

Fighting Style: Rokushiki also known as Six Powers
Weapon Utilization: nope
Specialization: Melee
Description: Rokushiki is a special, superhuman martial arts style. It is mainly taught to Cipher Pol and Marine mid through high tier officers; though you will occasionally find a marine able to use it if they have gone through the training. Rokushiki focuses on melee combat, though you can use weapons to apply a different take on it. This combat is meant for brutalization and capture. It is not to be used lightly due to some techniques causing you to damage yourself as well.

Techniques

Light Attacks:

Medium Attacks:

Heavy Attacks:

AOE Attacks:


Last edited by Akihiko Mori on Tue Jul 23, 2019 7:08 pm; edited 9 times in total
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The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : "The Conqueror" / "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Sat Jul 16, 2016 2:50 pm
1. Rokushiki is not just taught mainly to Cipher Pol agents. Otherwise, Coby wouldn't be using it when he fought Luffy, nor would all the Vice Admirals use it. It's simply taught to mid-to-high level Navy and World Government agents.

2. Your equipment tech does not go here. Those techs are completely separate from your fighting style.

3. Geppo: Do not say "roughly 3 posts". The maximum duration of techs must be absolute. And also, for this tech, and any other techs that have a duration of more than 1 posts, include it with the technique Cooldown to make them easier to spot.

4. Storm Leg: How long is the opponent stunned for?
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Jul 25, 2016 6:31 pm
Fixed-icated for ya Gray
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The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : "The Conqueror" / "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

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This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Jul 25, 2016 7:08 pm
1. You forgot to add durations beside the Technique Cooldowns.

2. Storm Leg must stun for either 1 post or 3 posts, unless you explain what determines how long they are stunned for. Also, you cannot stun just any one, since your attack is also a damage-dealing technique. Make it so the stun only works on opponents with less than 25% defense than your attack. Also, being "short of breath" needs to come with an actual stat debuff to represent it. I would recommend a 50% attack debuff for however many posts you decide to stun opponents for.
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Jul 26, 2016 8:35 am
fixed part 2
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The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : "The Conqueror" / "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

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This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Jul 26, 2016 12:29 pm
The stun lasts roughly 1 through 3 posts and he takes a side-effect of being Short of Breath(50% attack debuff). If a person has less than 25% defense than Mori's Attack; they are stunned for 3 posts. 15% defense less than Mori's Attack; 2 Posts. 10% defense less than Mori's Attack; 1 Post.

^ I think I confused you with the stat comparisons here. When I said "less than 25% defense of your attack", what I meant was that their defense would be 25% of your attack. So, if your attack was 100, then their defense would need to be 25 or less for them to be stunned. So, please change that accordingly and sorry for confusing you.
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Jul 26, 2016 12:55 pm
Now we got it down lol.
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : "The Conqueror" / "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

Posts : 3706

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This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Jul 26, 2016 1:07 pm
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Akihiko Mori wrote:
Mori's Rokushiki

Fighting Style: Rokushiki also known as Six Powers
Weapon Utilization: nope
Specialization: Melee
Description: Rokushiki is a special, superhuman martial arts style. It is mainly taught to Cipher Pol and Marine mid through high tier officers; though you will occasionally find a marine able to use it if they have gone through the training. Rokushiki focuses on melee combat, though you can use weapons to apply a different take on it. This combat is meant for brutalization and capture. It is not to be used lightly due to some techniques causing you to damage yourself as well.

Techniques

Light Attacks:

Medium Attacks:

Heavy Attacks:

AOE Attacks:
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Aug 02, 2016 1:24 pm
Unlocking for Edits, enjoy your level 50.
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