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Moreau
Tracker

Name : Moreau
Epithet : "Gentle-Weapon"
Age : 24
Height : 6'1
Weight : 144 lbs
Species : Human
Faction : Marines
Crew : The Hunting Party
Crew Role : First Mate
Devil Fruit : Buki Buki no Mi
Haki Level : 0
Hitpoints (HP) : 130
Attack (ATK) : 40
Defense (DEF) : 50
Reflex (RX) : 75
Willpower (WP) : 60
Level : 1
Experience Points : 100
Berries Berries : 50,000
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Posts : 24
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Moreau Bio Empty Moreau Bio

Tue Jun 07, 2022 2:11 am

Moreau



Basic Character Information


First Name: Jean (Said infrequently)
Middle Name: Beaufort
Last Name: Moreau
Epithet: Gentle-Weapon
Birthdate: 12/22/1805
Gender: Gentleman
Race: Human
Faction: Navy
Professions: Butler, Cook


Physical Appearance


Height:  6'1
Weight: 144 lbs

Hair Style: Long Coiffed
Hair Color: Royal Purple
Eye Color: Gray
Scars: None
Clothing and Accessories: Black formalwear, accented with rouge-colored jabot, pocket-square, and undershirt. Pink Gray longcoat for rain. Lavender Linens & Wools for cold weather. Carries a silver pocket watch embossed with a castle.

Description: Svelte, slender, pencil moustache, well-exfoliated pale skin, smells like roses & gunpowder



The Past



Main Traits:  Dignified, Cunning, Thoughtful
Likes: Good Conversation, Fashion, Tea
Dislikes:  Absolutes, Messiness, Killing with ignoble weapons
Unique Laugh: Yare-yare-shi-shi

Hometown: Citadel Beaudoin at the edge of the Amber Kingdom in Flevance.

Personality: Moreau is kindly & chivalrous, though soft-spoken he is not reserved, and he generally makes an effort to be friendly, courteous & helpful to those in his company.
In combat Moreau is eerily calm, analytical, and inquisitive; often he will question and muse on the motivations of an opponent.

History:


Last edited by Gray on Wed Jun 08, 2022 6:38 am; edited 5 times in total (Reason for editing : Formatting error, Minor tweaks to grammar & characters)
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
Tracker

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror / Black Fist
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" / 310 cm
Weight : 1043 lbs / 473 kg
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 10
[[haoasc]][[busoasc]][[kenbunasc]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 750
Attack (ATK) : 800
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 715
Willpower (WP) : 650
Level : 100
Prestige : 8
Experience Points : 18000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Berries Berries : 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[atkt6_sp]][[deft6]][[rxt6]][[wpt6]]
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Posts : 3089
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Moreau Bio Empty Re: Moreau Bio

Tue Jun 07, 2022 5:26 pm
Great bio overall. I appreciated you preserving the idealistic nature of the White Saint Pirates despite the raid. I did have a few comments that are marked in orange below though.

Moreau wrote:

Moreau



Basic Character Information


First Name: ??? (Said infrequently) [ If it's said infrequently then it is still said. A marine's full name would be on their service registry anyway. So, unless Moreau lied about his first name to the Navy, you should include it here. ]
Middle Name: Beaufort
Last Name: Moreau
Epithet: Gentle-Weapon
Birthdate: 12/22/1805
Gender: Gentleman
Race: Human
Faction: Navy
Professions: Butler, Cook


Physical Appearance


Height:  6”1 [ 6" means 6 inches. I think you mean 6'. ]
Weight: 144 lbs

Hair Style: Long Coiffed
Hair Color: Royal Purple
Eye Color: Gray
Scars: None
Clothing and Accessories: Black formalwear, accented with rouge-colored jabot, pocket-square, and undershirt. Pink Gray longcoat for rain. Lavender Linens & Wools for cold weather. Carries a silver pocket watch embossed with a castle.

Description: Svelte, slender, pencil moustache, well-exfoliated pale skin, smells like roses & gunpowder



The Past



Main Traits:  Dignified, Cunning, Thoughtful
Likes: Good Conversation, Fashion, Tea
Dislikes:  Absolutes, Messiness, Killing with ignoble weapons
Unique Laugh: Yare-yare-shi-shi

Hometown: Citadel Beaudoin at the edge of the Amber Kingdom in Flevance.

Personality: Moreau is kindly & chivalrous, though soft-spoken he is not reserved, and he generally makes an effort to be friendly, courteous & helpful to those in his company.
In combat Moreau is eerily calm, analytical, and inquisitive; often he will question and muse on the motivations of an opponent.

History:
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
Tracker

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror / Black Fist
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" / 310 cm
Weight : 1043 lbs / 473 kg
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 10
[[haoasc]][[busoasc]][[kenbunasc]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 750
Attack (ATK) : 800
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 715
Willpower (WP) : 650
Level : 100
Prestige : 8
Experience Points : 18000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Berries Berries : 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[atkt6_sp]][[deft6]][[rxt6]][[wpt6]]
[[1needlelog]][[3needlelog]]
Posts : 3089
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Moreau Bio Empty Re: Moreau Bio

Wed Jun 08, 2022 6:37 am
Moreau is approved!

Moreau wrote:

Moreau



Basic Character Information


First Name: Jean (Said infrequently)
Middle Name: Beaufort
Last Name: Moreau
Epithet: Gentle-Weapon
Birthdate: 12/22/1805
Gender: Gentleman
Race: Human
Faction: Navy
Professions: Butler, Cook


Physical Appearance


Height:  6'1
Weight: 144 lbs

Hair Style: Long Coiffed
Hair Color: Royal Purple
Eye Color: Gray
Scars: None
Clothing and Accessories: Black formalwear, accented with rouge-colored jabot, pocket-square, and undershirt. Pink Gray longcoat for rain. Lavender Linens & Wools for cold weather. Carries a silver pocket watch embossed with a castle.

Description: Svelte, slender, pencil moustache, well-exfoliated pale skin, smells like roses & gunpowder



The Past



Main Traits:  Dignified, Cunning, Thoughtful
Likes: Good Conversation, Fashion, Tea
Dislikes:  Absolutes, Messiness, Killing with ignoble weapons
Unique Laugh: Yare-yare-shi-shi

Hometown: Citadel Beaudoin at the edge of the Amber Kingdom in Flevance.

Personality: Moreau is kindly & chivalrous, though soft-spoken he is not reserved, and he generally makes an effort to be friendly, courteous & helpful to those in his company.
In combat Moreau is eerily calm, analytical, and inquisitive; often he will question and muse on the motivations of an opponent.

History:
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