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Name : Nathan D. Greys
Epithet : Frog Doctor, Blue Leg Nathan
Age : 21
Height : 5'10"
Weight : 160lbs
Species : Human
Faction : Marines
Crew Position : Doctor
Haki Level : 5
Hitpoints (HP) : 257
Attack (ATK) : 285
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Kaeru Kaeru no Mi Empty Kaeru Kaeru no Mi

on Mon Oct 17, 2016 11:23 pm


Kaeru Kaeru no Mi- Model Monkey Tree Frog


Devil Fruit: Kaero Kaeru no Mi/ Frog Frog Fruit : Model Monkey Tree Frog
Devil Fruit Type: Zoan

Devil Fruit Appearance: A light green mango with swirled bumps on the exterior
Devil Fruit Description: This Zoan Devil Fruit allows the user to partially and fully transform into a Monkey Tree Frog, allowing the user to take on properties of frogs. General frog attributes are gained such as increased leg strength/ jumping, wall climbing, and Extending/ elongated tongue. Along with the Monkey Tree Frog's specific ability to create a pain-killing substance about 40 times stronger than morphine. User is also able to utilize the many medical properties found in the exterior mucus found on frog skin.  At higher levels of control user is able to change select parts of their body into their fruit's animal

Fighting Style: Frog's Rokushiki
Weapon Utilization: Brass knuckle Gloves
Description: Nathan combines his training in Rokushiki with the unique froggy attributes of his devil fruit. Nathan executes techniques of rokushiki with both his natural strength and the unique strengths granted to him from his hybrid and frog forms. Utilizing the strong legs, Nathan has a greater specialization with the Soru and Rankyaku techniques. With the combination of Nathan's medical Knowledge, his physical speed, and the powers of both his devil fruit and Rokushiki; Nathan has made this fighting style into one that utilizes precision, strength, and speed to effectively deal with those who would pose threats.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
- Wall Crawling: - Frogs have a natural climbing ability due to microscopic hooks on their feet that allow them to adhere to surfaces at extreme angles
- Enhanced Jumping: Frogs have incredible strength in their legs, many frogs can leap 20 times their length. Though the Monkey tree frog isn't as much of a jumper, Nathan gains the jumping power to jump 10 times his height. In Hybrid mode he can leap roughly 22 meters ( 72 feet)
- Enhanced Agility: - Going along with the incredible leg strength of frogs, this grants Nathan increased agility (reflex) by 10% while in Hybrid and Full form. Though the full form may not have as much strength as the hybrid, it's smaller figure makes it easier to move around. While using enhanced agility, defense is decreased -10%.
- Strong extendable tongue: - Most frogs have a fold-able tongue that is about 1/3rd the length of their body. Nathan's tongue in Hybrid mode can extend about two and a half feet.
- Small form: - In Nathan's full frog form he is a little over 2 inches in length. His small figure gives him greater advantage when it comes to stealth and getting inside small gaps. However due to the decrease in size and mass, his attack is cut down. (covered in Full Form  info)
- Body temperature manipulation: - Nathan can switch his body temperature type between his hotblooded human type, and his frogs cold blooded body temperature. He can utilize his human hot-blooded temperature to survive in conditions where normally a frog shouldn't
- Slick Body: - Nathan's Hybrid and Full form are covered in a slick mucus layer making it harder to keep a hold on him. Whether physically keeping a hold on him, or keeping Nathan bound with bindings (other than sea-stone of course). Those without seastone or use of haki have a hard time grabbing and grappling. If the attacker’s attack stat is below 50% that of Nathan's defense stat, he is immune to the grabbing/grappling attack.
-Medical Mucus: - The mucus found on frogs skin contains many anti-bacterial properties that have a multitude of medical uses. Specifically for the monkey tree frog, Nathan is able to generate a painkilling substance that is 40 times stronger than morphine. He generally uses this substance for medical purposes though. Can use as a healing UT.

Hybrid Form: - Hybrid transformation grants increased reflex +10% and Attack +10%, while nerfing Defense by 20%. Physical size increases to about 8ft tall with wider shoulders- (as has been seen with most zoan hybrids).

Full Frog Form: - Full transformation grants increased reflex and stealth capabilities because of smaller form. However attack is cut down vastly, because it is indeed a frog. However Nathan is able to maintain control over his body temperature, switching between warm and cold blooded physiology, being able to survive where frogs normally can't. Though he has a bit more of a disadvantage with his devil fruit in colder climates, being partially cold blooded. In full transformation Nathan's Reflex increases by 10%, but his attack gets cut by -10%.


Techniques


(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)

Light Techniques:

Iron Dart
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Description:Nathan utilizes the Shigan and Tekkai techniques to jab with a hardened spear-hand. The thin profile of the strike is good for hitting small target areas.  

Rankyaku: Scalpel Heel
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Description: Nathan utilizes this specialized rokushiki technique to create a small projectile of condensed air. It is smaller in size than a regular Rankyaku for the sake of piercing rather than cutting.

Rankyaku: Rosy Arrow
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50m
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Description: Nathan uses his incredibly strong tongue to execute a Rankyaku that forms a pink shaded blade of compressed air, shaped like an arrowhead dealing piercing damage.


Frog Volley
Technique Level: 20
Maximum Base Range: 200m
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Description: Nathan adopts a technique that he had observed fishmen using. Nathan quickly drops the temperature of his arm and then raises it back up causing condensation on his skin. Nathan then uses his strength and the power of the Shigan technique to launch the droplets at his intended targets. The droplets take on the shape of a frog heads, and impact with piercing force.


Hunting Frog Arrow
Technique Level: 40
Maximum Base Range: 400m
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Description: Similar the the Fishman karate's Water Shot. Nathan quickly changes the temperature in his arm to create condensation that gathers in his hand. Nathan then launches the gathered water at the intended target using the strength and force of shigan. The glob of water forms into a frog head shaped arrow. The arrow does piercing damage and has capacity to pierce through objects and materials.

Medium Techniques:

Frog Bullet
Technique Level:1
Maximum Base Range: 10m gap closer
Cooldown: 5 posts
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Description: In this technique,Nathan utilizes Soru, Shigan, and Tekkai. Nathan shrinks himself down to his full frog form and propels himself forward with Soru, following the momentum through with a punch thrown at the speed reserved for Shigan, with his fist hardened by Tekkai.


Feint Frog
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: melee, Dash 50m
Cooldown: 5 posts
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Description: Nathan Dashes towards his target using Soru appearing in front of them as though intending to attack head on, Then uses Soru and Shigan twice in rapid succession leaving two afterimages at his target's sides. The speed at which this is executed makes it appear that there are two of him attacking his opponent at the same time.


Flying Frog
Technique Level: 20
Maximum Base Range:Gap closer 200m, Air melee (Maximum Base range is 10x the technique level in meters.)
Cooldown: 5 posts
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Description:  Nathan quickly dashes to his intended target or targets using soru and launches them into the air with a strong kick. Nathan then uses a combination of Geppo and Soru to execute a series of passing strikes in the air before driving them down with a strong kick.


Frog Lance
Technique Level: 40
Maximum Base Range: 400m
Cooldown: 5 posts
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Description: Nathan uses his leg strength to execute a finely pointed Rankyaku specialized for piercing before expanding to the usual cross shape, cutting as it expands. The lance is capable of piercing heavy armor and stone.

Heavy Techniques:

Frog Cannon
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Dash 10m
Cooldown: 8 posts
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Description: Nathan uses Soru to launch himself towards his target. Nathan then kicks at his target's with the same leg power used to achieve Soru.


Two-Stage Frocket
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range: 100m leap
Cooldown: 8 posts
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Description: Nathan Leaps at his target using Soru then Leaps again with Soru and Geppo to propel himself faster and cause him to twist, then uses Tekkai to harden his body with his fists held out in front of him.


Brilliant Piercing Frog
Technique Level: 40
Maximum Base Range: 400m
Cooldown: 8 posts
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Description: Nathan hops and quickly kicks with both his legs creating a large frog- shaped arrowhead that can cut through heavy objects.

AoE Techniques:

Rankyaku: Ripple
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Maximum Base Radius: 2.5 m radius (like 8 feet)
Cooldown: 15 posts
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Description: Nathan executes a series of Rankyaku at the ground the spread out in rings when they impact the ground like ripples in a pond.

Rain of Frogs
Technique Level: 20
Maximum Base Range: 200m
Maximum Base Radius: 25m radius
Cooldown: 15 posts
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Description: Nathan jumps up in the air and performs a large series of rankyaku kicks that cover an area. The frog shaped rankyakus pierce and expand into multiple cutting ripple effects upon coming into contact with objects.





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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Height : 10'1"/ 307 cm
Weight : 1043 lbs / 473 kg
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Hitpoints (HP) : 700
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
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Kaeru Kaeru no Mi Empty Re: Kaeru Kaeru no Mi

on Sat Nov 05, 2016 4:00 pm
[Comments will be in orange.]

@Greys wrote:
Kaeru Kaeru no Mi (Frog-Frog Fruit), Model: Monkey Tree Frog

Devil Fruit: Kaeru Kaeru no Mi (Frog-Frog Fruit), Model: Monkey Tree Frog
Devil Fruit Type: Zoan

Devil Fruit Appearance: A light green mango with swirled bumps on the exterior
Devil Fruit Description: This Zoan Devil Fruit allows the user to partially and fully transform into a Monkey Tree Frog, allowing the user to take on properties of frogs. General frog attributes are gained such as increased leg strength/ jumping, wall climbing, Strong tongue, and super hearing are gained. Along with the Monkey Tree Frog's specific ability to create a pain-killing substance about 40 times stronger than morphine. User is also able to utilize the many medical properties found in the exterior mucus found on frog skin.  At higher levels of control user is able to change select parts of their body into their fruit's animal

Devil Fruit Passive Abilities:  Human Form= (  Hybrid Form= |  Full Form= )[Can't figure out what's going on here. I assume you're trying to create a legend here, but I feel like there are a few missing characters. Either that, or use various symbols (such as *$#^@).]
- Heightened Hearing: (|) - Many species of frog have a concave hearing structure allowing them to hear much further and much clearer than the average human. Some frogs can even tune their frequency of hearing. [The mention of increased senses is entirely unnecessary. You won't be compared to "average humans" when you RP. And stronger characters in OP have heightened senses regardless of their DF powers, so there's little point in including this here.]
-360 degree vision: |) - Frogs have slightly extruded eyes that allow them to see in a 360 degree area, however in Nathans case He only gets 180 degrees since he's blind in one eye.
- Wall Crawling: |) - Frogs have a natural climbing ability due to microscopic hooks on their feet that allow them to adhere to surfaces at extreme angles
- Enhanced Jumping: |) Frogs have incredible strength in their legs, many frogs can leap 20 times their length. Though the Monkey tree frog isn't as much of a jumper, Nathan gains the jumping power to jump 10 times his height. In Hybrid mode he can leap roughly 22 meters ( 72 feet)
- Enhanced Agility: |) - Going along with the incredible leg strength of frogs, this grants Nathan increased agility (reflex) while in Hybrid and Full form. Though the full form may not have as much strength as the hybrid, it's smaller figure makes it easier to move around.

[Give exact percentages for buffs and debuffs. This applies to any subsequent mentions of increased or decreased stats due to transformations. Also, and this is incredibly important: the buffs and debuffs MUST even out.

For example, if you were to gain +25 reflex from transforming into hybrid form for say 5 posts. Then for the duration of those 5 posts, or for 5 posts after your 5-post duration ends, you must give yourself a -25 debuff to a particular stat that actually makes sense physically. Do not simply give yourself a -25 debuff to say willpower because that's practically a useless stat for you.

One way you could justify that buff is by saying you have -25 attack for 5 posts afterwards due to exhaustion from your transformation.]


- Strong Prehensile tongue: |) - Most frogs have a foldable tongue that is about 1/3rd the length of their body. Nathan's tongue in Hybrid mode can extend about two and a half feet. Nathan is able to freely manipulate his tongue for whatever purpose he needs to. It's about as strong as one of his other limbs, giving him basically a 5th limb [It's perfectly okay for you to have a strong prehensile tongue, but you're giving too much credit to the maneuverability of a frog's tongue. From my research, I have not seen any signs of frogs being able to freely use their tongues as if they were limbs. I recommend you shorten this passive to simply show it's prehensility.]
- Small form: ) - In Nathan's full form he is a little over 2 inches in length. His small figure gives him greater advantage when it comes to stealth and getting inside small gaps. However due to the decrease in size and mass, his attack is cut down. [Again, give yourself an accountable attack debuff. It's easy enough to say "he has a lower attack" and then during RP, revealing that it's only "lower" by 5 points or the like. I'm not saying you would do this, but for the sake of consistency, I ask that you oblige me.]
- Earthquake/ weather sensing: (|) - Actual scientists aren't exactly sure why this happens, but they've observed entire populations of frogs up and leave an area before an earthquake struck. Scientists theorize that it might be a change in the pressure of the earth that affects something within the frogs that causes headaches... So Nathan gets headaches a day or two whenever earthquakes or inclement weather is soon to hit.  The more dull the further off the event, the more painful the sooner. [I beg you remove this one entirely. The instincts of animals, while often noticeable in real life, isn't so far ahead in the world of One Piece. Strong humans are shown to have just as strong instincts as animals in this particular fiction, and so giving yourself a special ability like this under the pretext of "being an animal" is unfair to other players, who may have just as keen senses.]
- Body temperature manipulation: |) - Nathan can switch his body temperature type between his hotblooded human type, and his frogs cold blooded body temperature. He can utilize his human hot-blooded temperature to survive in conditions where normally a frog shouldn't
- Slick Body: |) - Nathan's Hybrid and Full form are covered in a slick mucus layer making it harder to keep a hold on him. Whether physically keeping a hold on him, or keeping Nathan bound with bindings (other than sea-stone of course) [Make this an attack requirement vs. your defense requirement. Say, anyone with 50% or less attack than your defense, has trouble grabbing parts of your body, unless they use either sea-stone, or busoshoku haki.]
-Medical Mucus: |) - The mucus found on frogs skin contains many anti-bacterial properties that have a multitude of medical uses. Specifically for the monkey tree frog, Nathan is able to generate a painkilling substance that is 40 times stronger than morphine. He generally uses this substance for medical purposes though.

- Partial transformation grants increased Reflex and Attack/strength by tier x 10. So at the lowest tier it would be an increase of 10 stats, at the highest tier of 6 it would be a 60 point increase. As of the current tier (tier 3) it would be an increase of 30 points. ((Figure this makes easier scaling with the point increase being based on tier.))[Again, here and below, you must balance your stats. Remember, you can have a debuff higher than your buffs (as suggested by your full transformation), but you cannot have buffs higher than your debuffs.]

- Full transformation grants increased reflex and stealth capabilities because of smaller form. However attack is cut down by 100 points, because it is indeed a frog. However Nathan is able to maintain control over his body temperature, switching between warm and cold blooded physiology, being able to survive where frogs normally can't. Though he has a bit more of a disadvantage with his devil fruit in colder climates, being partially cold blooded.

Fighting Style: Frog's Rokushiki
Weapon Utilization: A pair of Brass knuckle gloves
Specialization: Mix of Melee and Range
Description: Nathan mixes his Devil Fruit's strengths with his years of training in the six superhuman martial arts style of Rokushiki. Nathan focuses on utilizing the bonus strength granted by his devil fruit to form his own Rokushiki techniques. Focusing on utilizing his hybrid form's powerful legs for both power and speed, Nathan has a greater specialization with the Soru and Rankyaku techniques. With the combination of Nathan's medical Knowledge, his physical speed, and the powers of both his devil fruit and Rokushiki; Nathan has made this fighting style into one that utilizes precision and speed to effectively deal with those who would pose threats. [Just a pre-warning: With any subsequent mentions of Soru, keep in mind that your speed will still be dependent upon your reflex stat. If you wish to give yourself enhanced speed using Soru, then you must mention specific stat buffs (and of course, equal debuffs) to go with it. Otherwise, anywhere you mention Soru, it will only be seen as a descriptor for your movement, and not an actual ability that increases your speed.]

Techniques


(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)

Light Attacks:

Name of the technique Iron Dart [XD I suppose it’s not very clear in the template, but you’re meant to replace “Name of the technique” with the name of your technique.]
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: Melee
Technique Cooldown:  2 Posts
Technique Description: Nathan utilizes the Shigan and Tekkai techniques to jab with a hardened spear-hand. The thin profile of the strike is good for hitting small target areas.  


Name of the technique Rokushiki: Scalpel Heel
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: 10m
Technique Cooldown: 3 Posts
Technique Description: Nathan utilizes this specialized rokushiki technique to create a small projectile of condensed air, it may not have the normal width of a rokushiki projectile, but it is very sharp and more for piercing than cutting.


Name of the technique Rankyaku: Rosy Arrow
Technique Level: 5
Technique Range: 12m
Technique Cooldown: 4 posts
Technique Description: Nathan uses his incredibly strong tongue to execute a Rankyaku that forms a pink shaded blade of compressed air, shaped like an arrowhead. [I recommend you change this into more of a piercing attack, considering my request for taking away your tongue’s maneuverability above. In this case, it would be more similar to shigan than rankyaku.]


Name of the technique Frog Volley
Technique Level: 20
Technique Range: 12 m
Technique Cooldown: 4
Technique Description: Nathan adopts a technique that he had observed fishmen using. Nathan quickly drops the temperature of his arm and then raises it back up causing condensation on his skin. Nathan then uses his strength and the power of the Shigan technique to launch the droplets at his intended targets. The droplets take on the shape of a frog heads, and impact with piercing force. [Oooo. Me likey.]


Name of the technique Hunting Frog Arrow
Technique Level: 40
Technique Range: 30m (roughly 98 feet)
Technique Cooldown: 5 Posts [Let’s make the cooldown for this technique into 6 posts]
Technique Description: Similar the the Fishman karate's Water Shot. Nathan quickly changes the temperature in his arm to create condensation that gathers in his hand. Nathan then launches the gathered water at the intended target using the strength and force of shigan. The glob of water forms into a frog head shaped arrow. The arrow does piercing damage and has capacity to pierce through objects and materials.

Medium Attacks:

Name of the technique Frog Bullet
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: Melee Gap closer, 10m Leap
Technique Cooldown: 6
Technique Description: In this technique,Nathan utilizes Soru, Shigan, and Tekkai. Nathan propels himself forward with Soru, following the momentum through with a Shigan punch, with his fist hardened by Tekkai. [Honestly, it’s not necessary to mention Shigan in this case just for the sake of “involving” it. As I’m sure you know, Shigan means Finger gun, and that’s not really what’s happening here.]


Name of the technique Feint Frog
Technique Level: 5
Technique Range: Melee, Dash 10m
Technique Cooldown: 6
Technique Description: Nathan Dashes towards his target using Soru appearing in front of them as though intending to attack head on, Then uses Soru and Shigan twice in rapid succession leaving two afterimages at his target's sides. The speed at which this is executed makes it appear that there are two of him attacking his opponent at the same time.


Name of the technique Flying Frog
Technique Level: 20
Technique Range: Gap closer, Air Melee [Include the maximum amount of gap that this technique can close. It cannot exceed the maximum range of the technique’s level, of course.]
Technique Cooldown: 6 posts
Technique Description: Nathan quickly dashes to his intended target or targets using soru and launches them into the air with a strong kick. Nathan then uses a combination of Geppo and Soru to execute a series of passing strikes in the air before driving them down with a strong kick.


Name of the technique Frog Lance
Technique Level: 40
Technique Range: 40m [I’m not sure if you realize this, but the maximum technique range is 10x the technique level. So, for this particular technique, you could have the maximum range up to 400m.]
Technique Cooldown: 6 [If you do increase the range, however, please do increase the cooldown to at least 8 posts.]
Technique Description: Nathan uses his leg strength to execute a finely pointed Rankyaku specialized for piercing before expanding to the usual cross shape, cutting as it expands. The lance is capable of piercing heavy armor and stone.

Heavy Attacks:

Name of the technique Frog Cannon
Technique Level:1
Technique Range: Dash 10m
Technique Cooldown: 10
Technique Description: Nathan uses Soru to launch himself towards his target. Nathan then kicks at his target's with the same leg power used to achieve Soru.


Name of the technique Two-Stage Frocket [“Frocket” LOL. Love it.]
Technique Level:10
Technique Range: Leap 20m at max
Technique Cooldown: 12 posts
Technique Description: Nathan Leaps at his target using Soru then Leaps again with Soru and Geppo to propell himself faster and cause him to twist, then uses Tekkai to harden his body with his fists held out in front of him.


Name of the technique Brilliant Piercing Frog
Technique Level:40
Technique Range: 40m
Technique Cooldown:14
Technique Description: Nathan hops and quickly kicks with both his legs creating a large frog- shaped arrowhead that can cut through heavy objects.

AOE Attacks:

Name of the technique Rankyaku: Ripple
Technique Level: Level 1
Technique Range: 10m at most
Technique Radius: 2.5M radius ( like 8 feet)
Technique Cooldown: 22 Posts
Technique Description: Nathan executes a series of Rankyaku at the ground the spread out in rings when they impact the ground like ripples in a pond.


Name of the technique Rain of Frogs
Technique Level: 20
Technique Range: 40m at most
Technique Radius: 10 m radius
Technique Cooldown: 22
Technique Description: Nathan jumps up in the air and performs a large series of rankyaku kicks that cover an area. The frog shaped rankyakus pierce and expand into multiple cutting ripple effects upon coming into contact with objects.

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Name : Nathan D. Greys
Epithet : Frog Doctor, Blue Leg Nathan
Age : 21
Height : 5'10"
Weight : 160lbs
Species : Human
Faction : Marines
Crew Position : Doctor
Haki Level : 5
Hitpoints (HP) : 257
Attack (ATK) : 285
Defense (DEF) : 245
Reflex (RX) : 390
Willpower (WP) : 315
Level : 50
Experience Points : 5000
Berries Berries : 50,000
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Kaeru Kaeru no Mi Empty Re: Kaeru Kaeru no Mi

on Tue Jan 24, 2017 11:28 pm
Could I get a new grading so I can easier see what I have and haven't done to fix the app. In your own time of course.

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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Height : 10'1"/ 307 cm
Weight : 1043 lbs / 473 kg
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Hitpoints (HP) : 700
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Shop Discount : -20%
Berries Berries : 25,000,000,000
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Kaeru Kaeru no Mi Empty Re: Kaeru Kaeru no Mi

on Wed Jan 25, 2017 9:40 am
@Greys wrote:Could I get a new grading so I can easier see what I have and haven't done to fix the app. In your own time of course.

That should be your responsibility, Greys. Does it really seem fair for you to ask me to re-read your app, creating no small amount of work for me, only to make things convenient for you?

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Name : Nathan D. Greys
Epithet : Frog Doctor, Blue Leg Nathan
Age : 21
Height : 5'10"
Weight : 160lbs
Species : Human
Faction : Marines
Crew Position : Doctor
Haki Level : 5
Hitpoints (HP) : 257
Attack (ATK) : 285
Defense (DEF) : 245
Reflex (RX) : 390
Willpower (WP) : 315
Level : 50
Experience Points : 5000
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Kaeru Kaeru no Mi Empty Re: Kaeru Kaeru no Mi

on Wed Jan 25, 2017 6:06 pm
Ah, sorry for putting that on you like that. I'll take care of it.

Edit: I have gone over the suggestions and the revision of my techniques app, I believe it is now ready for grading.
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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Height : 10'1"/ 307 cm
Weight : 1043 lbs / 473 kg
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Hitpoints (HP) : 700
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
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Kaeru Kaeru no Mi Empty Re: Kaeru Kaeru no Mi

on Thu Mar 09, 2017 8:22 am
[Just a few more comments before you're ready to flip your frog tongue at people. As always, they're all marked in orange.]
@Greys wrote:
Kaeru Kaeru no Mi (Frog-Frog Fruit), Model: Monkey Tree Frog

Devil Fruit: Kaeru Kaeru no Mi (Frog-Frog Fruit), Model: Monkey Tree Frog
Devil Fruit Type: Zoan

Devil Fruit Appearance: A light green mango with swirled bumps on the exterior
Devil Fruit Description: This Zoan Devil Fruit allows the user to partially and fully transform into a Monkey Tree Frog, allowing the user to take on properties of frogs. General frog attributes are gained such as increased leg strength/ jumping, wall climbing, Strong tongue, and super hearing are gained. Along with the Monkey Tree Frog's specific ability to create a pain-killing substance about 40 times stronger than morphine. User is also able to utilize the many medical properties found in the exterior mucus found on frog skin.  At higher levels of control user is able to change select parts of their body into their fruit's animal

Devil Fruit Passive Abilities:  Human Form= !  Hybrid Form= %  Full Form= ^

-360 degree vision: %^ - Frogs have slightly extruded eyes that allow them to see in a 360 degree area, however in Nathans case He only gets 180 degrees since he's blind in one eye.
- Wall Crawling: %^ - Frogs have a natural climbing ability due to microscopic hooks on their feet that allow them to adhere to surfaces at extreme angles
- Enhanced Jumping: %^ Frogs have incredible strength in their legs, many frogs can leap 20 times their length. Though the Monkey tree frog isn't as much of a jumper, Nathan gains the jumping power to jump 10 times his height. In Hybrid mode he can leap roughly 22 meters ( 72 feet)
- Enhanced Agility: %^ - Going along with the incredible leg strength of frogs, this grants Nathan increased agility (reflex) by +25 while in Hybrid and Full form. Though the full form may not have as much strength as the hybrid, it's smaller figure makes it easier to move around.  After use, exhaustion of the legs causes a -25 to agility after use.
- Strong Prehensile tongue: %^ - Most frogs have a foldable tongue that is about 1/3rd the length of their body. Nathan's tongue in Hybrid mode can extend about two and a half feet.
- Small form: ^ - In Nathan's full form he is a little over 2 inches in length. His small figure gives him greater advantage when it comes to stealth and getting inside small gaps. However due to the decrease in size and mass, his attack is cut down by 50 points.
- Body temperature manipulation: !%^ - Nathan can switch his body temperature type between his hotblooded human type, and his frogs cold blooded body temperature. He can utilize his human hot-blooded temperature to survive in conditions where normally a frog shouldn't
- Slick Body: %^ - Nathan's Hybrid and Full form are covered in a slick mucus layer making it harder to keep a hold on him. Whether physically keeping a hold on him, or keeping Nathan bound with bindings (other than sea-stone of course). Those without seastone or use of haki have a hard time gripping and attacking with a 50% less attack than the user's defense have a tough time keeping a hold of the user.
-Medical Mucus: %^ - The mucus found on frogs skin contains many anti-bacterial properties that have a multitude of medical uses. Specifically for the monkey tree frog, Nathan is able to generate a painkilling substance that is 40 times stronger than morphine. He generally uses this substance for medical purposes though.

- Hybrid transformation grants increased Reflex and Attack/strength by + 25. After changing back to normal or full form, his attack and reflex base in whichever form takes a -25 decrease for the duration of posts equal to the time spent in Hybrid form. [You must have a limited duration for hybrid transformation if you want stat buffs and debuffs arranged in this manner. Either that, or you can keep the +25 attack and +25 reflex while transformed, but also give yourself -50 defense to balance it. If you do that, you can maintain your hybrid transformation indefinitely.]

- Full transformation grants increased reflex and stealth capabilities because of smaller form. However attack is cut down vastly, because it is indeed a frog. However Nathan is able to maintain control over his body temperature, switching between warm and cold blooded physiology, being able to survive where frogs normally can't. Though he has a bit more of a disadvantage with his devil fruit in colder climates, being partially cold blooded. In full transformation Nathan's Reflex increases by 50, but his attack gets cut by 50% [Stay consistent with percentages or set values.]

Fighting Style: Frog's Rokushiki
Weapon Utilization: A pair of Brass knuckle gloves
Specialization: Mix of Melee and Range
Description: Nathan mixes his Devil Fruit's strengths with his years of training in the six superhuman martial arts style of Rokushiki. Nathan focuses on utilizing the bonus strength granted by his devil fruit to form his own Rokushiki techniques. Focusing on utilizing his hybrid form's powerful legs for both power and speed, Nathan has a greater specialization with the Soru and Rankyaku techniques. With the combination of Nathan's medical Knowledge, his physical speed, and the powers of both his devil fruit and Rokushiki; Nathan has made this fighting style into one that utilizes precision and speed to effectively deal with those who would pose threats.

Techniques


(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)

Light Attacks:

Iron Dart
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: Melee
Technique Cooldown:  2 Posts
Technique Description: Nathan utilizes the Shigan and Tekkai techniques to jab with a hardened spear-hand. The thin profile of the strike is good for hitting small target areas.  


Rokushiki: Scalpel Heel
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: 10m
Technique Cooldown: 3 Posts
Technique Description: Nathan utilizes this specialized rokushiki technique to create a small projectile of condensed air, it may not have the normal width of a rokushiki projectile, but it is very sharp and more for piercing than cutting.


Rankyaku: Rosy Arrow
Technique Level: 5
Technique Range: 12m
Technique Cooldown: 4 posts
Technique Description: Nathan uses his incredibly strong tongue to execute a Rankyaku that forms a pink shaded blade of compressed air, shaped like an arrowhead dealing piercing damage. [Again, while you mentioned that this attack does piercing damage, rankyaku itself is more of a slash attack. Same shigan recommendation applies here.]


Frog Volley
Technique Level: 20
Technique Range: 12 m
Technique Cooldown: 4
Technique Description: Nathan adopts a technique that he had observed fishmen using. Nathan quickly drops the temperature of his arm and then raises it back up causing condensation on his skin. Nathan then uses his strength and the power of the Shigan technique to launch the droplets at his intended targets. The droplets take on the shape of a frog heads, and impact with piercing force.


Hunting Frog Arrow
Technique Level: 40
Technique Range: 30m (roughly 98 feet)
Technique Cooldown:6 Posts
Technique Description: Similar the the Fishman karate's Water Shot. Nathan quickly changes the temperature in his arm to create condensation that gathers in his hand. Nathan then launches the gathered water at the intended target using the strength and force of shigan. The glob of water forms into a frog head shaped arrow. The arrow does piercing damage and has capacity to pierce through objects and materials.

Medium Attacks:

Frog Bullet
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: Melee Gap closer, 10m Leap
Technique Cooldown: 6
Technique Description: In this technique,Nathan utilizes Soru, Shigan, and Tekkai. Nathan propels himself forward with Soru, following the momentum through with a punch thrown at the speed reserved for Shigan, with his fist hardened by Tekkai.


Feint Frog
Technique Level: 5
Technique Range: Melee, Dash 10m
Technique Cooldown: 6
Technique Description: Nathan Dashes towards his target using Soru appearing in front of them as though intending to attack head on, Then uses Soru and Shigan twice in rapid succession leaving two afterimages at his target's sides. The speed at which this is executed makes it appear that there are two of him attacking his opponent at the same time.


Flying Frog
Technique Level: 20
Technique Range: Gap closer (50m), Air Melee
Technique Cooldown: 6 posts
Technique Description: Nathan quickly dashes to his intended target or targets using soru and launches them into the air with a strong kick. Nathan then uses a combination of Geppo and Soru to execute a series of passing strikes in the air before driving them down with a strong kick.


Frog Lance
Technique Level: 40
Technique Range: 400m
Technique Cooldown: 8
Technique Description: Nathan uses his leg strength to execute a finely pointed Rankyaku specialized for piercing before expanding to the usual cross shape, cutting as it expands. The lance is capable of piercing heavy armor and stone.

Heavy Attacks:

Frog Cannon
Technique Level:1
Technique Range: Dash 10m
Technique Cooldown: 10
Technique Description: Nathan uses Soru to launch himself towards his target. Nathan then kicks at his target's with the same leg power used to achieve Soru.


Two-Stage Frocket
Technique Level:10
Technique Range: Leap 20m at max
Technique Cooldown: 12 posts
Technique Description: Nathan Leaps at his target using Soru then Leaps again with Soru and Geppo to propell himself faster and cause him to twist, then uses Tekkai to harden his body with his fists held out in front of him.


Brilliant Piercing Frog
Technique Level:40
Technique Range: 40m
Technique Cooldown:14
Technique Description: Nathan hops and quickly kicks with both his legs creating a large frog- shaped arrowhead that can cut through heavy objects.

AOE Attacks:

Rankyaku: Ripple
Technique Level: Level 1
Technique Range: 10m at most
Technique Radius: 2.5M radius ( like 8 feet)
Technique Cooldown: 22 Posts
Technique Description: Nathan executes a series of Rankyaku at the ground the spread out in rings when they impact the ground like ripples in a pond.


Rain of Frogs
Technique Level: 20
Technique Range: 40m at most
Technique Radius: 10 m radius
Technique Cooldown: 22
Technique Description: Nathan jumps up in the air and performs a large series of rankyaku kicks that cover an area. The frog shaped rankyakus pierce and expand into multiple cutting ripple effects upon coming into contact with objects.

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Epithet : Frog Doctor, Blue Leg Nathan
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Height : 5'10"
Weight : 160lbs
Species : Human
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Crew Position : Doctor
Haki Level : 5
Hitpoints (HP) : 257
Attack (ATK) : 285
Defense (DEF) : 245
Reflex (RX) : 390
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Kaeru Kaeru no Mi Empty Re: Kaeru Kaeru no Mi

on Mon Mar 13, 2017 12:49 am
Alright, made the changes to the hybrid form buffs/nerfs and changed the Full-form buffs/nerfs to solid values. Hopefully this works out.

:Also if you'd allow me to change the name of the topic to once approved, Ill take off the "Finished?" part.
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World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Hitpoints (HP) : 700
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
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on Mon Mar 13, 2017 3:35 pm
[I'm sorry for making this process so long, but I seem to have confused you! Comments in orange, as always.]

@Greys wrote:
Kaeru Kaeru no Mi (Frog-Frog Fruit), Model: Monkey Tree Frog

Devil Fruit: Kaeru Kaeru no Mi (Frog-Frog Fruit), Model: Monkey Tree Frog
Devil Fruit Type: Zoan

Devil Fruit Appearance: A light green mango with swirled bumps on the exterior
Devil Fruit Description: This Zoan Devil Fruit allows the user to partially and fully transform into a Monkey Tree Frog, allowing the user to take on properties of frogs. General frog attributes are gained such as increased leg strength/ jumping, wall climbing, Strong tongue, and super hearing are gained. Along with the Monkey Tree Frog's specific ability to create a pain-killing substance about 40 times stronger than morphine. User is also able to utilize the many medical properties found in the exterior mucus found on frog skin.  At higher levels of control user is able to change select parts of their body into their fruit's animal

Devil Fruit Passive Abilities:  Human Form= !  Hybrid Form= %  Full Form= ^

-360 degree vision: %^ - Frogs have slightly extruded eyes that allow them to see in a 360 degree area, however in Nathans case He only gets 180 degrees since he's blind in one eye.
- Wall Crawling: %^ - Frogs have a natural climbing ability due to microscopic hooks on their feet that allow them to adhere to surfaces at extreme angles
- Enhanced Jumping: %^ Frogs have incredible strength in their legs, many frogs can leap 20 times their length. Though the Monkey tree frog isn't as much of a jumper, Nathan gains the jumping power to jump 10 times his height. In Hybrid mode he can leap roughly 22 meters ( 72 feet)
- Enhanced Agility: %^ - Going along with the incredible leg strength of frogs, this grants Nathan increased agility (reflex) by +25 while in Hybrid and Full form. Though the full form may not have as much strength as the hybrid, it's smaller figure makes it easier to move around.  After use, exhaustion of the legs causes a -25 to agility after use.
- Strong Prehensile tongue: %^ - Most frogs have a foldable tongue that is about 1/3rd the length of their body. Nathan's tongue in Hybrid mode can extend about two and a half feet.
- Small form: ^ - In Nathan's full form he is a little over 2 inches in length. His small figure gives him greater advantage when it comes to stealth and getting inside small gaps. However due to the decrease in size and mass, his attack is cut down by 50 points.
- Body temperature manipulation: !%^ - Nathan can switch his body temperature type between his hotblooded human type, and his frogs cold blooded body temperature. He can utilize his human hot-blooded temperature to survive in conditions where normally a frog shouldn't
- Slick Body: %^ - Nathan's Hybrid and Full form are covered in a slick mucus layer making it harder to keep a hold on him. Whether physically keeping a hold on him, or keeping Nathan bound with bindings (other than sea-stone of course). Those without seastone or use of haki have a hard time gripping and attacking with a 50% less attack than the user's defense have a tough time keeping a hold of the user.
-Medical Mucus: %^ - The mucus found on frogs skin contains many anti-bacterial properties that have a multitude of medical uses. Specifically for the monkey tree frog, Nathan is able to generate a painkilling substance that is 40 times stronger than morphine. He generally uses this substance for medical purposes though.

- Hybrid transformation grants increased Reflex and Attack/strength by + 25 and nerfs Defense by 50. After changing back to normal or full form, his attack and reflex base in whichever form takes a -25 decrease for the duration of posts equal to the time spent in Hybrid form. (Stat Changes in Hybrid: Attack 285>310, Reflex 390>415, Defense 245>220) [Your defense calculation has only subtracted 25 points from defense instead of 50. Also, if you are choosing to give yourself a defense debuff during your transformation, you don't need to give yourself attack and reflex debuffs AFTER the duration of the transformation. It was either one or the other, not both.]

- Full transformation grants increased reflex and stealth capabilities because of smaller form. However attack is cut down vastly, because it is indeed a frog. However Nathan is able to maintain control over his body temperature, switching between warm and cold blooded physiology, being able to survive where frogs normally can't. Though he has a bit more of a disadvantage with his devil fruit in colder climates, being partially cold blooded. In full transformation Nathan's Reflex increases by 50, but his attack gets cut by 100. (After stat changes, Reflex 390> 440, Attack 285> 185)

Fighting Style: Frog's Rokushiki
Weapon Utilization: A pair of Brass knuckle gloves
Specialization: Mix of Melee and Range
Description: Nathan mixes his Devil Fruit's strengths with his years of training in the six superhuman martial arts style of Rokushiki. Nathan focuses on utilizing the bonus strength granted by his devil fruit to form his own Rokushiki techniques. Focusing on utilizing his hybrid form's powerful legs for both power and speed, Nathan has a greater specialization with the Soru and Rankyaku techniques. With the combination of Nathan's medical Knowledge, his physical speed, and the powers of both his devil fruit and Rokushiki; Nathan has made this fighting style into one that utilizes precision and speed to effectively deal with those who would pose threats.

Techniques


(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)

Light Attacks:

Iron Dart
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: Melee
Technique Cooldown:  2 Posts
Technique Description: Nathan utilizes the Shigan and Tekkai techniques to jab with a hardened spear-hand. The thin profile of the strike is good for hitting small target areas.  


Rokushiki: Scalpel Heel
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: 10m
Technique Cooldown: 3 Posts
Technique Description: Nathan utilizes this specialized rokushiki technique to create a small projectile of condensed air, it may not have the normal width of a rokushiki projectile, but it is very sharp and more for piercing than cutting.


Rankyaku: Rosy Arrow
Technique Level: 5
Technique Range: 12m
Technique Cooldown: 4 posts
Technique Description: Nathan uses his incredibly strong tongue to execute a Rankyaku that forms a pink shaded blade of compressed air, shaped like an arrowhead dealing piercing damage.


Frog Volley
Technique Level: 20
Technique Range: 12 m
Technique Cooldown: 4
Technique Description: Nathan adopts a technique that he had observed fishmen using. Nathan quickly drops the temperature of his arm and then raises it back up causing condensation on his skin. Nathan then uses his strength and the power of the Shigan technique to launch the droplets at his intended targets. The droplets take on the shape of a frog heads, and impact with piercing force.


Hunting Frog Arrow
Technique Level: 40
Technique Range: 30m (roughly 98 feet)
Technique Cooldown:6 Posts
Technique Description: Similar the the Fishman karate's Water Shot. Nathan quickly changes the temperature in his arm to create condensation that gathers in his hand. Nathan then launches the gathered water at the intended target using the strength and force of shigan. The glob of water forms into a frog head shaped arrow. The arrow does piercing damage and has capacity to pierce through objects and materials.

Medium Attacks:

Frog Bullet
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: Melee Gap closer, 10m Leap
Technique Cooldown: 6
Technique Description: In this technique,Nathan utilizes Soru, Shigan, and Tekkai. Nathan propels himself forward with Soru, following the momentum through with a punch thrown at the speed reserved for Shigan, with his fist hardened by Tekkai.


Feint Frog
Technique Level: 5
Technique Range: Melee, Dash 10m
Technique Cooldown: 6
Technique Description: Nathan Dashes towards his target using Soru appearing in front of them as though intending to attack head on, Then uses Soru and Shigan twice in rapid succession leaving two afterimages at his target's sides. The speed at which this is executed makes it appear that there are two of him attacking his opponent at the same time.


Flying Frog
Technique Level: 20
Technique Range: Gap closer (50m), Air Melee
Technique Cooldown: 6 posts
Technique Description: Nathan quickly dashes to his intended target or targets using soru and launches them into the air with a strong kick. Nathan then uses a combination of Geppo and Soru to execute a series of passing strikes in the air before driving them down with a strong kick.


Frog Lance
Technique Level: 40
Technique Range: 400m
Technique Cooldown: 8
Technique Description: Nathan uses his leg strength to execute a finely pointed Rankyaku specialized for piercing before expanding to the usual cross shape, cutting as it expands. The lance is capable of piercing heavy armor and stone.

Heavy Attacks:

Frog Cannon
Technique Level:1
Technique Range: Dash 10m
Technique Cooldown: 10
Technique Description: Nathan uses Soru to launch himself towards his target. Nathan then kicks at his target's with the same leg power used to achieve Soru.


Two-Stage Frocket
Technique Level:10
Technique Range: Leap 20m at max
Technique Cooldown: 12 posts
Technique Description: Nathan Leaps at his target using Soru then Leaps again with Soru and Geppo to propell himself faster and cause him to twist, then uses Tekkai to harden his body with his fists held out in front of him.


Brilliant Piercing Frog
Technique Level:40
Technique Range: 40m
Technique Cooldown:14
Technique Description: Nathan hops and quickly kicks with both his legs creating a large frog- shaped arrowhead that can cut through heavy objects.

AOE Attacks:

Rankyaku: Ripple
Technique Level: Level 1
Technique Range: 10m at most
Technique Radius: 2.5M radius ( like 8 feet)
Technique Cooldown: 22 Posts
Technique Description: Nathan executes a series of Rankyaku at the ground the spread out in rings when they impact the ground like ripples in a pond.


Rain of Frogs
Technique Level: 20
Technique Range: 40m at most
Technique Radius: 10 m radius
Technique Cooldown: 22
Technique Description: Nathan jumps up in the air and performs a large series of rankyaku kicks that cover an area. The frog shaped rankyakus pierce and expand into multiple cutting ripple effects upon coming into contact with objects.

________________________________________________________


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Epithet : Frog Doctor, Blue Leg Nathan
Age : 21
Height : 5'10"
Weight : 160lbs
Species : Human
Faction : Marines
Crew Position : Doctor
Haki Level : 5
Hitpoints (HP) : 257
Attack (ATK) : 285
Defense (DEF) : 245
Reflex (RX) : 390
Willpower (WP) : 315
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on Tue Mar 14, 2017 12:34 am
Got it, also added a little descriptive to the hybrid portion.

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Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Height : 10'1"/ 307 cm
Weight : 1043 lbs / 473 kg
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Hitpoints (HP) : 700
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
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on Tue Mar 14, 2017 1:30 am
Have fun hopping around capturing criminals, Gero gero Greys!

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@Greys wrote:
Kaeru Kaeru no Mi (Frog-Frog Fruit), Model: Monkey Tree Frog

Devil Fruit: Kaeru Kaeru no Mi (Frog-Frog Fruit), Model: Monkey Tree Frog
Devil Fruit Type: Zoan

Devil Fruit Appearance: A light green mango with swirled bumps on the exterior
Devil Fruit Description: This Zoan Devil Fruit allows the user to partially and fully transform into a Monkey Tree Frog, allowing the user to take on properties of frogs. General frog attributes are gained such as increased leg strength/ jumping, wall climbing, Strong tongue, and super hearing are gained. Along with the Monkey Tree Frog's specific ability to create a pain-killing substance about 40 times stronger than morphine. User is also able to utilize the many medical properties found in the exterior mucus found on frog skin.  At higher levels of control user is able to change select parts of their body into their fruit's animal

Devil Fruit Passive Abilities:  Human Form= !  Hybrid Form= %  Full Form= ^

-360 degree vision: %^ - Frogs have slightly extruded eyes that allow them to see in a 360 degree area, however in Nathans case He only gets 180 degrees since he's blind in one eye.
- Wall Crawling: %^ - Frogs have a natural climbing ability due to microscopic hooks on their feet that allow them to adhere to surfaces at extreme angles
- Enhanced Jumping: %^ Frogs have incredible strength in their legs, many frogs can leap 20 times their length. Though the Monkey tree frog isn't as much of a jumper, Nathan gains the jumping power to jump 10 times his height. In Hybrid mode he can leap roughly 22 meters ( 72 feet)
- Enhanced Agility: %^ - Going along with the incredible leg strength of frogs, this grants Nathan increased agility (reflex) by +25 while in Hybrid and Full form. Though the full form may not have as much strength as the hybrid, it's smaller figure makes it easier to move around.  After use, exhaustion of the legs causes a -25 to agility after use.
- Strong Prehensile tongue: %^ - Most frogs have a foldable tongue that is about 1/3rd the length of their body. Nathan's tongue in Hybrid mode can extend about two and a half feet.
- Small form: ^ - In Nathan's full form he is a little over 2 inches in length. His small figure gives him greater advantage when it comes to stealth and getting inside small gaps. However due to the decrease in size and mass, his attack is cut down by 50 points.
- Body temperature manipulation: !%^ - Nathan can switch his body temperature type between his hotblooded human type, and his frogs cold blooded body temperature. He can utilize his human hot-blooded temperature to survive in conditions where normally a frog shouldn't
- Slick Body: %^ - Nathan's Hybrid and Full form are covered in a slick mucus layer making it harder to keep a hold on him. Whether physically keeping a hold on him, or keeping Nathan bound with bindings (other than sea-stone of course). Those without seastone or use of haki have a hard time gripping and attacking with a 50% less attack than the user's defense have a tough time keeping a hold of the user.
-Medical Mucus: %^ - The mucus found on frogs skin contains many anti-bacterial properties that have a multitude of medical uses. Specifically for the monkey tree frog, Nathan is able to generate a painkilling substance that is 40 times stronger than morphine. He generally uses this substance for medical purposes though.

- Hybrid transformation grants increased Reflex and Attack/strength by + 25 and nerfs Defense by 50. Physical size increases to about 8ft tall with wider shoulders- (as has been seen with most zoan hybrids). (Stat Changes in Hybrid: Attack 285>310, Reflex 390>415, Defense 245>195)

- Full transformation grants increased reflex and stealth capabilities because of smaller form. However attack is cut down vastly, because it is indeed a frog. However Nathan is able to maintain control over his body temperature, switching between warm and cold blooded physiology, being able to survive where frogs normally can't. Though he has a bit more of a disadvantage with his devil fruit in colder climates, being partially cold blooded. In full transformation Nathan's Reflex increases by 50, but his attack gets cut by 100. (After stat changes, Reflex 390> 440, Attack 285> 185)

Fighting Style: Frog's Rokushiki
Weapon Utilization: A pair of Brass knuckle gloves
Specialization: Mix of Melee and Range
Description: Nathan mixes his Devil Fruit's strengths with his years of training in the six superhuman martial arts style of Rokushiki. Nathan focuses on utilizing the bonus strength granted by his devil fruit to form his own Rokushiki techniques. Focusing on utilizing his hybrid form's powerful legs for both power and speed, Nathan has a greater specialization with the Soru and Rankyaku techniques. With the combination of Nathan's medical Knowledge, his physical speed, and the powers of both his devil fruit and Rokushiki; Nathan has made this fighting style into one that utilizes precision and speed to effectively deal with those who would pose threats.

Techniques


(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)

Light Attacks:

Iron Dart
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: Melee
Technique Cooldown:  2 Posts
Technique Description: Nathan utilizes the Shigan and Tekkai techniques to jab with a hardened spear-hand. The thin profile of the strike is good for hitting small target areas.  


Rokushiki: Scalpel Heel
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: 10m
Technique Cooldown: 3 Posts
Technique Description: Nathan utilizes this specialized rokushiki technique to create a small projectile of condensed air, it may not have the normal width of a rokushiki projectile, but it is very sharp and more for piercing than cutting.


Rankyaku: Rosy Arrow
Technique Level: 5
Technique Range: 12m
Technique Cooldown: 4 posts
Technique Description: Nathan uses his incredibly strong tongue to execute a Rankyaku that forms a pink shaded blade of compressed air, shaped like an arrowhead dealing piercing damage.


Frog Volley
Technique Level: 20
Technique Range: 12 m
Technique Cooldown: 4
Technique Description: Nathan adopts a technique that he had observed fishmen using. Nathan quickly drops the temperature of his arm and then raises it back up causing condensation on his skin. Nathan then uses his strength and the power of the Shigan technique to launch the droplets at his intended targets. The droplets take on the shape of a frog heads, and impact with piercing force.


Hunting Frog Arrow
Technique Level: 40
Technique Range: 30m (roughly 98 feet)
Technique Cooldown:6 Posts
Technique Description: Similar the the Fishman karate's Water Shot. Nathan quickly changes the temperature in his arm to create condensation that gathers in his hand. Nathan then launches the gathered water at the intended target using the strength and force of shigan. The glob of water forms into a frog head shaped arrow. The arrow does piercing damage and has capacity to pierce through objects and materials.

Medium Attacks:

Frog Bullet
Technique Level: 1
Technique Range: Melee Gap closer, 10m Leap
Technique Cooldown: 6
Technique Description: In this technique,Nathan utilizes Soru, Shigan, and Tekkai. Nathan propels himself forward with Soru, following the momentum through with a punch thrown at the speed reserved for Shigan, with his fist hardened by Tekkai.


Feint Frog
Technique Level: 5
Technique Range: Melee, Dash 10m
Technique Cooldown: 6
Technique Description: Nathan Dashes towards his target using Soru appearing in front of them as though intending to attack head on, Then uses Soru and Shigan twice in rapid succession leaving two afterimages at his target's sides. The speed at which this is executed makes it appear that there are two of him attacking his opponent at the same time.


Flying Frog
Technique Level: 20
Technique Range: Gap closer (50m), Air Melee
Technique Cooldown: 6 posts
Technique Description: Nathan quickly dashes to his intended target or targets using soru and launches them into the air with a strong kick. Nathan then uses a combination of Geppo and Soru to execute a series of passing strikes in the air before driving them down with a strong kick.


Frog Lance
Technique Level: 40
Technique Range: 400m
Technique Cooldown: 8
Technique Description: Nathan uses his leg strength to execute a finely pointed Rankyaku specialized for piercing before expanding to the usual cross shape, cutting as it expands. The lance is capable of piercing heavy armor and stone.

Heavy Attacks:

Frog Cannon
Technique Level:1
Technique Range: Dash 10m
Technique Cooldown: 10
Technique Description: Nathan uses Soru to launch himself towards his target. Nathan then kicks at his target's with the same leg power used to achieve Soru.


Two-Stage Frocket
Technique Level:10
Technique Range: Leap 20m at max
Technique Cooldown: 12 posts
Technique Description: Nathan Leaps at his target using Soru then Leaps again with Soru and Geppo to propell himself faster and cause him to twist, then uses Tekkai to harden his body with his fists held out in front of him.


Brilliant Piercing Frog
Technique Level:40
Technique Range: 40m
Technique Cooldown:14
Technique Description: Nathan hops and quickly kicks with both his legs creating a large frog- shaped arrowhead that can cut through heavy objects.

AOE Attacks:

Rankyaku: Ripple
Technique Level: Level 1
Technique Range: 10m at most
Technique Radius: 2.5M radius ( like 8 feet)
Technique Cooldown: 22 Posts
Technique Description: Nathan executes a series of Rankyaku at the ground the spread out in rings when they impact the ground like ripples in a pond.


Rain of Frogs
Technique Level: 20
Technique Range: 40m at most
Technique Radius: 10 m radius
Technique Cooldown: 22
Technique Description: Nathan jumps up in the air and performs a large series of rankyaku kicks that cover an area. The frog shaped rankyakus pierce and expand into multiple cutting ripple effects upon coming into contact with objects.

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Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Height : 10'1"/ 307 cm
Weight : 1043 lbs / 473 kg
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Hitpoints (HP) : 700
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
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on Thu Sep 07, 2017 4:55 pm
Since your fighting style is still running on the old system, you might have a huge handicap! So, I'm unlocking this thread so you can update it using the new template provided here .

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Height : 6'7" / 201 cm
Weight : 240 lbs / 109 kg
Species : Human
Faction : New Revolutionary Army
Crew : Bonbon X
Ship : Wonderland Hatch
Crew Position : First Mate
Devil Fruit : Mochi Mochi no Mi
Haki Level : 5
Hitpoints (HP) : 250
Attack (ATK) : 395
Defense (DEF) : 250
Reflex (RX) : 350
Willpower (WP) : 300
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on Sat Dec 16, 2017 10:39 pm
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@Greys wrote:

Kaeru Kaeru no Mi- Model Monkey Tree Frog


Devil Fruit: Kaero Kaeru no Mi/ Frog Frog Fruit : Model Monkey Tree Frog
Devil Fruit Type: Zoan

Devil Fruit Appearance: A light green mango with swirled bumps on the exterior
Devil Fruit Description: This Zoan Devil Fruit allows the user to partially and fully transform into a Monkey Tree Frog, allowing the user to take on properties of frogs. General frog attributes are gained such as increased leg strength/ jumping, wall climbing, and Extending/ elongated tongue. Along with the Monkey Tree Frog's specific ability to create a pain-killing substance about 40 times stronger than morphine. User is also able to utilize the many medical properties found in the exterior mucus found on frog skin.  At higher levels of control user is able to change select parts of their body into their fruit's animal

Fighting Style: Frog's Rokushiki
Weapon Utilization: Brass knuckle Gloves
Description: Nathan combines his training in Rokushiki with the unique froggy attributes of his devil fruit. Nathan executes techniques of rokushiki with both his natural strength and the unique strengths granted to him from his hybrid and frog forms. Utilizing the strong legs, Nathan has a greater specialization with the Soru and Rankyaku techniques. With the combination of Nathan's medical Knowledge, his physical speed, and the powers of both his devil fruit and Rokushiki; Nathan has made this fighting style into one that utilizes precision, strength, and speed to effectively deal with those who would pose threats.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
- Wall Crawling: - Frogs have a natural climbing ability due to microscopic hooks on their feet that allow them to adhere to surfaces at extreme angles
- Enhanced Jumping: Frogs have incredible strength in their legs, many frogs can leap 20 times their length. Though the Monkey tree frog isn't as much of a jumper, Nathan gains the jumping power to jump 10 times his height. In Hybrid mode he can leap roughly 22 meters ( 72 feet)
- Enhanced Agility: - Going along with the incredible leg strength of frogs, this grants Nathan increased agility (reflex) by 10% while in Hybrid and Full form. Though the full form may not have as much strength as the hybrid, it's smaller figure makes it easier to move around. While using enhanced agility, defense is decreased -10%.
- Strong extendable tongue: - Most frogs have a fold-able tongue that is about 1/3rd the length of their body. Nathan's tongue in Hybrid mode can extend about two and a half feet.
- Small form: - In Nathan's full frog form he is a little over 2 inches in length. His small figure gives him greater advantage when it comes to stealth and getting inside small gaps. However due to the decrease in size and mass, his attack is cut down. (covered in Full Form  info)
- Body temperature manipulation: - Nathan can switch his body temperature type between his hotblooded human type, and his frogs cold blooded body temperature. He can utilize his human hot-blooded temperature to survive in conditions where normally a frog shouldn't
- Slick Body: - Nathan's Hybrid and Full form are covered in a slick mucus layer making it harder to keep a hold on him. Whether physically keeping a hold on him, or keeping Nathan bound with bindings (other than sea-stone of course). Those without seastone or use of haki have a hard time grabbing and grappling. If the attacker’s attack stat is below 50% that of Nathan's defense stat, he is immune to the grabbing/grappling attack.
-Medical Mucus: - The mucus found on frogs skin contains many anti-bacterial properties that have a multitude of medical uses. Specifically for the monkey tree frog, Nathan is able to generate a painkilling substance that is 40 times stronger than morphine. He generally uses this substance for medical purposes though. Can use as a healing UT.

Hybrid Form: - Hybrid transformation grants increased reflex +10% and Attack +10%, while nerfing Defense by 20%. Physical size increases to about 8ft tall with wider shoulders- (as has been seen with most zoan hybrids).

Full Frog Form: - Full transformation grants increased reflex and stealth capabilities because of smaller form. However attack is cut down vastly, because it is indeed a frog. However Nathan is able to maintain control over his body temperature, switching between warm and cold blooded physiology, being able to survive where frogs normally can't. Though he has a bit more of a disadvantage with his devil fruit in colder climates, being partially cold blooded. In full transformation Nathan's Reflex increases by 10%, but his attack gets cut by -10%.


Techniques


(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)

Light Techniques:

Iron Dart
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Description:Nathan utilizes the Shigan and Tekkai techniques to jab with a hardened spear-hand. The thin profile of the strike is good for hitting small target areas.  

Rankyaku: Scalpel Heel
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Description: Nathan utilizes this specialized rokushiki technique to create a small projectile of condensed air. It is smaller in size than a regular Rankyaku for the sake of piercing rather than cutting.

Rankyaku: Rosy Arrow
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: 50m
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Description: Nathan uses his incredibly strong tongue to execute a Rankyaku that forms a pink shaded blade of compressed air, shaped like an arrowhead dealing piercing damage.


Frog Volley
Technique Level: 20
Maximum Base Range: 200m
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Description: Nathan adopts a technique that he had observed fishmen using. Nathan quickly drops the temperature of his arm and then raises it back up causing condensation on his skin. Nathan then uses his strength and the power of the Shigan technique to launch the droplets at his intended targets. The droplets take on the shape of a frog heads, and impact with piercing force.


Hunting Frog Arrow
Technique Level: 40
Maximum Base Range: 400m
Cooldown: 2 posts
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Description: Similar the the Fishman karate's Water Shot. Nathan quickly changes the temperature in his arm to create condensation that gathers in his hand. Nathan then launches the gathered water at the intended target using the strength and force of shigan. The glob of water forms into a frog head shaped arrow. The arrow does piercing damage and has capacity to pierce through objects and materials.

Medium Techniques:

Frog Bullet
Technique Level:1
Maximum Base Range: 10m gap closer
Cooldown: 5 posts
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Description: In this technique,Nathan utilizes Soru, Shigan, and Tekkai. Nathan shrinks himself down to his full frog form and propels himself forward with Soru, following the momentum through with a punch thrown at the speed reserved for Shigan, with his fist hardened by Tekkai.


Feint Frog
Technique Level: 5
Maximum Base Range: melee, Dash 50m
Cooldown: 5 posts
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Description: Nathan Dashes towards his target using Soru appearing in front of them as though intending to attack head on, Then uses Soru and Shigan twice in rapid succession leaving two afterimages at his target's sides. The speed at which this is executed makes it appear that there are two of him attacking his opponent at the same time.


Flying Frog
Technique Level: 20
Maximum Base Range:Gap closer 200m, Air melee (Maximum Base range is 10x the technique level in meters.)
Cooldown: 5 posts
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Description:  Nathan quickly dashes to his intended target or targets using soru and launches them into the air with a strong kick. Nathan then uses a combination of Geppo and Soru to execute a series of passing strikes in the air before driving them down with a strong kick.


Frog Lance
Technique Level: 40
Maximum Base Range: 400m
Cooldown: 5 posts
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Description: Nathan uses his leg strength to execute a finely pointed Rankyaku specialized for piercing before expanding to the usual cross shape, cutting as it expands. The lance is capable of piercing heavy armor and stone.

Heavy Techniques:

Frog Cannon
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: Dash 10m
Cooldown: 8 posts
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Description: Nathan uses Soru to launch himself towards his target. Nathan then kicks at his target's with the same leg power used to achieve Soru.


Two-Stage Frocket
Technique Level: 10
Maximum Base Range: 100m leap
Cooldown: 8 posts
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Description: Nathan Leaps at his target using Soru then Leaps again with Soru and Geppo to propel himself faster and cause him to twist, then uses Tekkai to harden his body with his fists held out in front of him.


Brilliant Piercing Frog
Technique Level: 40
Maximum Base Range: 400m
Cooldown: 8 posts
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Description: Nathan hops and quickly kicks with both his legs creating a large frog- shaped arrowhead that can cut through heavy objects.

AoE Techniques:

Rankyaku: Ripple
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Maximum Base Radius: 2.5 m radius (like 8 feet)
Cooldown: 15 posts
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Description: Nathan executes a series of Rankyaku at the ground the spread out in rings when they impact the ground like ripples in a pond.

Rain of Frogs
Technique Level: 20
Maximum Base Range: 200m
Maximum Base Radius: 25m radius
Cooldown: 15 posts
Duration: n/a
Buffs: n/a
Debuffs: n/a
Description: Nathan jumps up in the air and performs a large series of rankyaku kicks that cover an area. The frog shaped rankyakus pierce and expand into multiple cutting ripple effects upon coming into contact with objects.




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