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Santiago
Santiago
[tracker=/t2862-tracker-neo-santiago#19116]
Name : Albrecht Santiago
Epithet : The Unreliable
Age : 29
Height : 5'9"
Weight : 150lbs
Species/Tribe : Human
Faction : Bounty Hunter
Alliance : S̶i̶l̶v̶e̶r̶ S̶w̶o̶r̶d̶s̶
Crew : South Bravos News Company & Onyx Photos and Portraits
Crew Role : Senior Editor & Secondary Lead Photographer
Balance : [bel] 5,550,000
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 54

[Bio] Neo Santiago Empty [Bio] Neo Santiago

This post has in-line assessment comments.Fri Nov 01, 2024 7:46 pm

Albrecht "Neo" Santiago


[Bio] Neo Santiago UPraiAs

Basic Character Information


Forename: Albrecht
Surname: Santiago
Epithet: "The Unreliable" / "New Age Enigma "
Birthdate: April 1st, 1800 (29)
Gender: Male
Species/Tribe: Human
Faction: Bounty Hunter
Affiliation:The Silver Swords (Former), South Bravos News Company, Onyx Photos & Portraits
Position: First Mate (The Silver Swords), Senior Editor (SBNC). Secondary Lead Photographer (OPP)
Profession: Journalist, Writer & Photographer


Physical Appearance


Height: 5'9"
Weight: 150lbs

Hair Style: Messy unkempt hair
Hair Color: Jet black
Eye Color: Blue, though gold in some lighting
Scars: N/A
Gear: A few athletic tracksuits, a scarf made from an old flag, two swords (a shortsword & a katana)

Description: A bit more athletic than your typical working man, but not nearly as bulky and toned as your combat veteran. He is average in most of the physical sense. Nothing to write home about.


The Past


Main Traits: Foolish, Lazy, Crafty, easily bored
Likes: Money, Profit, Women & romance novels
Dislikes: Responsibility, replying back to messages, keeping in touch, doing work, thinking
Unique laugh: HUEHUE HEHE HUE

Hometown: Jolly Keys, South Blue

Personality: Foolhardy and stupid is how most of his friends refer to him. He's an act first think later type of guy. Wherever there is adventure, he wants to be. It doesn't matter what's important or what's needed, whatever sounds interesting in the moment he will find himself running towards. Truthfully, all he really wants is a great story to tell his friends, and if it happens to be truth, even if exaggerated it makes for a better tale. And if its something they enjoy, then surely it should do even better in the papers.

When it comes down to combat, he's reckless. He doesn't think about himself, or others, he thinks about whatever the quickest resolution is. If he can kill the enemy in a swift blow, then he'll do just that. If he can run away and make it out safely, he'll vanish. He'd rather be uninvolved if it happened his way. Its not to say that he's a coward, far from it. He will fight to the bitter end if he has to. He's just lazy, and whatever involves the least amount of work and gets him back to his bullshit sooner is the path he'll always take.

History:


Last edited by Santiago on Tue Nov 19, 2024 3:56 pm; edited 3 times in total

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Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3997

[Bio] Neo Santiago Empty Re: [Bio] Neo Santiago

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Nov 19, 2024 3:00 pm
[warn=""]Just a couple of small fixes and comments before I can approve this.

- You missed the Main Traits field under Personality.
- Remove the starting bonus link from the bio and instead post it in [discord]approval-requests[/discord] as a new request. Any request that requires action from me must be posted in that channel as a separate request (please do not group multiple requests in one message).
- Please edit your topic's title to remove [inlinecode]App: [/inlinecode] from it and replace it with a [inlinecode][Bio] [/inlinecode] tag. You missed the Topic Type field when originally creating your thread (where you would've selected the Bio topic type. For any future topics you create, please be sure to select the appropriate topic tag (see screenshot below).
Selecting a topic type.

[/warn]

Santiago wrote:

Albrecht "Neo" Santiago


[Bio] Neo Santiago UPraiAs

Basic Character Information


Forename: Albrecht
Surname: Santiago
Epithet: "The Unreliable" / "New Age Enigma "
Birthdate: April 1st, 1800 (29)
Gender: Male
Species/Tribe: Human
Faction: Bounty Hunter
Affiliation:The Silver Swords (Former), South Bravos News Company, Onyx Photos & Portraits
Position: First Mate (The Silver Swords), Senior Editor (SBNC). Secondary Lead Photographer (OPP)
Profession: Journalist, Writer & Photographer


Physical Appearance


Height: 5'9"
Weight: 150lbs

Hair Style: Messy unkempt hair
Hair Color: Jet black
Eye Color: Blue, though gold in some lighting
Scars: N/A
Gear: A few athletic tracksuits, a scarf made from an old flag, two swords (a shortsword & a katana)

Description: A bit more athletic than your typical working man, but not nearly as bulky and toned as your combat veteran. He is average in most of the physical sense. Nothing to write home about.


The Past


Main Traits:
Likes: Money, Profit, Women & romance novels
Dislikes: Responsibility, replying back to messages, keeping in touch, doing work, thinking
Unique laugh: HUEHUE HEHE HUE

Hometown: Jolly Keys, South Blue

Personality: Foolhardy and stupid is how most of his friends refer to him. He's an act first think later type of guy. Wherever there is adventure, he wants to be. It doesn't matter what's important or what's needed, whatever sounds interesting in the moment he will find himself running towards. Truthfully, all he really wants is a great story to tell his friends, and if it happens to be truth, even if exaggerated it makes for a better tale. And if its something they enjoy, then surely it should do even better in the papers.

When it comes down to combat, he's reckless. He doesn't think about himself, or others, he thinks about whatever the quickest resolution is. If he can kill the enemy in a swift blow, then he'll do just that. If he can run away and make it out safely, he'll vanish. He'd rather be uninvolved if it happened his way. Its not to say that he's a coward, far from it. He will fight to the bitter end if he has to. He's just lazy, and whatever involves the least amount of work and gets him back to his bullshit sooner is the path he'll always take.

History:


https://www.revivaldawn.com/t20p400-rolls-start-me-up#19088
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Santiago
Santiago
[tracker=/t2862-tracker-neo-santiago#19116]
Name : Albrecht Santiago
Epithet : The Unreliable
Age : 29
Height : 5'9"
Weight : 150lbs
Species/Tribe : Human
Faction : Bounty Hunter
Alliance : S̶i̶l̶v̶e̶r̶ S̶w̶o̶r̶d̶s̶
Crew : South Bravos News Company & Onyx Photos and Portraits
Crew Role : Senior Editor & Secondary Lead Photographer
Balance : [bel] 5,550,000
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 54

[Bio] Neo Santiago Empty Re: [Bio] Neo Santiago

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Nov 19, 2024 3:56 pm
Bump!

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Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3997

[Bio] Neo Santiago Empty Re: [Bio] Neo Santiago

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Nov 19, 2024 3:57 pm
[approve]Thanks for the fixes! Also, no bumps are necessary in the thread. That's what the [discord]approval-requests[/discord] is for.[/approve]
Santiago wrote:

Albrecht "Neo" Santiago


[Bio] Neo Santiago UPraiAs

Basic Character Information


Forename: Albrecht
Surname: Santiago
Epithet: "The Unreliable" / "New Age Enigma "
Birthdate: April 1st, 1800 (29)
Gender: Male
Species/Tribe: Human
Faction: Bounty Hunter
Affiliation:The Silver Swords (Former), South Bravos News Company, Onyx Photos & Portraits
Position: First Mate (The Silver Swords), Senior Editor (SBNC). Secondary Lead Photographer (OPP)
Profession: Journalist, Writer & Photographer


Physical Appearance


Height: 5'9"
Weight: 150lbs

Hair Style: Messy unkempt hair
Hair Color: Jet black
Eye Color: Blue, though gold in some lighting
Scars: N/A
Gear: A few athletic tracksuits, a scarf made from an old flag, two swords (a shortsword & a katana)

Description: A bit more athletic than your typical working man, but not nearly as bulky and toned as your combat veteran. He is average in most of the physical sense. Nothing to write home about.


The Past


Main Traits: Foolish, Lazy, Crafty, easily bored
Likes: Money, Profit, Women & romance novels
Dislikes: Responsibility, replying back to messages, keeping in touch, doing work, thinking
Unique laugh: HUEHUE HEHE HUE

Hometown: Jolly Keys, South Blue

Personality: Foolhardy and stupid is how most of his friends refer to him. He's an act first think later type of guy. Wherever there is adventure, he wants to be. It doesn't matter what's important or what's needed, whatever sounds interesting in the moment he will find himself running towards. Truthfully, all he really wants is a great story to tell his friends, and if it happens to be truth, even if exaggerated it makes for a better tale. And if its something they enjoy, then surely it should do even better in the papers.

When it comes down to combat, he's reckless. He doesn't think about himself, or others, he thinks about whatever the quickest resolution is. If he can kill the enemy in a swift blow, then he'll do just that. If he can run away and make it out safely, he'll vanish. He'd rather be uninvolved if it happened his way. Its not to say that he's a coward, far from it. He will fight to the bitter end if he has to. He's just lazy, and whatever involves the least amount of work and gets him back to his bullshit sooner is the path he'll always take.

History:
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