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Baltroy
Flying Darts Coolte12
Tracker

Name : Alice Baltroy Ronx
Epithet : Flying Dart
Age : 22
Height : 170 cm
Species : Human
Faction : New Revolutionary Army
World Position : Commander
Crew : Bonbon X
Ship : Wonderland Hatch
Crew Role : Captain
Haki Level : 5
Hitpoints (HP) : 265
Attack (ATK) : 290
Defense (DEF) : 300
Reflex (RX) : 355
Willpower (WP) : 330
Level : 72
Experience Points : 7225
Bounty : 300,000,000
Income Bonus : +0.10
Berries Berries : 594,800,000
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Flying Darts Empty Flying Darts

Sun Dec 18, 2016 2:25 am

Flying Darts


Fighting Style: Flying Darts
Weapon Utilization: Darts
Description: Alice B. Ronx develops an intricate system of hidden darts. These darts are hidden within the very weaves of his clothes, more specifically, his mantle. Due the the thinness of the darts, they become very camouflaged with the threads of his clothes. Only the most skilful of fingers are capable of drawing these darts and the secret of Flying Darts lies solely in speed, precision and steadfast concentration. Failing to excel in even one of these categories would mean utter failure in the art itself. Without speed, drawing the darts from their hidden crevasses would be tedious and impossible to utilise in battle. Without precision, not only will the darts miss their mark, but the user will find himself fumbling for darts and finally, concentration is essential largely because the darts are pointed on both ends. Should the user lose focus for even a split second, he will find himself pricking himself more times than he does his opponent. Needless to say, Flying Darts is not a technique just anyone can use and even fewer are capable of mastering.



Techniques




Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:


Disclaimer: Ronx is not a certified botanist, pharmacist or medical officer. Administer with extra caution and should you experience any adverse effects, contact your general practitioner immediately. Becker Ronx’s lawyers has thus warned readers that he cannot be held liable should you experience any adverse symptoms. Scratching the affected areas is not recommended.






Last edited by Baltroy on Wed Sep 04, 2019 10:35 pm; edited 15 times in total
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
Tracker

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror / Black Fist
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 10
[[haoasc]][[busoasc]][[kenbunasc]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 750
Attack (ATK) : 800
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 715
Willpower (WP) : 650
Level : 100
Prestige : 8
Experience Points : 18000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Berries Berries : 25,000,000,000
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Flying Darts Empty Re: Flying Darts

Sun Dec 18, 2016 1:23 pm
[Overall an extremely well-written fighting style! And you balanced it really well too~ There were some things that I noticed that could use a bit of tweaking though. These comments will be in orange.]

Baltroy wrote:

Flying Darts


Fighting Style: Flying Darts
Weapon Utilization: Darts
Specialization: Ranged
Description: Alice B. Ronx develops an intricate system of hidden darts. These darts are hidden within the very weaves of his clothes, more specifically, his mantle. Due the the thinness of the darts, they become very camouflaged with the threads of his clothes. Only the most skilful of fingers are capable of drawing these darts and the secret of Flying Darts lies solely in speed, precision and steadfast concentration. Failing to excel in even one of these categories would mean utter failure in the art itself. Without speed, drawing the darts from their hidden crevasses would be tedious and impossible to utilise in battle. Without precision, not only will the darts miss their mark, but the user will find himself fumbling for darts and finally, concentration is essential largely because the darts are pointed on both ends. Should the user lose focus for even a split second, he will find himself pricking himself more times than he does his opponent. Needless to say, Flying Darts is not a technique just anyone can use and even fewer are capable of mastering.


Techniques


Light Attacks:

Medium Attacks:

Heavy Attacks:

AOE Attacks:





Last edited by Gray on Wed Jul 24, 2019 12:23 am; edited 1 time in total
Baltroy
Flying Darts Coolte12
Tracker

Name : Alice Baltroy Ronx
Epithet : Flying Dart
Age : 22
Height : 170 cm
Species : Human
Faction : New Revolutionary Army
World Position : Commander
Crew : Bonbon X
Ship : Wonderland Hatch
Crew Role : Captain
Haki Level : 5
Hitpoints (HP) : 265
Attack (ATK) : 290
Defense (DEF) : 300
Reflex (RX) : 355
Willpower (WP) : 330
Level : 72
Experience Points : 7225
Bounty : 300,000,000
Income Bonus : +0.10
Berries Berries : 594,800,000
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Posts : 235
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Flying Darts Empty Re: Flying Darts

Sun Dec 18, 2016 7:05 pm
Bump~ I have a question on Iaculum ex Vigore too >_>

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Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
Tracker

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror / Black Fist
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 10
[[haoasc]][[busoasc]][[kenbunasc]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 750
Attack (ATK) : 800
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 715
Willpower (WP) : 650
Level : 100
Prestige : 8
Experience Points : 18000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Berries Berries : 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
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Flying Darts Empty Re: Flying Darts

Sun Dec 18, 2016 7:47 pm
You are now officially ready to start your adventure!
Approved!
Baltroy wrote:

Flying Darts


Fighting Style: Flying Darts
Weapon Utilization: Darts
Specialization: Ranged
Description: Alice B. Ronx develops an intricate system of hidden darts. These darts are hidden within the very weaves of his clothes, more specifically, his mantle. Due the the thinness of the darts, they become very camouflaged with the threads of his clothes. Only the most skilful of fingers are capable of drawing these darts and the secret of Flying Darts lies solely in speed, precision and steadfast concentration. Failing to excel in even one of these categories would mean utter failure in the art itself. Without speed, drawing the darts from their hidden crevasses would be tedious and impossible to utilise in battle. Without precision, not only will the darts miss their mark, but the user will find himself fumbling for darts and finally, concentration is essential largely because the darts are pointed on both ends. Should the user lose focus for even a split second, he will find himself pricking himself more times than he does his opponent. Needless to say, Flying Darts is not a technique just anyone can use and even fewer are capable of mastering.


Techniques


Light Attacks:

Medium Attacks:

Heavy Attacks:

AOE Attacks:





Last edited by Gray on Wed Jul 24, 2019 12:23 am; edited 1 time in total
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
Tracker

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror / Black Fist
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 10
[[haoasc]][[busoasc]][[kenbunasc]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 750
Attack (ATK) : 800
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 715
Willpower (WP) : 650
Level : 100
Prestige : 8
Experience Points : 18000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Berries Berries : 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
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Flying Darts Empty Re: Flying Darts

Thu Sep 07, 2017 4:48 pm
Since your fighting style is still running on the old system, you might have a huge handicap! So, I'm unlocking this thread so you can update it using the new template provided here.
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
Tracker

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror / Black Fist
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 10
[[haoasc]][[busoasc]][[kenbunasc]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 750
Attack (ATK) : 800
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 715
Willpower (WP) : 650
Level : 100
Prestige : 8
Experience Points : 18000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Berries Berries : 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[atkt6_sp]][[deft6]][[rxt6]][[wpt6]]
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Flying Darts Empty Re: Flying Darts

Mon Sep 11, 2017 8:11 am
Approved!
Baltroy wrote:

Flying Darts


Fighting Style: Flying Darts
Weapon Utilization: Darts
Specialization: Ranged
Description: Alice B. Ronx develops an intricate system of hidden darts. These darts are hidden within the very weaves of his clothes, more specifically, his mantle. Due the the thinness of the darts, they become very camouflaged with the threads of his clothes. Only the most skilful of fingers are capable of drawing these darts and the secret of Flying Darts lies solely in speed, precision and steadfast concentration. Failing to excel in even one of these categories would mean utter failure in the art itself. Without speed, drawing the darts from their hidden crevasses would be tedious and impossible to utilise in battle. Without precision, not only will the darts miss their mark, but the user will find himself fumbling for darts and finally, concentration is essential largely because the darts are pointed on both ends. Should the user lose focus for even a split second, he will find himself pricking himself more times than he does his opponent. Needless to say, Flying Darts is not a technique just anyone can use and even fewer are capable of mastering.


Techniques


Light Attacks:

Medium Attacks:

Heavy Attacks:

AOE Attacks:



Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
Tracker

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror / Black Fist
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 10
[[haoasc]][[busoasc]][[kenbunasc]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 750
Attack (ATK) : 800
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 715
Willpower (WP) : 650
Level : 100
Prestige : 8
Experience Points : 18000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Berries Berries : 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[atkt6_sp]][[deft6]][[rxt6]][[wpt6]]
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Flying Darts Empty Re: Flying Darts

Wed Jul 31, 2019 8:20 pm
You have one too many LTs, please delete (could probably delete the one you called "Name of the Technique". >_>

Also, for all Hybrid techniques, please specify if it is a DoT Hybrid or a Flat Hybrid. Thank you!
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
Tracker

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror / Black Fist
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 10
[[haoasc]][[busoasc]][[kenbunasc]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 750
Attack (ATK) : 800
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 715
Willpower (WP) : 650
Level : 100
Prestige : 8
Experience Points : 18000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Berries Berries : 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[atkt6_sp]][[deft6]][[rxt6]][[wpt6]]
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Flying Darts Empty Re: Flying Darts

Wed Jul 31, 2019 8:57 pm
The Flying Dart of Bonbon X is back in business! If only his first mate wasn't so lazy too.

Baltroy wrote:

Flying Darts


Fighting Style: Flying Darts
Weapon Utilization: Darts
Description: Alice B. Ronx develops an intricate system of hidden darts. These darts are hidden within the very weaves of his clothes, more specifically, his mantle. Due the the thinness of the darts, they become very camouflaged with the threads of his clothes. Only the most skilful of fingers are capable of drawing these darts and the secret of Flying Darts lies solely in speed, precision and steadfast concentration. Failing to excel in even one of these categories would mean utter failure in the art itself. Without speed, drawing the darts from their hidden crevasses would be tedious and impossible to utilise in battle. Without precision, not only will the darts miss their mark, but the user will find himself fumbling for darts and finally, concentration is essential largely because the darts are pointed on both ends. Should the user lose focus for even a split second, he will find himself pricking himself more times than he does his opponent. Needless to say, Flying Darts is not a technique just anyone can use and even fewer are capable of mastering.



Techniques




Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:


Disclaimer: Ronx is not a certified botanist, pharmacist or medical officer. Administer with extra caution and should you experience any adverse effects, contact your general practitioner immediately. Becker Ronx’s lawyers has thus warned readers that he cannot be held liable should you experience any adverse symptoms. Scratching the affected areas is not recommended.




Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
Tracker

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror / Black Fist
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 10
[[haoasc]][[busoasc]][[kenbunasc]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 750
Attack (ATK) : 800
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 715
Willpower (WP) : 650
Level : 100
Prestige : 8
Experience Points : 18000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Berries Berries : 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[atkt6_sp]][[deft6]][[rxt6]][[wpt6]]
[[1needlelog]][[3needlelog]]
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Flying Darts Empty Re: Flying Darts

Mon Feb 01, 2021 11:38 am
Unlocked for cooldown edits.
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