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This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Dec 20, 2016 6:38 pm


Roland Gates' Equipment



Character Name: Roland Gates
Number of Equipment Pieces: 2
Highest tiered equipment: Tier 3
Total Equipment Stat Points: 30


Equipment Name: Sui Generis
Equipment Type: Sword
Equipment Tier: Tier 3
Equipment Stats: +10 Attack +5 Reflex

Equipment Description: A little something Roland picked up on a whim in the midst of battle, only to learn just recently how valuable a sword he'd gained. A named sword of considerable quality. Light yet strong, it's easy to wield but hard to master. It's simple appearance betrays its quality, some would even say the simple design makes it all the more elegant. It gained it's name due to how it once defied reason and stood strong where blades of the exact same making would shatter, putting it in a class for itself amongst its kin.

The blade remains a mystery to this day seeing as it is by all accounts, just an ordinary sword. There is no logical explanation as to how this blade manages the things it does. The last person to wield it attempted to solve the mystery of the blade only to realise it could also set itself on fire as if by magic, needless to say the mystery just thickened following this discovery.

Due to it's generic appearance and no discernible qualities to tell it apart from the many blades like it, it's hard to even identify unless a swordsman of considerable skill were to wield it.
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Equipment Name: Quality Glasses
Equipment Type: Glasses
Equipment Tier: Tier 3
Equipment Stats: +15 Willpower

Equipment Description: A pair of glasses fit for royalty, as they should be considering that's why they were made. While Roland's visual impairment is minor that didn't stop his former mistress from getting him the best glasses money could buy. With the optician in charge being fully aware that they were risking their very lives there was no room for failure. The results were these spectacles of superb quality. In the end might say they're just glasses, just way better than every other pair of glasses. Roland for one carries them as yet another reminder of what kindness he'd been presented with.

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The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

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Roland Gates' Equipment Empty Re: Roland Gates' Equipment

This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Dec 21, 2016 8:18 pm
Almost ready to go, Roland. Just two little fixes. For Spectacle Rage, I'm assuming the duration is the rest of the thread?

And for "Set Ablaze", let's increase the cooldown to 12 posts. And add the durations of both techniques next to the cooldowns. For example, "Technique Cooldown: 12 Posts | 4 post duration".
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Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3843

Roland Gates' Equipment Empty Re: Roland Gates' Equipment

This post has in-line assessment comments.Thu Dec 22, 2016 4:33 pm
Just a fun grammar thing: When you're adding 's to a name to show possession, and the name ends with an s, you would simply add an apostrophe without the s behind it. For example, in the case of "Roland Gates's Equipment", it would actually be written as "Roland Gates' Equipment". Anyways~ I've fixed it in your post here, but just for future reference.

As for the post itself, you're making solid progress on the character. Good work!

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Roland Gates wrote:


Roland Gates's Equipment



Character Name: Roland Gates
Number of Equipment Pieces: 2
Highest tiered equipment: Tier 3
Total Equipment Stat Points: 30


Equipment Name: Sui Generis
Equipment Type: Sword
Equipment Tier: Tier 3
Equipment Stats: +10 Attack +5 Reflex

Equipment Description: A little something Roland picked up on a whim in the midst of battle, only to learn just recently how valuable a sword he'd gained. A named sword of considerable quality. Light yet strong, it's easy to wield but hard to master. It's simple appearance betrays its quality, some would even say the simple design makes it all the more elegant. It gained it's name due to how it once defied reason and stood strong where blades of the exact same making would shatter, putting it in a class for itself amongst its kin.

The blade remains a mystery to this day seeing as it is by all accounts, just an ordinary sword. There is no logical explanation as to how this blade manages the things it does. The last person to wield it attempted to solve the mystery of the blade only to realise it could also set itself on fire as if by magic, needless to say the mystery just thickened following this discovery.

Due to it's generic appearance and no discernible qualities to tell it apart from the many blades like it, it's hard to even identify unless a swordsman of considerable skill were to wield it.
Image:


Equipment Name: Quality Glasses
Equipment Type: Glasses
Equipment Tier: Tier 3
Equipment Stats: +15 Willpower

Equipment Description: A pair of glasses fit for royalty, as they should be considering that's why they were made. While Roland's visual impairment is minor that didn't stop his former mistress from getting him the best glasses money could buy. With the optician in charge being fully aware that they were risking their very lives there was no room for failure. The results were these spectacles of superb quality. In the end might say they're just glasses, just way better than every other pair of glasses. Roland for one carries them as yet another reminder of what kindness he'd been presented with.

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