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Anton La'croix

Anton La'croix

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Name : Anton La'croix
Epithet : Screaming Mantis
Age : 23
Race : Human
Faction : Marine
Crew : New Tarot Knight Circle
Ship : Arcanum Arcanorum
Crew Position : Merchant
Devil Fruit : Bug-Bug Fruit, Model: Grasshopper
Haki Level : 2
Attack (ATK) : 205
Defense (DEF) : 205
Reflex (RX) : 215
Willpower (WP) : 190
Level : 29
Experience Points : 2902
Berries : 47,000,000
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Posts : 179

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PostSubject: Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper   Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper EmptyThu Mar 30, 2017 2:00 pm


Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper


Devil Fruit: Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper
Devil Fruit Type: Zoan

Devil Fruit Appearance: The fruit is about the size of an apple, a leafy green colour, and shaped almost to resemble a goard. As per regular Devil Fruits, its covered in spirals, and tastes absolutely awful.
Devil Fruit Description: This zoan type devil fruit allows its user to transform into a grasshopper, as well as transform into a hybrid form. This also grants the user the abilities tied to that of a grasshopper, including absurd jumping ability, multiple limbs, a chitinous exoskeleton and the ability to generate sonic base attacks.

Devil Fruit Passive Abilities:
Jumping Power: Grasshoppers are renowned for their jumping ability, and this one is no exception. In his regular form, Anton's jumping ability is increased to allow him to jump up to seven times his own height. In his hybrid form though, boosted by the insectoid wings he has on his back, he's capable of leaping up to thirty five times his regular height. Despite him possessing wings, Anton cannot fly, only jump really high.

Exoskeleton: Grasshoppers, like all insects, have a chitinous exoskeleton. When in hybrid or full form, Anton's skin hardens to a point like metal. While in this state, his Defense is increased by 5%. However, this outer armour does hamper Anton's movements somewhat, resulting in a 5% decrease in Reflex.

Multi-armed: Grasshoppers have six limbs, the powerful back legs, and four front limbs. In Anton's hybrid form, this translates into him possessing four arms. These don't apply any bonuses, outside of allowing him to wield up to four weapons simultaneously.

Sonic Generation: The grasshopper's famous ability to generate sound through their hind legs. In this case, it's able to be weaponized to allow Anton to generate sonic abilities with his hind legs. This of course requires him to be able to use his legs freely to do so.

Fighting Style: Insect Knight
Weapon Utilization: Devil Fruit, Broad Sword
Specialization: Melee to Medium Range
Description: Using a combination of swordsmanship and Anton's Devil Fruit abilities, the Insect Knight fighting style utitlizes powerful sword strokes, powerful kicks, and the mobility granted by the devil fruit's jumping power. Rather straightforward, without relying on trickery or dirty tactics.


Techniques



Light Attacks:
 

Medium Attacks:
 

Heavy Attacks:
 

AOE Attacks:
 



Last edited by Anton La'croix on Thu Aug 01, 2019 4:45 pm; edited 17 times in total
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Gray

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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 25,000,000,000
[baneoftheweak][childofdestiny][windcaller][punchoutguru]
[endgameboss]
Posts : 1598

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PostSubject: Re: Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper   Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper EmptyFri Mar 31, 2017 3:32 pm

Excellently balanced! Only thing I noticed was in the light technique, Sonic Sword, where you should balance out the 10% attack buff with an equivalent debuff. Maybe a 10% reflex debuff to account for the hard-to-control vibrating sword?

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Anton La'croix

Anton La'croix

Tracker

Name : Anton La'croix
Epithet : Screaming Mantis
Age : 23
Race : Human
Faction : Marine
Crew : New Tarot Knight Circle
Ship : Arcanum Arcanorum
Crew Position : Merchant
Devil Fruit : Bug-Bug Fruit, Model: Grasshopper
Haki Level : 2
Attack (ATK) : 205
Defense (DEF) : 205
Reflex (RX) : 215
Willpower (WP) : 190
Level : 29
Experience Points : 2902
Berries : 47,000,000
[hardboiled]
Posts : 179

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PostSubject: Re: Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper   Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper EmptyFri Mar 31, 2017 5:39 pm

Thank you for the compliment. Edits have been made.
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Gray

Gray

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Tracker

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 25,000,000,000
[baneoftheweak][childofdestiny][windcaller][punchoutguru]
[endgameboss]
Posts : 1598

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PostSubject: Re: Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper   Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper EmptyFri Mar 31, 2017 8:25 pm

Approved.

@Anton La'croix wrote:

Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper


Devil Fruit: Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper
Devil Fruit Type: Zoan

Devil Fruit Appearance: The fruit is about the size of an apple, a leafy green colour, and shaped almost to resemble a goard. As per regular Devil Fruits, its covered in spirals, and tastes absolutely awful.
Devil Fruit Description: This zoan type devil fruit allows its user to transform into a grasshopper, as well as transform into a hybrid form. This also grants the user the abilities tied to that of a grasshopper, including absurd jumping ability, multiple limbs, a chitinous exoskeleton and the ability to generate sonic base attacks.

Devil Fruit Passive Abilities:
Jumping Power: Grasshoppers are renowned for their jumping ability, and this one is no exception. In his regular form, Anton's jumping ability is increased to allow him to jump up to seven times his own height. In his hybrid form though, boosted by the insectoid wings he has on his back, he's capable of leaping up to thirty five times his regular height. Despite him possessing wings, Anton cannot fly, only jump really high.

Exoskeleton: Grasshoppers, like all insects, have a chitinous exoskeleton. When in hybrid or full form, Anton's skin hardens to a point like metal. While in this state, his Defense is increased by 5%. However, this outer armour does hamper Anton's movements somewhat, resulting in a 5% decrease in Reflex.

Multi-armed: Grasshoppers have six limbs, the powerful back legs, and four front limbs. In Anton's hybrid form, this translates into him possessing four arms. These don't apply any bonuses, outside of allowing him to wield up to four weapons simultaneously.

Sonic Generation: The grasshopper's famous ability to generate sound through their hind legs. In this case, it's able to be weaponized to allow Anton to generate sonic abilities with his hind legs. This of course requires him to be able to use his legs freely to do so.

Fighting Style: Insect Knight
Weapon Utilization: Devil Fruit, Broad Sword
Specialization: Melee to Medium Range
Description: Using a combination of swordsmanship and Anton's Devil Fruit abilities, the Insect Knight fighting style utitlizes powerful sword strokes, powerful kicks, and the mobility granted by the devil fruit's jumping power. Rather straightforward, without relying on trickery or dirty tactics.


Techniques



Light Attacks:
 

Medium Attacks:
 

Heavy Attacks:
 

AOE Attacks:
 


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Acacia

Acacia

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Tracker

Name : Grimm Aldous Acacia
Epithet : Kurotane (Black Seed)
Age : 27
Race : Human
Faction : New Revolutionary Army
Crew : Bonbon X
Ship : Wonderland Hatch
Crew Position : First Mate
Devil Fruit : Mochi Mochi no Mi
Haki Level : 5
Attack (ATK) : 350
Defense (DEF) : 250
Reflex (RX) : 335
Willpower (WP) : 300
Level : 50
Experience Points : 5000
Bounty : 160,000,000
Berries : 50,000
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Posts : 72

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PostSubject: Re: Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper   Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper EmptyWed Jul 31, 2019 7:20 pm

Hi Anton. You need to use the proper names for the Technique Types. Also, for the techniques that have buffs and debuffs, please list them separately as shown in the template. Thank you.

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Gray

Gray

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Tracker

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 25,000,000,000
[baneoftheweak][childofdestiny][windcaller][punchoutguru]
[endgameboss]
Posts : 1598

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PostSubject: Re: Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper   Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper EmptyThu Aug 01, 2019 3:20 pm

You're missing a Level 20 AoE.

Also, for your Sonic Sword technique, you don't need to balance out your stats anymore with Stat Morphs since they don't deal damage. You can simply give yourself a +25% ATK buff without debuffing your RX.

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Gray

Gray

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Tracker

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 25,000,000,000
[baneoftheweak][childofdestiny][windcaller][punchoutguru]
[endgameboss]
Posts : 1598

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PostSubject: Re: Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper   Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper EmptyThu Aug 01, 2019 4:34 pm

Sorry for not noticing this sooner, but for any Stat Morphs or Hybrids, if you have a duration, you need to increase your cooldown by that many posts.

Currently, your Sonic Sword and your B Flat AoE need to have their cooldowns increased. And, for the B Flat AoE, you haven't listed a duration.

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Gray

Gray

Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper Cool-t10
Tracker

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 25,000,000,000
[baneoftheweak][childofdestiny][windcaller][punchoutguru]
[endgameboss]
Posts : 1598

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PostSubject: Re: Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper   Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper EmptyThu Aug 01, 2019 4:55 pm

Approved! Thanks for your patience.
@Anton La'croix wrote:

Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper


Devil Fruit: Mushi Mushi no Mi: Model Grasshopper
Devil Fruit Type: Zoan

Devil Fruit Appearance: The fruit is about the size of an apple, a leafy green colour, and shaped almost to resemble a goard. As per regular Devil Fruits, its covered in spirals, and tastes absolutely awful.
Devil Fruit Description: This zoan type devil fruit allows its user to transform into a grasshopper, as well as transform into a hybrid form. This also grants the user the abilities tied to that of a grasshopper, including absurd jumping ability, multiple limbs, a chitinous exoskeleton and the ability to generate sonic base attacks.

Devil Fruit Passive Abilities:
Jumping Power: Grasshoppers are renowned for their jumping ability, and this one is no exception. In his regular form, Anton's jumping ability is increased to allow him to jump up to seven times his own height. In his hybrid form though, boosted by the insectoid wings he has on his back, he's capable of leaping up to thirty five times his regular height. Despite him possessing wings, Anton cannot fly, only jump really high.

Exoskeleton: Grasshoppers, like all insects, have a chitinous exoskeleton. When in hybrid or full form, Anton's skin hardens to a point like metal. While in this state, his Defense is increased by 5%. However, this outer armour does hamper Anton's movements somewhat, resulting in a 5% decrease in Reflex.

Multi-armed: Grasshoppers have six limbs, the powerful back legs, and four front limbs. In Anton's hybrid form, this translates into him possessing four arms. These don't apply any bonuses, outside of allowing him to wield up to four weapons simultaneously.

Sonic Generation: The grasshopper's famous ability to generate sound through their hind legs. In this case, it's able to be weaponized to allow Anton to generate sonic abilities with his hind legs. This of course requires him to be able to use his legs freely to do so.

Fighting Style: Insect Knight
Weapon Utilization: Devil Fruit, Broad Sword
Specialization: Melee to Medium Range
Description: Using a combination of swordsmanship and Anton's Devil Fruit abilities, the Insect Knight fighting style utitlizes powerful sword strokes, powerful kicks, and the mobility granted by the devil fruit's jumping power. Rather straightforward, without relying on trickery or dirty tactics.


Techniques



Light Attacks:
 

Medium Attacks:
 

Heavy Attacks:
 

AOE Attacks:
 


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