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Sun Apr 09, 2017 3:48 pm
Character Name:Argent
Level Claim: 25
World Position Claim: (If you claimed a world position in the pioneer thread, name it here.)
Starting Roll Claim:
Accessories Claim: (If you claimed any accessories in the pioneer thread, name it here.)


Character Bio: Ancestry.com
Character Stats: Digits
Character Fighting Style:Skillz
Character Equipment:http://www.revivaldawn-oprp.com/t572-argent-s-stuff#2310


Last edited by Argent on Wed Apr 19, 2017 8:07 pm; edited 2 times in total
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror / Black Fist
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" / 310 cm
Weight : 1043 lbs / 473 kg
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 10
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Hitpoints (HP) : 750
Attack (ATK) : 800
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 715
Willpower (WP) : 650
Level : 100
Prestige : 8
Experience Points : 18000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Berries Berries : 25,000,000,000
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Sun Apr 09, 2017 4:17 pm
Argent wrote:Character Name:Argent
Level Claim: 25
World Position Claim: (If you claimed a world position in the pioneer thread, name it here.)
Starting Roll Claim:Logia
Accessories Claim: (If you claimed any accessories in the pioneer thread, name it here.)


Character Bio: Ancestry.com
Character Stats: Digits
Character Fighting Style:Skillz
Character Equipment:

Your second step is unacceptable in its current state. Your techniques are incomplete and so is your equipment. And since your equipment is missing, same goes for your stats. Also, you didn't have a starting roll claim in the pioneers page so you can remove that bit.


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Sun Apr 09, 2017 6:35 pm
I thought starting role was what I claimed from my role.

(If you have completed your character's equipment page and it is ready for approval, or has already been approved, link it here.)

It is ready for approval. I am done making the techniques I want. I have the stats I want. If there is a problem with the apps then I wouldn't know that since there has been no response to the apps.
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
Tracker

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror / Black Fist
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" / 310 cm
Weight : 1043 lbs / 473 kg
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 10
[[haoasc]][[busoasc]][[kenbunasc]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 750
Attack (ATK) : 800
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 715
Willpower (WP) : 650
Level : 100
Prestige : 8
Experience Points : 18000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Berries Berries : 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[atkt6_sp]][[deft6]][[rxt6]][[wpt6]]
[[1needlelog]][[3needlelog]]
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Sun Apr 09, 2017 8:27 pm
Argent wrote:I thought starting role was what I claimed from my role.

(If you have completed your character's equipment page and it is ready for approval, or has already been approved, link it here.)

It is ready for approval. I am done making the techniques I want. I have the stats I want. If there is a problem with the apps then I wouldn't know that since there has been no response to the apps.

Completed apps include every technique filled out and same goes for equipment. If you're going to quote stuff to me then also quote this bit: "However, any cheap means to get around this (for example, filling out only a shell of an application for the sake of meeting the deadline, and then waiting for the grader to ask you to actually complete the application) will not be tolerated."

You are no exception. You must post here again once you've updated this stuff for your second step to qualify. Do NOT half-ass this, especially if you want to keep your claim.
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