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Argent
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Name : Neville Basil
Epithet : Argent
Age : 0
Height : 5'10
Weight : ???
Species : Human
Faction : Pirates
Devil Fruit : Ani Ani no Mi
Haki Level : 1
Attack (ATK) : 0
Defense (DEF) : 0
Reflex (RX) : 0
Willpower (WP) : 0
Level : 10
Experience Points : 1000
Berries Berries : 50,000
Posts : 34
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on Sun Apr 09, 2017 3:48 pm
Character Name:Argent
Level Claim: 25
World Position Claim: (If you claimed a world position in the pioneer thread, name it here.)
Starting Roll Claim:
Accessories Claim: (If you claimed any accessories in the pioneer thread, name it here.)


Character Bio: Ancestry.com
Character Stats: Digits
Character Fighting Style:Skillz
Character Equipment:http://www.revivaldawn-oprp.com/t572-argent-s-stuff#2310


Last edited by Argent on Wed Apr 19, 2017 8:07 pm; edited 2 times in total
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Tracker

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" / 310 cm
Weight : 1043 lbs / 473 kg
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 9
[[haospec]][[busospec]][[kenbunspec]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 700
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Shop Discount : -20%
Berries Berries : 25,000,000,000
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on Sun Apr 09, 2017 4:17 pm
@Argent wrote:Character Name:Argent
Level Claim: 25
World Position Claim: (If you claimed a world position in the pioneer thread, name it here.)
Starting Roll Claim:Logia
Accessories Claim: (If you claimed any accessories in the pioneer thread, name it here.)


Character Bio: Ancestry.com
Character Stats: Digits
Character Fighting Style:Skillz
Character Equipment:

Your second step is unacceptable in its current state. Your techniques are incomplete and so is your equipment. And since your equipment is missing, same goes for your stats. Also, you didn't have a starting roll claim in the pioneers page so you can remove that bit.


Last edited by Gray on Thu Aug 03, 2017 9:38 pm; edited 2 times in total

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Argent
Tracker

Name : Neville Basil
Epithet : Argent
Age : 0
Height : 5'10
Weight : ???
Species : Human
Faction : Pirates
Devil Fruit : Ani Ani no Mi
Haki Level : 1
Attack (ATK) : 0
Defense (DEF) : 0
Reflex (RX) : 0
Willpower (WP) : 0
Level : 10
Experience Points : 1000
Berries Berries : 50,000
Posts : 34
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Pioneers: Activity Check #2 [ENDED] - Page 2 Empty Re: Pioneers: Activity Check #2 [ENDED]

on Sun Apr 09, 2017 6:35 pm
I thought starting role was what I claimed from my role.

(If you have completed your character's equipment page and it is ready for approval, or has already been approved, link it here.)

It is ready for approval. I am done making the techniques I want. I have the stats I want. If there is a problem with the apps then I wouldn't know that since there has been no response to the apps.
Gray
Pioneers: Activity Check #2 [ENDED] - Page 2 Cool-t10
Tracker

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" / 310 cm
Weight : 1043 lbs / 473 kg
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 9
[[haospec]][[busospec]][[kenbunspec]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 700
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Shop Discount : -20%
Berries Berries : 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[freakofnature]][[childofdestiny]]
[[punchoutguru]][[windcaller]]
[[atkt6_sp]][[deft6]][[rxt6]][[wpt6]]
Posts : 2099
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on Sun Apr 09, 2017 8:27 pm
@Argent wrote:I thought starting role was what I claimed from my role.

(If you have completed your character's equipment page and it is ready for approval, or has already been approved, link it here.)

It is ready for approval. I am done making the techniques I want. I have the stats I want. If there is a problem with the apps then I wouldn't know that since there has been no response to the apps.

Completed apps include every technique filled out and same goes for equipment. If you're going to quote stuff to me then also quote this bit: "However, any cheap means to get around this (for example, filling out only a shell of an application for the sake of meeting the deadline, and then waiting for the grader to ask you to actually complete the application) will not be tolerated."

You are no exception. You must post here again once you've updated this stuff for your second step to qualify. Do NOT half-ass this, especially if you want to keep your claim.

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