Devil Fruit Claims

Subject: Re: Devil Fruit Claims Fri Jul 08, 2016 4:01 pm

Caesar J. Cofresi wrote:

Character Name: Trillion Trilla Tunka
Devil-fruit Name: Thief Thief no mi ( non connon)
Type:Paramecia
Description: The Thief Thief no mi turns the user into a Thief human. As the name says it it allows the user to steal mostly anything Within 15m of himself and inside a orb the range grows the more strong the user gets capping at 60m. The user creates a orb room kinda like Law however it is not op like it. Meaning thier are fairly many ways to stop it. Within the orb the user must than view or touch what it is he is trying to take. Say if the user see someone with candy so long as they are within the orb the user could take it from them sometimes even without them knowing if it was in thier pockets. By viewing it the user is able to identify the giving target. Then phantom like hands come into play that is the thief power of touch. But the most amazing thing is it allows the user to steal his targets abilities only 1 at a time. If the giving ability is taken the target can not use it for the amount of time the user has it. Like a thief whom takes someone phone. One can not use it if they dont have it to use. Depending on the power of each person is the set time limit. How if the user takes the ability he must know how to use it . Like if he takes the ability of a passing bird flying. He can not just fly off he must know how to fly. The way the lower work is the user summons ghost like hands with is the touch part of the power. The he uses his on eyes to view said targets. I will explain the weaknesses which is alot if this gets the ok. The time limit to this ability is 1 to 30 post.

Code:: [b]Your Devil fruit's name[/b] Thief Thief no mi

[u]Your character's name[/u].

Trillion Trilla Tunka.

Mkay. So, first off, you need to fix the code for your Devil Fruit name to be placed into the main post.

Secondly, in reading this ability may I offer A Devil Fruit that has similar traits to this?

http://onepiece.wikia.com/wiki/Mato_Mato_no_Mi

Now aside from the grammar and some these ranges, my main qualm lies in the functionality of the fruit. Do these objects teleport towards the user, if so, teleportation is band. Anything with the functionality of the Ope Ope too is also quite the stretch, though the Silence Silence fruit is seen to have a 'field' as well. Alot this seems like various bits of several fruits brought together to justify it's capabilities. It's a good concept but that's how I feel about it. Gray could weigh on how he feels but for me it's a no go.

And I completely agree with Caesar's prognosis and second his judgment call on the Thief-Thief fruit.

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Subject: Re: Devil Fruit Claims Fri Jul 08, 2016 4:05 pm

@King wrote:

@Gray wrote:

@King wrote:

@Gray wrote:

@King wrote:

Character Name: King Delacroix
Devil-fruit Name: Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Nine-Tailed Fox
Type: Mythical Zoan
Description: It allows the user to transform into either a 20-feet tall nine-tailed fox (full-form) or a nine-tailed human with fox ears and three whiskers that look like scars on each cheek of the user(human-beast form). In full form, the devil fruit grants the user the full extent of its power but the energy of the user drastically drains with every passing second and while in Human-Beast form, the devil fruit grants the user only half of its power but the user can stay in the Human-Beast form for a much longer time. Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Nine-Tailed Fox allows the user to create, form or control energy.

Code:: [b]Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Nine-Tailed Fox[/b] belongs to [u]King Delacroix[/u].

I'm afraid the creation and control of any form of energy would simply be a God Mode to multiple types of Paramecia Devil Fruits. It would be like you having access to Kinetic/Electric/Atomic/Solar/(And all other types of energy) paramecia devil fruits combined, ON TOP of being an over-sized, nine-tailed fox. Its capacities are simply too OP for me to even consider approving this.

You do have a point there. But would my OC still be able to get the fruit if she only can create or control flames? And when in Beast form, her height is still the same height as her human form? If not then I would like to claim the DF of Marco, if that's possible.

You can create and control flames with your Nine-Tailed Fox form, but your control over them cannot be comparable to Ace's Fruit. What you can do is have your body be covered in flames when you semi-transform and fully transform into your fox form. (This does not mean you become intangible though, you basically get a "skin of flames").

And in terms of switching to Marco's Phoenix Fruit, you can certainly do that, but, keep in mind that its powers will be heavily policed as well. Knowing that, if you still wish to switch, let me know~

Then I would still like to claim the fruit.

Feel free to do so! (All you need to do is post your claim again with an updated description).

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Subject: Re: Devil Fruit Claims Fri Jul 08, 2016 6:31 pm

Character Name: Trillion Trilla Tunka
Devil-fruit Name: Hollow Hollow no mi english name Ghost ghost no mi chinese name phantom phantom no mi

Type:Paramecia
Description: Allows the user to summon hollows and control hollows which makes him a hollow human. It allows the user to conjure up ghosts or phantom like being. The ghosts main power is to drain one self pride from some one meaning it can make a happy go lucky person want to kill they self only if they not depress already.
However since thats not allow here i will use it like how presona did in the manga as well the ghost could explode making small holes in walls depend on thier sizes. Also she was able to see and hear from them even making a large projectile of her self using the ghost. However she was unconscious when she did the latter of projectile. Or had her eyes closed to view threw thier eyes.

Code:: [b]Hollow Hollow no mi[/b] belongs to [u]Trillion Trilla Tunka[/u].

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Subject: Re: Devil Fruit Claims Fri Jul 08, 2016 6:32 pm

@Trillion TrillaTunka wrote:

Character Name: Trillion Trilla Tunka
Devil-fruit Name: Hollow Hollow no mi english name Ghost ghost no mi chinese name phantom phantom no mi

Type:Paramecia
Description: Allows the user to summon hollows and control hollows which makes him a hollow human.

Code:: [b]Hollow Hollow no mi[/b] belongs to [u]Trillion Trilla Tunka[/u].

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The description of your fruit is too scant. At least give us a brief idea of what kind of powers your fruit will give you.

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Subject: Re: Devil Fruit Claims Fri Jul 08, 2016 6:57 pm

@Trillion TrillaTunka wrote:

Character Name: Trillion Trilla Tunka
Devil-fruit Name: Hollow Hollow no mi english name Ghost ghost no mi chinese name phantom phantom no mi

Type:Paramecia
Description: Allows the user to summon hollows and control hollows which makes him a hollow human. It allows the user to conjure up ghosts or phantom like being. The ghosts main power is to drain one self proud from some one meaning it can make a happy go lucky person want to commit kill they self only if they not depress.
However since thats not allow here i will us it like how presona did in the manga as well the ghost could explode making small holes in walls depend on thier sizes. Also she was albe to see and hear from them even making a large projectile of her self using the ghost. However she was unconsciouswhen she did the latter of projectile. Or had her eyes closed to view threw thier eyes.

Code:: [b]Hollow Hollow no mi[/b] belongs to [u]Trillion Trilla Tunka[/u].

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That seems fine. However, Trillion, I will have to be the bad guy and notify you that if English is not your first language, or if your grammatical knowledge is poor, you may have a tough time RPing here. Revival Dawn is indeed an English role-playing site with a moderate knowledge of grammar as a requirement (as mentioned in the general rules). And from what I've read so far of your content, I don't feel that you meet that level.

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Subject: Re: Devil Fruit Claims Fri Jul 08, 2016 7:11 pm

Geez guess i'll talk with my normal intelligent i was under the impression that one piece sites comes with different grammar my apologies but thanks for the heads up

Subject: Re: Devil Fruit Claims Sat Jul 09, 2016 8:52 pm

Character Name: King Delacroix
Devil-fruit Name: Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Nine-Tailed Fox
Type: Mythical Zoan
Description: The user of this devil fruit may transform into a Nine-Tailed Fox as their full form, the devil fruit also gives the user a skin of flames whenever the user would transform into their Full or Hybrid form.

Code:: [b]Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Nine-Tailed Fox[/b] belongs to [u]King Delacroix[/u].

Subject: Re: Devil Fruit Claims Sat Jul 09, 2016 8:53 pm

@King wrote:

Character Name: King Delacroix
Devil-fruit Name: Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Nine-Tailed Fox
Type: Mythical Zoan
Description: The user of this devil fruit may transform into a Nine-Tailed Fox as their full form, the devil fruit also gives the user a skin of flames whenever the user would transform into their Full or Hybrid form.

Code:: [b]Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Nine-Tailed Fox[/b] belongs to [u]King Delacroix[/u].

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Character Name: Zeno Renora
Devil Fruit Name: Pika-Pika no Mi (Light Light Fruit)
Type: Logia
Description: The Pika Pika no Mi is a Logia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to create, control, and transform into light at will, turning the user into a Light Human (光人間 Hikari Ningen). It enables the user to move at the speed of a bullet and transport him/herself by means of reflection.

Code:: [b]Pika-Pika no Mi (Light Light Fruit)[/b] belongs to [u]Zeno Renora[/u].

Subject: Re: Devil Fruit Claims Sun Jul 10, 2016 8:24 pm

@Zero wrote:

Character Name: Zero Renora
Devil Fruit Name: Pika-Pika no Mi (Light Light Fruit)
Type: Logia
Description: The Pika Pika no Mi is a Logia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to create, control, and transform into light at will, turning the user into a Light Human (光人間 Hikari Ningen). It enables the user to move at the speed of light and transport him/herself by means of reflection.

Code:: [b]Pika-Pika no Mi (Light Light Fruit)[/b] belongs to [u]Zeno Renora[/u].

Traveling at the speed of light, while I very well understand that is its inherent property, is a deal breaker I'm afraid. That would be the equivalent of you having an infinite Reflex Stat, in essence. Therefore, I recommend rewording your Fruit's description to make it sound more comparable in speed to your peers.

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changed it to the speed of a bullet. Hopefully that was enough.

Subject: Re: Devil Fruit Claims Sun Jul 10, 2016 8:35 pm

@Zero wrote:

Character Name: Zero Renora
Devil Fruit Name: Pika-Pika no Mi (Light Light Fruit)
Type: Logia
Description: The Pika Pika no Mi is a Logia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to create, control, and transform into light at will, turning the user into a Light Human (光人間 Hikari Ningen). It enables the user to move at the speed of a bullet and transport him/herself by means of reflection.

Code:: [b]Pika-Pika no Mi (Light Light Fruit)[/b] belongs to [u]Zeno Renora[/u].

@Zero wrote:: changed it to the speed of a bullet. Hopefully that was enough.

Welp, the speed of a bullet is going to vary from individual to individual. And in the end, your movement speed (whether it be in logia form or human form), will be decided by your reflex stat anyway, so it's fine as long as you realize that.

By the way, is your character's name "Zero Renora" or "Zeno Renora"? Because there is an inconsistency in your claim post.

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Subject: Re: Devil Fruit Claims Sun Jul 10, 2016 9:11 pm

Character Name: Borü
Devil Fruit Name: Gura Gura no Mi
Type: Paramecia
Description: The Gura Gura no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit which allows the user to create vibrations (or "quakes"), making the user a Tremor Human. The vibrations can be created in any kind of superficies, including air, water or even a person.

Code:: [b]Gura Gura no Mi[/b] belongs to [u]Borü[/u].

I saw that someone asked for this fruit before and I understand that there is a minimum writing "quality" required. I'm going for it anyway, hope I get it and If I don't, it's totally okay, this is not my first language anyway, so I would totally understand.

Subject: Re: Devil Fruit Claims Sun Jul 10, 2016 9:14 pm

@Mr. Borü wrote:

Character Name: Borü
Devil Fruit Name: Gura Gura no Mi
Type: Paramecia
Description: The Gura Gura no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit which allows the user to create vibrations (or "quakes"), making the user a Tremor Human. The vibrations can be created in any kind of superficies, including air, water or even a person.

Code:: [b]Gura Gura no Mi[/b] belongs to [u]Borü[/u].

I saw that someone asked for this fruit before and I understand that there is a minimum writing "quality" required. I'm going for it anyway, hope I get it and If I don't, it's totally okay, this is not my first language anyway, so I would totally understand.

I'm afraid the assessment on the person that claimed Gura Gura no Mi first is still pending. Only if we declare that claim to be unsuitable, can you attempt to claim Gura Gura no Mi. However, I can let you know how that goes.

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Subject: Re: Devil Fruit Claims Mon Jul 11, 2016 6:35 pm

Character Name: Borü
Devil Fruit Name: Bari Bari no Mi
Type: Paramecia
Description: The Bari Bari no Mi is a Devil Fruit that allows the user to generate barriers for defending or striking at will, turning the user into a Barrier Human. It allows the user to form invisible barriers, though they can be solidified to become visibly transparent, resembling a pane of glass, and can even be modified to create different shapes.

Code:: [b]Bari Bari no Mi[/b] belongs to [u]Borü[/u].

Subject: Re: Devil Fruit Claims Mon Jul 11, 2016 6:41 pm

@Mr. Borü wrote:

Character Name: Borü
Devil Fruit Name: Bari Bari no Mi
Type: Paramecia
Description: The Bari Bari no Mi is a Devil Fruit that allows the user to generate barriers for defending or striking at will, turning the user into a Barrier Human. It allows the user to form invisible barriers, though they can be solidified to become visibly transparent, resembling a pane of glass, and can even be modified to create different shapes.

Code:: [b]Bari Bari no Mi[/b] belongs to [u]Borü[/u].

Claim accepted, have fun, be balanced.

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Subject: Re: Devil Fruit Claims Sun Jul 17, 2016 2:46 am

Character Name: Brood X. Bach
Devil Fruit Name: Sweet Sweet Fruit
Type: Paramecia
Description: Allows the user to generate and manipulate the natural sugars from inside their body. The user becomes a Sugar human, utilizing it in a variety of ways ranging from increasing their ability to create solid weapons and objects out of sugar-glass or using sugar in all of it's forms from granulated to powdered to liquid. The user is also allotted the ability to use their natural sugars to keep them awake longer or to give themselves a boost in energy for a temporary amount of time.

Code:: [b]Sweet Sweet No Mi[/b] belongs to [u]Brood X. Bach[/u].

Subject: Re: Devil Fruit Claims Sun Jul 17, 2016 3:16 am

Brood X. Bach wrote:

Character Name: Brood X. Bach
Devil Fruit Name: Sweet Sweet Fruit
Type: Paramecia
Description: Allows the user to generate and manipulate the natural sugars from inside their body at the cost of the user being forced to always snack on sugary sweets. The user becomes a Sugar human, utilizing it in a variety of ways ranging from increasing their ability to create solid weapons and objects out of sugar-glass or using sugar in all of it's forms from granulated to powdered to liquid. The user isn't allotted the ability to use their natural sugars to keep them awake longer or to give themselves a boost in energy for a temporary amount of time. The uses of this devil fruit are purely physical.

Code:: [b]Sweet Sweet No Mi[/b] belongs to [u]Brood X. Bach[/u].

I like this, giving this my 1/2 approval. Turning this over to Gray and Caesar in case they have any objections about this fruit.

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Subject: Re: Devil Fruit Claims Sun Jul 17, 2016 9:28 am

Brood X. Bach wrote:

Character Name: Brood X. Bach
Devil Fruit Name: Sweet Sweet Fruit
Type: Paramecia
Description: Allows the user to generate and manipulate the natural sugars from inside their body at the cost of the user being forced to always snack on sugary sweets. The user becomes a Sugar human, utilizing it in a variety of ways ranging from increasing their ability to create solid weapons and objects out of sugar-glass or using sugar in all of it's forms from granulated to powdered to liquid. The user isn't allotted the ability to use their natural sugars to keep them awake longer or to give themselves a boost in energy for a temporary amount of time. The uses of this devil fruit are purely physical.

Code:: [b]Sweet Sweet No Mi[/b] belongs to [u]Brood X. Bach[/u].

Very creative indeed. And you know what? "The user isn't allotted the ability to use their natural sugars to keep them awake longer or to give themselves a boost in energy for a temporary amount of time." <--- If you actually wanted to have such an ability, it would be completely okay. And also, you shouldn't be forced to snack on sugary sweets to be able to produce sugar. If you're a sugar-sugar human (>_> Sounds so creepy to say it), then you should be able to generate sugar from your body without having an external source provide it for you. (Do you think Mr. 3 had to eat wax to be able to produce wax from his body?)

Whether you choose to make these edits or not, let either Sora, Caesar or I know, and we shall approve it for ya.

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Subject: Re: Devil Fruit Claims Sun Jul 17, 2016 2:05 pm

Brood X. Bach wrote:

Character Name: Brood X. Bach
Devil Fruit Name: Sweet Sweet Fruit
Type: Paramecia
Description: Allows the user to generate and manipulate the natural sugars from inside their body. The user becomes a Sugar human, utilizing it in a variety of ways ranging from increasing their ability to create solid weapons and objects out of sugar-glass or using sugar in all of it's forms from granulated to powdered to liquid. The user is also allotted the ability to use their natural sugars to keep them awake longer or to give themselves a boost in energy for a temporary amount of time.

Code:: [b]Sweet Sweet No Mi[/b] belongs to [u]Brood X. Bach[/u].

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Subject: Re: Devil Fruit Claims Tue Jul 19, 2016 4:28 am

Character Name: Kenshin Z. Kazuo
Devil Fruit Name: Hie Hie no Mi (Ice Ice fruit)
Type: Logia
Description: The fruit allows the user to freeze himself/herself into ice. But unike other Logia it is possible for him to be hit with attacks since ice is a solid element but that does not mean it will have a lasting effect on him/her. It also gives the user the ability to freeze anything he comes in contact with. Whether it's a solid object or a person, it will slowly freeze on contact. And of course since he has an ice fruit, he has a resistance to the cold.

Code:: [b]Hie Hie no Mi [Ice Ice fruit][/b] belongs to [u]Kenshin Kazuo[/u].

Subject: Re: Devil Fruit Claims Tue Jul 19, 2016 5:27 am

@Kenshin wrote:

Character Name: Kenshin Z. Kazuo
Devil Fruit Name: Hie Hie no Mi (Ice Ice fruit)
Type: Logia
Description: The fruit allows the user to freeze himself/herself into ice. As well as its surroundings upon impact.

Code:: [b]Hie Hie no Mi [Ice Ice fruit][/b] belongs to [u]Kenshin Kazuo[/u].

Welcome to RevDawn, Kenshin. I'm afraid you'll have to expand just a bit on that description just a bit. I know it says "brief summary", but that's a little too brief. xD

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Subject: Re: Devil Fruit Claims Tue Jul 19, 2016 9:11 am

@Kenshin wrote:

Character Name: Kenshin Z. Kazuo
Devil Fruit Name: Hie Hie no Mi (Ice Ice fruit)
Type: Logia
Description: The fruit allows the user to freeze himself/herself into ice. But unike other Logia it is possible for him to be hit with attacks since ice is a solid element but that does not mean it will have a lasting effect on him/her. It also gives the user the ability to freeze anything he comes in contact with. Whether it's a solid object or a person, it will slowly freeze on contact. And of course since he has an ice fruit, he has a resistance to the cold.

Code:: [b]Hie Hie no Mi [Ice Ice fruit][/b] belongs to [u]Kenshin Kazuo[/u].

My fault lol Updated

Subject: Re: Devil Fruit Claims Tue Jul 19, 2016 3:15 pm

@Kenshin wrote:

Character Name: Kenshin Z. Kazuo
Devil Fruit Name: Hie Hie no Mi (Ice Ice fruit)
Type: Logia
Description: The fruit allows the user to freeze himself/herself into ice. But unike other Logia it is possible for him to be hit with attacks since ice is a solid element but that does not mean it will have a lasting effect on him/her. It also gives the user the ability to freeze anything he comes in contact with. Whether it's a solid object or a person, it will slowly freeze on contact. And of course since he has an ice fruit, he has a resistance to the cold.

Code:: [b]Hie Hie no Mi [Ice Ice fruit][/b] belongs to [u]Kenshin Kazuo[/u].

My fault lol Updated

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Subject: Re: Devil Fruit Claims Fri Jul 22, 2016 11:15 pm

Character Name: Yuki Soyokaze
Devil Fruit Name: Dino Dino Fruit: Velociraptor Model
Type: Ancient Zoan
Description: This Devil fruit give the user to partially or Completely transform into a Velociraptor, and he keeps his intelligence and gets increased ground speed, and he can use his fangs and claws and tail as natural weapons and it gives enhanced strength.

Code:: [b] (Dino Dino Fruit: Velociraptor Model)[/b] belongs to [u]Yuki Soyokaze[/u].