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Marissa Galloway

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Name : Marissa Galloway
Age : 22
Height : 5'4"
Weight : 125lbs
Race : Human
Faction : New Revolutionary Army
Devil Fruit : Shiro Shiro no Mi (Castle-Castle Fruit)
Haki Level : 3
Hitpoints (HP) : 200
Attack (ATK) : 125
Defense (DEF) : 200
Reflex (RX) : 200
Willpower (WP) : 200
Level : 25
Experience Points : 2500
Berries : 50,000
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Shiro Shiro no Mi


Devil Fruit: Shiro Shiro no Mi
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance: The Shiro Shiro no Mi resembles a dragon fruit with rectangular swirls, making it resemble brick.
Devil Fruit Description: The Shiro Shiro no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to become a living fortress, making the user a Castle Human. The design of the fortress can be designed by the user, manifesting traits like tank treads, cannons, and gun turrets. The user can also store things inside of them, including a large number of people. The user also has full control of what happens inside of their fortress, such as redesigning it at will even if there are people inside of them. The fortress can be broken out of by jumping out any windows, hatches, exits or simply breaking the fortress open. Damaging the inside of the fortress damages the user proportional to the damage done to the infrastructure.

Fighting Style: The Strongest Dreadnought
Weapon Utilization: Marissa utilizes her weaponry along with her devil fruit, storing them inside her body when not in use.
Description: Marissa uses the Shiro Shiro no Mi to become a humanoid battleship-shaped fortress, or to use the weapons of said fortress in her human form, combining her weapons with the style to make it less reliant on her devil fruit alone.




Toggled Abilities:
 




Passive Abilities:
 




Haki:
 





Techniques
(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)



Light Techniques:
 

Medium Techniques:
 

Heavy Techniques:
 

AoE Techniques:
 





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Name : Silas Grimsby
Epithet : Castro Grasa
Age : 26
Height : 6'2"
Weight : 163 lbs
Race : Human
Faction : Cipher Pol 9
Crew : Steamworks Inc.
Ship : Iron Victory
Devil Fruit : Oiru Oiru no Mi
Haki Level : 4
Hitpoints (HP) : 230
Attack (ATK) : 260
Defense (DEF) : 255
Reflex (RX) : 255
Willpower (WP) : 260
Level : 41
Experience Points : 4113
Berries : 9,100,000
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PostSubject: Re: Shiro Shiro no Mi: The Strongest Dreadnought   Shiro Shiro no Mi: The Strongest Dreadnought EmptyTue Jul 23, 2019 4:54 am

Looks good to me, waiting for a second approval on this.
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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Height : 10'1"/ 307 cm
Weight : 1043 lbs / 473 kg
Race : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Hitpoints (HP) : 700
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Shop Discount : -20%
Berries : 25,000,000,000
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PostSubject: Re: Shiro Shiro no Mi: The Strongest Dreadnought   Shiro Shiro no Mi: The Strongest Dreadnought EmptyTue Jul 23, 2019 6:11 pm

Mook Repellent and Powder Ignition need to have their stat changes balanced. Everything else looks good.
ObviouslyBestGirl wrote:

Shiro Shiro no Mi


Devil Fruit: Shiro Shiro no Mi
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance: The Shiro Shiro no Mi resembles a dragon fruit with rectangular swirls, making it resemble brick.
Devil Fruit Description: The Shiro Shiro no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to become a living fortress, making the user a Castle Human. The design of the fortress can be designed by the user, manifesting traits like tank treads, cannons, and gun turrets. The user can also store things inside of them, including a large number of people. The user also has full control of what happens inside of their fortress, such as redesigning it at will even if there are people inside of them. The fortress can be broken out of by jumping out any windows, hatches, exits or simply breaking the fortress open. Damaging the inside of the fortress damages the user proportional to the damage done to the infrastructure.

Fighting Style: The Strongest Dreadnought
Weapon Utilization: Marissa utilizes her weaponry along with her devil fruit, storing them inside her body when not in use.
Description: Marissa uses the Shiro Shiro no Mi to become a humanoid battleship-shaped fortress, or to use the weapons of said fortress in her human form, combining her weapons with the style to make it less reliant on her devil fruit alone.




Toggled Abilities:
 




Passive Abilities:
 




Haki:
 





Techniques
(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)



Light Techniques:
 

Medium Techniques:
 

Heavy Techniques:
 

AoE Techniques:
 




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Marissa Galloway

Marissa Galloway

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Name : Marissa Galloway
Age : 22
Height : 5'4"
Weight : 125lbs
Race : Human
Faction : New Revolutionary Army
Devil Fruit : Shiro Shiro no Mi (Castle-Castle Fruit)
Haki Level : 3
Hitpoints (HP) : 200
Attack (ATK) : 125
Defense (DEF) : 200
Reflex (RX) : 200
Willpower (WP) : 200
Level : 25
Experience Points : 2500
Berries : 50,000
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Posts : 12

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Gray

Gray

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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Height : 10'1"/ 307 cm
Weight : 1043 lbs / 473 kg
Race : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Hitpoints (HP) : 700
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Shop Discount : -20%
Berries : 25,000,000,000
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PostSubject: Re: Shiro Shiro no Mi: The Strongest Dreadnought   Shiro Shiro no Mi: The Strongest Dreadnought EmptyWed Jul 24, 2019 2:58 pm

[See comments in orange please.]
@Marissa Galloway wrote:


Mook Repellent
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Duration: 2 Posts
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: Reflex -20%, Attack -20% [Specify here who these debuffs are affecting - the user or the target.]
Description: Marissa lowers hatches from her body, firing a quick volley of smoke bombs to blind her target with a smokescreen, reducing their Reflexes by 20% while making it harder for Marissa herself to attack through, making the user lose Reflex -20% and Attack -20%.

Powder Ignition
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Maximum Base Radius: 2m
Cooldown: 21 Posts
Duration: 6 Posts
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: Reflex -50%, DEF -25%, Attack -25% [Specify here who these debuffs are affecting - the user or the target.]
Description: Marissa discharges loose powder from cannons protruded from numerous hatches, making a stronger smokescreen that makes enemies in the blast radius surrounding her lose -50% Reflex while making it hard for Marissa herself to attack or defend from how thick her own smokescreen is despite the fact she made it, making the user lose Reflex -20% and Attack -20%. This lasts for the duration.


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Gray

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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Height : 10'1"/ 307 cm
Weight : 1043 lbs / 473 kg
Race : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Hitpoints (HP) : 700
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Shop Discount : -20%
Berries : 25,000,000,000
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[windcaller][punchoutguru][endgameboss]
Posts : 1757

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PostSubject: Re: Shiro Shiro no Mi: The Strongest Dreadnought   Shiro Shiro no Mi: The Strongest Dreadnought EmptyWed Jul 24, 2019 4:39 pm

Approved! You are now a proud owner of a castle.

@Marissa Galloway wrote:

Shiro Shiro no Mi


Devil Fruit: Shiro Shiro no Mi
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance: The Shiro Shiro no Mi resembles a dragon fruit with rectangular swirls, making it resemble brick.
Devil Fruit Description: The Shiro Shiro no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to become a living fortress, making the user a Castle Human. The design of the fortress can be designed by the user, manifesting traits like tank treads, cannons, and gun turrets. The user can also store things inside of them, including a large number of people. The user also has full control of what happens inside of their fortress, such as redesigning it at will even if there are people inside of them. The fortress can be broken out of by jumping out any windows, hatches, exits or simply breaking the fortress open. Damaging the inside of the fortress damages the user proportional to the damage done to the infrastructure.

Fighting Style: The Strongest Dreadnought
Weapon Utilization: Marissa utilizes her weaponry along with her devil fruit, storing them inside her body when not in use.
Description: Marissa uses the Shiro Shiro no Mi to become a humanoid battleship-shaped fortress, or to use the weapons of said fortress in her human form, combining her weapons with the style to make it less reliant on her devil fruit alone.




Toggled Abilities:
 




Passive Abilities:
 




Haki:
 





Techniques
(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)



Light Techniques:
 

Medium Techniques:
 

Heavy Techniques:
 

AoE Techniques:
 




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Francis Charlemagne

Francis Charlemagne

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Name : Francis Charlemagne
Epithet : The Golden Ogre of Tequila Wolf
Age : 28
Height : 5'10" (178 cm)
Weight : 198 lbs (90 kg)
Race : Human
Faction : Marines
World Position : Rear Admiral
Crew : 69th Battalion
Ship : The Silver Ending
Crew Position : Fleet Commander
Haki Specialization : Busoshoku
Haki Level : 6
Hitpoints (HP) : 345
Attack (ATK) : 420
Defense (DEF) : 300
Reflex (RX) : 415
Willpower (WP) : 350
Level : 60
Experience Points : 6000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 50,000
[baneoftheweak][childofdestiny]
Posts : 87

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PostSubject: Re: Shiro Shiro no Mi: The Strongest Dreadnought   Shiro Shiro no Mi: The Strongest Dreadnought EmptyMon Feb 10, 2020 8:50 am

[ Comments in red. ]

@Marissa Galloway wrote:

Shiro Shiro no Mi


Devil Fruit: Shiro Shiro no Mi
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance: The Shiro Shiro no Mi resembles a dragon fruit with rectangular swirls, making it resemble brick.
Devil Fruit Description: The Shiro Shiro no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to become a living fortress, making the user a Castle Human. The design of the fortress can be designed by the user, manifesting traits like tank treads, cannons, and gun turrets. The user can also store things inside of them, including a large number of people. The user also has full control of what happens inside of their fortress, such as redesigning it at will even if there are people inside of them. The fortress can be broken out of by jumping out any windows, hatches, exits or simply breaking the fortress open. Damaging the inside of the fortress damages the user proportional to the damage done to the infrastructure.

Fighting Style: The Strongest Dreadnought
Weapon Utilization: Marissa utilizes her weaponry along with her devil fruit, storing them inside her body when not in use.
Description: Marissa uses the Shiro Shiro no Mi to become a humanoid battleship-shaped fortress, or to use the weapons of said fortress in her human form, combining her weapons with the style to make it less reliant on her devil fruit alone.




Toggled Abilities:
 




Passive Abilities:
 




Haki:
 





Techniques
(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)



[ Ahhh, looks like your fighting style was created before the big combat update. Hence there is no point in me grading anything below. Please update all techniques to use the new template and combat system. ]

Light Techniques:
 

Medium Techniques:
 

Heavy Techniques:
 

AoE Techniques:
 




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Name : Francis Charlemagne
Epithet : The Golden Ogre of Tequila Wolf
Age : 28
Height : 5'10" (178 cm)
Weight : 198 lbs (90 kg)
Race : Human
Faction : Marines
World Position : Rear Admiral
Crew : 69th Battalion
Ship : The Silver Ending
Crew Position : Fleet Commander
Haki Specialization : Busoshoku
Haki Level : 6
Hitpoints (HP) : 345
Attack (ATK) : 420
Defense (DEF) : 300
Reflex (RX) : 415
Willpower (WP) : 350
Level : 60
Experience Points : 6000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 50,000
[baneoftheweak][childofdestiny]
Posts : 87

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[ Comments in red. Be sure to expand all spoilers this time to check for comments.]

@Marissa Galloway wrote:

Shiro Shiro no Mi


Devil Fruit: Shiro Shiro no Mi
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance: The Shiro Shiro no Mi resembles a dragon fruit with rectangular swirls, making it resemble brick.
Devil Fruit Description: The Shiro Shiro no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to become a living fortress, making the user a Castle Human. The design of the fortress can be designed by the user, manifesting traits like tank treads, cannons, and gun turrets. The user can also store things inside of them, including a large number of people. The user also has full control of what happens inside of their fortress, such as redesigning it at will even if there are people inside of them. The fortress can be broken out of by jumping out any windows, hatches, exits or simply breaking the fortress open. Damaging the inside of the fortress damages the user proportional to the damage done to the infrastructure.

Fighting Style: The Strongest Dreadnought
Weapon Utilization: Marissa utilizes her weaponry along with her devil fruit, storing them inside her body when not in use.
Description: Marissa uses the Shiro Shiro no Mi to become a humanoid battleship-shaped fortress, or to use the weapons of said fortress in her human form, combining her weapons with the style to make it less reliant on her devil fruit alone.




Toggled Abilities:
 




Passive Abilities:
 




Haki:
 





Techniques
(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)



Light Techniques:
 

Medium Techniques:
 

Heavy Techniques:
 

AoE Techniques:
 




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Francis Charlemagne

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Name : Francis Charlemagne
Epithet : The Golden Ogre of Tequila Wolf
Age : 28
Height : 5'10" (178 cm)
Weight : 198 lbs (90 kg)
Race : Human
Faction : Marines
World Position : Rear Admiral
Crew : 69th Battalion
Ship : The Silver Ending
Crew Position : Fleet Commander
Haki Specialization : Busoshoku
Haki Level : 6
Hitpoints (HP) : 345
Attack (ATK) : 420
Defense (DEF) : 300
Reflex (RX) : 415
Willpower (WP) : 350
Level : 60
Experience Points : 6000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 50,000
[baneoftheweak][childofdestiny]
Posts : 87

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PostSubject: Re: Shiro Shiro no Mi: The Strongest Dreadnought   Shiro Shiro no Mi: The Strongest Dreadnought EmptyTue Feb 11, 2020 11:24 pm

Approved!


@Marissa Galloway wrote:

Shiro Shiro no Mi


Devil Fruit: Shiro Shiro no Mi
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance: The Shiro Shiro no Mi resembles a dragon fruit with rectangular swirls, making it resemble brick.
Devil Fruit Description: The Shiro Shiro no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to become a living fortress, making the user a Castle Human. The design of the fortress can be designed by the user, manifesting traits like tank treads, cannons, and gun turrets. The user can also store things inside of them, including a large number of people. The user also has full control of what happens inside of their fortress, such as redesigning it at will even if there are people inside of them. The fortress can be broken out of by jumping out any windows, hatches, exits or simply breaking the fortress open. Damaging the inside of the fortress damages the user proportional to the damage done to the infrastructure.

Fighting Style: The Strongest Dreadnought
Weapon Utilization: Marissa utilizes her weaponry along with her devil fruit, storing them inside her body when not in use.
Description: Marissa uses the Shiro Shiro no Mi to become a humanoid battleship-shaped fortress, or to use the weapons of said fortress in her human form, combining her weapons with the style to make it less reliant on her devil fruit alone.




Toggled Abilities:
 




Passive Abilities:
 




Haki:
 





Techniques
(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)



Light Techniques:
 

Medium Techniques:
 

Heavy Techniques:
 

AoE Techniques:
 




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