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Y'sera Knight
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Name : Y'sera V. Knight
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Age : 22
Height : 5'0"
Weight : 101 lbs
Species : Human
Faction : Revolutionary
Crew : ---
Ship : Meek Juju
Crew Position : ---
Haki Level : 0
Hitpoints (HP) : 115
Attack (ATK) : 75
Defense (DEF) : 25
Reflex (RX) : 80
Willpower (WP) : 30
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Yume no Katachi Empty Yume no Katachi

on Thu Jul 25, 2019 2:35 pm

夢の形
Yume no Katachi - Dream Style


Fighting Style: Yume no Katachi
Weapon Utilization:  Swords
Description: A relatively new way to wield a sword in the grand scheme of sword styles, was developed by Rama the Great to be utilized in his heroics. This style is known as the Dream Style as it combines both elegance and quick or powerful strikes to the body in tandem to make it mesmerizing to spectators and frustrating to opponents. This style requires great speed and focus from the user as they will have to constantly juggle quick stabs and heavy slashes along with dashes and dodges.

In the words of Rama the Great, "I made this style not only to kill, but to look cool while doing it."

Toggled and Passive Abilities: N/A


Techniques




Light Techniques:

Kōka Gento- Falling Moon
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: A simple combo opener. The user takes their blade and makes two quick diagonal slashes across their target's entire body.

Shinigento - Dying Moon
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Duration: 2 Posts
Buffs: Target: 20% Defense
Debuffs: Target: 20% Willpower
Description: The user takes their thumb and places it behind the guard, assuming the weapon is sheathed. Then, they fling out the sword as hard as they can into their target and catch it. The normal targets are the groin or the stomach as those are the closest to where the sword is kept.

Medium Techniques:

Shingetsu no sakebi - Cry of the New Moon
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Cooldown: 5 Posts
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: A move meant to be weaved in between other ones so the flow of combat isn't abruptly interrupted by the constant need to sheathe and unsheathe. At the start of this technique, the user throws the sheathe into their opponent that is up to 10m away from them before quickly dashing towards the location, driving their sword into the sheathe before abruptly stopping once the sword is completely in.

Heavy Techniques:

Mugetsu - Moonless Sky
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Cooldown: 14 Posts
Duration: 6 Posts
Buffs: Buffs the Attack of those hit by 80%
Debuffs: Debuffs the Reflex of those hit by 80%
Description: A quick two slash attack that aims for the opponents eyes, leaving an inverted V shaped cut on their forehead if successful. As one would expect, this attack would leave the target blinded though only temporarily as the cuts aren't that deep to leave a permanent scar.

AoE Techniques:

Sutekigetsu Kouhai - Beautiful Moon Devastation
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Maximum Base Radius: 2.5m
Cooldown: 15 Posts
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The user sheathes their weapon and smashes it into the ground as hard as they can, sending a shockwave around them. This shockwave is then sent through the air and assaults those within a 2.5m radius, feeling like sharp wind is striking their body.






Last edited by Y'sera Knight on Sat Jul 27, 2019 12:04 pm; edited 2 times in total
Alexa Icnoyotl
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Name : Alexa L. Icnoyotl
Epithet : N/A
Age : 21
Height : 5'11
Weight : 130 lbs
Species : Human
Faction : Pirate
Crew : Blue Hair Pirates
Ship : The Azure Night
Crew Position : Captain
Devil Fruit : Swim-Swim Fruit
Haki Specialization : N/A
Haki Level : 2
Hitpoints (HP) : 187
Attack (ATK) : 190
Defense (DEF) : 190
Reflex (RX) : 185
Willpower (WP) : 175
Level : 25
Experience Points : 2500
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Yume no Katachi Empty Re: Yume no Katachi

on Fri Jul 26, 2019 6:37 pm
@Y'sera Knight wrote:

[Comments and Corrections are in Purple]

夢の形
Yume no Katachi - Dream Style


Fighting Style: Yume no Katachi
Weapon Utilization:  Swords
Description: A relatively new way to wield a sword in the grand scheme of sword styles, was developed by Rama the Great to be utilized in his heroics. This style is known as the Dream Style as it combines both elegance and quick or powerful strikes to the body in tandem to make it mesmerizing to spectators and frustrating to opponents. This style requires great speed and focus from the user as they will have to constantly juggle quick stabs and heavy slashes along with dashes and dodges.

In the words of Rama the Great, "I made this style not only to kill, but to look cool while doing it."

Toggled and Passive Abilities: List any and all passive abilities and properties your fighting style gives you. This cannot include any damage dealing special attacks, as those will be included under techniques. Passive/toggled abilities cannot give buffs/debuffs higher than 20%. [For the sake of a clean looking app, if you don't have any toggled or passive abilities, I would suggest simply placing an "N/A" in this position, as you have done with the parts of techniques that do not apply.]


Techniques




Light Techniques:

Kōka Gento- Falling Moon
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: A simple combo opener. The user takes their blade and makes two quick diagonal slashes across their target's entire body.

Shinigento - Dying Moon
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Duration: 2 Posts
Buffs: Target: 20% Defense
Debuffs: Target: 20% Willpower
Description: The user takes their thumb and places it behind the guard, assuming the weapon is sheathed. Then, they fling out the sword as hard as they can into their target and catch it. The normal targets are the groin or the stomach as those are the closest to where the sword is kept.

Medium Techniques:

Shingetsu no sakebi - Cry of the New Moon
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Cooldown: 5 Posts
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: A move meant to be weaved in between other ones so the flow of combat isn't abruptly interrupted by the constant need to sheathe and unsheathe. At the start of this technique, the user throws the sheathe into their opponent that is up to 10m away from them before quickly dashing towards the location, driving their sword into the sheathe before abruptly stopping once the sword is completely in.

Heavy Techniques:

Mugetsu - Moonless Sky
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Cooldown: 24 Posts [This cooldown is FAR too high, even for what you are doing. I personally have a technique using this same spot that does a higher debuff without having an unreasonable cooldown. I highly suggest looking at the combat guide's Reccomended Cooldowns for future reference. For now, this needs to be dropped from 24 posts to 18, taking into account that the "Standard" cooldown for a HT is 8 posts, then adding the duration onto that cooldown. If you wish for a less heavy cooldown, lower the duration.]
Duration: 6 Posts
Buffs: Buffs the Attack of those hit by 80% [This doesn't really break any rules..but why? If anything, I feel like this SHOULD be a buff directed at you, rather than your opponent. For now, don't change it. I want to get another set of eyes on this for confirmation.]
Debuffs: Debuffs the Reflex of those hit by 80%
Description: A quick two slash attack that aims for the opponents eyes, leaving an inverted V shaped scar on their forehead if successful. As one would expect, this attack would leave the target blinded though only temporarily as the cuts aren't that deep the leave a permanent scar. [I would just like to note that the scarring aspect of it would be entirely up to the opponent, should it connect. Nothing really to change here]

AoE Techniques:

Sutekigetsu Kouhai - Beautiful Moon Devastation
Technique Level: 1
Maximum Base Range: 10m
Maximum Base Radius: 2.5m
Cooldown: 15 Posts
Duration: N/A
Buffs: N/A
Debuffs: N/A
Description: The user sheathes their weapon and smashes it into the ground as hard as they can, sending a shockwave around them. This shockwave is then sent through the air and assaults those within a 2.5m radius, feeling like sharp wind is striking their body.





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Alexa Icnoyotl
Tracker

Name : Alexa L. Icnoyotl
Epithet : N/A
Age : 21
Height : 5'11
Weight : 130 lbs
Species : Human
Faction : Pirate
Crew : Blue Hair Pirates
Ship : The Azure Night
Crew Position : Captain
Devil Fruit : Swim-Swim Fruit
Haki Specialization : N/A
Haki Level : 2
Hitpoints (HP) : 187
Attack (ATK) : 190
Defense (DEF) : 190
Reflex (RX) : 185
Willpower (WP) : 175
Level : 25
Experience Points : 2500
Berries Berries : 6,100,000
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Yume no Katachi Empty Re: Yume no Katachi

on Fri Jul 26, 2019 9:09 pm
Staff deliberation has occurred, and I believe that the debuffs and buffs make enough sense to approve this. I don't have any fancy stamps like Gray and Brood though, sorry.

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Gray
Yume no Katachi Cool-t10
Tracker

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Height : 10'1"/ 307 cm
Weight : 1043 lbs / 473 kg
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Hitpoints (HP) : 700
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Shop Discount : -20%
Berries Berries : 25,000,000,000
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Yume no Katachi Empty Re: Yume no Katachi

on Sat Jul 27, 2019 2:09 am
This error is on me, however, the "Recommended Cooldowns" wording in the combat guide is an old one that should've been corrected. Your technique cooldowns should always follow the ones listed in the combat guide, altered only by the duration of your technique. Therefore, the cooldown for your HT should 8 posts + 6 posts (the length of your duration), making it no more and no less than 14 posts.

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Alexa Icnoyotl
Tracker

Name : Alexa L. Icnoyotl
Epithet : N/A
Age : 21
Height : 5'11
Weight : 130 lbs
Species : Human
Faction : Pirate
Crew : Blue Hair Pirates
Ship : The Azure Night
Crew Position : Captain
Devil Fruit : Swim-Swim Fruit
Haki Specialization : N/A
Haki Level : 2
Hitpoints (HP) : 187
Attack (ATK) : 190
Defense (DEF) : 190
Reflex (RX) : 185
Willpower (WP) : 175
Level : 25
Experience Points : 2500
Berries Berries : 6,100,000
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Posts : 81
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Yume no Katachi Empty Re: Yume no Katachi

on Sat Jul 27, 2019 4:24 pm
Thank you for clarifying things, as well as catching my mistake, Gray. That being said, this is approved again. If you really want a stamp on this, Im sure Gray would be amenable to placing his fancy approval stamp. Otherwise, you're stuck with this plain looking post for now, sorry.

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Gray
Yume no Katachi Cool-t10
Tracker

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Height : 10'1"/ 307 cm
Weight : 1043 lbs / 473 kg
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Hitpoints (HP) : 700
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Shop Discount : -20%
Berries Berries : 25,000,000,000
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Posts : 1913
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Yume no Katachi Empty Re: Yume no Katachi

on Sat Aug 10, 2019 11:40 am
The combat system was recently updated. Please review the updates and use the new template to adjust your fighting style accordingly. Thanks!

Devil Fruit Fighting Style Template
Non-devil fruit fighting style template

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