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Maxwell

Maxwell

Name : Richard Maxwell
Epithet : Plague Rat
Age : 47
Race : Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Supernova
Crew : --
Ship : --
Crew Position : --
Haki Level : 1
Attack (ATK) : 240
Defense (DEF) : 450
Reflex (RX) : 560
Willpower (WP) : 100
Level : 57
Experience Points : 5720
Bounty : 124,000,000
Berries : 3,005,000
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PostSubject: Foul Play   Foul Play EmptyFri Jul 08, 2016 3:52 pm


Foul Play



Fighting Style: Foul Play
Weapon Utilization: A small pistol and a sturdy suitcase containing strange chemicals and medical equipment.
Description: What others call fighting dirty, Richard calls fighting smart. Using trickery, chemicals and low blows are all viable tactics to him. On rare occasions he pulls out his gun to fire potshots. When the situation demands it, he’ll start using his vast selection of medical equipment to support himself and anyone who happens to be on his side. Running away like a frightened, little rat is also a big part of his strategy.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Primum Non Nocere [Toggled] - Richard dons his lab coat and gloves, focusing on healing rather than harming. While this is active, he loses -20% Attack, but gains +20% Reflex.

Medic - Every round Richard can use UTs to heal all allies in range, including himself. He heals for [0.05*(d20 value * 10% of his RX)].

Triage - Richard can accurately tell how much damage someone has sustained and how much health they have left.





Techniques



 

Light Techniques:
 

Medium Techniques:
 

Heavy Techniques:
 

AoE Techniques:
 







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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 2,500,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 25,000,000,000
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PostSubject: Re: Foul Play   Foul Play EmptyFri Jul 08, 2016 6:05 pm

1. Sucker Punch: I am so tempted to simply give you the okay on stunning a character for 1 post, considering how balanced (or dare I say under-powered) most of your techs are. However, if I do, you need to increase your cool-down to at least 7 posts. As funny as it would be to keep seeing you punch someone in the balls, it might get a bit repetitive and unfair for the stunned opponents (considering they'd be at the mercy of your heavier attacks for an entire post).

2. Medium Attacks: You may choose to bump these up to +15%, if you so choose. Needless to say, however, the debuffs will have to be increased accordingly as well. Oh and also, could you include the duration along with the cooldown for easier access?

3. Malpractice: Seeing this technique makes me think it could become extraordinarily powerful in combination with Sucker Punch (which may have been your intention to begin with). However, this would also give you a free pass to essentially kill/incapacitate someone who had lower reflexes or reflexes close to you, since they would have a hard time dodging Sucker Punch, which is a light attack, making it inherently quick. So, what I would suggest is that you either make it so that you are required to operate on an opponent for at least 3 posts for Malpractice to work successfully, or replace it entirely with another technique. I apologize if this ruined all your nasty, evil plans. #SorrybutnotsorryXD

4. Fumigate: The effects of Fumigate are perfectly acceptable, but I do want you to know that the kind of internal damage done by this technique will be determined by your attack stat vs their defense stat (Their vision will be blocked regardless though for as long as they remain within the AoE). Knowing that, if you'd like to rearrange your character's stats, let me know. Otherwise, no changes are required for this technique.

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Maxwell

Name : Richard Maxwell
Epithet : Plague Rat
Age : 47
Race : Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Supernova
Crew : --
Ship : --
Crew Position : --
Haki Level : 1
Attack (ATK) : 240
Defense (DEF) : 450
Reflex (RX) : 560
Willpower (WP) : 100
Level : 57
Experience Points : 5720
Bounty : 124,000,000
Berries : 3,005,000
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Posts : 92

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PostSubject: Re: Foul Play   Foul Play EmptyFri Jul 08, 2016 7:16 pm

Fair points all in all. Edits are as follows.

1. Gave Sucker Punch 7 post cool-down. It's an attack that relies on the surprise factor, so it should be used sparingly.

2. Upped the effects. And I thank you for that permission. They were meant as sort of double-edged boosts to begin with, so this helps me drive the point home. Winners don't do drugs. Except when they do.

3. Reworded Malpractice into something less of instant damage and more of finishing move, while still trying to retain the relation to Intensive Care.

4. I understand that and it's part of the appeal. Against nameless civilian NPCs the effect will no doubt be devastating, while against player characters it should be a kind of area-denial move. Dealing damage is secondary and ultimately I'd like to think of it as repeated light attacks against anyone foolish enough to keep breathing it. Some characters can just walk through the cloud with few coughs. That would be an interesting scene to play out. And hilarious.

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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 2,500,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 25,000,000,000
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PostSubject: Re: Foul Play   Foul Play EmptyFri Jul 08, 2016 7:24 pm

I must say, Maxwell, I was very impressed with all aspects of your character. From the biography, to the equipment and the techniques. And your humility and cooperation in regards to character creation are very much appreciated. Peers like yourself remind me why I wanted to do this whole site thing in the first place. And having said that, I would like to reiterate my desire to have our characters RP together. Just pop-in in the chat box, or PM me if you feel that urge also. Until then, you are ready to make a name for yourself across the seven seas. (Which, if your history is to be believed, has partially been done already). Oh, and that reminds me! I need to assign you a starting bounty based on your character's personality and history. But, since I know you are a sucker for moderation, I will give you free reign to choose whichever bounty you want to start out with. You may PM me this, or simply let me know in the chat box, as I'm about to approve this thread and lock it~

Foul Play Fdzj9w


@Maxwell wrote:
Foul Play

Fighting Style: Foul Play
Weapon Utilization: Sturdy suitcase containing strange chemicals and medical equipment.
Specialization: Up, close and personal with very few exceptions.
Description: What others call fighting dirty, Richard calls fighting smart. Using trickery, chemicals, low blows, and innocent meat shields are all viable tactics to him. When the situation demands it, he’ll start using his vast selection of medical equipment to support himself and anyone who happens to be on his side. Running away like a frightened, little rat is also a big part of his strategy.

Techniques

Light Attacks:
 

Medium Attacks:
 

Heavy Attacks:
 

AOE Attacks:
 

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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 2,500,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 25,000,000,000
[baneoftheweak][childofdestiny][windcaller][punchoutguru]
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PostSubject: Re: Foul Play   Foul Play EmptySun Jul 31, 2016 9:20 pm

Unlocked for updates~

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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 2,500,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 25,000,000,000
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PostSubject: Re: Foul Play   Foul Play EmptyTue Aug 02, 2016 4:48 pm

1. Autoclave: This technique should only be able to remove status effects from light techniques.

2. Recovery Serum: I would suggest giving a -15% attack debuff instead. You can justify this by saying that, because the patient is in so much pain, they cannot put their entire strength behind their attacks.

3. Primum Non Nocere: Richard should not be able to dodge attacks in the case where the opponent's reflex is higher in comparison, especially with this being a heavy technique. But, more importantly, I would actually suggest entirely revamping this technique into something different.

While, ideally, anyone you might be role-playing with should not meta-game, I fear that it would be too easy for any player you may be engaged in combat with, to simply claim that their character did not care to hit you during that duration.

If you still choose to keep this technique however, I would suggest putting a reflex requirement to dodge the attack. Let's say you are required to have at least 75% as much reflex as your opponent to dodge an attack. Also, the attack being dodged has to be an attack that would make direct physical contact with you, and it cannot be an AoE or an attack out of your splashing range.

Also, if you wish for the opponent to suffer a -50% defense debuff for that attack, you need to balance that by giving yourself an equivalent debuff, since this technique is already OP enough as it not only allows you dodge up to a heavy technique, but at the same time it gives you a guaranteed heavy-damage dealing hit. On top of that, a -50% defense debuff on an opponent without something to balance it, would just be overkill.

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Name : Richard Maxwell
Epithet : Plague Rat
Age : 47
Race : Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Supernova
Crew : --
Ship : --
Crew Position : --
Haki Level : 1
Attack (ATK) : 240
Defense (DEF) : 450
Reflex (RX) : 560
Willpower (WP) : 100
Level : 57
Experience Points : 5720
Bounty : 124,000,000
Berries : 3,005,000
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Posts : 92

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PostSubject: Re: Foul Play   Foul Play EmptyTue Aug 02, 2016 7:28 pm

I switched things up quite a bit. Edits are as follows.

1. Swapped Autoclave to a heavy technique slot instead. Added Parting Gift as a replacement.

2. Changed the debuff to attack instead.

3. Removed Primum Non Nocere entirely and replaced it with Autoclave. Simplified the wordy description and made it a more traditional attack instead of an automatically triggering passive.

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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 2,500,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 25,000,000,000
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PostSubject: Re: Foul Play   Foul Play EmptyTue Aug 02, 2016 9:25 pm

1. Parting Gift: Blinding is a huge deal, I should think, and should come with strict requirements. Let's say your attack has to be at least 125% of the opponent's defense for the blinding to work. Otherwise, it should only deal the stated damage.

2. Autoclave: The removed status effects should be medically curable. For example, if a person is given a status effect (buff or debuff) due to their own or someone else's devil fruit ability, that should remain unaffected.



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Maxwell

Name : Richard Maxwell
Epithet : Plague Rat
Age : 47
Race : Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Supernova
Crew : --
Ship : --
Crew Position : --
Haki Level : 1
Attack (ATK) : 240
Defense (DEF) : 450
Reflex (RX) : 560
Willpower (WP) : 100
Level : 57
Experience Points : 5720
Bounty : 124,000,000
Berries : 3,005,000
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Posts : 92

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PostSubject: Re: Foul Play   Foul Play EmptyWed Aug 03, 2016 8:43 am

Good points overall. I went for more replacements in effort to find more inherently balanced techniques.

1. Parting Gift has been replaced with a non-damaging move Paranoia Agent.

2. The main purpose of Autoclave was to even the field against Devil Fruits specifically, to remove special conditions inflicted by them like freezing, dehydration and poisoning for example. Still, I think the definition of a medically curable status effect gets tricky, especially with the stranger fruits/techniques. Thus for the sake of simplicity, it has now been replaced with the poisoning technique Euthanasia.

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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 2,500,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 25,000,000,000
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PostSubject: Re: Foul Play   Foul Play EmptyWed Aug 03, 2016 3:28 pm

1. Euthanasia: Change the reflex debuff to 25%, and we should be all set.

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Name : Richard Maxwell
Epithet : Plague Rat
Age : 47
Race : Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Supernova
Crew : --
Ship : --
Crew Position : --
Haki Level : 1
Attack (ATK) : 240
Defense (DEF) : 450
Reflex (RX) : 560
Willpower (WP) : 100
Level : 57
Experience Points : 5720
Bounty : 124,000,000
Berries : 3,005,000
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Posts : 92

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PostSubject: Re: Foul Play   Foul Play EmptyWed Aug 03, 2016 4:44 pm

1. Euthanasia Reflex debuff increased to 25%

2. I'm afraid I had something of a sudden inspiration, thus I simply had to swap Paranoia Agent for Turncoat. I see it as more amusing and thematically fitting. Reworded the description of Intervention slightly to keep it in line with the new ability.


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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 2,500,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 25,000,000,000
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PostSubject: Re: Foul Play   Foul Play EmptyWed Aug 03, 2016 5:03 pm

Turncoat: You know you don't really need to make this into a technique to do something like this, right? XD

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Name : Richard Maxwell
Epithet : Plague Rat
Age : 47
Race : Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Supernova
Crew : --
Ship : --
Crew Position : --
Haki Level : 1
Attack (ATK) : 240
Defense (DEF) : 450
Reflex (RX) : 560
Willpower (WP) : 100
Level : 57
Experience Points : 5720
Bounty : 124,000,000
Berries : 3,005,000
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Posts : 92

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PostSubject: Re: Foul Play   Foul Play EmptyWed Aug 03, 2016 5:07 pm

Ah, excellent. Thank you for clearing that up. Turncoat has been reverted to Paranoia Agent.

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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 2,500,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 25,000,000,000
[baneoftheweak][childofdestiny][windcaller][punchoutguru]
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PostSubject: Re: Foul Play   Foul Play EmptyWed Aug 03, 2016 6:20 pm

Also, keep in mind that when you are using Paranoia Agent, your opponents will still be able to track your presence if they are skilled in the use of haki. Having said that, I've halted your approval long enough, so I shall approve this now, but if you wish to change Paranoia Agent in light of this new information, just message me~

Foul Play Fdzj9w


@Maxwell wrote:
Foul Play

Fighting Style: Foul Play
Weapon Utilization: Sturdy suitcase containing strange chemicals and medical equipment.
Specialization: Up, close and personal with very few exceptions.
Description: What others call fighting dirty, Richard calls fighting smart. Using trickery, chemicals, low blows, and innocent meat shields are all viable tactics to him. When the situation demands it, he’ll start using his vast selection of medical equipment to support himself and anyone who happens to be on his side. Running away like a frightened, little rat is also a big part of his strategy.

Techniques

Light Attacks:
 

Medium Attacks:
 

Heavy Attacks:
 

AOE Attacks:
 

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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 2,500,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 25,000,000,000
[baneoftheweak][childofdestiny][windcaller][punchoutguru]
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PostSubject: Re: Foul Play   Foul Play EmptyThu Dec 15, 2016 3:25 pm

Unlocked for injection's color editing~

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Name : Richard Maxwell
Epithet : Plague Rat
Age : 47
Race : Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Supernova
Crew : --
Ship : --
Crew Position : --
Haki Level : 1
Attack (ATK) : 240
Defense (DEF) : 450
Reflex (RX) : 560
Willpower (WP) : 100
Level : 57
Experience Points : 5720
Bounty : 124,000,000
Berries : 3,005,000
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PostSubject: Re: Foul Play   Foul Play EmptyThu Dec 15, 2016 3:55 pm

Edit made.

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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 2,500,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 25,000,000,000
[baneoftheweak][childofdestiny][windcaller][punchoutguru]
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PostSubject: Re: Foul Play   Foul Play EmptyThu Dec 15, 2016 3:55 pm

Foul Play Fdzj9w
@Maxwell wrote:

Foul Play


Fighting Style: Foul Play
Weapon Utilization: Sturdy suitcase containing strange chemicals and medical equipment.
Specialization: Up, close and personal with very few exceptions.
Description: What others call fighting dirty, Richard calls fighting smart. Using trickery, chemicals, low blows, and innocent meat shields are all viable tactics to him. When the situation demands it, he’ll start using his vast selection of medical equipment to support himself and anyone who happens to be on his side. Running away like a frightened, little rat is also a big part of his strategy.


Techniques


Light Attacks:
 

Medium Attacks:
 

Heavy Attacks:
 

AOE Attacks:
 



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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 2,500,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 25,000,000,000
[baneoftheweak][childofdestiny][windcaller][punchoutguru]
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PostSubject: Re: Foul Play   Foul Play EmptyThu Sep 07, 2017 4:50 pm

Since your fighting style is still running on the old system, you might have a huge handicap! So, I'm unlocking this thread so you can update it using the new template provided here.

P.S.: I still haven't forgotten that I owe you a post, Richard! I'd make excuses, but you've heard them all before. I'll just count on your continued tolerance of my unfair delays. I swear I'll get to it as soon as my first spark of creativity appears.

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World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
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PostSubject: Re: Foul Play   Foul Play EmptySun Sep 10, 2017 3:33 pm

[You work speedily as ever, Richard! I have a few corrections and comments that you may want to check out. Most of them are concerning the new mechanics which, admittedly, is a curveball thrown at you at this point without a warning.]

@Maxwell wrote:

Foul Play


Fighting Style: Foul Play.
Weapon Utilization: Sturdy suitcase containing strange chemicals and medical equipment.
Description: What others call fighting dirty, Richard calls fighting smart. Using trickery, chemicals, low blows, and innocent meat shields are all viable tactics to him. When the situation demands it, he’ll start using his vast selection of medical equipment to support himself and anyone who happens to be on his side. Running away like a frightened, little rat is also a big part of his strategy.
[I’d actually recommend that you add a passive ability which allows you to use UTs to heal HP worth a single UT. The way this would be calculated is that instead of whatever damage you’d deal with a UT, you’d instead heal that much HP. Of course, you can still use UTs to do damage as well, but this would be a fitting and handy ability considering the theme of your fighting style.]


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Name : Richard Maxwell
Epithet : Plague Rat
Age : 47
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Faction : Pirate
World Position : Supernova
Crew : --
Ship : --
Crew Position : --
Haki Level : 1
Attack (ATK) : 240
Defense (DEF) : 450
Reflex (RX) : 560
Willpower (WP) : 100
Level : 57
Experience Points : 5720
Bounty : 124,000,000
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PostSubject: Re: Foul Play   Foul Play EmptyWed Sep 13, 2017 10:46 am

Edits have been made.

Passives
- Added "Healing" passive as a quick and simple clarification on how Richard's healing techniques are calculated.
- Added "Triage" passive to emphasize Richard's role and skills as a doctor.
- Agreed with the UT healing suggestion and added "Bedside Manner" passive.

General
- Checked and readjusted all cooldowns.
- Reworked every healing technique.

Light techniques
- Removed stun entirely from Sucker Punch to simplify things.
- Specified Intervention functionality.
- Added stat buff and debuff to Evacuate.
- Reworked Paranoia Agent. Now deals light damage and affects the target's WP.

Medium techniques
- Rewrote every buff technique. Now they grant a buff and a debuff simultaneously.
- Heal over time removed from Recovery Serum.

Heavy techniques
- Reworked Euthanasia to deal damage based on Willpower instead of Defense. Same theme as Sucker Punch.

AoE techniques
- Maxwell's Cocktail renamed to Autoclave. Deals its damage in a single blast.
- Adjusted Fumigate to fit the combat guidelines. Removed DoT. Now deals a single instance of damage to anyone who enters the gas.


Also two questions if I may?
1. The Combat Guide says: "character's true HP is 100+50% of their willpower". But for Richard his true HP seems to be only 100+25% of his WP. Is there something I missed?
2. How are equipment techniques handled now? Are they UTs, LTs or something else entirely?

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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 2,500,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 25,000,000,000
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PostSubject: Re: Foul Play   Foul Play EmptySat Sep 16, 2017 2:10 pm

Excellently done Richard, as always! To answer your questions:

1. The HP error was entirely my fault. In the first iteration of the combat guide overhaul, the HP bonus was 25%. I simply forgot to edit your stats after I reworked it to 50%. Which reminds me, if you need to redistribute your stats according to the new system, please do let me know!
2. The technique types for equipment are listed in the Shop of Dreams under the equipment section. But, here's the relevant excerpt: "The technique types of equipment are as follows: Tier 2 and 3 techniques will be LTs. Tier 4 and 5 will be MTs. Tier 6 technique will be HT. These techniques do not have to be damage-dealing techniques." You can adjust your equipment techniques accordingly!

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@Maxwell wrote:

Foul Play


Fighting Style: Foul Play.
Weapon Utilization: Sturdy suitcase containing strange chemicals and medical equipment.
Description: What others call fighting dirty, Richard calls fighting smart. Using trickery, chemicals, low blows, and innocent meat shields are all viable tactics to him. When the situation demands it, he’ll start using his vast selection of medical equipment to support himself and anyone who happens to be on his side. Running away like a frightened, little rat is also a big part of his strategy.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Healing - All of Richard’s healing techniques are calculated as attacks. with his Attack compared to the patient’s Defense. They simply heal damage instead of dealing it. Plus instead of minus.

Triage - Richard can accurately tell how much damage someone has sustained and how much health they have left.

Bedside Manner - Every round Richard can restore HP equal to one UT to every ally in range.



Techniques




Light Techniques:
 

Medium Techniques:
 

Heavy Techniques:
 

AoE Techniques:
 





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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 2,500,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 25,000,000,000
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PostSubject: Re: Foul Play   Foul Play EmptyMon Jul 22, 2019 1:36 pm

Moved for style fixes.

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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Race : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 2,500,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 25,000,000,000
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PostSubject: Re: Foul Play   Foul Play EmptyTue Jul 23, 2019 10:35 pm

Approved once again!
@Maxwell wrote:

Foul Play


Fighting Style: Foul Play.
Weapon Utilization: Sturdy suitcase containing strange chemicals and medical equipment.
Description: What others call fighting dirty, Richard calls fighting smart. Using trickery, chemicals, low blows, and innocent meat shields are all viable tactics to him. When the situation demands it, he’ll start using his vast selection of medical equipment to support himself and anyone who happens to be on his side. Running away like a frightened, little rat is also a big part of his strategy.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Healing - All of Richard’s healing techniques are calculated as attacks, with his Attack compared to the patient’s Defense. They simply heal damage instead of dealing it. Plus instead of minus.

Triage - Richard can accurately tell how much damage someone has sustained and how much health they have left.

Bedside Manner - Every round Richard can restore HP equal to one UT to every ally in range, including himself.



Techniques




Light Techniques:
 

Medium Techniques:
 

Heavy Techniques:
 

AoE Techniques:
 





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Epithet : Kurotane (Black Seed)
Age : 27
Race : Human
Faction : New Revolutionary Army
Crew : Bonbon X
Ship : Wonderland Hatch
Crew Position : First Mate
Devil Fruit : Mochi Mochi no Mi
Haki Level : 5
Attack (ATK) : 350
Defense (DEF) : 250
Reflex (RX) : 335
Willpower (WP) : 300
Level : 50
Experience Points : 5000
Bounty : 160,000,000
Berries : 50,000
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PostSubject: Re: Foul Play   Foul Play EmptyWed Jul 31, 2019 6:45 pm

Excellent work as always! I've added an addition to the "Walking, Talking First Aid Kid" perk that gives users the ability to use healing UTs exactly how you designed it. It should give people more motivation to make healer builds like yours. I don't see any reason to remove it from your fighting style though, so here's an approved seal:

Foul Play Approv10

@Maxwell wrote:

Foul Play



Fighting Style: Foul Play
Weapon Utilization: A small pistol and a sturdy suitcase containing strange chemicals and medical equipment.
Description: What others call fighting dirty, Richard calls fighting smart. Using trickery, chemicals and low blows are all viable tactics to him. On rare occasions he pulls out his gun to fire potshots. When the situation demands it, he’ll start using his vast selection of medical equipment to support himself and anyone who happens to be on his side. Running away like a frightened, little rat is also a big part of his strategy.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Primum Non Nocere [Toggled] - Richard dons his lab coat and gloves, focusing on healing rather than harming. While this is active, he loses -20% Attack, but gains +20% Reflex.

Medic - Every round Richard can use UTs to heal all allies in range, including himself. He heals for [0.05*(d20 value * 10% of his RX)].

Triage - Richard can accurately tell how much damage someone has sustained and how much health they have left.





Techniques



 

Light Techniques:
 

Medium Techniques:
 

Heavy Techniques:
 

AoE Techniques:
 






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Name : Alice Baltroy Ronx
Epithet : Flying Dart
Age : 22
Race : Human
Faction : New Revolutionary Army
World Position : Commander
Crew : Bonbon X
Ship : Wonderland Hatch
Crew Position : Captain
Haki Level : 5
Attack (ATK) : 290
Defense (DEF) : 300
Reflex (RX) : 355
Willpower (WP) : 330
Level : 52
Experience Points : 5225
Bounty : 198,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Berries : 14,600,000
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PostSubject: Re: Foul Play   Foul Play EmptyThu Aug 01, 2019 3:45 am

Unlocked for Intervention edit :3

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Epithet : Flying Dart
Age : 22
Race : Human
Faction : New Revolutionary Army
World Position : Commander
Crew : Bonbon X
Ship : Wonderland Hatch
Crew Position : Captain
Haki Level : 5
Attack (ATK) : 290
Defense (DEF) : 300
Reflex (RX) : 355
Willpower (WP) : 330
Level : 52
Experience Points : 5225
Bounty : 198,000,000
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PostSubject: Re: Foul Play   Foul Play EmptyThu Aug 01, 2019 4:09 am

Thank you again for pointing out the same issue with Intervention~ Here's a well deserved stamp:

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@Maxwell wrote:

Foul Play



Fighting Style: Foul Play
Weapon Utilization: A small pistol and a sturdy suitcase containing strange chemicals and medical equipment.
Description: What others call fighting dirty, Richard calls fighting smart. Using trickery, chemicals and low blows are all viable tactics to him. On rare occasions he pulls out his gun to fire potshots. When the situation demands it, he’ll start using his vast selection of medical equipment to support himself and anyone who happens to be on his side. Running away like a frightened, little rat is also a big part of his strategy.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Primum Non Nocere [Toggled] - Richard dons his lab coat and gloves, focusing on healing rather than harming. While this is active, he loses -20% Attack, but gains +20% Reflex.

Medic - Every round Richard can use UTs to heal all allies in range, including himself. He heals for [0.05*(d20 value * 10% of his RX)].

Triage - Richard can accurately tell how much damage someone has sustained and how much health they have left.





Techniques



 

Light Techniques:
 

Medium Techniques:
 

Heavy Techniques:
 

AoE Techniques:
 






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