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This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Aug 19, 2019 11:03 pm

   
Makaze.
   


   
Makaze The Destroyer 423fc72160110255a2b60a8d691778ed

   Basic Character Information
   


   Starting Bonus: The Force is Strong | [Starting Bonus Roll]

   First Name: Makaze
   Middle Name/Initial: Mugggard
   Last Name: Dzora
   Epithet: Iron Fist
   Age:70(Appears in early twenties.)
   Gender: Male
   Race: Half Giant Half Fishmen
   Faction:Pirate
   Profession: First Mate: He has a vast Experience being a First Mate. In logistics, Navigation, Leadership skills, Mathematics, Vast Knowledge of History, knowledge of the sea, and varies of other things.
Master Marital Artist: He has over forty years of Mastery over Fishmen Karate, Boxing, Mauy Thai, Basic Understanding of Black Leg Style, Wrestling, and Tae Kwon Do.
Swordsmanship: Five Years of training in Swordsmanship. But he is not a master at it. He knows how to use the Sword With enough Understanding of techniques to Use it at a Adapt Level.
Assassination: Two Years of Training only. Nothing Special. But he can craft minor Potions and Trinkets, and knows how to kill a person in more ways then one with any tool.
Cook: Has an Adapt Knowledge of cooking, He has cooked for three years.
   


   Physical Appearance
   


   Height: 16 feet tall
   Weight:

   Hair Style: Straight
   Hair Color: Blonde
   Eye Color: Blue
   Scars: None
   Clothing and Accessories: Simple clothing, Boots, Socks, Pants, Boxers, Shirt, Jacket, However, if given the certain special event. He could be seen wearing different types of clothing that is Seasonal. For example, Less Clothing during summer, a Winter cloak or clothing for Winter, Etc.

   Description: Makaze stands Sixteen Feet even, He weighs over five seven hundred pounds of muscle. To a normal human or even a Fishmen his body streutcture would make them intimidated by him. His neck is thick, and veiny, his forearms are long and thick of muscle. He has a Eight pack.  He has a Rigged Jaw Line, His skin is Blueish Red, and his eyes are sea ocean blue. His eyes brows are naturally Straight.
   


   The Past
   


   Main Traits: Cunning, Cold Blooded Manipulative, Loyal,
   Likes: Fighting, training, teaching, lecturing, Women, Food, Cooking
   Dislikes: Children, infants, Ants, Spiders, Chips, Ice Cream, People disloyal people.
   Unique laugh:MAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHH!

   Hometown: East Blue, Orange Town.
   Personality: While Makaze is not fighting or doing anything of that nature. Makaze is often seen teaching others willing to learn varius things. He loves to teach despite his cold heart. He loves to pass down knowledge to those who do not have it. It's mostly because he hates uneducated folks. He is extremely strict and firm when it comes to training as well. And if someone acts stupid. He will most likely call them out on it. If and only if he knows he can beat them in a fight otherwise he would hold his tongue. Makaze knows when to pick and choose his battles and he isn't egoistical but he is a narcissistic. He adores himself, his talents, and his body and how he came to be and obtained said talents. It doesn't make him better then others. But it does make him better in general looks.

Aside from that. He is very loyal to the pirates crew he is in. However, sometimes he has conflicts inside him saying. He should do this and that instead of what the Captain states, because the outcome would be more logical and reasonable approach rather then on impulse. But then again he puts those thoughts away and holds his tongue. He has an extreme hate for children and babies. He loathes their existence. They are brats, whiny, uneducated dead weights. Who are incapable of change and learning unless forced and should be all dead and go to the void of hell. His general opinion on that. He hates men being one himself. because again his a Narcissist he believes his looks is above all men and women and classifies himself as a God among mortals.

Combat Wise:

Now while he is in combat. Things are a little different. You would expect a man of Makaze's size and body to go ahead and change head first into the battle like a Hot head right? Incorrect it's quite the opposite. Makaze is extremely intellectal and would stand back and observed the strengths and weaknesses of others. Then strike. It makes boring to others, but makes him gauge out the abilities of others so he can strike and act better on the subject. However, if he is forced to strike first. He will do so. Only to preserve himself.

   
History:


Last edited by Makaze on Tue Aug 20, 2019 10:20 pm; edited 1 time in total
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3900

Makaze The Destroyer Empty Re: Makaze The Destroyer

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Aug 20, 2019 3:16 pm
Please look up what an epithet is (or see approved bios for examples).

Also, please remove this bit from your history:

"During the time, Magnus Had been Fighting Three Admirals, Ten Vice Admirals and twenty Rear Admirals. It was a Three Day fight, Magnus was finally Slain in combat. Makaze still assumes Magnus is alive. And had never given the Knowledge that his Father had been killed in A Battle."

Having an unnamed Rear Admiral in your history is okay, but having vice admirals or admirals is not.
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Makaze The Destroyer Empty Re: Makaze The Destroyer

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Aug 20, 2019 10:22 pm
Fixed.
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3900

Makaze The Destroyer Empty Re: Makaze The Destroyer

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Aug 20, 2019 10:30 pm
Approved!

Makaze wrote:

   
Makaze.
   


   
Makaze The Destroyer 423fc72160110255a2b60a8d691778ed

   Basic Character Information
   


   Starting Bonus: The Force is Strong | [Starting Bonus Roll]

   First Name: Makaze
   Middle Name/Initial: Mugggard
   Last Name: Dzora
   Epithet: Iron Fist
   Age:70(Appears in early twenties.)
   Gender: Male
   Race: Half Giant Half Fishmen
   Faction:Pirate
   Profession: First Mate: He has a vast Experience being a First Mate. In logistics, Navigation, Leadership skills, Mathematics, Vast Knowledge of History, knowledge of the sea, and varies of other things.
Master Marital Artist: He has over forty years of Mastery over Fishmen Karate, Boxing, Mauy Thai, Basic Understanding of Black Leg Style, Wrestling, and Tae Kwon Do.
Swordsmanship: Five Years of training in Swordsmanship. But he is not a master at it. He knows how to use the Sword With enough Understanding of techniques to Use it at a Adapt Level.
Assassination: Two Years of Training only. Nothing Special. But he can craft minor Potions and Trinkets, and knows how to kill a person in more ways then one with any tool.
Cook: Has an Adapt Knowledge of cooking, He has cooked for three years.
   


   Physical Appearance
   


   Height: 16 feet tall
   Weight:

   Hair Style: Straight
   Hair Color: Blonde
   Eye Color: Blue
   Scars: None
   Clothing and Accessories: Simple clothing, Boots, Socks, Pants, Boxers, Shirt, Jacket, However, if given the certain special event. He could be seen wearing different types of clothing that is Seasonal. For example, Less Clothing during summer, a Winter cloak or clothing for Winter, Etc.

   Description: Makaze stands Sixteen Feet even, He weighs over five seven hundred pounds of muscle. To a normal human or even a Fishmen his body streutcture would make them intimidated by him. His neck is thick, and veiny, his forearms are long and thick of muscle. He has a Eight pack.  He has a Rigged Jaw Line, His skin is Blueish Red, and his eyes are sea ocean blue. His eyes brows are naturally Straight.
   


   The Past
   


   Main Traits: Cunning, Cold Blooded Manipulative, Loyal,
   Likes: Fighting, training, teaching, lecturing, Women, Food, Cooking
   Dislikes: Children, infants, Ants, Spiders, Chips, Ice Cream, People disloyal people.
   Unique laugh:MAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHH!

   Hometown: East Blue, Orange Town.
   Personality: While Makaze is not fighting or doing anything of that nature. Makaze is often seen teaching others willing to learn varius things. He loves to teach despite his cold heart. He loves to pass down knowledge to those who do not have it. It's mostly because he hates uneducated folks. He is extremely strict and firm when it comes to training as well. And if someone acts stupid. He will most likely call them out on it. If and only if he knows he can beat them in a fight otherwise he would hold his tongue. Makaze knows when to pick and choose his battles and he isn't egoistical but he is a narcissistic. He adores himself, his talents, and his body and how he came to be and obtained said talents. It doesn't make him better then others. But it does make him better in general looks.

Aside from that. He is very loyal to the pirates crew he is in. However, sometimes he has conflicts inside him saying. He should do this and that instead of what the Captain states, because the outcome would be more logical and reasonable approach rather then on impulse. But then again he puts those thoughts away and holds his tongue. He has an extreme hate for children and babies. He loathes their existence. They are brats, whiny, uneducated dead weights. Who are incapable of change and learning unless forced and should be all dead and go to the void of hell. His general opinion on that. He hates men being one himself. because again his a Narcissist he believes his looks is above all men and women and classifies himself as a God among mortals.

Combat Wise:

Now while he is in combat. Things are a little different. You would expect a man of Makaze's size and body to go ahead and change head first into the battle like a Hot head right? Incorrect it's quite the opposite. Makaze is extremely intellectal and would stand back and observed the strengths and weaknesses of others. Then strike. It makes boring to others, but makes him gauge out the abilities of others so he can strike and act better on the subject. However, if he is forced to strike first. He will do so. Only to preserve himself.

   
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