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Makaze
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Age : 0
Haki Level : 2
Hitpoints (HP) : 140
Attack (ATK) : 40
Defense (DEF) : 40
Reflex (RX) : 40
Willpower (WP) : 80
Level : 1
Experience Points : 100
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Makaze The Destroyer Empty Makaze The Destroyer

on Mon Aug 19, 2019 11:03 pm

   
Makaze.
   


   
Makaze The Destroyer 423fc72160110255a2b60a8d691778ed

   Basic Character Information
   


   Starting Bonus: The Force is Strong | [Starting Bonus Roll]

   First Name: Makaze
   Middle Name/Initial: Mugggard
   Last Name: Dzora
   Epithet: Iron Fist
   Age:70(Appears in early twenties.)
   Gender: Male
   Race: Half Giant Half Fishmen
   Faction:Pirate
   Profession: First Mate: He has a vast Experience being a First Mate. In logistics, Navigation, Leadership skills, Mathematics, Vast Knowledge of History, knowledge of the sea, and varies of other things.
Master Marital Artist: He has over forty years of Mastery over Fishmen Karate, Boxing, Mauy Thai, Basic Understanding of Black Leg Style, Wrestling, and Tae Kwon Do.
Swordsmanship: Five Years of training in Swordsmanship. But he is not a master at it. He knows how to use the Sword With enough Understanding of techniques to Use it at a Adapt Level.
Assassination: Two Years of Training only. Nothing Special. But he can craft minor Potions and Trinkets, and knows how to kill a person in more ways then one with any tool.
Cook: Has an Adapt Knowledge of cooking, He has cooked for three years.
   


   Physical Appearance
   


   Height: 16 feet tall
   Weight:

   Hair Style: Straight
   Hair Color: Blonde
   Eye Color: Blue
   Scars: None
   Clothing and Accessories: Simple clothing, Boots, Socks, Pants, Boxers, Shirt, Jacket, However, if given the certain special event. He could be seen wearing different types of clothing that is Seasonal. For example, Less Clothing during summer, a Winter cloak or clothing for Winter, Etc.

   Description: Makaze stands Sixteen Feet even, He weighs over five seven hundred pounds of muscle. To a normal human or even a Fishmen his body streutcture would make them intimidated by him. His neck is thick, and veiny, his forearms are long and thick of muscle. He has a Eight pack.  He has a Rigged Jaw Line, His skin is Blueish Red, and his eyes are sea ocean blue. His eyes brows are naturally Straight.
   


   The Past
   


   Main Traits: Cunning, Cold Blooded Manipulative, Loyal,
   Likes: Fighting, training, teaching, lecturing, Women, Food, Cooking
   Dislikes: Children, infants, Ants, Spiders, Chips, Ice Cream, People disloyal people.
   Unique laugh:MAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHH!

   Hometown: East Blue, Orange Town.
   Personality: While Makaze is not fighting or doing anything of that nature. Makaze is often seen teaching others willing to learn varius things. He loves to teach despite his cold heart. He loves to pass down knowledge to those who do not have it. It's mostly because he hates uneducated folks. He is extremely strict and firm when it comes to training as well. And if someone acts stupid. He will most likely call them out on it. If and only if he knows he can beat them in a fight otherwise he would hold his tongue. Makaze knows when to pick and choose his battles and he isn't egoistical but he is a narcissistic. He adores himself, his talents, and his body and how he came to be and obtained said talents. It doesn't make him better then others. But it does make him better in general looks.

Aside from that. He is very loyal to the pirates crew he is in. However, sometimes he has conflicts inside him saying. He should do this and that instead of what the Captain states, because the outcome would be more logical and reasonable approach rather then on impulse. But then again he puts those thoughts away and holds his tongue. He has an extreme hate for children and babies. He loathes their existence. They are brats, whiny, uneducated dead weights. Who are incapable of change and learning unless forced and should be all dead and go to the void of hell. His general opinion on that. He hates men being one himself. because again his a Narcissist he believes his looks is above all men and women and classifies himself as a God among mortals.

Combat Wise:

Now while he is in combat. Things are a little different. You would expect a man of Makaze's size and body to go ahead and change head first into the battle like a Hot head right? Incorrect it's quite the opposite. Makaze is extremely intellectal and would stand back and observed the strengths and weaknesses of others. Then strike. It makes boring to others, but makes him gauge out the abilities of others so he can strike and act better on the subject. However, if he is forced to strike first. He will do so. Only to preserve himself.

   
History:

   Origin:
Makaze was born as a Half Giant and Half Fishmen. His Father was a Giant, his mother was a Saw Shark Fishmen. His mother was a Worthy Pirate holding a Bounty of Ten Million within the East Blue. His Father on the Other hand. Was a Pirate from the Grandline whom had visited the New World. With a Bounty of Five Hundred Million. And a good Pirate Crew. They Met together in the East Blue. When the the Half Giant. Magus went to Orange town, to visit a dying friend. Their he met a Doctor who was Makaze's Mother, Naomi. After Magus friend had passed, Naomi, made Magus vent to her, and then bedded him the next week and many more. You see, Naomi's goal was to find a strong mate, She used The Giants vulnerability to her advantage and hence the Birth of Makaze was made.

The decision between who get's to keep Makaze:
When Makaze was Born, Magus wanted to take Makaze from his mother, But Naomi. Decided on a split deal. If he can give her Ten years to train the Boy. For the sea, in ten years time, Magus can take him with him to Sail and adventure. While Magus hesitated he was convinced again after sex. With that being said. Magus left and promised he would return within ten years time to grab the boy with him.

Ten Years time: During the ten years. The Pirate Naomi and Mother of Makaze. Had been training the Boy in Fishermen Karate, he had a Third Degree Black Belt in fishermen karate by age of Five. She also taught him how to fight accordingly. Her being a Expert Hunter and Doctor. She taught him how to survive and create poisons and trinkets to dismembered, disseminated people, and death. She also taught him Boxing, And other forms of martial arts. Swordsmanship and some basic cooking. History and Math. During this time, Naomi's Bounty was also increased to Twenty Million when She had Killed Two Captain marines. When they threaten to Kill Makaze. Because Makaze nearly killed one of the captains son's for looking him wrong. But way Naomi's Killed the two. was Gruesome, she completely torn their insides out and made them explode.from the insides via a poison.

For ten years all Makaze did was train. Attempting to Master everything that was taught to him by Mother Dearest. His Mother meant everything to him. Their Bond was amazing.

Ten Year Mark, Death of Mother, and the Coming the teaching of Magnus:

Some time during age Eight and Ten. Naomi's Bounty Increased Further from Twenty Million to One Hundred Forty Million. When she nearly killed off a Marine Outpost with poison. In the Drinks of the Marines. This Warranted her the Bounty. She was forced to retreat back to Orange town with her Son. Knowing that their was a Target on her back. She hid in Orange Town For a year and a half waiting for Magus to return. However, Magnus did not return till Naomi was dead.

When the time Came. Naomi exited the Hide out with Makaze. and was Greeted by a Marine Rear Adminal. Who told her either come with him or her Son will be Killed. This was the man's way of Justice. By her killing his men she would witness the same Faith given to her son. However. She refused. And the two of them fought for Twelve Long Hours, before the Human Coated his Sword with Armament Haki, and pieced her Heart. While they fought Magus was nearing Orange Town. A Cry would be Heard, as Makaze Screamed in Agony, Having Lost the only person he deemed as a Mother. And being without a Father. Makaze Had unlocked both Observation Haki and Armament Haki,  And Charged at him, Head first. He leaped from his location, As the Rear Admiral Went to stab Makaze in the heart, Makaze tilted his body to the side while air bournce, having precedence his movements, when he was within his range of foresight, and grabbed the head of the human, his hands coated in dark black as he snapped the neck of the Admiral.  Before Makaze could be shot for dead. Magus arrived and Murdered the Marines in a single blow.  He told Makaze he was his father. And at the time, Makaze refused to believe him. But Makaze still came with Magus when Magus offered to show him the world.

Sixty Years of Training, and Learning: For Sixty Years, Makaze trained non stop. He was training in Haki, Marital Arts, Swordsmanship, Cooking, Gaining Leadership Skills While on Board of Magus Ship. And was learning from Makaze. Makaze over time grew colder and more reserved and careful. He begun to hate certain things, and was willing to teach others. At age Seventy, Makaze went back to his home time. It when was when Makaze returned. That he felt more unnerved because this was where his mother had died. During the time, Magnus had fought a bunch of Rear Adminals. It was a Three Day fight, Magnus was finally Slain in combat. Makaze still assumes Magnus is alive. And had never given the Knowledge that his Father had been killed in A Battle.
   


Last edited by Makaze on Tue Aug 20, 2019 10:20 pm; edited 1 time in total
Gray
Makaze The Destroyer Cool-t10
Tracker

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Height : 10'1"/ 307 cm
Weight : 1043 lbs / 473 kg
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Hitpoints (HP) : 700
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Shop Discount : -20%
Berries Berries : 25,000,000,000
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Makaze The Destroyer Empty Re: Makaze The Destroyer

on Tue Aug 20, 2019 3:16 pm
Please look up what an epithet is (or see approved bios for examples).

Also, please remove this bit from your history:

"During the time, Magnus Had been Fighting Three Admirals, Ten Vice Admirals and twenty Rear Admirals. It was a Three Day fight, Magnus was finally Slain in combat. Makaze still assumes Magnus is alive. And had never given the Knowledge that his Father had been killed in A Battle."

Having an unnamed Rear Admiral in your history is okay, but having vice admirals or admirals is not.

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Makaze
Tracker

Age : 0
Haki Level : 2
Hitpoints (HP) : 140
Attack (ATK) : 40
Defense (DEF) : 40
Reflex (RX) : 40
Willpower (WP) : 80
Level : 1
Experience Points : 100
Berries Berries : 50,000
Posts : 19
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Makaze The Destroyer Empty Re: Makaze The Destroyer

on Tue Aug 20, 2019 10:22 pm
Fixed.
Gray
Makaze The Destroyer Cool-t10
Tracker

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Height : 10'1"/ 307 cm
Weight : 1043 lbs / 473 kg
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Specialization : All
Haki Level : 9
Hitpoints (HP) : 700
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Shop Discount : -20%
Berries Berries : 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[freakofnature]][[childofdestiny]]
[[punchoutguru]][[windcaller]]
Posts : 1913
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Makaze The Destroyer Empty Re: Makaze The Destroyer

on Tue Aug 20, 2019 10:30 pm
Approved!

@Makaze wrote:

   
Makaze.
   


   
Makaze The Destroyer 423fc72160110255a2b60a8d691778ed

   Basic Character Information
   


   Starting Bonus: The Force is Strong | [Starting Bonus Roll]

   First Name: Makaze
   Middle Name/Initial: Mugggard
   Last Name: Dzora
   Epithet: Iron Fist
   Age:70(Appears in early twenties.)
   Gender: Male
   Race: Half Giant Half Fishmen
   Faction:Pirate
   Profession: First Mate: He has a vast Experience being a First Mate. In logistics, Navigation, Leadership skills, Mathematics, Vast Knowledge of History, knowledge of the sea, and varies of other things.
Master Marital Artist: He has over forty years of Mastery over Fishmen Karate, Boxing, Mauy Thai, Basic Understanding of Black Leg Style, Wrestling, and Tae Kwon Do.
Swordsmanship: Five Years of training in Swordsmanship. But he is not a master at it. He knows how to use the Sword With enough Understanding of techniques to Use it at a Adapt Level.
Assassination: Two Years of Training only. Nothing Special. But he can craft minor Potions and Trinkets, and knows how to kill a person in more ways then one with any tool.
Cook: Has an Adapt Knowledge of cooking, He has cooked for three years.
   


   Physical Appearance
   


   Height: 16 feet tall
   Weight:

   Hair Style: Straight
   Hair Color: Blonde
   Eye Color: Blue
   Scars: None
   Clothing and Accessories: Simple clothing, Boots, Socks, Pants, Boxers, Shirt, Jacket, However, if given the certain special event. He could be seen wearing different types of clothing that is Seasonal. For example, Less Clothing during summer, a Winter cloak or clothing for Winter, Etc.

   Description: Makaze stands Sixteen Feet even, He weighs over five seven hundred pounds of muscle. To a normal human or even a Fishmen his body streutcture would make them intimidated by him. His neck is thick, and veiny, his forearms are long and thick of muscle. He has a Eight pack.  He has a Rigged Jaw Line, His skin is Blueish Red, and his eyes are sea ocean blue. His eyes brows are naturally Straight.
   


   The Past
   


   Main Traits: Cunning, Cold Blooded Manipulative, Loyal,
   Likes: Fighting, training, teaching, lecturing, Women, Food, Cooking
   Dislikes: Children, infants, Ants, Spiders, Chips, Ice Cream, People disloyal people.
   Unique laugh:MAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHH!

   Hometown: East Blue, Orange Town.
   Personality: While Makaze is not fighting or doing anything of that nature. Makaze is often seen teaching others willing to learn varius things. He loves to teach despite his cold heart. He loves to pass down knowledge to those who do not have it. It's mostly because he hates uneducated folks. He is extremely strict and firm when it comes to training as well. And if someone acts stupid. He will most likely call them out on it. If and only if he knows he can beat them in a fight otherwise he would hold his tongue. Makaze knows when to pick and choose his battles and he isn't egoistical but he is a narcissistic. He adores himself, his talents, and his body and how he came to be and obtained said talents. It doesn't make him better then others. But it does make him better in general looks.

Aside from that. He is very loyal to the pirates crew he is in. However, sometimes he has conflicts inside him saying. He should do this and that instead of what the Captain states, because the outcome would be more logical and reasonable approach rather then on impulse. But then again he puts those thoughts away and holds his tongue. He has an extreme hate for children and babies. He loathes their existence. They are brats, whiny, uneducated dead weights. Who are incapable of change and learning unless forced and should be all dead and go to the void of hell. His general opinion on that. He hates men being one himself. because again his a Narcissist he believes his looks is above all men and women and classifies himself as a God among mortals.

Combat Wise:

Now while he is in combat. Things are a little different. You would expect a man of Makaze's size and body to go ahead and change head first into the battle like a Hot head right? Incorrect it's quite the opposite. Makaze is extremely intellectal and would stand back and observed the strengths and weaknesses of others. Then strike. It makes boring to others, but makes him gauge out the abilities of others so he can strike and act better on the subject. However, if he is forced to strike first. He will do so. Only to preserve himself.

   
History:

   Origin:
Makaze was born as a Half Giant and Half Fishmen. His Father was a Giant, his mother was a Saw Shark Fishmen. His mother was a Worthy Pirate holding a Bounty of Ten Million within the East Blue. His Father on the Other hand. Was a Pirate from the Grandline whom had visited the New World. With a Bounty of Five Hundred Million. And a good Pirate Crew. They Met together in the East Blue. When the the Half Giant. Magus went to Orange town, to visit a dying friend. Their he met a Doctor who was Makaze's Mother, Naomi. After Magus friend had passed, Naomi, made Magus vent to her, and then bedded him the next week and many more. You see, Naomi's goal was to find a strong mate, She used The Giants vulnerability to her advantage and hence the Birth of Makaze was made.

The decision between who get's to keep Makaze:
When Makaze was Born, Magus wanted to take Makaze from his mother, But Naomi. Decided on a split deal. If he can give her Ten years to train the Boy. For the sea, in ten years time, Magus can take him with him to Sail and adventure. While Magus hesitated he was convinced again after sex. With that being said. Magus left and promised he would return within ten years time to grab the boy with him.

Ten Years time: During the ten years. The Pirate Naomi and Mother of Makaze. Had been training the Boy in Fishermen Karate, he had a Third Degree Black Belt in fishermen karate by age of Five. She also taught him how to fight accordingly. Her being a Expert Hunter and Doctor. She taught him how to survive and create poisons and trinkets to dismembered, disseminated people, and death. She also taught him Boxing, And other forms of martial arts. Swordsmanship and some basic cooking. History and Math. During this time, Naomi's Bounty was also increased to Twenty Million when She had Killed Two Captain marines. When they threaten to Kill Makaze. Because Makaze nearly killed one of the captains son's for looking him wrong. But way Naomi's Killed the two. was Gruesome, she completely torn their insides out and made them explode.from the insides via a poison.

For ten years all Makaze did was train. Attempting to Master everything that was taught to him by Mother Dearest. His Mother meant everything to him. Their Bond was amazing.

Ten Year Mark, Death of Mother, and the Coming the teaching of Magnus:

Some time during age Eight and Ten. Naomi's Bounty Increased Further from Twenty Million to One Hundred Forty Million. When she nearly killed off a Marine Outpost with poison. In the Drinks of the Marines. This Warranted her the Bounty. She was forced to retreat back to Orange town with her Son. Knowing that their was a Target on her back. She hid in Orange Town For a year and a half waiting for Magus to return. However, Magnus did not return till Naomi was dead.

When the time Came. Naomi exited the Hide out with Makaze. and was Greeted by a Marine Rear Adminal. Who told her either come with him or her Son will be Killed. This was the man's way of Justice. By her killing his men she would witness the same Faith given to her son. However. She refused. And the two of them fought for Twelve Long Hours, before the Human Coated his Sword with Armament Haki, and pieced her Heart. While they fought Magus was nearing Orange Town. A Cry would be Heard, as Makaze Screamed in Agony, Having Lost the only person he deemed as a Mother. And being without a Father. Makaze Had unlocked both Observation Haki and Armament Haki,  And Charged at him, Head first. He leaped from his location, As the Rear Admiral Went to stab Makaze in the heart, Makaze tilted his body to the side while air bournce, having precedence his movements, when he was within his range of foresight, and grabbed the head of the human, his hands coated in dark black as he snapped the neck of the Admiral.  Before Makaze could be shot for dead. Magus arrived and Murdered the Marines in a single blow.  He told Makaze he was his father. And at the time, Makaze refused to believe him. But Makaze still came with Magus when Magus offered to show him the world.

Sixty Years of Training, and Learning: For Sixty Years, Makaze trained non stop. He was training in Haki, Marital Arts, Swordsmanship, Cooking, Gaining Leadership Skills While on Board of Magus Ship. And was learning from Makaze. Makaze over time grew colder and more reserved and careful. He begun to hate certain things, and was willing to teach others. At age Seventy, Makaze went back to his home time. It when was when Makaze returned. That he felt more unnerved because this was where his mother had died. During the time, Magnus had fought a bunch of Rear Adminals. It was a Three Day fight, Magnus was finally Slain in combat. Makaze still assumes Magnus is alive. And had never given the Knowledge that his Father had been killed in A Battle.
   

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