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The Power of Heat and Lightning [Completed] Empty The Power of Heat and Lightning [Completed]

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Sep 01, 2019 1:17 am

Atsu Atsu no Mi


Devil Fruit: Atsu Atsu no Mi | Heat-Heat Fruit
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance:
Devil Fruit Image:

Devil Fruit Encyclopedia wrote:"The Atsu Atsu no Mi looks like a pear or stemmed fruit of orange color. The fruit is about the size of a softball with weird markings and patterns on it. The swirls cover the entire fruit from top to bottom. The dark orange fruit has a dark colored stem as well."

Devil Fruit Description: The Atsu Atsu no mi is a paramecia type Devil Fruit that turns the user into a 10,000 degrees cesium Human. This Devil Fruits main power is to allow the user to manipulate and generate massive amounts of heat. The title of 10,000 degrees human is rather literal in this fruit, because the heat that can be created from the users body can reach temperatures of 18,000 degrees fahrenheit. The heat can be used in various different ways, like letting the heat radiate off his body to inflict damage on his opponents, or he could manifest it as dark red energy that he can infused with his weapons or unnamed strikes. On top of it all, This ability allows René to bear through various temperatures changes and extremes.

Devil Fruit Encyclopedia wrote:"The major strength of the fruit, as demonstrated by Don Accino, is that its user gains the ability to produce and control vastly more amounts of heat than can be normally produced by a regular person. This also has the added side-effect of causing steam to emanate from their body. The Devil Fruit user can use this heat to melt anything they touch. The user is also able to use it to either protect themselves from physical blows or attack opponents with various heat based attacks. Because the user has the ability to regulate their body temperature, they are able to withstand varying temperatures of extreme magnitude, from being surrounded by the freezing cold of a winter island to being completely immersed in molten lava, which not even the Mera Mera no Mi permits. (Being completely immersed in molten lava can kill you in other ways than just heat. It can suffocate you and get into your orifices.)"


Fighting Style: Burugebanketto | Bul-Gae's Banquet
Weapon Utilization: Bō Staff | Spear | Lance | Halberd  
Description: Bul-Gae’s Banquet is a Bo Staff, Lance, Spear, and Halberd style that revolves around wearing down the opponent to the point of easily overwhelming them with force. The style revolves heavily around strong strikes, in quick succession getting in close to the opponents, and mixing up patterns to make their movements harder to read. The style can incorporate various abilities and additional powers, like Atsu Atsu no Mi Heat Abilities and The Signature Mink Tribe Style of Electro.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:


  • ~The Blessing of Ishum I (Devil Fruit) {Passive}: The Atsu Atsu no mi makes the user immune to all forms of heat and cold, because they can control their own temperatures to counteract the heat or cold. Against named techniques, so long as the attacker’s attack stat is below 50% that of the Atsu Atsu  eater’s defense, the attacks will have no effect.
  • ~The Blessing of Ishum II (Devil Fruit) {Passive}: The Atsu Atsu user can use heat in a couple different forms, like radiating heat from the body and creating red orbs of heat that can be used to severely burn the opponent. These forms will be further detailed and created via techniques.
  • ~The Steamy Gifts of Ishum (Devil Fruit) {Toggled Passive}: René has developed a way to gain a little bit of an advantage when it comes to his fighting style and Devil Fruit abilities. He can toggle on and off an ability to radiate an immense amount of heat from his body that will show up as dark red steam. The steam will increase René's defense by 20% while decreasing his attack by 20%.
  • ~Electro Enhanced Reflexes (Electro) {Toggled Passive}: René, being half Mink, has gained the ability to use electro. From this ability, René has developed a way to use the electro lightning to boost his reflexes for a cost to his attack. (+20% to Reflex & -20% to Attack)




Techniques (2 AoEs | 3 HTs | 2 MTs | 4 LTs)



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:





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The Conqueror / Black Fist
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Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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The Power of Heat and Lightning [Completed] Empty Re: The Power of Heat and Lightning [Completed]

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Sep 08, 2019 6:48 pm
[ Thanks for the hard work! Just a few comments (marked in red) that I'd like you to address. ]



René Manchester wrote:

Atsu Atsu no Mi


Devil Fruit: Atsu Atsu no Mi | Heat-Heat Fruit
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance:
Devil Fruit Image:

Devil Fruit Encyclopedia wrote:"The Atsu Atsu no Mi looks like a pear or stemmed fruit of orange color. The fruit is about the size of a softball with weird markings and patterns on it. The swirls cover the entire fruit from top to bottom. The dark orange fruit has a dark colored stem as well."

Devil Fruit Description: The Atsu Atsu no mi is a paramecia type Devil Fruit that turns the user into a 10,000 degrees cesium Human. This Devil Fruits main power is to allow the user to manipulate and generate massive amounts of heat. The title of 10,000 degrees human is rather literal in this fruit, because the heat that can be created from the users body can reach temperatures of 18,000 degrees fahrenheit. The heat can be used in various different ways, like letting the heat radiate off his body to inflict damage on his opponents, or he could manifest it as dark red energy that he can infused with his weapons or unnamed strikes. On top of it all, This ability allows René to bear through various temperatures changes and extremes.

Devil Fruit Encyclopedia wrote:"The major strength of the fruit, as demonstrated by Don Accino, is that its user gains the ability to produce and control vastly more amounts of heat than can be normally produced by a regular person. This also has the added side-effect of causing steam to emanate from their body. The Devil Fruit user can use this heat to melt anything they touch. The user is also able to use it to either protect themselves from physical blows or attack opponents with various heat based attacks. Because the user has the ability to regulate their body temperature, they are able to withstand varying temperatures of extreme magnitude, from being surrounded by the freezing cold of a winter island to being completely immersed in molten lava, which not even the Mera Mera no Mi permits. [ Being completely immersed in molten lava can kill you in other ways than just heat. It can suffocate you and get into your orifices. ]"


Fighting Style: Burugebanketto | Bul-Gae's Banquet
Weapon Utilization: Bō Staff | Spear | Lance | Halberd
Description: Bul-Gae’s Banquet is a Bo Staff, Lance, Spear, and Halberd style that revolves around wearing down the opponent to the point of easily overwhelming them with force. The style revolves heavily around strong strikes, in quick succession getting in close to the opponents, and mixing up patterns to make their movements harder to read. The style can incorporate various abilities and additional powers, like Atsu Atsu no Mi Heat Abilities and The Signature Mink Tribe Style of Electro.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:


  • ~The Blessing of Ishum I (Devil Fruit) {Passive}: The Atsu Atsu no mi makes the user immune to all forms of heat and cold, because they can control their own temperatures to counteract the heat or cold. Against named techniques, so long as the attacker’s attack stat is below 50% that of the Atsu Atsu eater’s defense, the attacks will have no effect.
  • ~The Blessing of Ishum II (Devil Fruit) {Passive}: The Atsu Atsu user can use heat in a couple different forms, like radiating heat from the body and creating red orbs of heat that can be used to severely burn the opponent. These forms will be further detailed and created via techniques.
  • ~The Ishum Oven (Devil Fruit) {Toggled Passive}: René has developed a way to gain a little bit of an advantage when it comes to his fighting style and Devil Fruit abilities. He can toggle on and off an ability to radiate an immense amount of heat from his body while he is fighting in close quarter combat with the opponent or multiple opponents. This heat will radiate out from his body 5m with him at the center. This heat wave will decrease the opponents reflexes by +20% [ Toggles can only affect you or your allies. They cannot affect your opponents directly. ], but René will take a hit to his attack and defense for this debut on the opponent. (-10% to Attack) & (-10 to Defense)
  • ~Electro Enhanced Reflexes (Electro) {Toggled Passive}: René, being half Mink, has gained the ability to use electro. From this ability, René has developed a way to use the electro lightning to boost his reflexes for a cost to his attack. (+20% to Reflex & -20% to Attack)




Techniques (2 AoEs | 3 HTs | 2 MTs | 4 LTs)



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:



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The Power of Heat and Lightning [Completed] Empty Re: The Power of Heat and Lightning [Completed]

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Sep 08, 2019 6:57 pm
Thank you! IT should be good now!
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Posts : 3900

The Power of Heat and Lightning [Completed] Empty Re: The Power of Heat and Lightning [Completed]

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Sep 08, 2019 7:00 pm
Approved!

René Manchester wrote:

Atsu Atsu no Mi


Devil Fruit: Atsu Atsu no Mi | Heat-Heat Fruit
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance:
Devil Fruit Image:

Devil Fruit Encyclopedia wrote:"The Atsu Atsu no Mi looks like a pear or stemmed fruit of orange color. The fruit is about the size of a softball with weird markings and patterns on it. The swirls cover the entire fruit from top to bottom. The dark orange fruit has a dark colored stem as well."

Devil Fruit Description: The Atsu Atsu no mi is a paramecia type Devil Fruit that turns the user into a 10,000 degrees cesium Human. This Devil Fruits main power is to allow the user to manipulate and generate massive amounts of heat. The title of 10,000 degrees human is rather literal in this fruit, because the heat that can be created from the users body can reach temperatures of 18,000 degrees fahrenheit. The heat can be used in various different ways, like letting the heat radiate off his body to inflict damage on his opponents, or he could manifest it as dark red energy that he can infused with his weapons or unnamed strikes. On top of it all, This ability allows René to bear through various temperatures changes and extremes.

Devil Fruit Encyclopedia wrote:"The major strength of the fruit, as demonstrated by Don Accino, is that its user gains the ability to produce and control vastly more amounts of heat than can be normally produced by a regular person. This also has the added side-effect of causing steam to emanate from their body. The Devil Fruit user can use this heat to melt anything they touch. The user is also able to use it to either protect themselves from physical blows or attack opponents with various heat based attacks. Because the user has the ability to regulate their body temperature, they are able to withstand varying temperatures of extreme magnitude, from being surrounded by the freezing cold of a winter island to being completely immersed in molten lava, which not even the Mera Mera no Mi permits. (Being completely immersed in molten lava can kill you in other ways than just heat. It can suffocate you and get into your orifices.)"


Fighting Style: Burugebanketto | Bul-Gae's Banquet
Weapon Utilization: Bō Staff | Spear | Lance | Halberd  
Description: Bul-Gae’s Banquet is a Bo Staff, Lance, Spear, and Halberd style that revolves around wearing down the opponent to the point of easily overwhelming them with force. The style revolves heavily around strong strikes, in quick succession getting in close to the opponents, and mixing up patterns to make their movements harder to read. The style can incorporate various abilities and additional powers, like Atsu Atsu no Mi Heat Abilities and The Signature Mink Tribe Style of Electro.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:


  • ~The Blessing of Ishum I (Devil Fruit) {Passive}: The Atsu Atsu no mi makes the user immune to all forms of heat and cold, because they can control their own temperatures to counteract the heat or cold. Against named techniques, so long as the attacker’s attack stat is below 50% that of the Atsu Atsu  eater’s defense, the attacks will have no effect.
  • ~The Blessing of Ishum II (Devil Fruit) {Passive}: The Atsu Atsu user can use heat in a couple different forms, like radiating heat from the body and creating red orbs of heat that can be used to severely burn the opponent. These forms will be further detailed and created via techniques.
  • ~The Steamy Gifts of Ishum (Devil Fruit) {Toggled Passive}: René has developed a way to gain a little bit of an advantage when it comes to his fighting style and Devil Fruit abilities. He can toggle on and off an ability to radiate an immense amount of heat from his body that will show up as dark red steam. The steam will increase René's defense by 20% while decreasing his attack by 20%.
  • ~Electro Enhanced Reflexes (Electro) {Toggled Passive}: René, being half Mink, has gained the ability to use electro. From this ability, René has developed a way to use the electro lightning to boost his reflexes for a cost to his attack. (+20% to Reflex & -20% to Attack)




Techniques (2 AoEs | 3 HTs | 2 MTs | 4 LTs)



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:



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