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Ghost AnDha Shell Empty Ghost AnDha Shell

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Sep 17, 2019 1:10 pm

Ghost AnDha Shell

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Basic Character Information

Starting Bonus: Super Rookie
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First Name: Ghost
Middle Name/Initial: AnDha
Last Name: Shell
Epithet: The Grim Reaper Of The Marine
Age: 25
Race: Human
Faction: marine
Profession: Markemenship/ Doctor

Physical Appearance

Height: 6" 3
Weight: 190 Lbs

Hair Style: Laid back wolf tail down to middle of back.
Hair Color:Dark Brown
Eye Color: Hazel Brown
Clothing and Accessories:
His uniform is custom made. As he has a long back jacket to go over the blue marine suit. His uniform is that of cotton and silk made. Being all blue with the white on the inside.

Description: Ghost is tall within the six feet height class. Not as tall as most people in the world. He has a bright pretty smile with nearly perfect teeth. He has facial hair that he keeps well-groomed. Matter of fact he is well-groomed from head to toe. He keeps his rifle on his right side. More or less he keeps up his clothes are always neat and he wears only the best of it all. He wears his hat instead of his marine hat and wears his jacket on top of his marine jacket.

The Past

Main Traits:Always calm and flamboyant
*True Justice
*Lots Of money
Unique laugh: WooooooooWooooo

Hometown: He was born by the river of Jordan so no home town.
Personality: In Battle Ghost is a very laid back person. He will calmly look at all viewpoints as to how to win a fight. He will always try to talk his way out of a fight if he could. But this is because he truly does. Not like to fight. He will not kill not unless it is the only way to end things.

Out of battle, he is always seen flirting with the ladies or is sleeping. He is a guy who loves to stay groomed. So he will be at a spa on most days. Although he is not foolish at all. His laid back personal would lead one to believe it. All in all, he is a very chilled person in and out of battle. He is also very outwitted as well.


Last edited by Ghost on Sun Sep 22, 2019 6:38 pm; edited 5 times in total
The Conqueror / Black Fist
Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : "The Conqueror" / "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000

Posts : 3735

Ghost AnDha Shell Empty Re: Ghost AnDha Shell

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Sep 17, 2019 7:02 pm
Your starting bonus roll is not logia. Please correct this (and fix the link to your starting roll). Also, not sure you saw my comment to your face claim, but, you'll need to pick a different FC, since Kyoraku is already claimed.

Lastly, your history cannot mention any of the important world positions. That is, you cannot have had a grandmother that was an Admiral or a Vice Admiral.

Ghost AnDha Shell Empty Re: Ghost AnDha Shell

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Sep 17, 2019 10:02 pm
That's should do it
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