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This post has in-line assessment comments.Thu Oct 17, 2019 8:10 am

Storm Forged Style


Fighting Style: Storm Forged Style
Weapon Utilization: Although the user can use any weapon in conjunction with this style, But it’s primarily used with either fists or hammers.
Description: a style created from the user's pent up rage and wrath, the user can lash out with the storm of their vengeance and wrath, leaving a trail of destruction behind the user, in the wake of their combat.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Storm Forged [Toggled]: by gathering the storm of their wrath, the user gains +10% Attack at the cost of 10% of their defense, as metal is strengthened by the process of forging it is also easier to shape and bend while being forged



Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:


AoE Techniques:






Last edited by Mysti on Thu Oct 17, 2019 3:12 pm; edited 1 time in total
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3885

Storm Forged Style Empty Re: Storm Forged Style

This post has in-line assessment comments.Thu Oct 17, 2019 9:08 am
Very well done fighting style! I only caught one mistake! DoTs have a fixed duration of 5 turns, and it does not add to the technique's cooldown like stat morph durations do. The "duration:" field for techniques is only meant to be filled out stat morphs or the stat morph portion of hybrids.

For your HT DoT, Conductive Strike, the cooldown should be 5 turns and the duration should be left blank.

Thank you!

Mysti wrote:

Storm Forged Style


Fighting Style: Storm Forged Style
Weapon Utilization: Although the user can use any weapon in conjunction with this style, But it’s primarily used with either fists or hammers.
Description: a style created from the user's pent up rage and wrath, the user can lash out with the storm of their vengeance and wrath, leaving a trail of destruction behind the user, in the wake of their combat.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Storm Forged [Toggled]: by gathering the storm of their wrath, the user gains +10% Attack at the cost of 10% of their defense, as metal is strengthened by the process of forging it is also easier to shape and bend while being forged



Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:


AoE Techniques:




Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3885

Storm Forged Style Empty Re: Storm Forged Style

This post has in-line assessment comments.Thu Oct 17, 2019 3:14 pm
Approved! Enjoy storm-forging the crap outta people.

Mysti wrote:

Storm Forged Style


Fighting Style: Storm Forged Style
Weapon Utilization: Although the user can use any weapon in conjunction with this style, But it’s primarily used with either fists or hammers.
Description: a style created from the user's pent up rage and wrath, the user can lash out with the storm of their vengeance and wrath, leaving a trail of destruction behind the user, in the wake of their combat.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Storm Forged [Toggled]: by gathering the storm of their wrath, the user gains +10% Attack at the cost of 10% of their defense, as metal is strengthened by the process of forging it is also easier to shape and bend while being forged



Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:


AoE Techniques:




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