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Swirl Swirl Fruit (Uzu Uzu no Mi)  Empty Swirl Swirl Fruit (Uzu Uzu no Mi)

This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Nov 18, 2019 7:30 am

Uzu Uzu no Mi (Swirl Swirl Fruit)
Swirl Swirl Fruit (Uzu Uzu no Mi)  350?cb=20191115064934


Devil Fruit: Uzu Uzu no Mi (Swirl Swirl Fruit)
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance: The Swirl Swirl fruit has the appearance of an apple. It is white of color and has numerous swirls on it which are blue of color.
Devil Fruit Description: The Swirl Swirl fruit gives the ability to create and manipulate swirls of various sizes, shape and composition. This can be used in various ways and even on abstract concepts such as air. One of the strongest things about this devil fruit is that when used on himself he can launch attacks without accelerating or jumping et cetera that normally require jumping. For example, spinning himself out of nowhere gives him the element of surprise against his opponents by launching an attack out of nowhere with the added speed that comes with spinning where normally one would require to start spinning first until someone reaches a certain speed Bang can do that immediately.


Fighting Style: Unnamed fighting style.
Weapon Utilization: N/A
Description: Bang fights in an unpredictable yet very simple way. He utilizes his body as he sees fit but doesn't use complex martial arts or anything like that.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:

Swirl (Passive):

Burner Stage (Toggled Passive):

T3:




Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:





Last edited by Bang on Tue Nov 19, 2019 8:40 am; edited 4 times in total
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Swirl Swirl Fruit (Uzu Uzu no Mi)  Empty Re: Swirl Swirl Fruit (Uzu Uzu no Mi)

This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Nov 18, 2019 10:33 pm
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Bang wrote:

Uzu Uzu no Mi (Swirl Swirl Fruit)
Swirl Swirl Fruit (Uzu Uzu no Mi)  350?cb=20191115064934


Devil Fruit: Uzu Uzu no Mi (Swirl Swirl Fruit)
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance: The Swirl Swirl fruit has the appearance of an apple. It is white of color and has numerous swirls on it which are blue of color.
Devil Fruit Description: The Swirl Swirl fruit gives the ability to create and manipulate swirls of various sizes, shape and composition. This can be used in various ways and even on abstract concepts such as air. One of the strongest things about this devil fruit is that when used on himself he can launch attacks without accelerating or jumping et cetera that normally require jumping. For example, spinning himself out of nowhere gives him the element of surprise against his opponents by launching an attack out of nowhere with the added speed that comes with spinning where normally one would require to start spinning first until someone reaches a certain speed Bang can do that immediately.


Fighting Style: Unnamed fighting style.
Weapon Utilization: N/A
Description: Bang fights in an unpredictable yet very simple way. He utilizes his body as he sees fit but doesn't use complex martial arts or anything like that.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Swirling Presence:




Techniques


(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)

Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:




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Swirl Swirl Fruit (Uzu Uzu no Mi)  Empty Re: Swirl Swirl Fruit (Uzu Uzu no Mi)

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Nov 19, 2019 7:32 am
Hello there. Thanks for helping me out with my passive! I've added two new ones aswell.
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Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3900

Swirl Swirl Fruit (Uzu Uzu no Mi)  Empty Re: Swirl Swirl Fruit (Uzu Uzu no Mi)

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Nov 19, 2019 8:08 am
I'm afraid I'll have to ask you to remove both passive abilities that you added since your last grading. Passives are mostly there for RP flavour. We do not allow mechanical effects for passives, and your fruit seems to be forcing elemental immunities for the sake of having some. Please remove. Thank you.

Bang wrote:

Uzu Uzu no Mi (Swirl Swirl Fruit)
Swirl Swirl Fruit (Uzu Uzu no Mi)  350?cb=20191115064934


Devil Fruit: Uzu Uzu no Mi (Swirl Swirl Fruit)
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance: The Swirl Swirl fruit has the appearance of an apple. It is white of color and has numerous swirls on it which are blue of color.
Devil Fruit Description: The Swirl Swirl fruit gives the ability to create and manipulate swirls of various sizes, shape and composition. This can be used in various ways and even on abstract concepts such as air. One of the strongest things about this devil fruit is that when used on himself he can launch attacks without accelerating or jumping et cetera that normally require jumping. For example, spinning himself out of nowhere gives him the element of surprise against his opponents by launching an attack out of nowhere with the added speed that comes with spinning where normally one would require to start spinning first until someone reaches a certain speed Bang can do that immediately.


Fighting Style: Unnamed fighting style.
Weapon Utilization: N/A
Description: Bang fights in an unpredictable yet very simple way. He utilizes his body as he sees fit but doesn't use complex martial arts or anything like that.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:


Degrees:
Rejection:
T3:




Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:



Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3900

Swirl Swirl Fruit (Uzu Uzu no Mi)  Empty Re: Swirl Swirl Fruit (Uzu Uzu no Mi)

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Nov 19, 2019 8:44 am
Approved!

Bang wrote:

Uzu Uzu no Mi (Swirl Swirl Fruit)
Swirl Swirl Fruit (Uzu Uzu no Mi)  350?cb=20191115064934


Devil Fruit: Uzu Uzu no Mi (Swirl Swirl Fruit)
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance: The Swirl Swirl fruit has the appearance of an apple. It is white of color and has numerous swirls on it which are blue of color.
Devil Fruit Description: The Swirl Swirl fruit gives the ability to create and manipulate swirls of various sizes, shape and composition. This can be used in various ways and even on abstract concepts such as air. One of the strongest things about this devil fruit is that when used on himself he can launch attacks without accelerating or jumping et cetera that normally require jumping. For example, spinning himself out of nowhere gives him the element of surprise against his opponents by launching an attack out of nowhere with the added speed that comes with spinning where normally one would require to start spinning first until someone reaches a certain speed Bang can do that immediately.


Fighting Style: Unnamed fighting style.
Weapon Utilization: N/A
Description: Bang fights in an unpredictable yet very simple way. He utilizes his body as he sees fit but doesn't use complex martial arts or anything like that.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:

Swirl (Passive):

Burner Stage (Toggled Passive):

T3:




Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:



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