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This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Mar 23, 2020 5:12 pm

Replacement Utamaru


Replacement Utamaru Z578djO

Basic Character Information


Starting Bonus: Jackpot!

First Name: Replacement
Middle Name/Initial: R
Last Name: Utamaru
Epithet: Agent R
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction: Cipher Pol
Profession: Cipher Pol Agent


Physical Appearance


Height: 5'6
Weight: 156

Hair Style: Bowl-Cut with Spiked portions
Hair Color: Green
Eye Color: Green
Scars: None
Clothing and Accessories: Agent R is always seen in his usual Project R uniform. His outfit consists of a black collared shirt with a giant red R designed onto the shirt in which the collar, the hem of his sleeves and the bottom of his shirt has a yellow lining. He wears black pants with a white utility belt around his waist, his gloves and boots were white with orange stripes on the ends with a black apple cap to complete his uniform.

Description: Utamaru is physically fit, but looks about average in terms of muscle mass.  Standing around 5'6, this green haired man has this feel about him that makes him seem just as bad as the criminals that he chases after.
Utamaru has a round face with a pointed chin, a pointed nose, and narrow thin lips. He has green eyes with sharp eyebrows that make him look even more shady and shoulder length green hair cut in the fashion of a bowl cut
He has slanted shoulders with arms that look weak. A lean torso with a straight waist, broad hips, and toned legs.


The Past


Main Traits: Sly, Commanding and Arrogant.
Likes:
The Authority (Name Of Ship)
Power
Technology
Clams
Onions
★Money!
★ Weapons of all kinds!
★Thrills!
★Bullying Weak Civilians
★★Praise from his Supiroers
★★The World Government

Dislikes:
Revolutionaries/ Terrorist
Losing a fight
Losing claimed Turf
Failing his missions and disappointing The World Government


Unique laugh: HO! HOHOHOHOHO!

Hometown: TEQUILA WOLF

Personality: Utamaru despite being a low ranked agent believes himself to be better than everyone who isn't a part of the Cipher Pol organization. He often bosses around others around his rank to impress his commanding officers by showing him demonstrating his leadership. Since Utamaru's division is made to take over land to expand the government's power, spy on criminals  that seek to tear down the foundation of the government, watch for materials that the world government can use, and to capture/terminate threats to the government he seems to take his job seriously. Utamaru doesn't question the decisions of his superiors, his overall goal is to receive praise from the agent's above him and possibly rank up to be more than just mere grunt. He addresses his superiors whether it be Marine or Cipher Pol as Sir no matter the gender. Being raised under the supervision of the Cipher Pol he has an almost unshakable loyalty to the world government and will do anything to be able to hear a "Good Job" from his superiors. Almost like a son trying to gain the approval of his father.

History:


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Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3900

Replacement Utamaru Empty Re: Replacement Utamaru

This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Mar 23, 2020 6:34 pm
I'm afraid I'll have to ask you to change the part about the devil fruit being artificial. You're doing some lore-changing things here. Especially the part where his hair was used. We don't really know how devil fruits are artificially created in canon yet. All artificial fruits so far have been of the Zoan-type too, which throws another monkey-wrench in your plans. Sorry, mate. Also, "army" can be translated as "gun" in Japanese too. Why not call it the Gun Gun no Mi? It actually fits better. I don't like devil fruits that exceed the two-syllable naming scheme. Lastly, you have to claim the devil fruit first before you put it in your history.

Utamaru wrote:

Replacement Utamaru


Replacement Utamaru Z578djO

Basic Character Information


Starting Bonus: Jackpot!

First Name: Replacement
Middle Name/Initial: R
Last Name: Utamaru
Epithet: Agent R
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction: Cipher Pol
Profession: Cipher Pol Agent


Physical Appearance


Height: 5'6
Weight: 156

Hair Style: Bowl-Cut with Spiked portions
Hair Color: Green
Eye Color: Green
Scars: None
Clothing and Accessories: Agent R is always seen in his usual Project R uniform. His outfit consists of a black collared shirt with a giant red R designed onto the shirt in which the collar, the hem of his sleeves and the bottom of his shirt has a yellow lining. He wears black pants with a white utility belt around his waist, his gloves and boots were white with orange stripes on the ends with a black apple cap to complete his uniform.

Description: Utamaru is physically fit, but looks about average in terms of muscle mass.  Standing around 5'6, this green haired man has this feel about him that makes him seem just as bad as the criminals that he chases after.
Utamaru has a round face with a pointed chin, a pointed nose, and narrow thin lips. He has green eyes with sharp eyebrows that make him look even more shady and shoulder length green hair cut in the fashion of a bowl cut
He has slanted shoulders with arms that look weak. A lean torso with a straight waist, broad hips, and toned legs.


The Past


Main Traits: Sly, Commanding and Arrogant.
Likes:
The Authority (Name Of Ship)
Power
Technology
Clams
Onions
★Money!
★ Weapons of all kinds!
★Thrills!
★Bullying Weak Civilians
★★Praise from his Supiroers
★★The World Government

Dislikes:
Revolutionaries/ Terrorist
Losing a fight
Losing claimed Turf
Failing his missions and disappointing The World Government


Unique laugh: HO! HOHOHOHOHO!

Hometown: TEQUILA WOLF

Personality: Utamaru despite being a low ranked agent believes himself to be better than everyone who isn't a part of the Cipher Pol organization. He often bosses around others around his rank to impress his commanding officers by showing him demonstrating his leadership. Since Utamaru's division is made to take over land to expand the government's power, spy on criminals  that seek to tear down the foundation of the government, watch for materials that the world government can use, and to capture/terminate threats to the government he seems to take his job seriously. Utamaru doesn't question the decisions of his superiors, his overall goal is to receive praise from the agent's above him and possibly rank up to be more than just mere grunt. He addresses his superiors whether it be Marine or Cipher Pol as Sir no matter the gender. Being raised under the supervision of the Cipher Pol he has an almost unshakable loyalty to the world government and will do anything to be able to hear a "Good Job" from his superiors. Almost like a son trying to gain the approval of his father.

History:
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3900

Replacement Utamaru Empty Re: Replacement Utamaru

This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Mar 25, 2020 12:21 pm
Approved!

Utamaru wrote:

Replacement Utamaru


Replacement Utamaru Z578djO

Basic Character Information


Starting Bonus: Jackpot!

First Name: Replacement
Middle Name/Initial: R
Last Name: Utamaru
Epithet: Agent R
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction: Cipher Pol
Profession: Cipher Pol Agent


Physical Appearance


Height: 5'6
Weight: 156

Hair Style: Bowl-Cut with Spiked portions
Hair Color: Green
Eye Color: Green
Scars: None
Clothing and Accessories: Agent R is always seen in his usual Project R uniform. His outfit consists of a black collared shirt with a giant red R designed onto the shirt in which the collar, the hem of his sleeves and the bottom of his shirt has a yellow lining. He wears black pants with a white utility belt around his waist, his gloves and boots were white with orange stripes on the ends with a black apple cap to complete his uniform.

Description: Utamaru is physically fit, but looks about average in terms of muscle mass.  Standing around 5'6, this green haired man has this feel about him that makes him seem just as bad as the criminals that he chases after.
Utamaru has a round face with a pointed chin, a pointed nose, and narrow thin lips. He has green eyes with sharp eyebrows that make him look even more shady and shoulder length green hair cut in the fashion of a bowl cut
He has slanted shoulders with arms that look weak. A lean torso with a straight waist, broad hips, and toned legs.


The Past


Main Traits: Sly, Commanding and Arrogant.
Likes:
The Authority (Name Of Ship)
Power
Technology
Clams
Onions
★Money!
★ Weapons of all kinds!
★Thrills!
★Bullying Weak Civilians
★★Praise from his Supiroers
★★The World Government

Dislikes:
Revolutionaries/ Terrorist
Losing a fight
Losing claimed Turf
Failing his missions and disappointing The World Government


Unique laugh: HO! HOHOHOHOHO!

Hometown: TEQUILA WOLF

Personality: Utamaru despite being a low ranked agent believes himself to be better than everyone who isn't a part of the Cipher Pol organization. He often bosses around others around his rank to impress his commanding officers by showing him demonstrating his leadership. Since Utamaru's division is made to take over land to expand the government's power, spy on criminals  that seek to tear down the foundation of the government, watch for materials that the world government can use, and to capture/terminate threats to the government he seems to take his job seriously. Utamaru doesn't question the decisions of his superiors, his overall goal is to receive praise from the agent's above him and possibly rank up to be more than just mere grunt. He addresses his superiors whether it be Marine or Cipher Pol as Sir no matter the gender. Being raised under the supervision of the Cipher Pol he has an almost unshakable loyalty to the world government and will do anything to be able to hear a "Good Job" from his superiors. Almost like a son trying to gain the approval of his father.

History:

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