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Alaric C. Hawke  Empty Alaric C. Hawke

This post has assessment comments.Sat Jan 09, 2021 1:37 pm

Alaric C. Hawke


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Basic Character Information


Starting Bonus: Hard Boiled! | [Starting Bonus Roll]

First Name: Alaric
Middle Name/Initial: C
Last Name: Hawke
Epithet: N/A
Age: 12/25/1809
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction: Misc
Profession: butler/Assassin Formerly an apprentice butler for eight years. Alaric/Rick hawke did the necessary duties befitting the butler. From sewing up torn trousers and jackets to tending to the estate of the master whom he served. Ever be it the more dirty jobs were to tend to the master's orders of assassinating rivals. He served faithfully for many years until h he had learned everything he had and left the employee of his master and became a freelance assassin.


Physical Appearance


Height: 6'3
Weight: 170 pounds

Hair Style: long kept in a tightly bound ponytail.
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Depending on his personality His original sadistic personality has a pair of Gold for his original personality however his primary controlling personality has a pair of silver/grey colorization with slitted pupils.
Scars: Multiple laceration marks across the chest and stomach.
Clothing and Accessories: Alaric typically is seen wearing a  pair of black dress pants, black long-sleeved button-down dress shirt with a Black tie, and a matching black vest. keep his hai typically boun in a tight ponytail when the personality Rick is in control. However, when the original personality takes control he removes the hair bind and lets it be free and wild and unkempt. Due to an eye stigmatism within his right eye, He wears a monocle with a bridge nose piece that rests on his nose to top it off he wears a pair of black fingerless gloves with metal rivets over the knuckles.

Description: Alaric is a slender-looking man though he may not look it he is quite strong. He has medium-length black hair and silver-colored eyes. He stands at a height of six-foot-three inches and weighs a hundred and eighty pounds. Alaric has a lean, muscular physique. He has some muscle to his body but most people just think he looks like a weakling but underneath his shirt, His chest and abdomen are the only things that show that he is really physically in great shape. Though he is not the specimen of perfection. He was born with a small conclave chest the size of a spoon could fit into. Due to his unique personality, His eyes have two sets of colors when one personality is in control which is easy to differentiate. His original personality the primary Has a pair of gold color to them. His father often said that it often reminded him of a gold prairie bathed in the afterglow of a sunset filled with warmth. However, his secondary personality has a pair of Grey almost silver-like color tinge to them with a slit iris.


The Past


Main Traits: Richard Personality Analytical, Loyal, Prideful / Original personality deceitful, impulsive, chaotic, bloodthirsty Shared traits Ruthless, cunning, prideful
Likes: Fighting/ suffering of his opponent, freedom /  Money, Tea, music
Dislikes:  Feeling useless, being cheated,  Celestial dragons, slavery
Unique laugh: Alaricks unique laughter differentiates from his secondary personality when Alaric is on control he has a" Ni hi he he" laugh while Ric is in control his laughter sounds like " hie hie he"

Hometown: Louge Town
Personality: In his youth, he appeared to be belligerent, short-tempered, foul-mouthed, arrogant he's fighting one on one against an opponent he will not accept any one's aid. Even if the threat of death is upon him he will not accept help. He had an almost sadistic view when it came to battle always relishing in the pain he causes to his opponent. Taking his time with his opponent's torture was a favored past time of his. Slowly cutting away at their flesh bit by bit ever staying away from vital areas this personality shows up when he needs to switch to close range to mid-range combat.  Alaric has an insatiable bloodlust as well with some nihilistic ideologies such as believing that laws and order are meaningless constructions. He's not a psychopath far from it he is a  Sociopath. He feels guilt albeit it is feeble, but it doesn't stop his more sadistic nature from taking over. He has no real qualms about friendship or making bonds with people. in fact, using people to get what he wants is more accurate to him and he tends to play the part of a friend. Though there is a light to his darkness however dim. Alaric has only shown genuine affection to two individuals and those are his parents.

However when his secondary personality formed things changed drastically for him the personality known as rick enjoys sitting down and taking his time with things, especially when telling stories or playing an instrument.  He has a more refined taste in life. There is a good side though to him he is respectful to the dead and he treats those he deems as friends with the respect that they deserve. Rick' is usually a calm and soft-spoken person who was trained to speak when spoken to and at the appropriate moments to speak up In short The polar opposite of Alaric. However, there are some traits that have blended between the two. Such as  Alaric's strong desire to win his fights and to win them in what he views as a legitimate manner. Alaric has a strong sense of loyalty and will do whatever he can to help out a friend in need even if it will cost his life.  During his School years,  his personality changed drastically due to their methods of discipline there for the personality known as Ric word to come to the surface is the word manners.

Now he has become the perfect model of a  Butler.  He appears to have mellowed out a great deal externally, Even after receiving the powers of his devil fruit he remains to have a  cold precision rather than wildly attacking.Alaric like everyone else gets angry and upset though there are a few certain things that will really get under his skin. Such as disrespecting his father and family or hurting one of his friends. If a person should dare harm one of his friends he will do what they did to his friend in kind.

History:


Last edited by Alaric C. Hawke on Mon Feb 15, 2021 6:42 pm; edited 6 times in total
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror / Black Fist
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 10
[[haoasc]][[busoasc]][[kenbunasc]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 750
Attack (ATK) : 800
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 715
Willpower (WP) : 650
Level : 100
Prestige : 8
Experience Points : 18000
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Berries : [ber] 25,000,000,000
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Alaric C. Hawke  Empty Re: Alaric C. Hawke

This post has assessment comments.Sun Feb 14, 2021 1:24 am
It's been brought to my attention that you have copy-pasted chunks of Walter C. Dornez's appearance and personality descriptions from the Hellsing wiki for your bio. You must rewrite these bits.

Your history seems to be copy-pasted from here: https://wodsouls.freeforums.net/thread/5143/bio-android-neah

I assume that is your character, but, I still need you to rewrite your history to something new.

Also, you must replace the Age field with a Birthdate field as per the new bio template.

Alaric C. Hawke wrote:

Alaric C. Hawke


Alaric C. Hawke  Hqdefault

Basic Character Information


Starting Bonus: Hard Boiled! | [Starting Bonus Roll]

First Name: Alaric
Middle Name/Initial: C
Last Name: Hawke
Epithet: N/A
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction: Misc
Profession: butler/Assassin Formerly an apprentice butler for eight years. Alaric/Rick hawke did the necessary duties befitting the butler. From sewing up torn trousers and jackets to tending to the estate of the master whom he served. Ever be it the more dirty jobs were to tend to the master's orders of assassinating rivals. He served faithfully for many years until h he had learned everything he had and left the employee of his master and became a freelance assassin.


Physical Appearance


Height: 6'3
Weight: 170 pounds

Hair Style: long kept in a tightly bound ponytail.
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Depending on his personality His original sadistic personality has a pair of Gold for his original personality however his primary controlling personality has a pair of silver/grey colorization with slitted pupils.
Scars: Multiple laceration marks across the chest.
Clothing and Accessories: Alaric typically is seen wearing a  pair of black dress pants, a white dress shirt with a Black tie, with a black vest. keep his hair long in a tightly bound ponytail. His eyes are red (blue in the TV series), and he wears a monocle that rests on his nose bridge chains hang around the waist and pockets of his pants, To top it off he wears a pair of black fingerless gloves with metal rivets over the knuckles.

Description: Alaric is a slender-looking man though he may not look it he is quite strong. He has medium-length black hair and silver-colored eyes. He stands at a height of six-foot-three inches and weighs a hundred and eighty pounds. Alaric has a lean, muscular physique. He has some muscle to his body but most people just think he looks like a weakling but underneath his shirt, His chest and abdomen are the only things that show that he is really physically in great shape. Though he is not the specimen of perfection. He was born with a small conclave chest the size of a spoon could fit into. Due to his unique personality, His eyes have two sets of colors when one personality is in control which is easy to differentiate. His original personality the primary Has a pair of gold color to them. His father often said that it often reminded him of a gold prairie bathed in the afterglow of a sunset filled with warmth. However, his secondary personality has a pair of Grey almost silver like color tinge to them with a slit iris.


The Past


Main Traits:
Likes: Fighting/ suffering of his opponent, freedom /  Money, Tea, music
Dislikes:  Feeling useless, being cheated,  Celestial dragons, slavery
Unique laugh: Alaricks unique laughter differentiates from his secondary personality when Alaric is on control he has a" Ni he he" laugh while Ric is in control his laughter sounds like " hie hie he"

Hometown: Louge Town
Personality: In his youth, he appeared to be belligerent, short-tempered, foul-mouthed, arrogant he's fighting one on one against an opponent he will not accept any one's aid. Even if the threat of death is upon him he will not accept help. He had an almost sadistic view when it came to battle always relishing in the pain he caused his opponent. Taking his time with his opponent's torture was a favored past time of his. Slowly cutting away at there flesh bit by bit ever staying away from vital areas this personality shows up when he needs to switch to close range to mid-range combat..  

However when his secondary personality formed things changed drastically for him the personality known as rick enjoys sitting down and taking his time with things, especially when telling stories or playing an instrument.  He has a more refined taste in life. Some would compare him to the epitome of a perfect butler. diligent,  kind, loyal dutiful, and intelligent with a dry, ironic sense of humor and a merciless disposition towards those he deems .there is a good side though to him he is respectful to the dead. Alaric's secondary personality is usually the calm and soft-spoken person who always knows where his place should belong. Alaric has a strong desire to win his fights and to win them in what he views as a legitimate manner. Alaric has a strong sense of loyalty and will do whatever he can to help out a friend in need even if it will cost his life.  During his School years,  his personality changed drastically due to their methods of discipline there for the personality known as Ric word to come to the surface is the word manners.

Now he has become the perfect model of a  Butler.  He appears to have mellowed out a great deal externally, Even after receiving the powers of his devil fruit he remains to have a  cold precision rather than wildly attacking.Alaric like everyone else gets angry and upset though there are a few certain things that will really get under his skin. Such as disrespecting his father and family or hurting one of his friends. If a person should dare harm one of his friends he will do what they did to his friend in kind.

History:
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror / Black Fist
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 10
[[haoasc]][[busoasc]][[kenbunasc]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 750
Attack (ATK) : 800
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 715
Willpower (WP) : 650
Level : 100
Prestige : 8
Experience Points : 18000
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Berries : [ber] 25,000,000,000
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Alaric C. Hawke  Empty Re: Alaric C. Hawke

This post has assessment comments.Mon Feb 15, 2021 3:15 pm
You forgot to fill out the main traits.

Alaric C. Hawke wrote:

Alaric C. Hawke


Alaric C. Hawke  Hqdefault

Basic Character Information


Starting Bonus: Hard Boiled! | [Starting Bonus Roll]

First Name: Alaric
Middle Name/Initial: C
Last Name: Hawke
Epithet: N/A
Age: 12/25/1809
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction: Misc
Profession: butler/Assassin Formerly an apprentice butler for eight years. Alaric/Rick hawke did the necessary duties befitting the butler. From sewing up torn trousers and jackets to tending to the estate of the master whom he served. Ever be it the more dirty jobs were to tend to the master's orders of assassinating rivals. He served faithfully for many years until h he had learned everything he had and left the employee of his master and became a freelance assassin.


Physical Appearance


Height: 6'3
Weight: 170 pounds

Hair Style: long kept in a tightly bound ponytail.
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Depending on his personality His original sadistic personality has a pair of Gold for his original personality however his primary controlling personality has a pair of silver/grey colorization with slitted pupils.
Scars: Multiple laceration marks across the chest and stomach.
Clothing and Accessories: Alaric typically is seen wearing a  pair of black dress pants, black long-sleeved button-down dress shirt with a Black tie, and a matching black vest. keep his hai typically boun in a tight ponytail when the personality Rick is in control. However, when the original personality takes control he removes the hair bind and lets it be free and wild and unkempt. Due to an eye stigmatism within his right eye, He wears a monocle with a bridge nose piece that rests on his nose to top it off he wears a pair of black fingerless gloves with metal rivets over the knuckles.

Description: Alaric is a slender-looking man though he may not look it he is quite strong. He has medium-length black hair and silver-colored eyes. He stands at a height of six-foot-three inches and weighs a hundred and eighty pounds. Alaric has a lean, muscular physique. He has some muscle to his body but most people just think he looks like a weakling but underneath his shirt, His chest and abdomen are the only things that show that he is really physically in great shape. Though he is not the specimen of perfection. He was born with a small conclave chest the size of a spoon could fit into. Due to his unique personality, His eyes have two sets of colors when one personality is in control which is easy to differentiate. His original personality the primary Has a pair of gold color to them. His father often said that it often reminded him of a gold prairie bathed in the afterglow of a sunset filled with warmth. However, his secondary personality has a pair of Grey almost silver-like color tinge to them with a slit iris.


The Past


Main Traits:
Likes: Fighting/ suffering of his opponent, freedom /  Money, Tea, music
Dislikes:  Feeling useless, being cheated,  Celestial dragons, slavery
Unique laugh: Alaricks unique laughter differentiates from his secondary personality when Alaric is on control he has a" Ni hi he he" laugh while Ric is in control his laughter sounds like " hie hie he"

Hometown: Louge Town
Personality: In his youth, he appeared to be belligerent, short-tempered, foul-mouthed, arrogant he's fighting one on one against an opponent he will not accept any one's aid. Even if the threat of death is upon him he will not accept help. He had an almost sadistic view when it came to battle always relishing in the pain he causes to his opponent. Taking his time with his opponent's torture was a favored past time of his. Slowly cutting away at their flesh bit by bit ever staying away from vital areas this personality shows up when he needs to switch to close range to mid-range combat.  Alaric has an insatiable bloodlust as well with some nihilistic ideologies  such as believing that laws and order are meaningless constructions. He's not a psychopath far from it he is a  Sociopath. He feels guilt albeit it is feeble, but it doesn't stop his more sadistic nature from taking over. He has no real qualms about friendship or making bonds with people. in fact, using people to get what he wants is more accurate to him and he tends to play the part of a friend. Though there is a light to his darkness however dim. Alaric has only shown genuine affection to two individuals and those are his parents.

However when his secondary personality formed things changed drastically for him the personality known as rick enjoys sitting down and taking his time with things, especially when telling stories or playing an instrument.  He has a more refined taste in life. There is a good side though to him he is respectful to the dead and he treats those he deems as friends with the respect that they deserve. Rick' is usually a calm and soft-spoken person who was trained to speak when spoken to and at the appropriate moments to speak up In short The polar opposite of Alaric. However, there are some traits that have blended between the two. Such as  Alaric's strong desire to win his fights and to win them in what he views as a legitimate manner. Alaric has a strong sense of loyalty and will do whatever he can to help out a friend in need even if it will cost his life.  During his School years,  his personality changed drastically due to their methods of discipline there for the personality known as Ric word to come to the surface is the word manners.

Now he has become the perfect model of a  Butler.  He appears to have mellowed out a great deal externally, Even after receiving the powers of his devil fruit he remains to have a  cold precision rather than wildly attacking.Alaric like everyone else gets angry and upset though there are a few certain things that will really get under his skin. Such as disrespecting his father and family or hurting one of his friends. If a person should dare harm one of his friends he will do what they did to his friend in kind.

History:
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror / Black Fist
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 10
[[haoasc]][[busoasc]][[kenbunasc]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 750
Attack (ATK) : 800
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 715
Willpower (WP) : 650
Level : 100
Prestige : 8
Experience Points : 18000
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Berries : [ber] 25,000,000,000
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Alaric C. Hawke  Empty Re: Alaric C. Hawke

This post has assessment comments.Tue Feb 16, 2021 11:26 am
Approved.

Alaric C. Hawke wrote:

Alaric C. Hawke


Alaric C. Hawke  Hqdefault

Basic Character Information


Starting Bonus: Hard Boiled! | [Starting Bonus Roll]

First Name: Alaric
Middle Name/Initial: C
Last Name: Hawke
Epithet: N/A
Age: 12/25/1809
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction: Misc
Profession: butler/Assassin Formerly an apprentice butler for eight years. Alaric/Rick hawke did the necessary duties befitting the butler. From sewing up torn trousers and jackets to tending to the estate of the master whom he served. Ever be it the more dirty jobs were to tend to the master's orders of assassinating rivals. He served faithfully for many years until h he had learned everything he had and left the employee of his master and became a freelance assassin.


Physical Appearance


Height: 6'3
Weight: 170 pounds

Hair Style: long kept in a tightly bound ponytail.
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Depending on his personality His original sadistic personality has a pair of Gold for his original personality however his primary controlling personality has a pair of silver/grey colorization with slitted pupils.
Scars: Multiple laceration marks across the chest and stomach.
Clothing and Accessories: Alaric typically is seen wearing a  pair of black dress pants, black long-sleeved button-down dress shirt with a Black tie, and a matching black vest. keep his hai typically boun in a tight ponytail when the personality Rick is in control. However, when the original personality takes control he removes the hair bind and lets it be free and wild and unkempt. Due to an eye stigmatism within his right eye, He wears a monocle with a bridge nose piece that rests on his nose to top it off he wears a pair of black fingerless gloves with metal rivets over the knuckles.

Description: Alaric is a slender-looking man though he may not look it he is quite strong. He has medium-length black hair and silver-colored eyes. He stands at a height of six-foot-three inches and weighs a hundred and eighty pounds. Alaric has a lean, muscular physique. He has some muscle to his body but most people just think he looks like a weakling but underneath his shirt, His chest and abdomen are the only things that show that he is really physically in great shape. Though he is not the specimen of perfection. He was born with a small conclave chest the size of a spoon could fit into. Due to his unique personality, His eyes have two sets of colors when one personality is in control which is easy to differentiate. His original personality the primary Has a pair of gold color to them. His father often said that it often reminded him of a gold prairie bathed in the afterglow of a sunset filled with warmth. However, his secondary personality has a pair of Grey almost silver-like color tinge to them with a slit iris.


The Past


Main Traits: Richard Personality Analytical, Loyal,  Prideful / Original personality  deceitful, impulsive,  chaotic, bloodthirsty Shared traits Ruthless, cunning, prideful
Likes: Fighting/ suffering of his opponent, freedom /  Money, Tea, music
Dislikes:  Feeling useless, being cheated,  Celestial dragons, slavery
Unique laugh: Alaricks unique laughter differentiates from his secondary personality when Alaric is on control he has a" Ni hi he he" laugh while Ric is in control his laughter sounds like " hie hie he"

Hometown: Louge Town
Personality: In his youth, he appeared to be belligerent, short-tempered, foul-mouthed, arrogant he's fighting one on one against an opponent he will not accept any one's aid. Even if the threat of death is upon him he will not accept help. He had an almost sadistic view when it came to battle always relishing in the pain he causes to his opponent. Taking his time with his opponent's torture was a favored past time of his. Slowly cutting away at their flesh bit by bit ever staying away from vital areas this personality shows up when he needs to switch to close range to mid-range combat.  Alaric has an insatiable bloodlust as well with some nihilistic ideologies such as believing that laws and order are meaningless constructions. He's not a psychopath far from it he is a  Sociopath. He feels guilt albeit it is feeble, but it doesn't stop his more sadistic nature from taking over. He has no real qualms about friendship or making bonds with people. in fact, using people to get what he wants is more accurate to him and he tends to play the part of a friend. Though there is a light to his darkness however dim. Alaric has only shown genuine affection to two individuals and those are his parents.

However when his secondary personality formed things changed drastically for him the personality known as rick enjoys sitting down and taking his time with things, especially when telling stories or playing an instrument.  He has a more refined taste in life. There is a good side though to him he is respectful to the dead and he treats those he deems as friends with the respect that they deserve. Rick' is usually a calm and soft-spoken person who was trained to speak when spoken to and at the appropriate moments to speak up In short The polar opposite of Alaric. However, there are some traits that have blended between the two. Such as  Alaric's strong desire to win his fights and to win them in what he views as a legitimate manner. Alaric has a strong sense of loyalty and will do whatever he can to help out a friend in need even if it will cost his life.  During his School years,  his personality changed drastically due to their methods of discipline there for the personality known as Ric word to come to the surface is the word manners.

Now he has become the perfect model of a  Butler.  He appears to have mellowed out a great deal externally, Even after receiving the powers of his devil fruit he remains to have a  cold precision rather than wildly attacking.Alaric like everyone else gets angry and upset though there are a few certain things that will really get under his skin. Such as disrespecting his father and family or hurting one of his friends. If a person should dare harm one of his friends he will do what they did to his friend in kind.

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