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Magnus Dayne  Empty Magnus Dayne

This post has assessment comments.Sun Jan 31, 2021 2:05 pm

~Magnus Dayne~


Magnus Dayne  0fbf0410

Basic Character Information


Starting Bonus: Child of Destiny  | [Starting Bonus Roll]

First Name: Magnus
Middle Name  | Initial: -
Last Name: Dayne
Epithet | Alias: Enryu
Birthdate: Feb. 17th, 1813
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction: Pirate (Treasure Hunter)
Profession:

  • Jack of All Trades: Magnus learned to read at a young age, but he didn’t fall in love with the skill until he was left on Notice. Growing up in the orphanage, he tried to collect as much knowledge that he could. This lead to him developing a Jack of All Trades. This “profession” section will continue to grow as he tiers up. Magnus collects books that could lead to him developing a new skill, like Navigating, blacksmiths, medical skills, etc. etc.



Physical Appearance


Height: 6'2 ft
Weight: 205 lbs.

Hair Style: Undercut Hair Style with All Sides Shaved
Hair Color: Blonde
Eye Color:  Icy Blue
Scars: None
Clothing and Accessories:

  • Clothing: Magnus has a variety of clothing options he chooses to wear based on the occasion or situation. Aside from the obvious equipment (mask and cape/cloak), Magnus likes to wear neutral colors, like white, black, gray, etc. etc. Under his equipment, Magnus likes to wear a shorts normally but he will don the occasion pair of jeans for more formal appearances. The shirt or upper body clothing doesn’t change much from a simple t-shirt or tank top. Moving onto the footwear, Magnus mixes it up from flip-flops, boots, or simple running shoes.

  • Accessories: The accessories that Magnus wears don’t really vary either. He wears his Family Ring on his right Middle Finger, and he wears different ear rings in his left ear as well. Around his waist, Magnus wears a beli pouch on his right hip. Other than that, Magnus doesn’t really wear much in the sense of accessories.


Description: Magnus is what you would expect a human to look like. He is 6’2 ft tall with a lean build that he got from always leaving on the side streets of Notice. He weights about 205 lbs, which consists of some muscle and a lot to do with his height. He has rather fair skin and he even looks like he would burn easily on the high seas. He has platinum blonde hair with icy blue eyes that would take anyone’s breath away who looked eyes with him. With the top of his hair grown out a bit, Magnus keeps the sides of his head shaved down to give him kind of an edgy style.


The Past


Main Traits:

  • Charismatic
  • Cunning  | Clever
  • Loyal  | Trusting  | Honor
  • Independent  | Chaotic Neutral
  • Cheery  | Joyful  | Adventurous

Likes:

  • Treasure & Beli
  • Alochol
  • Books
  • Spicey Food
  • Fighting  | Sparring  | Brawling

Dislikes:

  • The World Government
  • Candy
  • Lairs  | Traitors
  • Cold Enviroments  | Winter Islands
  • Killing Innocents



Unique laugh: Waitotototo

Hometown: Unknown  | Raised on Notice
Personality:

  • Inside of Combat: Inside of Combat, Magnus is clever and cunning in the way he fights. He uses stealth and his cunning to his advantage in all his fights. Some say he fights like a madman or a crazy person, but he has a methodalical way of performing crazy attacks while still being mindful of the outcome. Hone it comes to showing mercy in his fight, Magnus will continue o fight as long as the opponent enemy can. He doesn’t kill innocents nor does he kill people who can't fight anymore. Often times Magnus uses fighting or sparring to find out the true intention of the person on the other side of the battlefield or weapon.  One might say he becomes a demon when he truly gets into the fight, and he will no doubt finish off the enemy if they have done something truly offensive to him or his crew/family.

  • Outside of Combat: Outside of combat or battle, Magnus seems to be a different person. He is completely joyful, cheerful, and optimistic about everything. He is completely adventurous and will do anything as long as it seems fun or exciting. He is even willing to lay down his life for his friends or crew. Once someone has proven themselves to be loyal, Magnus will go to the ends of the earth for his crew an family. Magnus fully believes that families are made, like he would say that family is way more than blood. There is one undeniable thing about Magnus though. That thing is his unwavering loyalty to his cause and his chances. Magnus can even go as far as to enjoy a meal or party with a presumed enemy. He is fully willing to give people a chance until they cross him in the negative way.


History:


Last edited by Magnus on Sun Jan 31, 2021 6:56 pm; edited 3 times in total
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror / Black Fist
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 10
[[haoasc]][[busoasc]][[kenbunasc]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 750
Attack (ATK) : 800
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 715
Willpower (WP) : 650
Level : 100
Prestige : 8
Experience Points : 18000
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Berries : [ber] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[atkt6_sp]][[deft6]][[rxt6]][[wpt6]]
[[1needlelog]][[3needlelog]]
Posts : 3315
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Magnus Dayne  Empty Re: Magnus Dayne

This post has assessment comments.Sun Jan 31, 2021 6:01 pm
Looks good. Just a few comments:
1. Remove the "completed" tag from the title.
2. Your birthdate makes your character seven years old. May want to fix that.
3. You may not get to edit your bio in the future, so, either remove the unique laugh entirely or come up with one now.


Magnus wrote:

~Magnus Dayne~


Magnus Dayne  0fbf0410

Basic Character Information


Starting Bonus: Child of Destiny  | [Starting Bonus Roll]

First Name: Magnus
Middle Name  | Initial: -
Last Name: Dayne
Epithet | Alias: Enryu
Birthdate: Feb. 17th, 1822
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction: Pirate (Treasure Hunter)
Profession:

  • Jack of All Trades: Magnus learned to read at a young age, but he didn’t fall in love with the skill until he was left on Notice. Growing up in the orphanage, he tried to collect as much knowledge that he could. This lead to him developing a Jack of All Trades. This “profession” section will continue to grow as he tiers up. Magnus collects books that could lead to him developing a new skill, like Navigating, blacksmiths, medical skills, etc. etc.



Physical Appearance


Height: 6'2 ft
Weight: 205 lbs.

Hair Style: Undercut Hair Style with All Sides Shaved
Hair Color: Blonde
Eye Color:  Icy Blue
Scars: None
Clothing and Accessories:

  • Clothing: Magnus has a variety of clothing options he chooses to wear based on the occasion or situation. Aside from the obvious equipment (mask and cape/cloak), Magnus likes to wear neutral colors, like white, black, gray, etc. etc. Under his equipment, Magnus likes to wear a shorts normally but he will don the occasion pair of jeans for more formal appearances. The shirt or upper body clothing doesn’t change much from a simple t-shirt or tank top. Moving onto the footwear, Magnus mixes it up from flip-flops, boots, or simple running shoes.

  • Accessories: The accessories that Magnus wears don’t really vary either. He wears his Family Ring on his right Middle Finger, and he wears different ear rings in his left ear as well. Around his waist, Magnus wears a beli pouch on his right hip. Other than that, Magnus doesn’t really wear much in the sense of accessories.


Description: Magnus is what you would expect a human to look like. He is 6’2 ft tall with a lean build that he got from always leaving on the side streets of Notice. He weights about 205 lbs, which consists of some muscle and a lot to do with his height. He has rather fair skin and he even looks like he would burn easily on the high seas. He has platinum blonde hair with icy blue eyes that would take anyone’s breath away who looked eyes with him. With the top of his hair grown out a bit, Magnus keeps the sides of his head shaved down to give him kind of an edgy style.


The Past


Main Traits:

  • Charismatic
  • Cunning  | Clever
  • Loyal  | Trusting  | Honor
  • Independent  | Chaotic Neutral
  • Cheery  | Joyful  | Adventurous

Likes:

  • Treasure & Beli
  • Alochol
  • Books
  • Spicey Food
  • Fighting  | Sparring  | Brawling

Dislikes:

  • The World Government
  • Candy
  • Lairs  | Traitors
  • Cold Enviroments  | Winter Islands
  • Killing Innocents



Unique laugh: TBD (To Be Decided)

Hometown: Unknown  | Raised on Notice
Personality:

  • Inside of Combat: Inside of Combat, Magnus is clever and cunning in the way he fights. He uses stealth and his cunning to his advantage in all his fights. Some say he fights like a madman or a crazy person, but he has a methodalical way of performing crazy attacks while still being mindful of the outcome. Hone it comes to showing mercy in his fight, Magnus will continue o fight as long as the opponent enemy can. He doesn’t kill innocents nor does he kill people who can't fight anymore. Often times Magnus uses fighting or sparring to find out the true intention of the person on the other side of the battlefield or weapon.  One might say he becomes a demon when he truly gets into the fight, and he will no doubt finish off the enemy if they have done something truly offensive to him or his crew/family.

  • Outside of Combat: Outside of combat or battle, Magnus seems to be a different person. He is completely joyful, cheerful, and optimistic about everything. He is completely adventurous and will do anything as long as it seems fun or exciting. He is even willing to lay down his life for his friends or crew. Once someone has proven themselves to be loyal, Magnus will go to the ends of the earth for his crew an family. Magnus fully believes that families are made, like he would say that family is way more than blood. There is one undeniable thing about Magnus though. That thing is his unwavering loyalty to his cause and his chances. Magnus can even go as far as to enjoy a meal or party with a presumed enemy. He is fully willing to give people a chance until they cross him in the negative way.


History:
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Magnus Dayne  Empty Re: Magnus Dayne

This post has assessment comments.Sun Jan 31, 2021 6:27 pm
Done and done bossman
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror / Black Fist
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 10
[[haoasc]][[busoasc]][[kenbunasc]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 750
Attack (ATK) : 800
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 715
Willpower (WP) : 650
Level : 100
Prestige : 8
Experience Points : 18000
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Berries : [ber] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[atkt6_sp]][[deft6]][[rxt6]][[wpt6]]
[[1needlelog]][[3needlelog]]
Posts : 3315
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Magnus Dayne  Empty Re: Magnus Dayne

This post has assessment comments.Sun Jan 31, 2021 7:07 pm
Approved.
Magnus wrote:

~Magnus Dayne~


Magnus Dayne  0fbf0410

Basic Character Information


Starting Bonus: Child of Destiny  | [Starting Bonus Roll]

First Name: Magnus
Middle Name  | Initial: -
Last Name: Dayne
Epithet | Alias: Enryu
Birthdate: Feb. 17th, 1813
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction: Pirate (Treasure Hunter)
Profession:

  • Jack of All Trades: Magnus learned to read at a young age, but he didn’t fall in love with the skill until he was left on Notice. Growing up in the orphanage, he tried to collect as much knowledge that he could. This lead to him developing a Jack of All Trades. This “profession” section will continue to grow as he tiers up. Magnus collects books that could lead to him developing a new skill, like Navigating, blacksmiths, medical skills, etc. etc.



Physical Appearance


Height: 6'2 ft
Weight: 205 lbs.

Hair Style: Undercut Hair Style with All Sides Shaved
Hair Color: Blonde
Eye Color:  Icy Blue
Scars: None
Clothing and Accessories:

  • Clothing: Magnus has a variety of clothing options he chooses to wear based on the occasion or situation. Aside from the obvious equipment (mask and cape/cloak), Magnus likes to wear neutral colors, like white, black, gray, etc. etc. Under his equipment, Magnus likes to wear a shorts normally but he will don the occasion pair of jeans for more formal appearances. The shirt or upper body clothing doesn’t change much from a simple t-shirt or tank top. Moving onto the footwear, Magnus mixes it up from flip-flops, boots, or simple running shoes.

  • Accessories: The accessories that Magnus wears don’t really vary either. He wears his Family Ring on his right Middle Finger, and he wears different ear rings in his left ear as well. Around his waist, Magnus wears a beli pouch on his right hip. Other than that, Magnus doesn’t really wear much in the sense of accessories.


Description: Magnus is what you would expect a human to look like. He is 6’2 ft tall with a lean build that he got from always leaving on the side streets of Notice. He weights about 205 lbs, which consists of some muscle and a lot to do with his height. He has rather fair skin and he even looks like he would burn easily on the high seas. He has platinum blonde hair with icy blue eyes that would take anyone’s breath away who looked eyes with him. With the top of his hair grown out a bit, Magnus keeps the sides of his head shaved down to give him kind of an edgy style.


The Past


Main Traits:

  • Charismatic
  • Cunning  | Clever
  • Loyal  | Trusting  | Honor
  • Independent  | Chaotic Neutral
  • Cheery  | Joyful  | Adventurous

Likes:

  • Treasure & Beli
  • Alochol
  • Books
  • Spicey Food
  • Fighting  | Sparring  | Brawling

Dislikes:

  • The World Government
  • Candy
  • Lairs  | Traitors
  • Cold Enviroments  | Winter Islands
  • Killing Innocents



Unique laugh: Waitotototo

Hometown: Unknown  | Raised on Notice
Personality:

  • Inside of Combat: Inside of Combat, Magnus is clever and cunning in the way he fights. He uses stealth and his cunning to his advantage in all his fights. Some say he fights like a madman or a crazy person, but he has a methodalical way of performing crazy attacks while still being mindful of the outcome. Hone it comes to showing mercy in his fight, Magnus will continue o fight as long as the opponent enemy can. He doesn’t kill innocents nor does he kill people who can't fight anymore. Often times Magnus uses fighting or sparring to find out the true intention of the person on the other side of the battlefield or weapon.  One might say he becomes a demon when he truly gets into the fight, and he will no doubt finish off the enemy if they have done something truly offensive to him or his crew/family.

  • Outside of Combat: Outside of combat or battle, Magnus seems to be a different person. He is completely joyful, cheerful, and optimistic about everything. He is completely adventurous and will do anything as long as it seems fun or exciting. He is even willing to lay down his life for his friends or crew. Once someone has proven themselves to be loyal, Magnus will go to the ends of the earth for his crew an family. Magnus fully believes that families are made, like he would say that family is way more than blood. There is one undeniable thing about Magnus though. That thing is his unwavering loyalty to his cause and his chances. Magnus can even go as far as to enjoy a meal or party with a presumed enemy. He is fully willing to give people a chance until they cross him in the negative way.


History:
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