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Repulsive Fighting Style Empty Repulsive Fighting Style

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Sep 07, 2021 3:19 pm

Repulsive Fighting Style


Fighting Style: Repulsive Fighting Style
Weapon Utilization: NONE
Description: As a giant, DeVillna possesses a level of strength beyond that of a normal human. She is capable of lifting from large ships to large house's with ease; as well as being able to lift massive boulders and rip trees out of the ground like a carrot. She can easily tear and bend the strongest metals like a piece of tin foil with her bare hands and she has enhanced durability to allow her to fight longer. Offensively, DeVillna is able to send opponents flying several miles away, break bones instantly with a single punch, and relatively overwhelm her opponents with brute force that was equivalent  

Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Enhanced Durability (Toggled): Since DeVillna is much bigger than her enemies she has the ability to withstand damage to a certain extent but because of her size DeVillna isn’t as good at dodging since she is a bigger target. +%20 DEF, -%20 REF

Monstrous Tantrums. (Toggled): This fighting style uses brute force to overwhelm her opponent and to crush her enemies as quickly as possible however due to the power behind each blow she is known to get tired faster due to the energy she exerts behind her monstrous tantrums. +%20 ATK, -%20 WP


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Last edited by DeVillna Repulsa on Wed Sep 08, 2021 12:28 pm; edited 1 time in total
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3879

Repulsive Fighting Style Empty Re: Repulsive Fighting Style

This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Sep 08, 2021 12:20 pm
[ Nice work overall! I just had a handful of comments which are marked in orange in the quote below. ]

DeVillna Repulsa wrote:

Repulsive Fighting Style


Fighting Style: Repulsive Fighting Style
Weapon Utilization: Rings [ I don't see any mention of her using rings anywhere else in the fighting style? Just say "None" here. ]
Description: As a giant, DeVillna possesses a level of strength beyond that of a normal human. She is capable of lifting from large ships to large house's with ease; as well as being able to lift massive boulders and rip trees out of the ground like a carrot. She can easily tear and bend the strongest metals like a piece of tin foil with her bare hands and she has enhanced durability to allow her to fight longer. Offensively, DeVillna is able to send opponents flying several miles away, break bones instantly with a single punch, and relatively overwhelm her opponents with brute force that was equivalent  

Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Enhanced Durability (Toggled): Since DeVillna is much bigger than her enemies she has the ability to withstand damage to a certain extent but because of her size DeVillna isn’t as good at dodging since she is a bigger target. +20 DEF, -20 REF [ Note that these are percentages, not hard values. ]

Monstrous Tantrums. (Toggled): This fighting style uses brute force to overwhelm her opponent and to crush her enemies as quickly as possible however due to the power behind each blow she is known to get tired faster due to the energy she exerts behind her monstrous tantrums. +20 ATK, -20 WP [ Same as above. ]


Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:



Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3879

Repulsive Fighting Style Empty Re: Repulsive Fighting Style

This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Sep 08, 2021 3:18 pm
Thanks for the edits! Your fighting style is approved!

DeVillna Repulsa wrote:

Repulsive Fighting Style


Fighting Style: Repulsive Fighting Style
Weapon Utilization: NONE
Description: As a giant, DeVillna possesses a level of strength beyond that of a normal human. She is capable of lifting from large ships to large house's with ease; as well as being able to lift massive boulders and rip trees out of the ground like a carrot. She can easily tear and bend the strongest metals like a piece of tin foil with her bare hands and she has enhanced durability to allow her to fight longer. Offensively, DeVillna is able to send opponents flying several miles away, break bones instantly with a single punch, and relatively overwhelm her opponents with brute force that was equivalent  

Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Enhanced Durability (Toggled): Since DeVillna is much bigger than her enemies she has the ability to withstand damage to a certain extent but because of her size DeVillna isn’t as good at dodging since she is a bigger target. +%20 DEF, -%20 REF

Monstrous Tantrums. (Toggled): This fighting style uses brute force to overwhelm her opponent and to crush her enemies as quickly as possible however due to the power behind each blow she is known to get tired faster due to the energy she exerts behind her monstrous tantrums. +%20 ATK, -%20 WP


Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:



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