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This post has in-line assessment comments.Fri Mar 25, 2022 5:44 pm

Street Punk's Bravado


Fighting Style: Street Punk's Bravado
Weapon Utilization: Anguish & Agony
Description:

With hardly any formal training, Max relies on quick wit and even faster reflexes to bob, weave and counter opposing attacks. If the past few years have taught him anything, it's that everyone has a soft spot. And if he can't find it, he still has two pistols to create one.

In close quarters, Max uses a combination of fast punches, deflects and good footwork to stay one step ahead.

Once the pistols are taken out, is where Max starts to show some actual skill. The last few months of soltitude have given him time to work on gunspinning, which the young man now controls to an unnatural degree. He can spin both pistols around with great ease simultaneously, whilst still keeping full control of the gun's position. He uses this fancy bar trick to rapidly spin the pistols around in his hands, changing the angle of the gun much faster than normal or switching from a shooting style to a melee style, hitting someone over the head with the grip, in an instant.



Toggled and Passive Abilities:

Cherished Legacy:

Inspired by memories of his loved ones and fueled with determination, Max focuses on what needs to be done to move forward. +20% Willpower, -20% defense

Twinkle Toes:

Adopting an even more agile stance, Max minimizes his time of impact with the ground by bounce-stepping. A technique where he bounces on the balls of his feet, allowing him to change direction and cover ground more quickly. +20% Reflex, -20% attack



Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:







Last edited by Maximillian Rue Beckham on Sun Mar 27, 2022 7:36 am; edited 1 time in total
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3898

Street Punk's Bravado Empty Re: Street Punk's Bravado

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Mar 27, 2022 7:17 am
Great job finishing all aspects of your character so quickly!

I just have two comments I would like you to address before you're all good to go.

1. At level 1, you should have 2 MTs, not 3. I would recommend you remove the Flat Hybrid. In general, I would say your first set of techniques is probably best as mostly Flats. Otherwise, you may find yourself quickly out of useable techniques in combat engagements.
2. I have added a section to the combat guide to clarify the difference between rounds and turns. Essentially, everywhere you've mentioned "turns", you should replace it with rounds.

#2 is not completely necessary, but, it may help you avoid confusion in the future.

Maximillian Rue Beckham wrote:

Street Punk's Bravado


Fighting Style: Street Punk's Bravado
Weapon Utilization: Anguish & Agony
Description:

With hardly any formal training, Max relies on quick wit and even faster reflexes to bob, weave and counter opposing attacks. If the past few years have taught him anything, it's that everyone has a soft spot. And if he can't find it, he still has two pistols to create one.

In close quarters, Max uses a combination of fast punches, deflects and good footwork to stay one step ahead.

Once the pistols are taken out, is where Max starts to show some actual skill. The last few months of soltitude have given him time to work on gunspinning, which the young man now controls to an unnatural degree. He can spin both pistols around with great ease simultaneously, whilst still keeping full control of the gun's position. He uses this fancy bar trick to rapidly spin the pistols around in his hands, changing the angle of the gun much faster than normal or switching from a shooting style to a melee style, hitting someone over the head with the grip, in an instant.



Toggled and Passive Abilities:

Cherished Legacy:

Inspired by memories of his loved ones and fueled with determination, Max focuses on what needs to be done to move forward. +20% Willpower, -20% defense

Twinkle Toes:

Adopting an even more agile stance, Max minimizes his time of impact with the ground by bounce-stepping. A technique where he bounces on the balls of his feet, allowing him to change direction and cover ground more quickly. +20% Reflex, -20% attack



Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:





Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3898

Street Punk's Bravado Empty Re: Street Punk's Bravado

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Mar 27, 2022 7:38 am
Approved!

Maximillian Rue Beckham wrote:

Street Punk's Bravado


Fighting Style: Street Punk's Bravado
Weapon Utilization: Anguish & Agony
Description:

With hardly any formal training, Max relies on quick wit and even faster reflexes to bob, weave and counter opposing attacks. If the past few years have taught him anything, it's that everyone has a soft spot. And if he can't find it, he still has two pistols to create one.

In close quarters, Max uses a combination of fast punches, deflects and good footwork to stay one step ahead.

Once the pistols are taken out, is where Max starts to show some actual skill. The last few months of soltitude have given him time to work on gunspinning, which the young man now controls to an unnatural degree. He can spin both pistols around with great ease simultaneously, whilst still keeping full control of the gun's position. He uses this fancy bar trick to rapidly spin the pistols around in his hands, changing the angle of the gun much faster than normal or switching from a shooting style to a melee style, hitting someone over the head with the grip, in an instant.



Toggled and Passive Abilities:

Cherished Legacy:

Inspired by memories of his loved ones and fueled with determination, Max focuses on what needs to be done to move forward. +20% Willpower, -20% defense

Twinkle Toes:

Adopting an even more agile stance, Max minimizes his time of impact with the ground by bounce-stepping. A technique where he bounces on the balls of his feet, allowing him to change direction and cover ground more quickly. +20% Reflex, -20% attack



Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:





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