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Yūgo
Yūgo
[tracker=/t2328-shirogane-yugo#14061]
Name : Yūgo Shirogane
Age : 23
Height : 5'5
Weight : 185 lbs
Species/Tribe : Human
Faction : Marine
Crew : Guardian Knights
Marine Rank : Seaman Recruit
Devil Fruit : Suigin Suigin no Mi
Quality Score : A
Balance : [ber] 1,625,000
[[untouchable]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 56

[Fighting Style] Suigin Suigin no Mi Empty [Fighting Style] Suigin Suigin no Mi

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Apr 10, 2022 8:32 am

Suigin Suigin no Mi


Devil Fruit: Suigin Suigin no Mi
Devil Fruit Type: Logia

Spoiler:

Fighting Style: Suiginken
Weapon Utilization: Mercury metal solidified in the shape of weaponry when needed.
Description: The fighting style revolves around manipulating mercury both defensively and offensively, but with restraint and in a manner that would most likely resemble paramecia users rather than a Logia under normal circumstances.

His style and technique names are thus separated into two different groups with different suffixes/prefixes depending if he's manipulating Mercury as if to appear a paramecia user: Ten - Chi - Jin for the basics techniques, Getsu - Ka - Setsu for his medium hitters.

Ten/Setsu = Defense
Chi/Ka = Utility
Jin/Getsu = Offensive

Finally, if he's actually fully committing his Logia powers, Yugo's classifies all of his strongest attacks in a category of their own: the aptly named Hissatsu series.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Thermostat (Passive): Upon making bare skin contact with an object, Yugo can discern the exact temperature of the object in question.

Tenki (Toggle): When activated, hardened mercury armor forms around Yugo enhancing his defenses but rendering him slightly more sluggish in his moves and thus not allowing him to hit as hard as he would want to due to the inherent heavyness of the metal. +10% DEF / -10% ATK

Getsuga (Toggle): Yugo's body actually completely shifts into mercury, unlocking his fruit's full offensive capabilities at the cost of an increased vulnerability to attacks. +20% ATK / -20% DEF.




Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:





Last edited by Yūgo on Tue Apr 12, 2022 4:49 pm; edited 2 times in total
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3963

[Fighting Style] Suigin Suigin no Mi Empty Re: [Fighting Style] Suigin Suigin no Mi

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Apr 10, 2022 6:21 pm
Nice job getting this done! Still very disappointed that you didn't make that fruit thermometer-shaped, but, what can I say? Not everyone loves great ideas. XD

Anyhow, this is approved, however, I just wanted to make note of one line:
Yūgo wrote:They can turn their body into mercury and create an indefinite amount of the metal from or around them.
The two words I noted above seemed a bit suspect.

Firstly, nothing is indefinite. Anything you create should still be within reason and in line with your character's current level. Both in terms of quality and quantity. Remember, at Level 1, your character is the canonical equivalent of Fullbody in the East Blue Arc.

Secondly, you can create Mercury only from you. You cannot create Mercury "around" you. Your body must always be its point of origin. Once you awaken it, you may perhaps generate it "around" you (though we don't know truly much about what awakened Logias can actually do in canon).

That is all! Great job on your first fighting style otherwise. I found no errors!

Yūgo wrote:

Suigin Suigin no Mi


Devil Fruit: Suigin Suigin no Mi
Devil Fruit Type: Logia

Spoiler:

Fighting Style: Suiginken
Weapon Utilization: Mercury metal solidified in the shape of weaponry when needed.
Description: The fighting style revolves around manipulating mercury both defensively and offensively, but with restraint and in a manner that would most likely resemble paramecia users rather than a Logia under normal circumstances.

His style and technique names are thus separated into two different groups with different suffixes/prefixes depending if he's manipulating Mercury as if to appear a paramecia user: Ten - Chi - Jin for the basics techniques, Getsu - Ka - Setsu for his medium hitters.

Ten/Setsu = Defense
Chi/Ka = Utility
Jin/Getsu = Offensive

Finally, if he's actually fully committing his Logia powers, Yugo's classifies all of his strongest attacks in a category of their own: the aptly named Hissatsu series.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Thermostat (Passive): Upon making bare skin contact with an object, Yugo can discern the exact temperature of the object in question.

Tenki (Toggle): When activated, hardened mercury armor forms around Yugo enhancing his defenses but rendering him slightly more sluggish in his moves and thus not allowing him to hit as hard as he would want to due to the inherent heavyness of the metal. +10% DEF / -10% ATK

Getsuga (Toggle): Yugo's body actually completely shifts into mercury, unlocking his fruit's full offensive capabilities at the cost of an increased vulnerability to attacks. +20% ATK / -20% DEF.




Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:



Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3963

[Fighting Style] Suigin Suigin no Mi Empty Re: [Fighting Style] Suigin Suigin no Mi

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Apr 12, 2022 3:01 pm
Unlocked for Logia MT Heal updates.
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3963

[Fighting Style] Suigin Suigin no Mi Empty Re: [Fighting Style] Suigin Suigin no Mi

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Apr 12, 2022 6:29 pm
Approved!

Yūgo wrote:

Suigin Suigin no Mi


Devil Fruit: Suigin Suigin no Mi
Devil Fruit Type: Logia

Spoiler:

Fighting Style: Suiginken
Weapon Utilization: Mercury metal solidified in the shape of weaponry when needed.
Description: The fighting style revolves around manipulating mercury both defensively and offensively, but with restraint and in a manner that would most likely resemble paramecia users rather than a Logia under normal circumstances.

His style and technique names are thus separated into two different groups with different suffixes/prefixes depending if he's manipulating Mercury as if to appear a paramecia user: Ten - Chi - Jin for the basics techniques, Getsu - Ka - Setsu for his medium hitters.

Ten/Setsu = Defense
Chi/Ka = Utility
Jin/Getsu = Offensive

Finally, if he's actually fully committing his Logia powers, Yugo's classifies all of his strongest attacks in a category of their own: the aptly named Hissatsu series.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Thermostat (Passive): Upon making bare skin contact with an object, Yugo can discern the exact temperature of the object in question.

Tenki (Toggle): When activated, hardened mercury armor forms around Yugo enhancing his defenses but rendering him slightly more sluggish in his moves and thus not allowing him to hit as hard as he would want to due to the inherent heavyness of the metal. +10% DEF / -10% ATK

Getsuga (Toggle): Yugo's body actually completely shifts into mercury, unlocking his fruit's full offensive capabilities at the cost of an increased vulnerability to attacks. +20% ATK / -20% DEF.




Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:



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