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[Fighting Style] Arms Arms Fruit, Burgeoning Rose Empty [Fighting Style] Arms Arms Fruit, Burgeoning Rose

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Jun 07, 2022 2:43 am

Arms Arms Fruit


Devil Fruit: Buki Buki no mi (Arms Arms Fruit)
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance:  Fuschia Plantain, sword shaped stem
Devil Fruit Description: The Arms Arms fruit allows its user to transform parts of their body, or even their entire body, into any weapon(s) that they have knowledge of. The fruit also provides ammunition & necessary fuel for its weapons to be used, which are not considered part of the user’s body, by default most thrown weapons (once thrown) are also not considered part of the user’s body; however the user may choose to treat ammunition or thrown weapons as part of their body at their discretion by allowing them to occupy a toggled weapon transformation. Ammunition & Thrown weapons expended by the Arms Arms fruit user disappear once the fruit’s user is outside their immediate vicinity. All weapons made using this fruit are treated as both a part of the user’s body and as a normal weapon of their category. The fruit user is immune to the damage of their own weaponry unless they intentionally turn a weapon on themselves, but is still susceptible to attacks from others’ weaponry. The fruit user may choose to make their weapon transformations operable by others.

Fighting Style: Burgeoning Rose
Weapon Utilization: Versatile, often many
Description: Moreau utilizes the transformations offered by his fruit to hinder opposing offenses, bring enemies in alive, and allow allies to capitalize on weakened & distracted foes.

Toggled and Passive abilities:
(Passive) Arsenal, Moreau can transform his body into weaponry at will, when using techniques that involve weaponry Moreau may engage the applicable transformation only for the duration of the technique, or until another technique requires a change of weapons. Moreau can maintain any number of transformations simultaneously, however transformations often require specific body parts to be transformed, and transformation is limited to some extent by mass (E.G. a user would not be able to transform all of their limbs into large cannons).

(Toggle) Lightweight Construction, Moreau can make a keen & lightweight weapon gaining a +20% bonus to RX at the expense of -20% defense.

(Toggle) Armor-y, Moreau’s armaments can provide limited protection at the expense of their offensive capabilities. While maintaining 1 or more Weapon Transformations, Moreau may gain a +20% bonus to DEF at the expense of -20% ATK for the duration of the toggle.

(Passive) Gunmetal, Moreau is cold to the touch and difficult to perceive based on thermal information. In hot weather this effect is reversed, and unless doused with water, Moreau is scalding to the touch; while in hot weather Moreau must consume additional water.

(Passive) Gentle Weapon, Moreau is extremely unlikely to kill enemies without specifically intending to. This is because his shot placement is intended to miss vitals.


Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:

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Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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[Fighting Style] Arms Arms Fruit, Burgeoning Rose Empty Re: [Fighting Style] Arms Arms Fruit, Burgeoning Rose

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Jun 07, 2022 5:40 pm
[ Please see my comment below in orange. ]

Moreau wrote:

Arms Arms Fruit


Devil Fruit: Buki Buki no mi (Arms Arms Fruit)
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance:  Fuschia Plantain, sword shaped stem
Devil Fruit Description: The Arms Arms fruit allows its user to transform parts of their body, or even their entire body, into any weapon(s) that they have knowledge of. The fruit also provides ammunition & necessary fuel for its weapons to be used, which are not considered part of the user’s body, by default most thrown weapons (once thrown) are also not considered part of the user’s body; however the user may choose to treat ammunition or thrown weapons as part of their body at their discretion by allowing them to occupy a toggled weapon transformation. Ammunition & Thrown weapons expended by the Arms Arms fruit user disappear once the fruit’s user is outside their immediate vicinity. All weapons made using this fruit are treated as both a part of the user’s body and as a normal weapon of their category. The fruit user is immune to the damage of their own weaponry unless they intentionally turn a weapon on themselves, but is still susceptible to attacks from others’ weaponry. The fruit user may choose to make their weapon transformations operable by others.

Fighting Style: Burgeoning Rose
Weapon Utilization: Versatile, often many
Description: Moreau utilizes the transformations offered by his fruit to hinder opposing offenses, bring enemies in alive, and allow allies to capitalize on weakened & distracted foes.

Toggled and Passive abilities:
(Passive/Toggle) Arsenal, Moreau can transform his body into weaponry at will, when using techniques that involve weaponry Moreau may engage the applicable transformation only for the duration of the technique, or as a toggled transformation. Toggled transformations and those that use full-limbs can only be dropped every 3 rounds, as is typical for toggled passives [ This does not need to be stated. ]. Moreau can maintain a number of weapon transformations simultaneously equal to his Willpower/20 [ This is unnecessary. Just do what seems reasonable based on your character level and the context of the RP. Passives are mostly independent of the mechanics anyway. ], however many transformations require specific body parts to be transformed, and transformation is limited to some extent by mass (E.G. a user would not be able to transform all of their limbs into large cannons). By expending berries equivalent to a Tiered Weapon’s cost in research & training time Moreau may incorporate tiered weapons into his Arsenal transformations [ Please remove this. Custom mechanics such as this are not permitted. ]. Moreau can make a keen weapon gaining a +20% bonus to RX at the expense of -20% defense.
(Disambiguation: Weapon transformations represent a single sustained concentrated effort on transformation, not a single weapon. For example, turning multiple fingers into gun barrels may count as only a single transformation). [ Rather than writing this, simply separate the passive from the toggle. It doesn't matter if they're effectively doing the same thing. Passives are flavour. Toggles are mechanics. ]

(Toggle) Armor-y, Moreau’s armaments can provide limited protection at the expense of their offensive capabilities. While maintaining 1 or more Weapon Transformations, Moreau may gain a +20% bonus to DEF at the expense of -20% ATK for the duration of the toggle.

(Passive) Gunmetal, Moreau is cold to the touch and difficult to perceive based on thermal information. In hot weather this effect is reversed, and unless doused with water, Moreau is scalding to the touch; while in hot weather Moreau must consume additional water.

(Passive) Gentle Weapon, Moreau is extremely unlikely to kill enemies without specifically intending to. This is because his shot placement is intended to miss vitals.


Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:

[/b]



Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species/Tribe : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

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Posts : 3977

[Fighting Style] Arms Arms Fruit, Burgeoning Rose Empty Re: [Fighting Style] Arms Arms Fruit, Burgeoning Rose

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Jun 07, 2022 8:30 pm
Approved!

I've changed your "Damage Canceller" to just be "Canceller". Cancellers do not have to be specified as damage or debuff cancellers. You can choose what to cancel when using them.

Moreau wrote:

Arms Arms Fruit


Devil Fruit: Buki Buki no mi (Arms Arms Fruit)
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance:  Fuschia Plantain, sword shaped stem
Devil Fruit Description: The Arms Arms fruit allows its user to transform parts of their body, or even their entire body, into any weapon(s) that they have knowledge of. The fruit also provides ammunition & necessary fuel for its weapons to be used, which are not considered part of the user’s body, by default most thrown weapons (once thrown) are also not considered part of the user’s body; however the user may choose to treat ammunition or thrown weapons as part of their body at their discretion by allowing them to occupy a toggled weapon transformation. Ammunition & Thrown weapons expended by the Arms Arms fruit user disappear once the fruit’s user is outside their immediate vicinity. All weapons made using this fruit are treated as both a part of the user’s body and as a normal weapon of their category. The fruit user is immune to the damage of their own weaponry unless they intentionally turn a weapon on themselves, but is still susceptible to attacks from others’ weaponry. The fruit user may choose to make their weapon transformations operable by others.

Fighting Style: Burgeoning Rose
Weapon Utilization: Versatile, often many
Description: Moreau utilizes the transformations offered by his fruit to hinder opposing offenses, bring enemies in alive, and allow allies to capitalize on weakened & distracted foes.

Toggled and Passive abilities:
(Passive) Arsenal, Moreau can transform his body into weaponry at will, when using techniques that involve weaponry Moreau may engage the applicable transformation only for the duration of the technique, or until another technique requires a change of weapons. Moreau can maintain any number of transformations simultaneously, however transformations often require specific body parts to be transformed, and transformation is limited to some extent by mass (E.G. a user would not be able to transform all of their limbs into large cannons).

(Toggle) Lightweight Construction, Moreau can make a keen & lightweight weapon gaining a +20% bonus to RX at the expense of -20% defense.

(Toggle) Armor-y, Moreau’s armaments can provide limited protection at the expense of their offensive capabilities. While maintaining 1 or more Weapon Transformations, Moreau may gain a +20% bonus to DEF at the expense of -20% ATK for the duration of the toggle.

(Passive) Gunmetal, Moreau is cold to the touch and difficult to perceive based on thermal information. In hot weather this effect is reversed, and unless doused with water, Moreau is scalding to the touch; while in hot weather Moreau must consume additional water.

(Passive) Gentle Weapon, Moreau is extremely unlikely to kill enemies without specifically intending to. This is because his shot placement is intended to miss vitals.


Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:

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