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This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Jun 15, 2022 7:55 pm

Formless  Arts


Fighting Style: Formless  Arts
Weapon Utilization: The limbs of the human body.
Description: Weapons are used to further the physical limits of humans. However, with enough training, imagination and the right techniques the human body itself can become any weapon.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:

Felyne Finesse (Passive): Over the years of exercising his art, Jaxon had managed to find himself in many sticky situations. As result of his training and experiences in such situations, he managed to attain agility akin to a human cat, to always be able to escape to places no normal person would be able to. It would not be stupid to mistake him for a seasoned acrobat.

Optimist (Passive): A man with a curious mind will always find a way to optimize his skills. Such a thing rings true in Jaxon, he always thinks about innovations in his set of skills to make the seemingly impossible, possible. Maximalising efficiency is something he always strives for.

Formless: Blunt : By just utilizing both fists, Jaxon is able to imitate the effect of a myriad of blunt weapons. The versatility is amazing. Holding his fists together and clenching them delivers the same impact as a hammer. A simple punch has the same effect as the swing of a bat. The downside is that the strikes will not be very easy to land. (+20% ATK, -20% DEF)

Formless: Sharp : The opposite of clenching his fists together is holding his hands open, positioning them to be akin to a blade. Due to a bladde hidden beneath his clothing, Jaxon can mimic the effects of a blade with the use of his hands. In this form, he can be much more precise with his strikes, but they do not deal as much damage and he can't take hits as well. Most people can’t see the hidden blade, thus they assume he just uses his hands.(+20RX,  -20% DEF)





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Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:





Last edited by Jaxon Black on Wed Jun 22, 2022 4:03 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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[Fighting Style] Formless  Arts Empty Re: [Fighting Style] Formless Arts

This post has in-line assessment comments.Fri Jun 17, 2022 6:20 pm
Nice work getting this done! I just had a few comments/corrections. You can find them below in orange.

Jaxon Black wrote:

Formless  Arts


Fighting Style: Formless  Arts
Weapon Utilization: The limbs of the human body.
Description: Weapons are used to further the physical limits of humans. However, with enough training, imagination and the right techniques the human body itself can become any weapon.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:
Nerve Damage (Passive): After having tempered the body to a degree, by gradually receiving damge to several parts of the body, the nerve endings have been damaged to such a point that the Jaxon does not feel pain, unless the damage penetrates the skin several inches. [ This feels a bit contrived and unnecessary for this character and doesn't quite make sense based on his background. I recommend removing it entirely. ]

Felyne Finesse (Passive): Over the years of exercising his art, Jaxon had managed to find himself in many sticky situations. As result of his training and experiences in such situations, he managed to attain agility akin to a human cat, to always be able to escape to places no normal person would be able to. It would not be stupid to mistake him for a seasoned acrobat.

Optimist (Passive): A man with a curious mind will always find a way to optimize his skills. Such a thing rings true in Jaxon, he always thinks about innovations in his set of skills to make the seemingly impossible, possible. Maximalising efficiency is something he always strives for.

Formless: Blunt : By just utilizing both fists, Jaxon is able to imitate the effect of a myriad of blunt weapons. The versatility is amazing. Holding his fists together and clenching them delivers the same impact as a hammer. A simple punch has the same effect as the swing of a bat. The downside is that the strikes will not be very easy to land. (+20% ATK, -20% DEF)

Formless: Sharp : The opposite of clenching his fists together is holding his hands open, positioning them to be akin to a blade. Due to his training, Jaxon can mimic the effects of a blade with the use of his hands. In this form, he can be much more precise with his strikes, but they do not deal as much damage and he can't take hits as well. (+20RX,  -20% DEF) [ I would also like for you to replace this. Firstly, at level 1, your character is expected to be about as strong as Fullbody at Baratie. But, more importantly, based on his background, having the technique of cutting things with just his hands just doesn't seem reasonable. Just give him a sword instead if you really wanna cut. ]





Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:



Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3841

[Fighting Style] Formless  Arts Empty Re: [Fighting Style] Formless Arts

This post has in-line assessment comments.Thu Jun 23, 2022 5:54 pm
Thanks for the fixes! Approved!

Jaxon Black wrote:

Formless  Arts


Fighting Style: Formless  Arts
Weapon Utilization: The limbs of the human body.
Description: Weapons are used to further the physical limits of humans. However, with enough training, imagination and the right techniques the human body itself can become any weapon.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:

Felyne Finesse (Passive): Over the years of exercising his art, Jaxon had managed to find himself in many sticky situations. As result of his training and experiences in such situations, he managed to attain agility akin to a human cat, to always be able to escape to places no normal person would be able to. It would not be stupid to mistake him for a seasoned acrobat.

Optimist (Passive): A man with a curious mind will always find a way to optimize his skills. Such a thing rings true in Jaxon, he always thinks about innovations in his set of skills to make the seemingly impossible, possible. Maximalising efficiency is something he always strives for.

Formless: Blunt : By just utilizing both fists, Jaxon is able to imitate the effect of a myriad of blunt weapons. The versatility is amazing. Holding his fists together and clenching them delivers the same impact as a hammer. A simple punch has the same effect as the swing of a bat. The downside is that the strikes will not be very easy to land. (+20% ATK, -20% DEF)

Formless: Sharp : The opposite of clenching his fists together is holding his hands open, positioning them to be akin to a blade. Due to a bladde hidden beneath his clothing, Jaxon can mimic the effects of a blade with the use of his hands. In this form, he can be much more precise with his strikes, but they do not deal as much damage and he can't take hits as well. Most people can’t see the hidden blade, thus they assume he just uses his hands.(+20RX,  -20% DEF)





Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:



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