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This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Jul 05, 2022 2:10 am

Old Sutured Sail

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[Ship] Old Sutured Sail Nello-10

Ship Name: Old Sutured Sail
Ship Class: Niaochuan
Ship Crew: Asakura Doji pilots this ferry alone

Ship Description: This wearing Niaochuan requires the frequent mending of its  many sails. Its deck and hull are just wide enough to accommodate its 17'7 pilot, a small number of passengers may also be able to crowd themselves aboard. There are two rooms on the ship, one is a small storage room that houses the ship's single cannon, three small kegs of black powder, and the stairs leading below deck. The other room would be a small captain's quarters even for a human, and as such is used by Doji for additional storage space, this room has stairs that lead up to the ship's steering apparatus which Doji haphazardly operates from above the room. The crossbred-oni has pried a number of boards from the deck that allow him to slink into the ship's hull where he keeps sacks of grass and straw to sleep on, as well as crates of picked veg, limes, and crackers.

Combat Capabilities

Tier: 1
Hull: 60
Sails: 190
Cannons: 50

Mods: None



Last edited by Doji on Tue Jul 05, 2022 7:49 pm; edited 1 time in total
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The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
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[Ship] Old Sutured Sail Empty Re: [Ship] Old Sutured Sail

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Jul 05, 2022 8:14 am
There is a large disparity between the ship description and the image you've chosen for it. The ship doesn't look at all like junk to me either. Here are my recommendations:
- Remove the picture entirely; or
- Change the picture to better match the description; or
- Change the description to better match the picture.
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3879
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[Ship] Old Sutured Sail Empty Re: [Ship] Old Sutured Sail

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Jul 05, 2022 7:53 pm
Approved!

Doji wrote:

Old Sutured Sail

Appearance

[Ship] Old Sutured Sail Nello-10

Ship Name: Old Sutured Sail
Ship Class: Niaochuan
Ship Crew: Asakura Doji pilots this ferry alone

Ship Description: This wearing Niaochuan requires the frequent mending of its  many sails. Its deck and hull are just wide enough to accommodate its 17'7 pilot, a small number of passengers may also be able to crowd themselves aboard. There are two rooms on the ship, one is a small storage room that houses the ship's single cannon, three small kegs of black powder, and the stairs leading below deck. The other room would be a small captain's quarters even for a human, and as such is used by Doji for additional storage space, this room has stairs that lead up to the ship's steering apparatus which Doji haphazardly operates from above the room. The crossbred-oni has pried a number of boards from the deck that allow him to slink into the ship's hull where he keeps sacks of grass and straw to sleep on, as well as crates of picked veg, limes, and crackers.

Combat Capabilities

Tier: 1
Hull: 60
Sails: 190
Cannons: 50

Mods: None

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