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Cho Nan
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Name : Cho Nan
Epithet : Shōbushi
Age : 21
Height : 5'6"
Weight : 114 lbs
Species : Kuja
Faction : Marines
Crew Role : Doctor
Devil Fruit : Ito Ito no Mi
Haki Level : 0
Hitpoints (HP) : 100
Attack (ATK) : 0
Defense (DEF) : 0
Reflex (RX) : 0
Willpower (WP) : 0
Level : 1
Experience Points : 100
Berries : [ber] 50,000
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Posts : 3
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[Bio] Cho Nan Empty [Bio] Cho Nan

This post has assessment comments.Tue Nov 08, 2022 8:11 am

Cho Nan


[Bio] Cho Nan Kmp1xHl

Basic Character Information


First Name: Nan
Last Name: Cho
Epithet: Shōbushi [勝負師 - Gambler / Risk Taker]
Birthdate: August 18th, 1808
Gender: Female
Species/Race/Tribe: Kuja
Faction: Marine
Profession: Doctor


Physical Appearance


Height: 168 cm [5'6"]
Weight: 52 kg [114 lbs]

Hair Style: Medium length, asymmetrically cut
Hair Color: Sapphire with azure tips
Eye Color: Emerald
Scars: None
Clothing and Accessories: Having a fondness for clothing that allow her to move around freely, the young, self-proclaimed fashionista can usually be seen wearing the combination of an indigo colored, sleeveless bodysuit, embellished with silver ornaments, and a sleeveless and highly adorned overcoat resembling a qipao dress. The overcoat mainly carries a variety of blue shades and is decorated with a mixture of ebony and ivory designs with the fabric's choker carrying a shade of white. Innocently ivory colored fur decorates the shroud and sleeve ends of the young doctor's Marine jacket, which she usually wears by simply letting it hang over her shoulders in a manner similar to how higher ranking Marines wear their coats.

Her legs are usually wrapped into a pair of high-heeled boots that reach beyond her knees, even covering half of her thighs. Even though being a diligent doctor, the young woman has a certain fondness for accessories. While refraining from wearing rings or bracelets, she, however, got her ears pierced multiple times, wearing a pair of larger, crystal shaped earrings as well multiple studs of which some are connected by a small chain. Nan further decorated her choker by attaching a good luck charm in the shape of a die to it and tends to wear mittens that are white in color and barely cover her wrists.

Description: Nan's athletic body is neither the tallest nor the shortest; for young women like her of ordinary height she nearly stands to five feet, six inches. Looking at her one might envy the young woman for her fair and flawless skin, which seemingly lacks any trace of common blemishes such as birthmarks or scars. While it is true that her skin lacks these imperfections that can be considered witnesses of one's life and the incidents shaping the same, this is not because the Kuja has been especially fortunate or lucky, but rather because of her using her Devil Fruit powers to remove the scars she received in the past. Looking at her petit physique it might be difficult to imagine her being a defender of Justice, but even though lacking bulky muscles Nan's frame is highly agile, weighing no more than 114 lbs.

Her medium length hair carries a shade of sapphire and is cut in an asymmetrical manner, leaving the right side longer than the left. Her bangs follow the same awry cut as they curtain over her forehead. While the female Marine's hair is blue by nature, she went and dyed the tips of it azure, granting her already somewhat tomboyish appearance an even more rebellious note. While usually leaving most of her mane to be a disheveled mess, the inky topped female tends to braid a few strands of her into a single braid that dangles from the back of her head. The Kuja's eyes are emerald in color and carry a somewhat cold air despite the passion dwelling within their owner's heart.  



The Past


Main Traits:
♡ Kind, Hard-working, Righteous, Perceptive, Erudite
♤ Stubborn, Emotional, Prejudiced, Overprotective, Soft-hearted
Likes: Gambling| Swimming| Music | Flowers | Dogs
Dislikes: Killing Others | Cruelty| Pirates| Helplessness | Her mother | Snakes
Unique laugh: シャリリリー [Shaririri~]

Hometown: Sessha Town, Jinja Island, Grand Line

Personality: The name "World Government", which sends shivers down the spines of most criminals roaming the seas, is often associated with stern individuals that mercilessly pursue to the concept of absolute justice; this imagination, however, only partially bears resemblance to Nan, who may harbor an animosity for pirates, but first and foremost considers herself a doctor. Due to this she will treat any patient equally, independent of their race, alignment, personality or even her personal grudges; even going as far as to save a pirate's life despite despising these contemptible criminals and blaming them for the chaotic state of the world as well as the death of her family. But even though generally being a caring and soft-hearted person, Nan actually doesn't shrink from displaying a rather cold behavior towards individuals she doesn't trust or like.

Her epithet "Shōbushi", however, doesn't just originate from her treating allies and enemies alike and thereby taking risks, but also from her beliefs. Even though having grown up in a rather traditional and religious environment, she doesn't believe in any kind of divine powers and instead is certain that everything in life is simply a gamble. It, of course, can't be denied that the dark haired woman also has a certain fondness for gambling as it to her is a means of killing time and relaxing. Nan in generally is an easy-going individual, who firmly believes in justice and cannot stand watching others grieve. The only thing she hates more than cruelty is the feeling of helplessness and so she won't just sit by and watch, if innocent people suffer and will instead do everything within her might to help.  

Nan might not look like it, but the truth is that the young doctor actually has a weak spot for cute things, such as puppies and anything similarly adorable, which cause her to turn into a total fangirl. When it comes to the topic of battles, Nan actually doesn't enjoy fighting and would rather choose another way to put conflicts aside, which, however doesn't mean that she isn't a skilled combatant.


History:
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror / Black Fist
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 10
[[haoasc]][[busoasc]][[kenbunasc]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 750
Attack (ATK) : 800
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 715
Willpower (WP) : 650
Level : 100
Prestige : 8
Experience Points : 18000
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Berries : [ber] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[atkt6_sp]][[deft6]][[rxt6]][[wpt6]]
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[Bio] Cho Nan Empty Re: [Bio] Cho Nan

This post has assessment comments.Wed Nov 16, 2022 5:18 pm
This is an excellently written bio! I just have a couple of comments that I would like you to consider.

1. The application of the Ito Ito no Mi to remove blemishes is interesting, but I don't see how it could do the same with any scars she might've had. Surgically removing growths on the skin is a reasonable application, but the additive nature of mending permanent scarring doesn't quite fit the Ito Ito no Mi.

2. Her being a Kuja seems rather pointless based on her history. The Kuja tribe itself is more of a culture than it is a race, so if she grew up anywhere outside of Amazon Lily with basically no exposure to the Kuja ways, then I would rather you specify her tribe as human. Her mother can be a retired Kuja warrior if you'd like.

3. It seems to be that you're implying her mother had the Awa Awa no Mi. The implication is a bit risky because that is a canon fruit that's moderately popular. Implying its user in your bio canonizes the fruit's history. If anyone else were to claim it for their character, they might need to account for your character's history. While I'm okay with allowing you to imply the Awa Awa no Mi's historical use here, I would like you to at least consider putting in more vague descriptions of her powers if at all possible.

Cho Nan wrote:

Cho Nan


[Bio] Cho Nan Kmp1xHl

Basic Character Information


First Name: Nan
Last Name: Cho
Epithet: Shōbushi [勝負師 - Gambler / Risk Taker]
Birthdate: August 18th, 1808
Gender: Female
Species/Race/Tribe: Kuja
Faction: Marine
Profession: Doctor


Physical Appearance


Height: 168 cm [5'6"]
Weight: 52 kg [114 lbs]

Hair Style: Medium length, asymmetrically cut
Hair Color: Sapphire with azure tips
Eye Color: Emerald
Scars: None
Clothing and Accessories: Having a fondness for clothing that allow her to move around freely, the young, self-proclaimed fashionista can usually be seen wearing the combination of an indigo colored, sleeveless bodysuit, embellished with silver ornaments, and a sleeveless and highly adorned overcoat resembling a qipao dress. The overcoat mainly carries a variety of blue shades and is decorated with a mixture of ebony and ivory designs with the fabric's choker carrying a shade of white. Innocently ivory colored fur decorates the shroud and sleeve ends of the young doctor's Marine jacket, which she usually wears by simply letting it hang over her shoulders in a manner similar to how higher ranking Marines wear their coats.

Her legs are usually wrapped into a pair of high-heeled boots that reach beyond her knees, even covering half of her thighs. Even though being a diligent doctor, the young woman has a certain fondness for accessories. While refraining from wearing rings or bracelets, she, however, got her ears pierced multiple times, wearing a pair of larger, crystal shaped earrings as well multiple studs of which some are connected by a small chain. Nan further decorated her choker by attaching a good luck charm in the shape of a die to it and tends to wear mittens that are white in color and barely cover her wrists.

Description: Nan's athletic body is neither the tallest nor the shortest; for young women like her of ordinary height she nearly stands to five feet, six inches. Looking at her one might envy the young woman for her fair and flawless skin, which seemingly lacks any trace of common blemishes such as birthmarks or scars. While it is true that her skin lacks these imperfections that can be considered witnesses of one's life and the incidents shaping the same, this is not because the Kuja has been especially fortunate or lucky, but rather because of her using her Devil Fruit powers to remove the scars she received in the past. Looking at her petit physique it might be difficult to imagine her being a defender of Justice, but even though lacking bulky muscles Nan's frame is highly agile, weighing no more than 114 lbs.

Her medium length hair carries a shade of sapphire and is cut in an asymmetrical manner, leaving the right side longer than the left. Her bangs follow the same awry cut as they curtain over her forehead. While the female Marine's hair is blue by nature, she went and dyed the tips of it azure, granting her already somewhat tomboyish appearance an even more rebellious note. While usually leaving most of her mane to be a disheveled mess, the inky topped female tends to braid a few strands of her into a single braid that dangles from the back of her head. The Kuja's eyes are emerald in color and carry a somewhat cold air despite the passion dwelling within their owner's heart.  



The Past


Main Traits:
♡ Kind, Hard-working, Righteous, Perceptive, Erudite
♤ Stubborn, Emotional, Prejudiced, Overprotective, Soft-hearted
Likes: Gambling| Swimming| Music | Flowers | Dogs
Dislikes: Killing Others | Cruelty| Pirates| Helplessness | Her mother | Snakes
Unique laugh: シャリリリー [Shaririri~]

Hometown: Sessha Town, Jinja Island, Grand Line

Personality: The name "World Government", which sends shivers down the spines of most criminals roaming the seas, is often associated with stern individuals that mercilessly pursue to the concept of absolute justice; this imagination, however, only partially bears resemblance to Nan, who may harbor an animosity for pirates, but first and foremost considers herself a doctor. Due to this she will treat any patient equally, independent of their race, alignment, personality or even her personal grudges; even going as far as to save a pirate's life despite despising these contemptible criminals and blaming them for the chaotic state of the world as well as the death of her family. But even though generally being a caring and soft-hearted person, Nan actually doesn't shrink from displaying a rather cold behavior towards individuals she doesn't trust or like.

Her epithet "Shōbushi", however, doesn't just originate from her treating allies and enemies alike and thereby taking risks, but also from her beliefs. Even though having grown up in a rather traditional and religious environment, she doesn't believe in any kind of divine powers and instead is certain that everything in life is simply a gamble. It, of course, can't be denied that the dark haired woman also has a certain fondness for gambling as it to her is a means of killing time and relaxing. Nan in generally is an easy-going individual, who firmly believes in justice and cannot stand watching others grieve. The only thing she hates more than cruelty is the feeling of helplessness and so she won't just sit by and watch, if innocent people suffer and will instead do everything within her might to help.  

Nan might not look like it, but the truth is that the young doctor actually has a weak spot for cute things, such as puppies and anything similarly adorable, which cause her to turn into a total fangirl. When it comes to the topic of battles, Nan actually doesn't enjoy fighting and would rather choose another way to put conflicts aside, which, however doesn't mean that she isn't a skilled combatant.


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