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Luka
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Age : 0
Haki Level : 0
Hitpoints (HP) : 115
Attack (ATK) : 55
Defense (DEF) : 30
Reflex (RX) : 110
Willpower (WP) : 30
Level : 1
Experience Points : 100
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[Fighting Style] Chiyu Chiyu no Mi (チユチユの実) Empty [Fighting Style] Chiyu Chiyu no Mi (チユチユの実)

This post has assessment comments.Sat Nov 19, 2022 6:52 am

Chiyu Chiyu no Mi: Dog Day Dragout


[Fighting Style] Chiyu Chiyu no Mi (チユチユの実) Luka_f10


Devil Fruit: Chiyu Chiyu no Mi (Heal-Heal Fruit)
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance: The Chiyu Chiyu no Mi is a white and pink colored peach with subtle swirls, its stem is deformed and appears to form the shape of a pair of crying eyes.
Devil Fruit Description: The Chiyu Chiyu no Mi allows its user to heal nearly any bodily injury through the topical application of their tears or saliva. Depending on the user’s mastery of the fruit a single drop can heal any injury in a localized area, or with higher levels of mastery, can allow for full-body healing with a single drop. A user who has mastered this power is capable of creating near-miraculous healing effects that can only affect a person once in their lifetime, these techniques are greatly taxing on the user and can shorten their lifespan. The feeling of being healed by the Chiyu Chiyu no Mi is mildly euphoric and the user is capable of healing themselves with its power.

Fighting Style: Dog Day Dragout
Weapon Utilization: Luka uses a single revolver, a tactical knife, and any improvised weapons he can find; but primarily tends to fight with his ringed fists. He knows how to use swords but can’t afford one.
Description: Through clever maneuvering and opportunistic attacks Luka draws out his opponents’ energy before knocking them out in a single blow. His use of dirty tactics is relentless, and he’ll happily resort to sucker punches and ball kicking if his opponent lets their guard down. He is currently unaware of the fact that he has Devil Fruit powers, and thus only makes use of the Chiyu Chiyu no Mi’s abilities unintentionally.

Toggled and Passive Abilities:
(Toggle) Trouble Clef- +20% RX, -20% DEF- Luka expresses his irritation at the situation before initiating his opponent’s assbeating.

(Toggle) Uptempo Beatdown- +20% ATK, -20% DEF- The Stray Dog recognizes inferiority in an opponent and spares them the embarrassment of fighting any longer.

(Passive) Angel Eyes- The Stray Dog’s meek manifestation of his healing powers is weak, partially because he is unaware of the ability’s existence. Luka’s face recovers from injury whenever he cries, typically in moments of solitude.

(Passive) Freerunner- Luka is able to swing, leap, and roll around urban environments very quickly.

(Passive) Perfect Pitch- Luka’s singing voice is immaculate, and he can easily discern tonal issues in pieces of music.



Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:





Last edited by Luka on Sun Nov 20, 2022 6:46 am; edited 1 time in total
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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror / Black Fist
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 10
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Hitpoints (HP) : 750
Attack (ATK) : 800
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 715
Willpower (WP) : 650
Level : 100
Prestige : 8
Experience Points : 18000
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Berries : [ber] 25,000,000,000
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[Fighting Style] Chiyu Chiyu no Mi (チユチユの実) Empty Re: [Fighting Style] Chiyu Chiyu no Mi (チユチユの実)

This post has assessment comments.Sat Nov 19, 2022 6:07 pm
[ Overall a nice iteration of this fruit. I assume this is meant to be a support character based on the lack of damage-dealing techniques. I just have a few comments in orange. ]

Luka wrote:

Chiyu Chiyu no Mi: Dog Day Dragout


[Fighting Style] Chiyu Chiyu no Mi (チユチユの実) Luka_f10


Devil Fruit: Chiyu Chiyu no Mi (Heal-Heal Fruit)
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance: The Chiyu Chiyu no Mi is a white and pink colored peach with subtle swirls, its stem is deformed and appears to form the shape of a pair of crying eyes.
Devil Fruit Description: The Chiyu Chiyu no Mi allows its user to heal nearly any bodily injury through the topical application of their tears or saliva. Depending on the user’s mastery of the fruit a single drop can heal any injury in a localized area, or with higher levels of mastery, can allow for full-body healing with a single drop. A user who has mastered this power is capable of creating advanced healing effects, usually near-miraculous ones that can only affect a person once in their lifetime, these techniques are greatly taxing on the user and can shorten their lifespan.

The fruit can allow for the reattachment of severed/removed body parts, however it cannot create new body parts. [ Just like I said to the blood-blood fruit user, this ability should be reserved for higher tiers and should not be instantaneously effective. ] The feeling of being healed by the Chiyu Chiyu no Mi is mildly euphoric. Finally, the user is capable of healing themselves with this power.

The user can also mend broken objects, but their lifespan is shortened in the process. [ While I like your thought process here, please remove this ability and save it for if/when you awaken this fruit. The canon iteration of the fruit was said to boost the recovery process of living beings, so they were essentially healing themselves. Inanimate objects don't tend to fix themselves, so this process shouldn't be applicable. However, with an awakened fruit, I could see this being done. ]

Fighting Style: Dog Day Dragout
Weapon Utilization: Luka uses a single revolver, a tactical knife, and any improvised weapons he can find; but primarily tends to fight with his ringed fists. He knows how to use swords but can’t afford one.
Description: Through clever maneuvering and opportunistic attacks Luka draws out his opponents’ energy before knocking them out in a single blow. His use of dirty tactics is relentless, and he’ll happily resort to sucker punches and ball kicking if his opponent lets their guard down. He is currently unaware of the fact that he has Devil Fruit powers, and thus only makes use of the Chiyu Chiyu no Mi’s abilities unintentionally.

Toggled and Passive Abilities:
(Toggle) Trouble Clef- +20% RX, -20% DEF- Luka expresses his irritation at the situation before initiating his opponent’s assbeating.

(Toggle) Uptempo Beatdown- +20% ATK, -20% DEF- The Stray Dog recognizes inferiority in an opponent and spares them the embarrassment of fighting any longer.

(Passive) Angel Eyes- The Stray Dog’s meek manifestation of his healing powers is weak, partially because he is unaware of the ability’s existence. Luka’s face recovers almost immediately from bruising and scarring. [ This would be especially fitting if he were a crybaby. ]

(Passive) Freerunner- Luka is able to swing, leap, and roll around urban environments very quickly.

(Passive) Perfect Pitch- Luka’s singing voice is immaculate, and he can easily discern tonal issues in pieces of music.



Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:



Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror / Black Fist
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 10
[[haoasc]][[busoasc]][[kenbunasc]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 750
Attack (ATK) : 800
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 715
Willpower (WP) : 650
Level : 100
Prestige : 8
Experience Points : 18000
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Berries : [ber] 25,000,000,000
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[Fighting Style] Chiyu Chiyu no Mi (チユチユの実) Empty Re: [Fighting Style] Chiyu Chiyu no Mi (チユチユの実)

This post has assessment comments.Tue Nov 22, 2022 9:42 am
Approved!
Luka wrote:

Chiyu Chiyu no Mi: Dog Day Dragout


[Fighting Style] Chiyu Chiyu no Mi (チユチユの実) Luka_f10


Devil Fruit: Chiyu Chiyu no Mi (Heal-Heal Fruit)
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia

Devil Fruit Appearance: The Chiyu Chiyu no Mi is a white and pink colored peach with subtle swirls, its stem is deformed and appears to form the shape of a pair of crying eyes.
Devil Fruit Description: The Chiyu Chiyu no Mi allows its user to heal nearly any bodily injury through the topical application of their tears or saliva. Depending on the user’s mastery of the fruit a single drop can heal any injury in a localized area, or with higher levels of mastery, can allow for full-body healing with a single drop. A user who has mastered this power is capable of creating near-miraculous healing effects that can only affect a person once in their lifetime, these techniques are greatly taxing on the user and can shorten their lifespan. The feeling of being healed by the Chiyu Chiyu no Mi is mildly euphoric and the user is capable of healing themselves with its power.

Fighting Style: Dog Day Dragout
Weapon Utilization: Luka uses a single revolver, a tactical knife, and any improvised weapons he can find; but primarily tends to fight with his ringed fists. He knows how to use swords but can’t afford one.
Description: Through clever maneuvering and opportunistic attacks Luka draws out his opponents’ energy before knocking them out in a single blow. His use of dirty tactics is relentless, and he’ll happily resort to sucker punches and ball kicking if his opponent lets their guard down. He is currently unaware of the fact that he has Devil Fruit powers, and thus only makes use of the Chiyu Chiyu no Mi’s abilities unintentionally.

Toggled and Passive Abilities:
(Toggle) Trouble Clef- +20% RX, -20% DEF- Luka expresses his irritation at the situation before initiating his opponent’s assbeating.

(Toggle) Uptempo Beatdown- +20% ATK, -20% DEF- The Stray Dog recognizes inferiority in an opponent and spares them the embarrassment of fighting any longer.

(Passive) Angel Eyes- The Stray Dog’s meek manifestation of his healing powers is weak, partially because he is unaware of the ability’s existence. Luka’s face recovers from injury whenever he cries, typically in moments of solitude.

(Passive) Freerunner- Luka is able to swing, leap, and roll around urban environments very quickly.

(Passive) Perfect Pitch- Luka’s singing voice is immaculate, and he can easily discern tonal issues in pieces of music.



Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:



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