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This post has in-line assessment comments.Sat Feb 04, 2023 6:40 pm

Tim Alburna


[Bio] Tim Alburna D7149f62d88b213f572e694a0f7edfe4

Basic Character Information


First Name: Tim
Middle Name/Initial: None
Last Name: Alburna
Epithet: None
Birthdate: June 13th 1810
Gender: Male
Species/Race/Tribe: Bat Mink
Faction: Pirate
Profession: Doctor


Physical Appearance


Height: 7'10
Weight: 234

Hair Style: N/A
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Orange
Scars: None
Clothing and Accessories: He wears mostly white with golden outlines, a sleeveless shirt, and a pair of shorts with simple boots

Description: He is a bat mink with mostly black hair, with mostly gray hair on his arms, and legs.


The Past


Main Traits: Extra Emotions, Loves Disecting things.
Likes: Crickets
Dislikes: Tomatoes
Unique laugh: Kererererererere

Hometown: Shells Town

Personality: Tim is an odd person who often shifts from quiet to angry in a second, he isn't introverted or bipolar but is merely very emotional and in the simplest way if he feels an emotion he feels double it, he's not happy he's double happy, he's ecstatic vibrating in place with excitement, when he's mad he's double mad with rage burning in his stomach as he glares daggers into the person of his ire. Because of this he never really got close to people often as they couldn't take his all-in personality, eventually, he learned to mask that on the outside by being crude, telling crude and dark jokes, laughing at problems, and being a general ruffian.

History:


Last edited by Tim Alburna on Sun Feb 05, 2023 6:12 pm; edited 2 times in total
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

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Posts : 3841

[Bio] Tim Alburna Empty Re: [Bio] Tim Alburna

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Feb 05, 2023 10:02 am
[warn]Minks would be extremely out of place in a human settlement like Shells Town even before their ex-communication. Their being "crazy" would just be included as part of them being minks. Please address this in your history if you'd still like him to have grown up in Shells Town. Otherwise, move his place of origin to somewhere in Grand Line (you are allowed to make up islands/settlements too.[/warn]

Tim Alburna wrote:

Tim Alburna


[Bio] Tim Alburna D7149f62d88b213f572e694a0f7edfe4

Basic Character Information


First Name: Tim
Middle Name/Initial: None
Last Name: Alburna
Epithet: None
Birthdate: June 13th 1810
Gender: Male
Species/Race/Tribe: Bat Mink
Faction: Pirate
Profession: Doctor


Physical Appearance


Height: 5'10
Weight: 173

Hair Style: N/A
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Orange
Scars: None
Clothing and Accessories: He wears mostly white with golden outlines, a sleeveless shirt, and a pair of shorts with simple boots

Description: He is a bat mink with mostly black hair, with mostly gray hair on his arms, and legs.


The Past


Main Traits: Extra Emotions, Loves Disecting things.
Likes: Crickets
Dislikes: Tomatoes
Unique laugh: Kererererererere

Hometown: Shells Town

Personality: Tim is an odd person who often shifts from quiet to angry in a second, he isn't introverted or bipolar but is merely very emotional and in the simplest way if he feels an emotion he feels double it, he's not happy he's double happy, he's ecstatic vibrating in place with excitement, when he's mad he's double mad with rage burning in his stomach as he glares daggers into the person of his ire. Because of this he never really got close to people often as they couldn't take his all-in personality, eventually, he learned to mask that on the outside by being crude, telling crude and dark jokes, laughing at problems, and being a general ruffian.

History:
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3841

[Bio] Tim Alburna Empty Re: [Bio] Tim Alburna

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Feb 07, 2023 1:18 pm
[approve=Approved.]I was under the impression that you changed the history significantly, but I only see minor changes. Either way, it is what it is.[/approve]

Tim Alburna wrote:

Tim Alburna


[Bio] Tim Alburna D7149f62d88b213f572e694a0f7edfe4

Basic Character Information


First Name: Tim
Middle Name/Initial: None
Last Name: Alburna
Epithet: None
Birthdate: June 13th 1810
Gender: Male
Species/Race/Tribe: Bat Mink
Faction: Pirate
Profession: Doctor


Physical Appearance


Height: 7'10
Weight: 234

Hair Style: N/A
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Orange
Scars: None
Clothing and Accessories: He wears mostly white with golden outlines, a sleeveless shirt, and a pair of shorts with simple boots

Description: He is a bat mink with mostly black hair, with mostly gray hair on his arms, and legs.


The Past


Main Traits: Extra Emotions, Loves Disecting things.
Likes: Crickets
Dislikes: Tomatoes
Unique laugh: Kererererererere

Hometown: Shells Town

Personality: Tim is an odd person who often shifts from quiet to angry in a second, he isn't introverted or bipolar but is merely very emotional and in the simplest way if he feels an emotion he feels double it, he's not happy he's double happy, he's ecstatic vibrating in place with excitement, when he's mad he's double mad with rage burning in his stomach as he glares daggers into the person of his ire. Because of this he never really got close to people often as they couldn't take his all-in personality, eventually, he learned to mask that on the outside by being crude, telling crude and dark jokes, laughing at problems, and being a general ruffian.

History:
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