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This post has in-line assessment comments.Thu Mar 23, 2023 9:12 pm

Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Zinogre - The Thunder Wolf


Devil Fruit: Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Zinogre

Devil Fruit Type: Mythical Zoan

Devil Fruit Appearance: an egg-shaped fruit with flame-like scales colored white with blue tips. Two stems coming out of the front mimicking the horns of a Zinogre.

Devil Fruit Description: A fruit that permanently alters the body by adding a large tail patterned with sharp scales and fur, samurai amour esce scales on the shoulders back, and hands, as well as retractable claws on the fingers. Also changes the hair color to blue. Allows the user to absorb electricity, storing it in the claws, scales, and hair. By doing so speed and physical power is immensely increased.

Fighting Style: Thunder Wolf

Weapon Utilization: Claws

Description: By absorbing electricity the user can store it in the claws or scales that they gained from the devil fruit. Obviously, there is a limit to how much electricity can be stored in the body at one time. if electricity is directly absorbed it can be used right away. Once stored in the claws or scales it can then be spread to the muscles putting them into an "amped" state that greatly amplifies strength and speed. The more electricity used to amp the muscles the stronger they get but the more taxing the consequences once done battling. If stored in the claws they begin to glow adding extra sharpness as well as electricity to claw attacks.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:

Chief of the Hunt [passive]: From the constant training and living with the beasts of the forest he has an enhanced survival instinct. That mixed with his natural elven blood his eyesight and sense of smell are much better than that of a human. His muscles are also well-trained for any situation. Also excels in stealth and is amazing at sneaking up on people. His footsteps are silent.

Weapons of the Hunt [passive]: From that same training weapons like spears, staffs, and bows are his specialty, allowing him to wield one even though he does prefer his claws.

Battery [passive]: Like a battery, the user can take in electricity no matter the source. Too much can lead to blood poisoning and too little doesn't allow the usage of most techniques. When electricity is used it may also leak out excess power.

Lightning Cloak (toggle): Basically surrounds the body with continuous sparks of lightning, making them sting to the touch and electrocuting those in contact with them.  (+25% defense, -25% reflex)

Hunter's Temper (toggle): Much like a predator tired of just barely letting their prey go the user becomes very aggravated pumping ALL stored electricity into the heart making it pump MUCH FASTER, this immensely boosts speed and damage while putting internal organs and defense at risk.  (+20% reflex, +5% attack, -25% Defense)

Paw of the Thunder Wolf (toggle): A true predator's weapon, blades of lightning that encase the hands. They don't take much power to make but the more power used the less brittle they are.  They are meant for piercing not slashing, doing so almost ensures that they break. (+20% attack, +5% defense, -25% reflex)




Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:





Last edited by Zykar Beastt on Thu Mar 23, 2023 11:12 pm; edited 5 times in total
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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[Fighting Style] Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Zinogre - Thunder Wolf Empty Re: [Fighting Style] Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Zinogre - Thunder Wolf

This post has in-line assessment comments.Thu Mar 23, 2023 9:15 pm
[reject=Denied]You failed to submit your devil fruit claim for approval or I could've told you sooner that all potential Ryu Ryu no Mi mythical variants are event-only devil fruits.[/reject]

Zykar Beastt wrote:

Ryu Ryu no Mi, Model: Zinogre - The Thunder Wolf


Devil Fruit:Ryu Ryu no Mi, Model: Zinogre

Devil Fruit Type: Mythical Zoan

Devil Fruit Appearance: an egg-shaped fruit with flame-like scales colored white with blue tips. Two stems coming out of the front mimicking the horns of a Zinogre.

Devil Fruit Description: A fruit that permanently alters the body by adding a large tail patterned with sharp scales and fur, samurai amour esce scales on the shoulders back, and hands, as well as retractable claws on the fingers. Also changes the hair color to blue. Allows the user to absorb and create electricity, storing it in the claws, scales, and hair. By doing so speed and physical power is immensely increased.

Once fully awakened it will allow the user to turn into the mythical thunder wolf . . . the "Zinogre".

Fighting Style: Thunder Wolf

Weapon Utilization: Claws

Description: By absorbing and creating electricity the user can store it in the claws or scales that they gained from the devil fruit. Obviously, there is a limit to how much electricity can be created or stored in the body at one time. Electricity is passively created within the body but it is very slow. On the other hand, if electricity is directly absorbed it can be used right away. Once stored in the claws or scales it can then be spread to the muscles putting them into an "amped" state that greatly amplifies strength and speed. The more electricity used to amp the muscles the stronger they get but the more taxing the consequences once done battling. If stored in the claws they begin to glow adding extra sharpness as well as electricity to claw attacks.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:

Chief of the Hunt [passive]: From the constant training and living with the beasts of the forest he has an enhanced survival instinct. That mixed with his natural elven blood his eyesight and sense of smell are much better than that of a human. His muscles are also well-trained for any situation. Also excels in stealth and is amazing at sneaking up on people. His footsteps are silent.

Optimization [passive]: Certain compound movements have been perfected for utmost efficiency depending on the situation. Because of this, he has perfected running in its entirety. Being able to control his leg and calf muscles for the best balance power and speed without burning out too fast. (just runs a lot faster than the average pirate of his current level lol)  

Generator [passive]: Like a generator, The user can passively make electricity inside the body by converting the chemical energy gained from food into electricity.

Lightning Cloak (toggle): Basically surrounds the body with continuous sparks of lightning, making them sting to the touch and electrocuting those in contact with them.  (+20 defense, -20 reflex)

Hunter's Temper (toggle): Much like a predator tired of just barely letting their prey go the user becomes very aggravated pumping ALL stored electricity into the heart making it pump MUCH FASTER, this immensely boosts speed and damage while putting internal organs and defense at risk.  (+20% reflex, +5% attack, -25% Defense)




Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:



Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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[Fighting Style] Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Zinogre - Thunder Wolf Empty Re: [Fighting Style] Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Zinogre - Thunder Wolf

This post has in-line assessment comments.Thu Mar 23, 2023 9:42 pm
[warn]Upon reconsideration, I will allow this fruit under the classification of the Dog-Dog Fruit. However, there are still a few comments I have. Please see them below and address them accordingly.[/warn]

Zykar Beastt wrote:

Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Zinogre - The Thunder Wolf


Devil Fruit: Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Zinogre

Devil Fruit Type: Mythical Zoan

Devil Fruit Appearance: an egg-shaped fruit with flame-like scales colored white with blue tips. Two stems coming out of the front mimicking the horns of a Zinogre.

Devil Fruit Description: A fruit that permanently alters the body by adding a large tail patterned with sharp scales and fur, samurai amour esce scales on the shoulders back, and hands, as well as retractable claws on the fingers. Also changes the hair color to blue. Allows the user to absorb and [dass]create electricity[cmt]Based on what I'm reading in the Zinogre's lore, it appears that Zinogre still relies on outside sources to charge up its electricity. So, I'm gonna require you to do the same. You can charge it up through other means (such as lightning storms or fighting minks, or even just rubbing your hair on a balloon for two days straight. Please address this and make sure you amend any and all references in your fighting style regarding "creating" electricity.[/cmt][/dass], storing it in the claws, scales, and hair. By doing so speed and physical power is immensely increased.

[dass]Once fully awakened it will allow the user to turn into the mythical thunder wolf . . . the "Zinogre".[cmt]You don't need to awaken your devil fruit to turn into your full zoan form. You can do so from the start. But, the size (and power, of course) should start small and grow as your character gains tiers.[/cmt][/dass]

Fighting Style: Thunder Wolf

Weapon Utilization: Claws

Description: By absorbing and creating electricity the user can store it in the claws or scales that they gained from the devil fruit. Obviously, there is a limit to how much electricity can be created or stored in the body at one time. Electricity is passively created within the body but it is very slow. On the other hand, if electricity is directly absorbed it can be used right away. Once stored in the claws or scales it can then be spread to the muscles putting them into an "amped" state that greatly amplifies strength and speed. The more electricity used to amp the muscles the stronger they get but the more taxing the consequences once done battling. If stored in the claws they begin to glow adding extra sharpness as well as electricity to claw attacks.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:

Chief of the Hunt [passive]: From the constant training and living with the beasts of the forest he has an enhanced survival instinct. That mixed with his natural elven blood his eyesight and sense of smell are much better than that of a human. His muscles are also well-trained for any situation. Also excels in stealth and is amazing at sneaking up on people. His footsteps are silent.

Optimization [passive]: [dass]Certain compound movements have been perfected for utmost efficiency depending on the situation. Because of this, he has perfected running in its entirety. Being able to control his leg and calf muscles for the best balance power and speed without burning out too fast. (just runs a lot faster than the average pirate of his current level lol)[cmt]This passive is wholly unnecessary. You can reflect your character's speed by bumping up your Reflex.[/cmt][/dass]

Generator [passive]: Like a generator, The user can passively make electricity inside the body by converting the chemical energy gained from food into electricity.

Lightning Cloak (toggle): Basically surrounds the body with continuous sparks of lightning, making them sting to the touch and electrocuting those in contact with them.  [dass](+20 defense, -20 reflex)[cmt]As a mythical zoan fruit user, you get three toggles, and each one of them has to buff and debuff your stats by 25%.[/cmt][/dass]

Hunter's Temper (toggle): Much like a predator tired of just barely letting their prey go the user becomes very aggravated pumping ALL stored electricity into the heart making it pump MUCH FASTER, this immensely boosts speed and damage while putting internal organs and defense at risk.  (+20% reflex, +5% attack, -25% Defense)




Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:



Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Posts : 3907

[Fighting Style] Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Zinogre - Thunder Wolf Empty Re: [Fighting Style] Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Zinogre - Thunder Wolf

This post has in-line assessment comments.Thu Mar 23, 2023 10:47 pm
[warned=Just a couple of missed things.]

Zykar Beastt wrote:

Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Zinogre - The Thunder Wolf


Devil Fruit: Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Zinogre

Devil Fruit Type: Mythical Zoan

Devil Fruit Appearance: an egg-shaped fruit with flame-like scales colored white with blue tips. Two stems coming out of the front mimicking the horns of a Zinogre.

Devil Fruit Description: A fruit that permanently alters the body by adding a large tail patterned with sharp scales and fur, samurai amour esce scales on the shoulders back, and hands, as well as retractable claws on the fingers. Also changes the hair color to blue. Allows the user to absorb electricity, storing it in the claws, scales, and hair. By doing so speed and physical power is immensely increased.

Fighting Style: Thunder Wolf

Weapon Utilization: Claws

Description: By absorbing electricity the user can store it in the claws or scales that they gained from the devil fruit. Obviously, there is a limit to how much electricity can be stored in the body at one time. if electricity is directly absorbed it can be used right away. Once stored in the claws or scales it can then be spread to the muscles putting them into an "amped" state that greatly amplifies strength and speed. The more electricity used to amp the muscles the stronger they get but the more taxing the consequences once done battling. If stored in the claws they begin to glow adding extra sharpness as well as electricity to claw attacks.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:

Chief of the Hunt [passive]: From the constant training and living with the beasts of the forest he has an enhanced survival instinct. That mixed with his natural elven blood his eyesight and sense of smell are much better than that of a human. His muscles are also well-trained for any situation. Also excels in stealth and is amazing at sneaking up on people. His footsteps are silent.

Weapons of the Hunt [passive]: From that same training weapons like spears, staffs, and bows are his specialty, allowing him to wield one even though he does prefer his claws.

Battery [passive]: Like a battery, the user can take in electricity no matter the source. Too much can lead to blood poisoning and too little doesn't allow the usage of most techniques. When electricity is used it may also leak out excess power.

Lightning Cloak (toggle): Basically surrounds the body with continuous sparks of lightning, making them sting to the touch and electrocuting those in contact with them.  (+25% defense, -25% reflex)

Hunter's Temper (toggle): Much like a predator tired of just barely letting their prey go the user becomes very aggravated pumping ALL stored electricity into the heart making it pump MUCH FASTER, this immensely boosts speed and damage while putting internal organs and defense at risk.  (+20% reflex, +5% attack, -25% Defense)

Paw of the Thunder Wolf (toggle): A true predator's weapon, blades of lightning that encase the hands. They don't take much power to make but the more power used the less brittle they are.  They are meant for piercing not slashing, doing so almost ensures that they break. ([dass]+20% attack, +5 defense, -20% reflex[cmt]This should balance out to 25% buffs and 25% debuffs.[/cmt][/dass])




Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:



Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

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Posts : 3907

[Fighting Style] Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Zinogre - Thunder Wolf Empty Re: [Fighting Style] Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Zinogre - Thunder Wolf

This post has in-line assessment comments.Thu Mar 23, 2023 11:23 pm
[approved]

Zykar Beastt wrote:

Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Zinogre - The Thunder Wolf


Devil Fruit: Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Zinogre

Devil Fruit Type: Mythical Zoan

Devil Fruit Appearance: an egg-shaped fruit with flame-like scales colored white with blue tips. Two stems coming out of the front mimicking the horns of a Zinogre.

Devil Fruit Description: A fruit that permanently alters the body by adding a large tail patterned with sharp scales and fur, samurai amour esce scales on the shoulders back, and hands, as well as retractable claws on the fingers. Also changes the hair color to blue. Allows the user to absorb electricity, storing it in the claws, scales, and hair. By doing so speed and physical power is immensely increased.

Fighting Style: Thunder Wolf

Weapon Utilization: Claws

Description: By absorbing electricity the user can store it in the claws or scales that they gained from the devil fruit. Obviously, there is a limit to how much electricity can be stored in the body at one time. if electricity is directly absorbed it can be used right away. Once stored in the claws or scales it can then be spread to the muscles putting them into an "amped" state that greatly amplifies strength and speed. The more electricity used to amp the muscles the stronger they get but the more taxing the consequences once done battling. If stored in the claws they begin to glow adding extra sharpness as well as electricity to claw attacks.


Toggled and Passive Abilities:

Chief of the Hunt [passive]: From the constant training and living with the beasts of the forest he has an enhanced survival instinct. That mixed with his natural elven blood his eyesight and sense of smell are much better than that of a human. His muscles are also well-trained for any situation. Also excels in stealth and is amazing at sneaking up on people. His footsteps are silent.

Weapons of the Hunt [passive]: From that same training weapons like spears, staffs, and bows are his specialty, allowing him to wield one even though he does prefer his claws.

Battery [passive]: Like a battery, the user can take in electricity no matter the source. Too much can lead to blood poisoning and too little doesn't allow the usage of most techniques. When electricity is used it may also leak out excess power.

Lightning Cloak (toggle): Basically surrounds the body with continuous sparks of lightning, making them sting to the touch and electrocuting those in contact with them.  (+25% defense, -25% reflex)

Hunter's Temper (toggle): Much like a predator tired of just barely letting their prey go the user becomes very aggravated pumping ALL stored electricity into the heart making it pump MUCH FASTER, this immensely boosts speed and damage while putting internal organs and defense at risk.  (+20% reflex, +5% attack, -25% Defense)

Paw of the Thunder Wolf (toggle): A true predator's weapon, blades of lightning that encase the hands. They don't take much power to make but the more power used the less brittle they are.  They are meant for piercing not slashing, doing so almost ensures that they break. (+20% attack, +5% defense, -25% reflex)




Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:



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