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This post has in-line assessment comments.Fri Jul 28, 2023 7:12 pm

   
Kanui "The Unhallowed" Surize
   


   
Kanui Surize Desktop-wallpaper-kimimaro-aesthetic-kimimaro-thumbnail

   Basic Character Information
   


   Forename: Kanui
   Middle Name/Initial: N/A
   Surname: Surize
   Epithet: The Unhallowed
   Birthdate: 03/09/1806
   Gender: Male
   Species/Tribe: Human
   Faction:  Revolutionary
   Profession: Swordsman
   


   Physical Appearance
   


   Height: 5'10
   Weight: 170

   Hair Style: Long straight hair
   Hair Color: Silver
   Eye Color: Light Blue
   Scars: N/A
   Gear: Purple Rope used as a waist sash tied into a knot behind the back.

   Description:  Kanui carries an aura of serene determination with his distinct attire that strikes a balance between aesthetic and functionality. Dominating his appearance is a long-sleeved grey kimono shirt that drapes over his strong arms. The shirt is tailored to permit fluid motion, a crucial aspect for close combat situations. Its high collar brushes against his neck, adding a level of enigma to his already imposing presence.

Complementing the kimono shirt are his form-fitting black pants that trace the contours of his legs. The snug fit doesn't hinder his mobility, allowing Kanui to move effortlessly during high-stakes battles or while navigating the unpredictable terrains of the Grand Line.His feet are shod in durable, black boots. They show signs of extensive travels and skirmishes but are kept in commendable condition, providing him reliable protection and traction in all circumstances.

Securing his outfit in place is a wide purple rope belt wrapped around his waist. The deep shade contrasts with the rest of his attire, making it stand out. It is not just an accessory but also a symbol of his unwavering dedication to his cause.In its entirety, Kanui's attire is a reflection of his persona: a seasoned warrior, a guardian of the oppressed, and a defiant figure against all forms of tyranny. His outfit, though primarily utilitarian, does not lack in character and forms an integral part of his identity.
   


   The Past
   


   Main Traits: Stoic, Unnerving, Patient, Loving
   Likes: Cooking, Training, Reading,
   Dislikes: Unessecary Violence, Pickles, Impatience
   Unique laugh:  Yamamama

   Hometown: Please read the Turf Details of your home island provided in the Roleplay section of the forum. Some islands are a bit different from how you may remember them from canon, so it is imperative that you read them. However, you may choose to make up your own island instead also, in which case you may make up its history so long as it doesn't distort the overall history of the forum's plot.

   Personality: Kanui embodies a stoic demeanor, a quiet fortitude that can sometimes be mistaken for coldness. This aloof exterior masks an unyielding determination and a heart that deeply cares for those around him. He is unwavering in the face of tyranny and relentless in his pursuit of justice. Even when the odds are stacked against him, Kanui never falters, his spirit as unbreakable as the bones he manipulates.

In battle, Kanui is a force to be reckoned with, as calculating and precise as he is formidable. His strategies are often meticulously planned, reflecting the logical and tactical mind that resides within his impassive exterior. He wields his power with a surgeon's precision, controlling his own skeletal structure to strike with devastating effectiveness.

Despite his fearsome prowess, Kanui is not an unapproachable figure. Outside of battle, his demeanor softens considerably. He possesses a calm, easygoing nature that belies his intense presence. He's a man of few words but listens attentively when others speak, offering wisdom when needed.His kindness doesn't stop at passive listening, however. He often checks in on his crew, showing concern for their well-being. His quiet demeanor hides a depth of empathy, proving that his heart is just as robust as his bones. It is these qualities that make Kanui a reliable ally, a steadfast friend, and a beacon of hope against the darkness of tyranny.

   
History:
   
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3874

Kanui Surize Empty Re: Kanui Surize

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Aug 01, 2023 2:50 pm
[warn=Comments]
Good work finishing up your bio. I did have a few concerns that I have noted in in-line comments below, though.
[/warn]

Kanui wrote:

   
Kanui "The Unhallowed" Surize
   


   
[dass]
Kanui Surize Desktop-wallpaper-kimimaro-aesthetic-kimimaro-thumbnail
See comment.[cmt]You skipped the face-claiming step in the character creation guide. If you don't put in a face claim and someone else claims this same character for their own OC, you will not be allowed to use it as your FC.[/cmt][/dass]

   Basic Character Information
   


   Forename: Kanui
   Middle Name/Initial: N/A
   Surname: Surize
   Epithet: The Unhallowed
   Birthdate: 03/09/1806
   Gender: Male
   Species/Tribe: Human
   Faction:  Revolutionary
   Profession: Swordsman
   


   Physical Appearance
   


   Height: 5'10
   Weight: 170

   Hair Style: Long straight hair
   Hair Color: Silver
   Eye Color: Light Blue
   Scars: N/A
   Gear: Purple Rope used as a waist sash tied into a knot behind the back.

   Description:  Kanui carries an aura of serene determination with his distinct attire that strikes a balance between aesthetic and functionality. Dominating his appearance is a long-sleeved grey kimono shirt that drapes over his strong arms. The shirt is tailored to permit fluid motion, a crucial aspect for close combat situations. Its high collar brushes against his neck, adding a level of enigma to his already imposing presence.

Complementing the kimono shirt are his form-fitting black pants that trace the contours of his legs. The snug fit doesn't hinder his mobility, allowing Kanui to move effortlessly during high-stakes battles or while navigating the unpredictable terrains of the Grand Line.His feet are shod in durable, black boots. They show signs of extensive travels and skirmishes but are kept in commendable condition, providing him reliable protection and traction in all circumstances.

Securing his outfit in place is a wide purple rope belt wrapped around his waist. The deep shade contrasts with the rest of his attire, making it stand out. It is not just an accessory but also a symbol of his unwavering dedication to his cause.In its entirety, Kanui's attire is a reflection of his persona: a seasoned warrior, a guardian of the oppressed, and a defiant figure against all forms of tyranny. His outfit, though primarily utilitarian, does not lack in character and forms an integral part of his identity.
   


   The Past
   


   Main Traits: Stoic, Unnerving, Patient, Loving
   Likes: Cooking, Training, Reading,
   Dislikes: Unessecary Violence, Pickles, Impatience
   Unique laugh:  Yamamama

   [ass=You missed this field.]Hometown: Please read the Turf Details of your home island provided in the Roleplay section of the forum. Some islands are a bit different from how you may remember them from canon, so it is imperative that you read them. However, you may choose to make up your own island instead also, in which case you may make up its history so long as it doesn't distort the overall history of the forum's plot.[/ass]

   Personality: Kanui embodies a stoic demeanor, a quiet fortitude that can sometimes be mistaken for coldness. This aloof exterior masks an unyielding determination and a heart that deeply cares for those around him. He is unwavering in the face of tyranny and relentless in his pursuit of justice. Even when the odds are stacked against him, Kanui never falters, his spirit as unbreakable as the bones he manipulates.

In battle, Kanui is a force to be reckoned with, as calculating and precise as he is formidable. His strategies are often meticulously planned, reflecting the logical and tactical mind that resides within his impassive exterior. He wields his power with a surgeon's precision, controlling his own skeletal structure to strike with devastating effectiveness.

Despite his fearsome prowess, Kanui is not an unapproachable figure. Outside of battle, his demeanor softens considerably. He possesses a calm, easygoing nature that belies his intense presence. He's a man of few words but listens attentively when others speak, offering wisdom when needed.His kindness doesn't stop at passive listening, however. He often checks in on his crew, showing concern for their well-being. His quiet demeanor hides a depth of empathy, proving that his heart is just as robust as his bones. It is these qualities that make Kanui a reliable ally, a steadfast friend, and a beacon of hope against the darkness of tyranny.

   
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