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This post has in-line assessment comments.Fri Sep 15, 2023 11:53 am

Iras Reyes


[Bio] Iras Reyes S4vkA

Basic Character Information


Forename: Iras.
Middle Name/Initial: ---
Surname: Reyes.
Epithet: The Black Pearl.
Birthdate: 1/10/1774| 55 Years Old.
Gender: Female.
Species/Tribe: Merfolk.
Faction: Pirate.
Profession: Archelogist + Navigator.


Physical Appearance


Height: 15'.
Weight: 990 lbs.

Hair Style: Medium Length + Straight.
Hair Color: Charcoal Black.
Eye Color: Dark Grey.
Scars: A deep healed scar over her chest, diagonally.
Gear: Her clothes are loose and simple, yet stylish and easy to get out of, dark in coloration. For when she needs to submerge in water. She keeps two daggers at her hips, held in leather harnesses for easy access.

Description: Human Form: Iras stands at 15' even with pale, alabastor skin. Flawless, save for the ugly gash-like scar scours the length of her chest diagonally. From right shoulder to left hip. Her eyes are dark grey, cold, and flat. Only warms when something she likes or loves comes to her notice. Her hair is medium to short in length and appears charcoal black in color. In her human form she adores simple yet stylish outfits usually in muted or dark pigments. And refuses to wear any kind of shoes due to her nature as merfolk.

Mermaid Form: Her mermaid form is similar to her human form, save for the bottom half of her body. Which is a fishtail colored with various scales of black, grey, and violet. Gleaming in the water and sunlight like various black jewels strewn about her person. She gains visible gills on the side of her neck which is also grey. Otherwise, she appears completely the same as her humanoid form.




The Past


Main Traits: Loyal, Inquisitive, Fierce, Reserved.
Likes: Mysteries, Trinkets, Freedom.
Dislikes: Marines, Confinement, Small Spaces.
Unique laugh: "Sha-ha-ha-ha-ha!"

Hometown: Fishman Island.

Personality: Cold, calm, complicated. There's more than what she shows deep below her skin. A pretty face stuck in a perpetual frown. Eyes as hard as diamonds. Skin statuesque. She appears cold and conceited on the surface but is anything but. To those who know her, she is a strong-willed, passionate, warm-hearted, and loyal person. Someone who has suffered a lot due to her naivety in her youth. And has since created strong walls to protect herself from hurt once again.

But she is a human being underneath it all. Who desires love and friendship like any other person. She lies and deceives if it means protecting those she cares about. She also can't let innocent people suffer, despite herself. And has a particular connection towards outcasts and the disenfranchised. She tried to be cold like ice. But inside she is sweet as candy. A nurturing and caring individual who would give the clothes off her back to make sure a friend can stay warm.

This doesn't mean she is meek, however. She is ruthless in a fight. Especially, against Marines and the World Government which she loathes. Above all, she is a seeker of knowledge. A pursuer of history. Someone whose dream is to discover the mysteries of this big vast oceanic world. And if it means she has to crack some skulls and break some petty rules to reach it? Then so be it. In the end, she'll follow her dreams. With her crew beside her.

History:


Last edited by Iras Reyes on Fri Sep 15, 2023 7:20 pm; edited 2 times in total
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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[Bio] Iras Reyes Empty Re: [Bio] Iras Reyes

This post has in-line assessment comments.Fri Sep 15, 2023 7:04 pm
[warn=""]A very well-written bio overall! I just had a few comments that you can find below.[/warn]

Iras Reyes wrote:

Iras Reyes


[Bio] Iras Reyes S4vkA
[dass]Click here to see comment.[cmt]I think you may have skipped steps 1 through 4 in the character creation guide. You must submit your face claim. You may also want to roll for your Start Me Up! bonus.[/cmt][/dass]

Basic Character Information


Forename: Iras.
Middle Name/Initial: ---
Surname: Reyes.
Epithet: The Black Pearl.
Birthdate: 1/10/1774| 55 Years Old.
Gender: Female.
Species/Tribe: Merfolk.
Faction: Pirate.
Profession: Archelogist + Navigator.


Physical Appearance


[ass=15 inches? XD]Height: 15".[/ass]
Weight: 990 lbs.

Hair Style: Medium Length + Straight.
Hair Color: Charcoal Black.
Eye Color: Dark Grey.
Scars: A deep healed scar over her chest, diagonally.
Gear: Her clothes are loose and simple, yet stylish and easy to get out of, dark in coloration. For when she needs to submerge in water. She keeps two daggers at her hips, held in leather harnesses for easy access.

Description: Human Form: [dass]Iras stands at 6'0"[cmt]The height/length change doesn't quite make sense. It is understood that merfolks' tails simply gain the ability to "split", effectively behaving as independent limbs. She should still be as long/tall as she would be in her mermaid form.[/cmt][/dass] even with pale, alabastor skin. Flawless, save for the ugly gash-like scar scours the length of her chest diagonally. From right shoulder to left hip. Her eyes are dark grey, cold, and flat. Only warms when something she likes or loves comes to her notice. Her hair is medium to short in length and appears charcoal black in color. In her human form she adores simple yet stylish outfits usually in muted or dark pigments. And refuses to wear any kind of shoes due to her nature as merfolk.

Mermaid Form: Her mermaid form is similar to her human form, save for the bottom half of her body. Which is a fishtail colored with various scales of black, grey, and violet. Gleaming in the water and sunlight like various black jewels strewn about her person. She gains visible gills on the side of her neck which is also grey. Otherwise, she appears completely the same as her humanoid form.




The Past


Main Traits: Loyal, Inquisitive, Fierce, Reserved.
Likes: Mysteries, Trinkets, Freedom.
Dislikes: Marines, Confinement, Small Spaces.
Unique laugh: "Sha-ha-ha-ha-ha!"

Hometown: Fishman Island.

Personality: Cold, calm, complicated. There's more than what she shows deep below her skin. A pretty face stuck in a perpetual frown. Eyes as hard as diamonds. Skin statuesque. She appears cold and conceited on the surface but is anything but. To those who know her, she is a strong-willed, passionate, warm-hearted, and loyal person. Someone who has suffered a lot due to her naivety in her youth. And has since created strong walls to protect herself from hurt once again.

But she is a human being underneath it all. Who desires love and friendship like any other person. She lies and deceives if it means protecting those she cares about. She also can't let innocent people suffer, despite herself. And has a particular connection towards outcasts and the disenfranchised. She tried to be cold like ice. But inside she is sweet as candy. A nurturing and caring individual who would give the clothes off her back to make sure a friend can stay warm.

This doesn't mean she is meek, however. She is ruthless in a fight. Especially, against Marines and the World Government which she loathes. Above all, she is a seeker of knowledge. A pursuer of history. Someone whose dream is to discover the mysteries of this big vast oceanic world. And if it means she has to crack some skulls and break some petty rules to reach it? Then so be it. In the end, she'll follow her dreams. With her crew beside her.

History:
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3879

[Bio] Iras Reyes Empty Re: [Bio] Iras Reyes

This post has in-line assessment comments.Fri Sep 15, 2023 7:26 pm
[approve]You once again missed the 15 inches height, but I've corrected that for you.[/approve]
Iras Reyes wrote:

Iras Reyes


[Bio] Iras Reyes S4vkA

Basic Character Information


Forename: Iras.
Middle Name/Initial: ---
Surname: Reyes.
Epithet: The Black Pearl.
Birthdate: 1/10/1774| 55 Years Old.
Gender: Female.
Species/Tribe: Merfolk.
Faction: Pirate.
Profession: Archelogist + Navigator.


Physical Appearance


Height: 15".
Weight: 990 lbs.

Hair Style: Medium Length + Straight.
Hair Color: Charcoal Black.
Eye Color: Dark Grey.
Scars: A deep healed scar over her chest, diagonally.
Gear: Her clothes are loose and simple, yet stylish and easy to get out of, dark in coloration. For when she needs to submerge in water. She keeps two daggers at her hips, held in leather harnesses for easy access.

Description: Human Form: Iras stands at 15" even with pale, alabastor skin. Flawless, save for the ugly gash-like scar scours the length of her chest diagonally. From right shoulder to left hip. Her eyes are dark grey, cold, and flat. Only warms when something she likes or loves comes to her notice. Her hair is medium to short in length and appears charcoal black in color. In her human form she adores simple yet stylish outfits usually in muted or dark pigments. And refuses to wear any kind of shoes due to her nature as merfolk.

Mermaid Form: Her mermaid form is similar to her human form, save for the bottom half of her body. Which is a fishtail colored with various scales of black, grey, and violet. Gleaming in the water and sunlight like various black jewels strewn about her person. She gains visible gills on the side of her neck which is also grey. Otherwise, she appears completely the same as her humanoid form.




The Past


Main Traits: Loyal, Inquisitive, Fierce, Reserved.
Likes: Mysteries, Trinkets, Freedom.
Dislikes: Marines, Confinement, Small Spaces.
Unique laugh: "Sha-ha-ha-ha-ha!"

Hometown: Fishman Island.

Personality: Cold, calm, complicated. There's more than what she shows deep below her skin. A pretty face stuck in a perpetual frown. Eyes as hard as diamonds. Skin statuesque. She appears cold and conceited on the surface but is anything but. To those who know her, she is a strong-willed, passionate, warm-hearted, and loyal person. Someone who has suffered a lot due to her naivety in her youth. And has since created strong walls to protect herself from hurt once again.

But she is a human being underneath it all. Who desires love and friendship like any other person. She lies and deceives if it means protecting those she cares about. She also can't let innocent people suffer, despite herself. And has a particular connection towards outcasts and the disenfranchised. She tried to be cold like ice. But inside she is sweet as candy. A nurturing and caring individual who would give the clothes off her back to make sure a friend can stay warm.

This doesn't mean she is meek, however. She is ruthless in a fight. Especially, against Marines and the World Government which she loathes. Above all, she is a seeker of knowledge. A pursuer of history. Someone whose dream is to discover the mysteries of this big vast oceanic world. And if it means she has to crack some skulls and break some petty rules to reach it? Then so be it. In the end, she'll follow her dreams. With her crew beside her.

History:
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