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Orion Montgomery
Orion Montgomery
[tracker=/t2718-tracker-orion-montgomery#17682]
Name : Orion T. Montgomery
Age : 26
Height : 6'8"
Weight : 283 lbs
Species : Human
Faction : Pirate
Alliance : N/A
Crew : The Vintage Horde
Ship : N/A
Crew Role : Antiquarian
Devil Fruit : Arai Arai no Mi (Rough-Rough Fruit)
Bounty : [bel=r] 12,500,000
Quality Score : S+
Crew Pool : [bel=u] 15,000,000
Balance : [bel] 41,959,429
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[Bio] Orion Montgomery Empty [Bio] Orion Montgomery

This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Nov 13, 2023 1:57 pm

Orion Triante Montgomery


[Bio] Orion Montgomery Oneearedviking_26_year_old_man_with_green_hair_in_messy_ponytai_757fce5d-6118-484a-b3f5-5dae85331ee3

Basic Character Information


Forename: Orion
Middle Name/Initial: Triante
Surname: Montgomery
Epithet: TBD, Let the World Decide
Birthdate: December 27th, 1803.
Gender: Male
Species/Tribe: Human
Faction: Pirate
Profession: Thief (Quit), Antiquarian




Physical Appearance


Height: 6'8" [1.88 m]
Weight: 283lbs [128.4 kg]

Hair Style: Long hair, often done in a lazy pony or braided to keep out of the way. It is messy without any concern for appearance. Long simply from being unkept.
Hair Color: Light green bordering on shades of white.
Eye Color: Steel Blue
Scars: Nail marks around the neck. Back covered in whip scars.
Gear: Orion is dressed in a threadbare sleeveless and hooded duster than extends down to his knees. It was once a vibrant forest green but has since faded to a muted olive. He wears simple leather pants, patched, scratched and held up by a rope belt tied loosely around his waist. Shirts and shoes are the enemies of freedom. And a once gold pocket watch, worn by hands, is gingerly kept in interior pocket, the chain seen cuffed to the dusters lapel. A long black scarf covers his neck and extends nearly the length of his body. He wields a tall metal umbrella, the same length of his body, attached to a long chain he wraps around his arm.

Description: Orion is on the taller side for humans, however, not so tall as to stand out. His face is typically buried beneath a matt of his unkept long hair. He is of a leaner build, muscular but not unwieldy, with strength that seems geared to quick reflexes over brute bullheaded power.

Scars cover his neck and back, most covered by his duster and scarf. Those that peak out the holes of his duster are covered by an ornate series of clockwork gear and stylized antique machine tattoos that extend down his left arm in a complex sleeve.

His hair is often in the way, but too low priority to address. It is most often pulled back in a long pony or mixed with loose braids and tied with ribbon.




The Past


Main Traits: Direct. Politically Minded. Terrible with Money.

Likes: Puns, Dad jokes, Pizza, Freedom, Clutter and Knick-Knacks, Children, Farmer's Markets, and Handmade Crafts. 
Dislikes: Birds, particularly pigeons. Rat's with wings, the lot of em. Spicy Food. Sugary Cocktails. Authority. People touching his collectibles. His Scars. Organized Crime.

Unique laugh: Wahaha!

Hometown: Spider Miles - Slums.

Personality: Orion is the type of person who can correctly read the room and then completely blunders through it because he is too defiant to care for social morays. A childhood of avoiding eye contact and unforeseen slights has left with him a sharp intuition but a rebellious apathy.

Cunning behind a smile, Orion prefers combat where he maintains some semblance of control or uses versatility and unpredictability to destabilize his opponent. He often tinkers with the limits of his devil fruit for that very effect. He is a calculating fighter who tries to stay calm and not be ruled by his temper, despite its many triggers.

History:


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Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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[Bio] Orion Montgomery Empty Re: [Bio] Orion Montgomery

This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Nov 13, 2023 3:33 pm
[warn]
I really like the bio overall! The history was very well-written. The first-person perspective was an interesting choice and executed effectively.

I just have one hangup that I must insist you amend before I can approve the bio though. I would like you to make Orion a human. As per his bio, him being an oni has absolutely no relevance - and his particular brand of horn simply doesn't exist in our universe (and frankly, I just don't like it).
[/warn]

Orion Montgomery wrote:

Orion Triante Montgomery


[Bio] Orion Montgomery Pokemon__n_by_princekara_d3hkrjh-414w-2x.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9NDI4IiwicGF0aCI6IlwvZlwvMDhhN2RhMjYtNTAxYy00OWJmLTg5Y2MtYTdlNjM1ZjY2YmZhXC9kM2hrcmpoLTM2MTVhZDA3LTUxYWMtNDRiOC1hMWEwLTNkY2Q2YzJlYThjNy5wbmciLCJ3aWR0aCI6Ijw9ODAwIn1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmltYWdlLm9wZXJhdGlvbnMiXX0

Basic Character Information


Forename: Orion
Middle Name/Initial: Triante
Surname: Montgomery
Epithet: TBD, Let the World Decide
Birthdate: December 27th, 1803.
Gender: Male
Species/Tribe: Human/Oni
Faction: Pirate
Profession: Thief (Quit), Antiquarian




Physical Appearance


Height: 6'8" [1.88 m]
Weight: 283lbs [128.4 kg]

Hair Style: Long hair, often done in a lazy pony or braided to keep out of the way. It is messy without any concern for appearance. Long simply from being unkept.
Hair Color: Light green bordering on shades of white.
Eye Color: Steel Blue
Scars: Nail marks around the neck. Back covered in whip scars.
Gear: Orion is dressed in a threadbare sleeveless and hooded duster than extends down to his knees. It was once a vibrant forest green but has since faded to a muted olive. He wears simple leather pants, patched, scratched and held up by a rope belt tied loosely around his waist. Shirts and shoes are the enemies of freedom. And a once gold pocket watch, worn by hands, is gingerly kept in interior pocket, the chain seen cuffed to the dusters lapel. A long black scarf covers his neck and extends nearly the length of his body. He wields a tall metal umbrella, the same length of his body, attached to a long chain he wraps around his arm.

Description: Orion is on the taller side for humans, however, not so tall as to stand out. A single Oni horn, chipped and scarred, grows in a jagged curve over his left eye. It is typically buried beneath a matt of his unkept long hair. He is of a leaner build, muscular but not unwieldy, with strength that seems geared to quick reflexes over brute bullheaded power.

Scars cover his neck and back, most covered by his duster and scarf. Those that peak out the holes of his duster are covered by an ornate series of clockwork gear and stylized antique machine tattoos that extend down his left arm in a complex sleeve.

His hair is often in the way, but too low priority to address. It is most often pulled back in a long pony or mixed with loose braids and tied with ribbon.




The Past


Main Traits: Direct. Politically Minded. Terrible with Money.

Likes: Puns, Dad jokes, Pizza, Freedom, Clutter and Knick-Knacks, Children, Farmer's Markets, and Handmade Crafts. 
Dislikes: Birds, particularly pigeons. Rat's with wings, the lot of em. Spicy Food. Sugary Cocktails. Authority. People touching his collectibles. His Scars. Organized Crime.

Unique laugh: Wahaha!

Hometown: Spider Miles - Slums.

Personality: Orion is the type of person who can correctly read the room and then completely blunders through it because he is too defiant to care for social morays. A childhood of avoiding eye contact and unforeseen slights has left with him a sharp intuition but a rebellious apathy.

Cunning behind a smile, Orion prefers combat where he maintains some semblance of control or uses versatility and unpredictability to destabilize his opponent. He often tinkers with the limits of his devil fruit for that very effect. He is a calculating fighter who tries to stay calm and not be ruled by his temper, despite its many triggers.

History:
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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[Bio] Orion Montgomery Empty Re: [Bio] Orion Montgomery

This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Nov 13, 2023 3:40 pm
[approve]Spider Miles spits out another orphan![/approve]
Orion Montgomery wrote:

Orion Triante Montgomery


[Bio] Orion Montgomery Pokemon__n_by_princekara_d3hkrjh-414w-2x.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9NDI4IiwicGF0aCI6IlwvZlwvMDhhN2RhMjYtNTAxYy00OWJmLTg5Y2MtYTdlNjM1ZjY2YmZhXC9kM2hrcmpoLTM2MTVhZDA3LTUxYWMtNDRiOC1hMWEwLTNkY2Q2YzJlYThjNy5wbmciLCJ3aWR0aCI6Ijw9ODAwIn1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmltYWdlLm9wZXJhdGlvbnMiXX0

Basic Character Information


Forename: Orion
Middle Name/Initial: Triante
Surname: Montgomery
Epithet: TBD, Let the World Decide
Birthdate: December 27th, 1803.
Gender: Male
Species/Tribe: Human
Faction: Pirate
Profession: Thief (Quit), Antiquarian




Physical Appearance


Height: 6'8" [1.88 m]
Weight: 283lbs [128.4 kg]

Hair Style: Long hair, often done in a lazy pony or braided to keep out of the way. It is messy without any concern for appearance. Long simply from being unkept.
Hair Color: Light green bordering on shades of white.
Eye Color: Steel Blue
Scars: Nail marks around the neck. Back covered in whip scars.
Gear: Orion is dressed in a threadbare sleeveless and hooded duster than extends down to his knees. It was once a vibrant forest green but has since faded to a muted olive. He wears simple leather pants, patched, scratched and held up by a rope belt tied loosely around his waist. Shirts and shoes are the enemies of freedom. And a once gold pocket watch, worn by hands, is gingerly kept in interior pocket, the chain seen cuffed to the dusters lapel. A long black scarf covers his neck and extends nearly the length of his body. He wields a tall metal umbrella, the same length of his body, attached to a long chain he wraps around his arm.

Description: Orion is on the taller side for humans, however, not so tall as to stand out. His face is typically buried beneath a matt of his unkept long hair. He is of a leaner build, muscular but not unwieldy, with strength that seems geared to quick reflexes over brute bullheaded power.

Scars cover his neck and back, most covered by his duster and scarf. Those that peak out the holes of his duster are covered by an ornate series of clockwork gear and stylized antique machine tattoos that extend down his left arm in a complex sleeve.

His hair is often in the way, but too low priority to address. It is most often pulled back in a long pony or mixed with loose braids and tied with ribbon.




The Past


Main Traits: Direct. Politically Minded. Terrible with Money.

Likes: Puns, Dad jokes, Pizza, Freedom, Clutter and Knick-Knacks, Children, Farmer's Markets, and Handmade Crafts. 
Dislikes: Birds, particularly pigeons. Rat's with wings, the lot of em. Spicy Food. Sugary Cocktails. Authority. People touching his collectibles. His Scars. Organized Crime.

Unique laugh: Wahaha!

Hometown: Spider Miles - Slums.

Personality: Orion is the type of person who can correctly read the room and then completely blunders through it because he is too defiant to care for social morays. A childhood of avoiding eye contact and unforeseen slights has left with him a sharp intuition but a rebellious apathy.

Cunning behind a smile, Orion prefers combat where he maintains some semblance of control or uses versatility and unpredictability to destabilize his opponent. He often tinkers with the limits of his devil fruit for that very effect. He is a calculating fighter who tries to stay calm and not be ruled by his temper, despite its many triggers.

History:
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