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Fushigi Daizo
Fushigi Daizo
[tracker=/t2763-tracker-fushigi-daizo#18124]
Name : Fushigi Daizo
Epithet : The Prince of Merchants
Age : 21
Height : 5’7”
Weight : 152lbs
Species : Human
Faction : Civilian
Balance : [bel] 50,000
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Posts : 4

[Bio] Fushigi Daizo Empty [Bio] Fushigi Daizo

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Dec 26, 2023 1:31 pm

Fushigi Daizo


[Bio] Fushigi Daizo Oig_4510

Basic Character Information


Forename: Fushigi
Middle Name/Initial:-
Surname: Daizo
Epithet: ‘The Prince of Merchants’
Birthdate: October 3rd, 1808
Gender: Male
Species/Tribe: Human
Faction: Civilian
Profession: Merchant, Archeologist


Physical Appearance


Height: 5’ 7”
Weight: 152lbs

Hair Style: Spiky Dreadlocks
Hair Color: Blue with white & black highlights
Eye Color: Blue
Scars: Right Chest Blade
Gear: As an aspiring gear head, Fushigi sports the latest model of binocular goggles around his neck. His fashion sense is simple but trendy, white inside wool dress shirt accompanied by his famous Royal Blue Navy Jacket. It’s the first item he’d bought with his money from merchanting and he’s had multiple alterations done throughout the years to make sure it continues to be a snug fit.

Description: With skin of bronze and smile worth a million dollars, he’s quite the charmer for someone with a sliver tongue, that’s a deadly combination. Quite athletic in build, a physique acquired from countless digs and expeditions, when it comes to foot race or escaping the local thugs, Fushigi won’t loose to most.


The Past


Main Traits:
  • Peace Loving - Trying to avoid conflict as much as possible, Fushigi is prone to running away from fights as opposed to starting them. He’s experienced the hardships that poverty brings (violence and crime being two of them) and tries his best to escape that way of thinking. Doesn’t mean he’s a pushover though, he’ll stand up and speak his mind on what’s right and wrong as he sees it.
  • Gold-monger - Belly. Belly. Belly. Say it three times for the ones in the back. More than anything else in life, over his own family and friends, Fushigi loves wealth and has accumulated quite a bit for himself. However, he always ends up broke being a Robin Hood of sorts, giving back his biding war earnings to the slums.
  • Charismatic - Self-Explanatory. He could sell a pool of sea water to a Devil Fruit user.
  • Two-Faced - Unless he’s known you for a long time, everyone is a pawn to be used as a negotiation chip for a new deal for him.
  • Well-Spoken - What can ya say, the kid’s slick with his words.


Likes:
  • Coconut Water
  • Warm Weather
  • Cold Showers
  • Rainy Days
  • Gold, Treasure and Rare Trinkets.


Dislikes:

  • Afraid of Heights
  • Short Voyages
  • Loud Noises
  • Loose Women/Men
  • Sweet Liquors



Unique laugh: Fu-shigigigigi

Hometown: Black Drum Kingdom

Personality: Meet Fushigi, a twenty-one-year-old merchant whose dynamic personality is a captivating blend of quick wit, a relentless pursuit of wealth, a passion for peace, and an undeniable charisma that draws people in like moths to a flame.

Fushigi's quick wit is his secret weapon in the bustling world of commerce. Always a step ahead in negotiations, he navigates the intricate web of deals with finesse and sharp intelligence. Whether haggling in a crowded marketplace or engaging in a high-stakes business meeting, Fushigi's mind works at lightning speed, making split-second decisions that leave others in awe.

However, beneath the veneer of wit lies a relentless pursuit of wealth that defines Fushigi's essence. Money is not just a means to an end for him; it is the end itself. He is driven by an insatiable hunger for success and financial prosperity. Fushigi meticulously strategizes each business move, always seeking opportunities to amass more wealth and expand his influence. To him, every deal is a stepping stone toward a more opulent and secure future.

Surprisingly, amidst the cutthroat world of commerce, Fushigi harbors a deep-seated love for peace. He abhors unnecessary conflicts and seeks harmony in his personal and professional relationships. Fushigi understands that a stable environment is conducive to thriving business, and he endeavors to maintain tranquility in both his dealings and his personal life. This unexpected combination of a money-driven mindset and a penchant for peace sets Fushigi apart in the competitive merchant landscape.

At the heart of Fushigi's charm is his charisma, a magnetic quality that captivates those around him. His presence is felt in any room he enters, and people are drawn to his confident demeanor and engaging conversation. Fushigi effortlessly weaves through social circles, leaving a lasting impression on everyone he encounters. His charisma serves as a valuable asset, opening doors and creating opportunities that may have otherwise remained closed.

Despite his love for peace, Fushigi's personality takes an intriguing turn when the arena shifts to physical confrontation. He relishes a good challenge in combat, displaying a different facet of his character. Whether it's a strategic duel or a physical altercation, Fushigi embraces the thrill of overcoming obstacles and proving his mettle. However, true to his pacifist ways, he’ll use his Devil Fruit abilities to end fights in the most non-volatile manner possible.

In essence, Fushigi, the twenty-one-year-old merchant, is a captivating individual who navigates the world with quick wit, a relentless pursuit of wealth, a love for peace, and a charismatic flair. His story is one of strategic brilliance in the pursuit of financial success, tempered by an unexpected appreciation for tranquility and an eagerness to face challenges head-on when the need arises.


History:



Last edited by Fushigi Daizo on Wed Dec 27, 2023 1:12 pm; edited 2 times in total
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror" / "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Posts : 3840

[Bio] Fushigi Daizo Empty Re: [Bio] Fushigi Daizo

This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Dec 27, 2023 11:22 am
[warn]Overall, this was a very well-written bio. I just had a few comments and concerns that I'd like for you to note or perhaps even act on.

- I can't say I love the naming scheme. A Japanese-esque name for a non-Wano character isn't out of place in One Piece, but, what I don't like specifically is "Griffon Daizo". A distinctly Japanese last name mixed with a distinctly Western first name feels like a classically cringey RP name. Also, if you're gonna use the Japanese naming scheme, you should stylize the name with the last name first for consistency's sake.

- The personality was exceptionally well-written, but I think the "paradoxical" facets you've given Fushigi work against him. If he's a pacifist character who doesn't enjoy violence, then commit to that. Don't also then make him an eager and borderline genius combat specialist. It turns your character into a Gary Stu.

- In the same vein as above, but not entirely, Fushigi is starting off as a level 1 character. For him to have "mastered the principles of rokushiki" is out of the question. In fact, the whole "trained by an ex-Cipher Pol agent" deal feels shoe-horned in. I'd advise you to just be rid of that and play into a more utility-based fighting style where he prefers to use his devil fruit powers in service of his mercantile endeavours, but if push comes to shove (pun intended), he does have some creative ways of using his fruit (not necessarily to win fights, but to resolve them in his favour. Whether that be to escape, hide, or simply to make his opponents inert - even if just by charming them).
[/warn]

Fushigi Daizo wrote:

Fushigi Daizo


[Bio] Fushigi Daizo Oig_4510

Basic Character Information


Forename: Fushigi
Middle Name/Initial:-
Surname: Daizo
Epithet: ‘The Prince of Merchants’
Birthdate: October 3rd, 1808
Gender: Male
Species/Tribe: Human
Faction: Civilian
Profession: Merchant, Archeologist


Physical Appearance


Height: 5’ 7”
Weight: 152lbs

Hair Style: Spiky Dreadlocks
Hair Color: Blue with white & black highlights
Eye Color: Blue
Scars: Right Chest Blade
Gear: As an aspiring gear head, Fushigi sports the latest model of binocular goggles around his neck. His fashion sense is simple but trendy, white inside wool dress shirt accompanied by his famous Royal Blue Navy Jacket. It’s the first item he’d bought with his money from merchanting and he’s had multiple alterations done throughout the years to make sure it continues to be a snug fit.

Description: With skin of bronze and smile worth a million dollars, he’s quite the charmer for someone with a sliver tongue, that’s a deadly combination. Quite athletic in build, a physique acquired from countless digs and expeditions, when it comes to foot race or escaping the local thugs, Fushigi won’t loose to most.


The Past


Main Traits:
  • Peace Loving - Trying to avoid conflict as much as possible, Fushigi is prone to running away from fights as opposed to starting them. He’s experienced the hardships that poverty brings (violence and crime being two of them) and tries his best to escape that way of thinking. Doesn’t mean he’s a pushover though, he’ll stand up and speak his mind on what’s right and wrong as he sees it.
  • Gold-monger - Belly. Belly. Belly. Say it three times for the ones in the back. More than anything else in life, over his own family and friends, Fushigi loves wealth and has accumulated quite a bit for himself. However, he always ends up broke being a Robin Hood of sorts, giving back his biding war earnings to the slums.
  • Charismatic - Self-Explanatory. He could sell a pool of sea water to a Devil Fruit user.
  • Two-Faced - Unless he’s known you for a long time, everyone is a pawn to be used as a negotiation chip for a new deal for him.
  • Well-Spoken - What can ya say, the kid’s slick with his words.


Likes:
  • Coconut Water
  • Warm Weather
  • Cold Showers
  • Rainy Days
  • Gold, Treasure and Rare Trinkets.


Dislikes:

  • Afraid of Heights
  • Short Voyages
  • Loud Noises
  • Loose Women/Men
  • Sweet Liquors



Unique laugh: Fu-shigigigigi

Hometown: Black Drum Kingdom

Personality: Meet Fushigi, a twenty-one-year-old merchant whose dynamic personality is a captivating blend of quick wit, a relentless pursuit of wealth, a passion for peace, and an undeniable charisma that draws people in like moths to a flame.

Fushigi's quick wit is his secret weapon in the bustling world of commerce. Always a step ahead in negotiations, he navigates the intricate web of deals with finesse and sharp intelligence. Whether haggling in a crowded marketplace or engaging in a high-stakes business meeting, Fushigi's mind works at lightning speed, making split-second decisions that leave others in awe.

However, beneath the veneer of wit lies a relentless pursuit of wealth that defines Fushigi's essence. Money is not just a means to an end for him; it is the end itself. He is driven by an insatiable hunger for success and financial prosperity. Fushigi meticulously strategizes each business move, always seeking opportunities to amass more wealth and expand his influence. To him, every deal is a stepping stone toward a more opulent and secure future.

Surprisingly, amidst the cutthroat world of commerce, Fushigi harbors a deep-seated love for peace. He abhors unnecessary conflicts and seeks harmony in his personal and professional relationships. Fushigi understands that a stable environment is conducive to thriving business, and he endeavors to maintain tranquility in both his dealings and his personal life. This unexpected combination of a money-driven mindset and a penchant for peace sets Fushigi apart in the competitive merchant landscape.

At the heart of Fushigi's charm is his charisma, a magnetic quality that captivates those around him. His presence is felt in any room he enters, and people are drawn to his confident demeanor and engaging conversation. Fushigi effortlessly weaves through social circles, leaving a lasting impression on everyone he encounters. His charisma serves as a valuable asset, opening doors and creating opportunities that may have otherwise remained closed.

Despite his love for peace, Fushigi's personality takes an intriguing turn when the arena shifts to physical confrontation. He relishes a good challenge in combat, displaying a different facet of his character. Whether it's a strategic duel or a physical altercation, Fushigi embraces the thrill of overcoming obstacles and proving his mettle. This dual nature, combining a love for peace with a penchant for challenges in combat, adds layers of complexity to his already multifaceted personality.

In essence, Fushigi, the twenty-one-year-old merchant, is a captivating individual who navigates the world with quick wit, a relentless pursuit of wealth, a love for peace, and a charismatic flair. His story is one of strategic brilliance in the pursuit of financial success, tempered by an unexpected appreciation for tranquility and an eagerness to face challenges head-on when the need arises. Fushigi is a living paradox, a merchant whose multifaceted personality keeps those around him guessing and ensures that his journey through the intricate tapestry of life is anything but mundane.


History:

Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror" / "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3840

[Bio] Fushigi Daizo Empty Re: [Bio] Fushigi Daizo

This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Dec 27, 2023 1:17 pm
[approve]Ya still had some minor inconsistencies left over after the edits, but it's fine. I'll just have to call them out in quest assessments if I see them. Lmao.[/approve]

Fushigi Daizo wrote:

Fushigi Daizo


[Bio] Fushigi Daizo Oig_4510

Basic Character Information


Forename: Fushigi
Middle Name/Initial:-
Surname: Daizo
Epithet: ‘The Prince of Merchants’
Birthdate: October 3rd, 1808
Gender: Male
Species/Tribe: Human
Faction: Civilian
Profession: Merchant, Archeologist


Physical Appearance


Height: 5’ 7”
Weight: 152lbs

Hair Style: Spiky Dreadlocks
Hair Color: Blue with white & black highlights
Eye Color: Blue
Scars: Right Chest Blade
Gear: As an aspiring gear head, Fushigi sports the latest model of binocular goggles around his neck. His fashion sense is simple but trendy, white inside wool dress shirt accompanied by his famous Royal Blue Navy Jacket. It’s the first item he’d bought with his money from merchanting and he’s had multiple alterations done throughout the years to make sure it continues to be a snug fit.

Description: With skin of bronze and smile worth a million dollars, he’s quite the charmer for someone with a sliver tongue, that’s a deadly combination. Quite athletic in build, a physique acquired from countless digs and expeditions, when it comes to foot race or escaping the local thugs, Fushigi won’t loose to most.


The Past


Main Traits:
  • Peace Loving - Trying to avoid conflict as much as possible, Fushigi is prone to running away from fights as opposed to starting them. He’s experienced the hardships that poverty brings (violence and crime being two of them) and tries his best to escape that way of thinking. Doesn’t mean he’s a pushover though, he’ll stand up and speak his mind on what’s right and wrong as he sees it.
  • Gold-monger - Belly. Belly. Belly. Say it three times for the ones in the back. More than anything else in life, over his own family and friends, Fushigi loves wealth and has accumulated quite a bit for himself. However, he always ends up broke being a Robin Hood of sorts, giving back his biding war earnings to the slums.
  • Charismatic - Self-Explanatory. He could sell a pool of sea water to a Devil Fruit user.
  • Two-Faced - Unless he’s known you for a long time, everyone is a pawn to be used as a negotiation chip for a new deal for him.
  • Well-Spoken - What can ya say, the kid’s slick with his words.


Likes:
  • Coconut Water
  • Warm Weather
  • Cold Showers
  • Rainy Days
  • Gold, Treasure and Rare Trinkets.


Dislikes:

  • Afraid of Heights
  • Short Voyages
  • Loud Noises
  • Loose Women/Men
  • Sweet Liquors



Unique laugh: Fu-shigigigigi

Hometown: Black Drum Kingdom

Personality: Meet Fushigi, a twenty-one-year-old merchant whose dynamic personality is a captivating blend of quick wit, a relentless pursuit of wealth, a passion for peace, and an undeniable charisma that draws people in like moths to a flame.

Fushigi's quick wit is his secret weapon in the bustling world of commerce. Always a step ahead in negotiations, he navigates the intricate web of deals with finesse and sharp intelligence. Whether haggling in a crowded marketplace or engaging in a high-stakes business meeting, Fushigi's mind works at lightning speed, making split-second decisions that leave others in awe.

However, beneath the veneer of wit lies a relentless pursuit of wealth that defines Fushigi's essence. Money is not just a means to an end for him; it is the end itself. He is driven by an insatiable hunger for success and financial prosperity. Fushigi meticulously strategizes each business move, always seeking opportunities to amass more wealth and expand his influence. To him, every deal is a stepping stone toward a more opulent and secure future.

Surprisingly, amidst the cutthroat world of commerce, Fushigi harbors a deep-seated love for peace. He abhors unnecessary conflicts and seeks harmony in his personal and professional relationships. Fushigi understands that a stable environment is conducive to thriving business, and he endeavors to maintain tranquility in both his dealings and his personal life. This unexpected combination of a money-driven mindset and a penchant for peace sets Fushigi apart in the competitive merchant landscape.

At the heart of Fushigi's charm is his charisma, a magnetic quality that captivates those around him. His presence is felt in any room he enters, and people are drawn to his confident demeanor and engaging conversation. Fushigi effortlessly weaves through social circles, leaving a lasting impression on everyone he encounters. His charisma serves as a valuable asset, opening doors and creating opportunities that may have otherwise remained closed.

Despite his love for peace, Fushigi's personality takes an intriguing turn when the arena shifts to physical confrontation. He relishes a good challenge in combat, displaying a different facet of his character. Whether it's a strategic duel or a physical altercation, Fushigi embraces the thrill of overcoming obstacles and proving his mettle. However, true to his pacifist ways, he’ll use his Devil Fruit abilities to end fights in the most non-volatile manner possible.

In essence, Fushigi, the twenty-one-year-old merchant, is a captivating individual who navigates the world with quick wit, a relentless pursuit of wealth, a love for peace, and a charismatic flair. His story is one of strategic brilliance in the pursuit of financial success, tempered by an unexpected appreciation for tranquility and an eagerness to face challenges head-on when the need arises.


History:

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