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Sunny
Sunny
[tracker=/t2770-tracker-sunny-daes]
Name : Sunny
Epithet : Shinin' All Day!
Age : 33
Height : 8ft
Weight : 215lbs
Species : Longear Tribe
Faction : Pirate
Crew : Sundance Crew - Pending
Ship : TBD
Crew Role : Captain - Pending
Devil Fruit : Wapu Wapu no Mi - Warp Warp Fruit
Balance : [bel] 50,000
[[childofdestiny]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 5

[Bio] Sunny Daes Empty [Bio] Sunny Daes

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Dec 31, 2023 1:17 am

Sunny Daes.


[Bio] Sunny Daes Sunny10
(image will be fixed to reflect human ears here shortly)
Basic Character Information


Starting Bonus: Child of Destiny

Forename: Sunny
Middle Name/Initial: O.
Surname: Daes
Epithet: Shinin' all day!
Birthdate: 1796
Gender: Male, He / Him
Species/Tribe: Human
Faction: Pirate
Profession: Sailor - Former Marine.




Physical Appearance




Height: 8ft (243.84 cm)
Weight: 215lbs

Hair Style: Shoulder Length, Wavy
Hair Color: Blonde
Eye Color: Lilac
Scars: Distinct line down the right side of the face, with a cross cut on the forehead.
Gear:
Sunny, being a sailor, typically dons relaxed and flowing attire. His present ensemble comprises a silk short-sleeved shirt, casually open at the collar, paired with wide breeches tucked into knee-high boots. Secured by a sash around his waist is a lengthy sabre and a pistol, while a well-worn, waxed cloak shields him from the rain.

Description:
Sunny, tall and slender, presents a striking image. His sun-kissed skin and calloused hands bear witness to the numerous years spent navigating the open sea. Noteworthy tattoos adorn him, including three sun rays beneath his left eye and solid bands encircling his forearms. Ever in motion, he's renowned for his perpetual, somewhat foolish grin. Typically, his hair cascades freely over his shoulders, though he occasionally ties it back for concentration. Despite emanating confidence, his overall demeanor is occasionally punctuated by moments of endearing clumsiness.





The Past




Main Traits:

  • Cheerful
  • Adventurous
  • Absentminded
  • Respectful
  • Careless
  • Ambitious
  • Foolhardy


Likes: Freedom, Good Weather, Friendly Chatter, Good Food and Company, Peace, Money
Dislikes: Arrogance, Apathy, Dishonorable Behavior, Bad Manners, Cursing, Conflict, Cold.
Unique laugh: Lha-la-la-la-la - Lha-la-la-la-la

Hometown: Baterilla, South Blue. Visits parents fairly frequently.

Personality:
Sunny is an enigmatic optimist with a multifaceted and captivating personality. As a spirited and transient captain, he is renowned for his flamboyant and eccentric demeanor. While he may be perceived as mysterious and somewhat eccentric, beneath his whimsical exterior lies a dedicated and compassionate friend. Sunny is recognized for his robust sense of justice and willingness to assist those in need, even if he endeavors to conceal it behind a facade of nonchalance. His undeniable charm, charisma, drive, and ambition have admirably guided him along his chosen path, where he constantly seeks new friends and adventures.

In dealing with conflict, Sunny's approach is marked by a blend of laid-back charm, strategic thinking, and a preference for resolving issues with minimal bloodshed whenever possible. If combat becomes unavoidable, he engages with a calm and composed demeanor, often infusing playfulness or humor into the situation. When pushed to the brink, a rarely seen serious side emerges, and he strives to conclude matters as swiftly as possible.

History:


Last edited by Sunny on Sun Dec 31, 2023 2:41 pm; edited 4 times in total
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3885

[Bio] Sunny Daes Empty Re: [Bio] Sunny Daes

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Dec 31, 2023 1:30 pm
[warn]Good work weaving the larger lore events into your bio. I just had a few comments that you can find in-line below.[/warn]


Sunny wrote:[ass=You should remove this.]Code:[/ass]

Sunny Daes.


[Bio] Sunny Daes Sunny10

Basic Character Information


Starting Bonus: Child of Destiny

Forename: Sunny
Middle Name/Initial: O.
Surname: Daes
Epithet: Shinin' all day!
Birthdate: 1796
Gender: Male, He / Him
Species/Tribe: Longear Tribe
Faction: Pirate
Profession: Sailor - Former Marine.




Physical Appearance




Height: 8ft (243.84 cm)
Weight: 215lbs

Hair Style: Shoulder Length, Wavy
Hair Color: Blonde
Eye Color: Lilac
Scars: Distinct line down the right side of the face, with a cross cut on the forehead.
Gear:
Sunny, being a sailor, typically dons relaxed and flowing attire. His present ensemble comprises a silk short-sleeved shirt, casually open at the collar, paired with wide breeches tucked into knee-high boots. Secured by a sash around his waist is a lengthy sabre and a pistol, while a well-worn, waxed cloak shields him from the rain.

Description:
Sunny, tall and slender, presents a striking image. His sun-kissed skin and calloused hands bear witness to the numerous years spent navigating the open sea. Noteworthy tattoos adorn him, including three sun rays beneath his left eye and solid bands encircling his forearms. Ever in motion, he's renowned for his perpetual, somewhat foolish grin. Typically, his hair cascades freely over his shoulders, though he occasionally ties it back for concentration. Despite emanating confidence, his overall demeanor is occasionally punctuated by moments of endearing clumsiness.





The Past




Main Traits:

  • Cheerful
  • Adventurous
  • Absentminded
  • Respectful
  • Careless
  • Ambitious
  • Foolhardy


Likes: Freedom, Good Weather, Friendly Chatter, Good Food and Company, Peace, Money
Dislikes: Arrogance, Apathy, Dishonorable Behavior, Bad Manners, Cursing, Conflict, Cold.
Unique laugh: Lha-la-la-la-la - Lha-la-la-la-la

Hometown: [dass]Batarilla[cmt]It's Baterilla*. I'm only commenting on this because this error is prevalent throughout the history.[/cmt][/dass], South Blue. Visits parents fairly frequently.

Personality:
Sunny is an enigmatic optimist with a multifaceted and captivating personality. As a spirited and transient captain, he is renowned for his flamboyant and eccentric demeanor. While he may be perceived as mysterious and somewhat eccentric, beneath his whimsical exterior lies a dedicated and compassionate friend. Sunny is recognized for his robust sense of justice and willingness to assist those in need, even if he endeavors to conceal it behind a facade of nonchalance. His undeniable charm, charisma, drive, and ambition have admirably guided him along his chosen path, where he constantly seeks new friends and adventures.

In dealing with conflict, Sunny's approach is marked by a blend of laid-back charm, strategic thinking, and a preference for resolving issues with minimal bloodshed whenever possible. If combat becomes unavoidable, he engages with a calm and composed demeanor, often infusing playfulness or humor into the situation. When pushed to the brink, a rarely seen serious side emerges, and he strives to conclude matters as swiftly as possible.

History:
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3885

[Bio] Sunny Daes Empty Re: [Bio] Sunny Daes

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Dec 31, 2023 2:35 pm
[warn]There is a broken bold tag somewhere in your bio (I believe it's because you didn't close the one surrounding the Starting Bonus field). It's bolding your entire bio.

Also, in your history, you said "Ana D. Marsh" instead of "Ana D. Mire".[/warn]
Sunny wrote:[dass]Code:[cmt]You missed this.[/cmt][/dass]

Sunny Daes.


[Bio] Sunny Daes Sunny10
(image will be fixed to reflect human ears here shortly)
Basic Character Information


Starting Bonus: Child of Destiny

Forename: Sunny
Middle Name/Initial: O.
Surname: Daes
Epithet: Shinin' all day!
Birthdate: 1796
Gender: Male, He / Him
Species/Tribe: Human
Faction: Pirate
Profession: Sailor - Former Marine.




Physical Appearance




Height: 8ft (243.84 cm)
Weight: 215lbs

Hair Style: Shoulder Length, Wavy
Hair Color: Blonde
Eye Color: Lilac
Scars: Distinct line down the right side of the face, with a cross cut on the forehead.
Gear:
Sunny, being a sailor, typically dons relaxed and flowing attire. His present ensemble comprises a silk short-sleeved shirt, casually open at the collar, paired with wide breeches tucked into knee-high boots. Secured by a sash around his waist is a lengthy sabre and a pistol, while a well-worn, waxed cloak shields him from the rain.

Description:
Sunny, tall and slender, presents a striking image. His sun-kissed skin and calloused hands bear witness to the numerous years spent navigating the open sea. Noteworthy tattoos adorn him, including three sun rays beneath his left eye and solid bands encircling his forearms. Ever in motion, he's renowned for his perpetual, somewhat foolish grin. Typically, his hair cascades freely over his shoulders, though he occasionally ties it back for concentration. Despite emanating confidence, his overall demeanor is occasionally punctuated by moments of endearing clumsiness.





The Past




Main Traits:

  • Cheerful
  • Adventurous
  • Absentminded
  • Respectful
  • Careless
  • Ambitious
  • Foolhardy


Likes: Freedom, Good Weather, Friendly Chatter, Good Food and Company, Peace, Money
Dislikes: Arrogance, Apathy, Dishonorable Behavior, Bad Manners, Cursing, Conflict, Cold.
Unique laugh: Lha-la-la-la-la - Lha-la-la-la-la

Hometown: Baterilla, South Blue. Visits parents fairly frequently.

Personality:
Sunny is an enigmatic optimist with a multifaceted and captivating personality. As a spirited and transient captain, he is renowned for his flamboyant and eccentric demeanor. While he may be perceived as mysterious and somewhat eccentric, beneath his whimsical exterior lies a dedicated and compassionate friend. Sunny is recognized for his robust sense of justice and willingness to assist those in need, even if he endeavors to conceal it behind a facade of nonchalance. His undeniable charm, charisma, drive, and ambition have admirably guided him along his chosen path, where he constantly seeks new friends and adventures.

In dealing with conflict, Sunny's approach is marked by a blend of laid-back charm, strategic thinking, and a preference for resolving issues with minimal bloodshed whenever possible. If combat becomes unavoidable, he engages with a calm and composed demeanor, often infusing playfulness or humor into the situation. When pushed to the brink, a rarely seen serious side emerges, and he strives to conclude matters as swiftly as possible.

History:
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3885

[Bio] Sunny Daes Empty Re: [Bio] Sunny Daes

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Dec 31, 2023 2:48 pm
[approve]Also removing that extra closing bold tag at the end of the bio.[/approve]
Sunny wrote:

Sunny Daes.


[Bio] Sunny Daes Sunny10
(image will be fixed to reflect human ears here shortly)
Basic Character Information


Starting Bonus: Child of Destiny

Forename: Sunny
Middle Name/Initial: O.
Surname: Daes
Epithet: Shinin' all day!
Birthdate: 1796
Gender: Male, He / Him
Species/Tribe: Human
Faction: Pirate
Profession: Sailor - Former Marine.




Physical Appearance




Height: 8ft (243.84 cm)
Weight: 215lbs

Hair Style: Shoulder Length, Wavy
Hair Color: Blonde
Eye Color: Lilac
Scars: Distinct line down the right side of the face, with a cross cut on the forehead.
Gear:
Sunny, being a sailor, typically dons relaxed and flowing attire. His present ensemble comprises a silk short-sleeved shirt, casually open at the collar, paired with wide breeches tucked into knee-high boots. Secured by a sash around his waist is a lengthy sabre and a pistol, while a well-worn, waxed cloak shields him from the rain.

Description:
Sunny, tall and slender, presents a striking image. His sun-kissed skin and calloused hands bear witness to the numerous years spent navigating the open sea. Noteworthy tattoos adorn him, including three sun rays beneath his left eye and solid bands encircling his forearms. Ever in motion, he's renowned for his perpetual, somewhat foolish grin. Typically, his hair cascades freely over his shoulders, though he occasionally ties it back for concentration. Despite emanating confidence, his overall demeanor is occasionally punctuated by moments of endearing clumsiness.





The Past




Main Traits:

  • Cheerful
  • Adventurous
  • Absentminded
  • Respectful
  • Careless
  • Ambitious
  • Foolhardy


Likes: Freedom, Good Weather, Friendly Chatter, Good Food and Company, Peace, Money
Dislikes: Arrogance, Apathy, Dishonorable Behavior, Bad Manners, Cursing, Conflict, Cold.
Unique laugh: Lha-la-la-la-la - Lha-la-la-la-la

Hometown: Baterilla, South Blue. Visits parents fairly frequently.

Personality:
Sunny is an enigmatic optimist with a multifaceted and captivating personality. As a spirited and transient captain, he is renowned for his flamboyant and eccentric demeanor. While he may be perceived as mysterious and somewhat eccentric, beneath his whimsical exterior lies a dedicated and compassionate friend. Sunny is recognized for his robust sense of justice and willingness to assist those in need, even if he endeavors to conceal it behind a facade of nonchalance. His undeniable charm, charisma, drive, and ambition have admirably guided him along his chosen path, where he constantly seeks new friends and adventures.

In dealing with conflict, Sunny's approach is marked by a blend of laid-back charm, strategic thinking, and a preference for resolving issues with minimal bloodshed whenever possible. If combat becomes unavoidable, he engages with a calm and composed demeanor, often infusing playfulness or humor into the situation. When pushed to the brink, a rarely seen serious side emerges, and he strives to conclude matters as swiftly as possible.

History:
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