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Lysander
Lysander
[tracker=/t2823-tracker-lysander#18710]
Name : Lysander
Epithet : "Long Limbed"
Age : 19
Height : 10'
Weight : 115 kg
Species : Human (Long arm/Long Leg Hybrid)
Faction : Civillian
Devil Fruit : Hiso Hiso no Mi (Whisper Whisper Fruit)
Balance : [bel] 50,000
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Thu May 16, 2024 4:25 pm

Lysander "Long Limbed"




[Bio] "Long Limbed" Lysander Lysand11


Basic Character Information


Forename: Lysander
Middle Name/Initial: N/A
Surname: N/A
Epithet: Long Limbed
Birthdate: 1810
Gender: Male
Species/Tribe: Human (mixed heritage: long arm and long leg tribes)
Faction: Civilian
Profession: Skilled in hand to hand combat, survival, mediation, animal communication, herbalism, and wilderness navigation, sketching, and writing stories.



Physical Appearance



Height: 10 feet
Weight: 115 kg
Hair Style: Man bun, sometimes (usually in the middle of difficult battles) he lets his hair down to indicate that he is going beast mode.
Hair Color: Dark brown with a few green streaks across his hair.
Eye Color: A dark, rich green.
Scars: Several small scars on arms and legs. One big scar on the back of the right fist.
Gear: Lysander wears a pendant around his neck that holds a picture of him and his parents when he was an infant. His attire consists of a dark green sleeveless tunic with intricate tribal patterns and reinforced leather padding for protection. He also dons knee-high brown leather boots with green accents, offering both mobility and durability. His belt holds several pouches containing herbs, a small knife, a water flask, and a notebook with a quill made from an owl's feather. Lysander carries a sturdy wooden staff adorned with carvings of various animals, which he uses for combat and as a walking aid during long journeys. When he gets serious, he drops his wooden staff and engages in hand-to-hand combat (way of the open hand). Lysander doesn't care much about style and is rarely seen wearing anything else.

Description: Lysander has an athletic, slender build with fairly tanned skin. His arms and legs are exceptionally long, giving him a unique, elongated appearance. His face is very thin and his jawline is very sharp. He has a bandage along his nose and several scars scattered around his arms and legs, gained through his harsh past. Due to his scars, size and stoic demeanor looks he very intimidating; however, he has a very warm smile and a smooth and relaxing voice that immediately overcome his intimidating side and make anyone warm up to him.



The Past


Main Traits: Determined, resilient, justice-driven, intimidating, empathetic, hard working, focused, disciplined, isolated, stubborn, unforgiving, overprotective, stoic, perfectionist, and unaware of the world (Doesn't know a lot about history, current affairs, well known figures, etc.)
Likes: Justice, solitude, nature, animals, warm weather, listening to people talk, herbal teas, grilled fish, tropical fruits, Meditation and deep breathing, sketching, training, writing stories, and watching sun sets and sun rises.
Dislikes: Injustice, conflict, prejudice, cold weather, hypocrites, deep water, tight spaces, failure, whips, chains, sharp weapons, big crowds, fire and violence (will still fight when nesscesary).
Unique laugh: A mix of a low "ke-ke" and a boisterous and loud "HA-HAA." Mostly the former.

Hometown: Isle of Duality. A small island in the North Blue that is inhabited by the long arm and the long leg tribes. It is very traditional and most each tribe only welcomes its own members into it's area. It is a very tropical island with a big forest acting as the only neutral ground (keep in mind the forest is filled with dangerous wild animals) between the two tribes who are always in conflict.

Personality:Lysander is a man of serious determination, especially in combat. His deep-seated hatred for injustice stems from the mistreatment he faced due to his mixed heritage, leading to an unforgiving nature towards those he perceives as unjust or evil. Despite his past trauma and intimidating persona, Lysander is incredibly generous and kind. Years of solitude have made it challenging for him to connect with others on a deeper level. While eloquent and articulate, Lysander struggles to express his own emotions, especially his vulnerabilities and fears. He speaks with a deep, smooth voice and chooses his words carefully. Meditation is a regular practice for him, embodying the principle of listening more than speaking. He is disciplined, always diligent about making the most of his time, and a perfectionist with a fear of failing or not being good enough. Though bright and intuitively sharp, Lysander is largely unaware of the world's affairs, as he is only now beginning to be exposed to them.

History:


Last edited by Lysander on Sun May 26, 2024 5:01 pm; edited 8 times in total (Reason for editing : Adding a picture.)
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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[Bio] "Long Limbed" Lysander Empty Re: [Bio] "Long Limbed" Lysander

This post has in-line assessment comments.Fri May 17, 2024 7:52 am
[warn=See comments below.]
Nice work finishing your bio quickly. I like the idea of a long-limbed character with the unique goal of bringing peace between the longarm and longleg tribes.

Your bio is almost ready to be approved with just a few amendments:
- You'll need to have your account name changed to match your new character name before I can approve the bio. You can request the name change in [discord]approval-requests[/discord]. I recommend that you make the new username shorter by excluding the epithet. It'll make both of our lives easier in the future.
- Your devil fruit claim was denied. Since your bio mentions the name of the fruit explicitly, I can't approve it until you remove the reference or wait until you have an approved devil fruit claim.
- Your faction would simply be "civilian" since you don't belong to any of the major factions in the lore.
- You may wanna adjust your weight. 100kg is far too low for a 10-foot-tall individual. I try to use this site as a guide for the weights of unnaturally tall characters.
- Since your Hometown is a location made up by you, please add which sea it is in.
[/warn]
Long Limbed Leonidas wrote:

Lysander "Long Limbed"



Basic Character Information


Forename: Lysander
Middle Name/Initial: N/A
Surname: N/A
Epithet: Long Limbed
Birthdate: 1810
Gender: Male
Species/Tribe: Human (mixed heritage: long arm and long leg tribes)
Faction: Mediator
Profession: Skilled in hand to hand combat, survival, mediation, animal communication, herbalism, and wilderness navigation.



Physical Appearance



Height: 10 feet
Weight: 100 kg
Hair Style: Manbun, sometimes (usually in the middle of difficult battles) he lets his hair down to indicate that he is going beast mode.
Hair Color: Dark brown with a few green streaks across his hair.
Eye Color: A dark, rich green.
Scars: Prominent scar diagonally across one eye, several smaller scars on arms and legs. One big scar on the back of the right fist.
Gear:  Lysander wears a dark green sleeveless tunic with intricate tribal patterns and reinforced leather padding for protection. He also dons knee-high brown leather boots with green accents, providing both mobility and durability. His belt holds several pouches containing herbs, a small knife, a water flask, and a flint for making fires. He carries a sturdy wooden staff adorned with carvings of various animals, which he uses for combat mostly using it as a walking aid during long journeys. When he is serious he drops his wooden staff and begins to engage in hand to hand combat (way of the open hand). He doesn't care too much about style and is rarely seen wearing anything else.

Description: Lysander has an athletic, slender build with fairly tanned skin. His arms and legs are exceptionally long, giving him a unique, elongated appearance. His face is very thin and his jawline is very sharp. He has a bandage along his nose and a prominent scar diagonally across his left eye. he has several other scars scattered around his arms and legs, gained through his harsh past. Due to his scars, size and stoic demeanor looks very intimidating; however, he has a very warm smile and a smooth and relaxing voice that immediately overcome his intimidating side and make anyone warm up to him.



The Past


Main Traits: Determined, resilient, justice-driven
Likes: Justice, solitude, nature, animals, warm weather, listening to people talk.
Dislikes: Injustice, conflict, prejudice, cold weather, hypocrites, violence (will still fight when nesscesary.)
Unique laugh: A mix of a low "ke-ke" and a boisterous and loud "HA-HAA." Mostly the former.

Hometown: Isle of Duality

Personality: Lysander is serious and determined, especially in combat situations. He harbors a deep hatred for injustice, stemming from the mistreatment he faced due to his mixed heritage. Despite his past trauma and intimidating persona, he is a very wholesome man who is extremely generous and kind. He is very eloquent with his words and has a smooth voice. He meditates often and uses his two ears in proportion with his singular mouth. He is very disciplined and always diligent about making use of his time.

History:
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Posts : 3898

[Bio] "Long Limbed" Lysander Empty Re: [Bio] "Long Limbed" Lysander

This post has in-line assessment comments.Fri May 17, 2024 4:12 pm
[approve]Thank you for the adjustments![/approve]

Lysander wrote:

Lysander "Long Limbed"



Basic Character Information


Forename: Lysander
Middle Name/Initial: N/A
Surname: N/A
Epithet: Long Limbed
Birthdate: 1810
Gender: Male
Species/Tribe: Human (mixed heritage: long arm and long leg tribes)
Faction: Civilian
Profession: Skilled in hand to hand combat, survival, mediation, animal communication, herbalism, and wilderness navigation.



Physical Appearance



Height: 10 feet
Weight: 115 kg
Hair Style: Man bun, sometimes (usually in the middle of difficult battles) he lets his hair down to indicate that he is going beast mode.
Hair Color: Dark brown with a few green streaks across his hair.
Eye Color: A dark, rich green.
Scars: Prominent scar diagonally across one eye, several smaller scars on arms and legs. One big scar on the back of the right fist.
Gear:  Lysander wears a dark green sleeveless tunic with intricate tribal patterns and reinforced leather padding for protection. He also dons knee-high brown leather boots with green accents, providing both mobility and durability. His belt holds several pouches containing herbs, a small knife, a water flask, and a flint for making fires. He carries a sturdy wooden staff adorned with carvings of various animals, which he uses for combat mostly using it as a walking aid during long journeys. When he is serious he drops his wooden staff and begins to engage in hand to hand combat (way of the open hand). He doesn't care too much about style and is rarely seen wearing anything else.

Description: Lysander has an athletic, slender build with fairly tanned skin. His arms and legs are exceptionally long, giving him a unique, elongated appearance. His face is very thin and his jawline is very sharp. He has a bandage along his nose and a prominent scar diagonally across his left eye. he has several other scars scattered around his arms and legs, gained through his harsh past. Due to his scars, size and stoic demeanor looks very intimidating; however, he has a very warm smile and a smooth and relaxing voice that immediately overcome his intimidating side and make anyone warm up to him.



The Past


Main Traits: Determined, resilient, justice-driven, intimidating, empathetic, hard working, focused and disciplined.
Likes: Justice, solitude, nature, animals, warm weather, listening to people talk.
Dislikes: Injustice, conflict, prejudice, cold weather, hypocrites, violence (will still fight when nesscesary.)
Unique laugh: A mix of a low "ke-ke" and a boisterous and loud "HA-HAA." Mostly the former.

Hometown: Isle of Duality. A small island in the North Blue that is inhabited by the long arm and the long leg tribes. It is very traditional and most each tribe only welcomes its own members into it's area. It is a very tropical island with a big forest acting as the only neutral ground (keep in mind the forest is filled with dangerous wild animals) between the two tribes who are always in conflict.

Personality: Lysander is serious and determined, especially in combat situations. He harbors a deep hatred for injustice, stemming from the mistreatment he faced due to his mixed heritage. Despite his past trauma and intimidating persona, he is a very wholesome man who is extremely generous and kind. He is very eloquent with his words and has a deep but smooth voice. He meditates often and uses his two ears in proportion with his singular mouth. He is very disciplined and always diligent about making use of his time.

History:
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

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Posts : 3898

[Bio] "Long Limbed" Lysander Empty Re: [Bio] "Long Limbed" Lysander

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue May 21, 2024 4:24 pm
[approved=Image updated.]

Lysander wrote:

Lysander "Long Limbed"




[Bio] "Long Limbed" Lysander Lysand11


Basic Character Information


Forename: Lysander
Middle Name/Initial: N/A
Surname: N/A
Epithet: Long Limbed
Birthdate: 1810
Gender: Male
Species/Tribe: Human (mixed heritage: long arm and long leg tribes)
Faction: Civilian
Profession: Skilled in hand to hand combat, survival, mediation, animal communication, herbalism, and wilderness navigation.



Physical Appearance



Height: 10 feet
Weight: 115 kg
Hair Style: Man bun, sometimes (usually in the middle of difficult battles) he lets his hair down to indicate that he is going beast mode.
Hair Color: Dark brown with a few green streaks across his hair.
Eye Color: A dark, rich green.
Scars: Several small scars on arms and legs. One big scar on the back of the right fist.
Gear:  Lysander wears a dark green sleeveless tunic with intricate tribal patterns and reinforced leather padding for protection. He also dons knee-high brown leather boots with green accents, providing both mobility and durability. His belt holds several pouches containing herbs, a small knife, a water flask, and a flint for making fires. He carries a sturdy wooden staff adorned with carvings of various animals, which he uses for combat mostly using it as a walking aid during long journeys. When he is serious he drops his wooden staff and begins to engage in hand to hand combat (way of the open hand). He doesn't care too much about style and is rarely seen wearing anything else.

Description: Lysander has an athletic, slender build with fairly tanned skin. His arms and legs are exceptionally long, giving him a unique, elongated appearance. His face is very thin and his jawline is very sharp. He has a bandage along his nose and several scars scattered around his arms and legs, gained through his harsh past. Due to his scars, size and stoic demeanor looks he very intimidating; however, he has a very warm smile and a smooth and relaxing voice that immediately overcome his intimidating side and make anyone warm up to him.



The Past


Main Traits: Determined, resilient, justice-driven, intimidating, empathetic, hard working, focused and disciplined.
Likes: Justice, solitude, nature, animals, warm weather, listening to people talk.
Dislikes: Injustice, conflict, prejudice, cold weather, hypocrites, violence (will still fight when nesscesary.)
Unique laugh: A mix of a low "ke-ke" and a boisterous and loud "HA-HAA." Mostly the former.

Hometown: Isle of Duality. A small island in the North Blue that is inhabited by the long arm and the long leg tribes. It is very traditional and most each tribe only welcomes its own members into it's area. It is a very tropical island with a big forest acting as the only neutral ground (keep in mind the forest is filled with dangerous wild animals) between the two tribes who are always in conflict.

Personality: Lysander is serious and determined, especially in combat situations. He harbors a deep hatred for injustice, stemming from the mistreatment he faced due to his mixed heritage. Despite his past trauma and intimidating persona, he is a very wholesome man who is extremely generous and kind. He is very eloquent with his words and has a deep but smooth voice. He meditates often and uses his two ears in proportion with his singular mouth. He is very disciplined and always diligent about making use of his time.

History:
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

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Posts : 3898

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