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Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment Empty Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Dec 27, 2016 11:24 pm

Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment


Character Name: Laurel O’Halloran
Number of Equipment Pieces: 2
Highest tiered equipment: 3
Total Equipment Stat Points: +30



Equipment Name: Monohoshizao
Equipment Type: Kiseru
Equipment Tier: Tier 3
Equipment Stats: +15 Attack

Equipment Description: This smoking pipe was crafted with a shaft made from snakewood and a bowl and mouthpiece of corundum, both gathered from Amazon Lily. Just over 90 cm (2’11.5”) in length, Monohoshizao is much longer and heavier than any typical kiseru, which makes it all the greater for a weapon. The bowl can serve as a bludgeon, of course, while the mouthpiece (the lip, specifically) is tapered enough to break skin with enough force.

Equipment Name: Tools of the Trade
Equipment Type: Thief tools
Equipment Tier: Tier 3
Equipment Stats: +15 Reflex

Equipment Description: While Laurel’s Devil Fruit powers render her old gear somewhat redundant, she considers some pieces of gear as essential tools which no sane phantom thief would leave home without. If she anticipates seastone locks, for instance, she puts on opera gloves that reach up to her elbows to serve as a modest shield between her skin and the seastone material. Hidden between the layers of the gloves is a set of tiny, sophisticated, fragile tools, each glove carrying four: namely a hammer, a chisel, a tiny saw, a torsion wrench, tweezers, and half-diamond, hook, and prod picks. While they’re all too small and delicate to actually use as weapons, they’re not something one would want going for the eyes if too close.



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Equipment Techniques:


Last edited by Laurel O’Halloran on Thu Aug 01, 2019 11:36 am; edited 4 times in total
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3900

Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment Empty Re: Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment

This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Dec 28, 2016 6:10 am
Both the equipment and the techniques are looking great! Only one correction needed: For your techniques, when you assign a stat debuff to opponents, you must have an equivalent debuff to yourself or an equivalent buff to your opponents. I'd probably recommend giving yourself a -30 to attack for the duration of Loguetown Fog since you'll likely use the technique to escape rather than fight.

Secondly, along with the Technique Cooldown, would you mind adding the technique duration so that it can be seen at first glance? For example: "Technique Cooldown: 10 posts | 3 post duration".
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Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment Empty Re: Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment

This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Dec 28, 2016 12:33 pm
Done and done - I've actually shot for a Defense debuff, as there's also potential for the skill to setting up an ambush, so I'd rather not gimp that.

Also changed the name of Loguetown Fog to something slightly more fitting thematically. Overnight headaches while working have a way of clouding judgement. /pun
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3900

Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment Empty Re: Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment

This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Dec 28, 2016 12:40 pm
You forgot the second fix~
Gray wrote:Both the equipment and the techniques are looking great! Only one correction needed: For your techniques, when you assign a stat debuff to opponents, you must have an equivalent debuff to yourself or an equivalent buff to your opponents. I'd probably recommend giving yourself a -30 to attack for the duration of Loguetown Fog since you'll likely use the technique to escape rather than fight.

Secondly, along with the Technique Cooldown, would you mind adding the technique duration so that it can be seen at first glance? For example: "Technique Cooldown: 10 posts | 3 post duration".
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Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment Empty Re: Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment

This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Dec 28, 2016 12:43 pm
Huh, so I did. Welp, that's fixed now too!
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3900

Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment Empty Re: Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment

This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Dec 28, 2016 12:55 pm
Approved!

Laurel O’Halloran wrote:

Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment


Character Name: Laurel O’Halloran
Number of Equipment Pieces: 2
Highest tiered equipment: 3
Total Equipment Stat Points: +30

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Equipment Name: Monohoshizao
Equipment Type: Kiseru
Equipment Tier: 3
Equipment Stats: +15 Attack

Equipment Description: This smoking pipe was crafted with a shaft made from snakewood and a bowl and mouthpiece of corundum, both gathered from Amazon Lily. Just over 90 cm (2’11.5”) in length, Monohoshizao is much longer and heavier than any typical kiseru, which makes it all the greater for a weapon. The bowl can serve as a bludgeon, of course, while the mouthpiece (the lip, specifically) is tapered enough to break skin with enough force.

Equipment Name: Tools of the Trade
Equipment Type: Opera Gloves with concealed thief tools
Equipment Tier: 3
Equipment Stats: +15 Reflex

Equipment Description:. While Laurel’s Devil Fruit powers render her old gear somewhat redundant, she considers some pieces of gear as essential tools which no sane phantom thief would leave home without. If she anticipates seastone locks, for instance, she puts on opera gloves that reach up to her elbows to serve as a modest shield between her skin and the seastone material. Hidden between the layers of the gloves is a set of tiny, sophisticated, fragile tools, each glove carrying four: namely a hammer, a chisel, a tiny saw, a torsion wrench, tweezers, and half-diamond, hook, and prod picks. While they’re all too small and delicate to actually use as weapons, they’re not something one would want going for the eyes if too close.

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Techniques
Equipment Techniques:


Last edited by Gray on Thu Aug 01, 2019 7:50 pm; edited 1 time in total
Acacia
Acacia
Kurotane (Black Seed)
[tracker=/t897-grimm-aldous-acacia#4096]
Name : Acacia
Epithet : "Black Seed" ("Kurotane")
Age : 27
Height : 8'5" / 257 cm
Weight : 351 lbs / 159 kg
Species : Human
Faction : New Revolutionary Army
Devil Fruit : Mochi Mochi no Mi
Bounty : [ber=r] 250,000,000
Balance : [ber] 582,800,000
[[childofdestiny]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 120

Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment Empty Re: Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Dec 17, 2017 12:01 am
I'm sorry I forgot to unlock this! The equipment techniques need to be updated according to the new updates in the equipment template!
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3900

Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment Empty Re: Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment

This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Dec 19, 2017 7:30 pm
Approved!
Laurel O’Halloran wrote:

Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment


Character Name: Laurel O’Halloran
Number of Equipment Pieces: 2
Highest tiered equipment: 3
Total Equipment Stat Points: +30



Equipment Name: Monohoshizao
Equipment Type: Kiseru
Equipment Tier: Tier 3
Equipment Stats: +15 Attack

Equipment Description: This smoking pipe was crafted with a shaft made from snakewood and a bowl and mouthpiece of corundum, both gathered from Amazon Lily. Just over 90 cm (2’11.5”) in length, Monohoshizao is much longer and heavier than any typical kiseru, which makes it all the greater for a weapon. The bowl can serve as a bludgeon, of course, while the mouthpiece (the lip, specifically) is tapered enough to break skin with enough force.

Equipment Name: Tools of the Trade
Equipment Type: Thief tools
Equipment Tier: Tier 3
Equipment Stats: +15 Reflex

Equipment Description: While Laurel’s Devil Fruit powers render her old gear somewhat redundant, she considers some pieces of gear as essential tools which no sane phantom thief would leave home without. If she anticipates seastone locks, for instance, she puts on opera gloves that reach up to her elbows to serve as a modest shield between her skin and the seastone material. Hidden between the layers of the gloves is a set of tiny, sophisticated, fragile tools, each glove carrying four: namely a hammer, a chisel, a tiny saw, a torsion wrench, tweezers, and half-diamond, hook, and prod picks. While they’re all too small and delicate to actually use as weapons, they’re not something one would want going for the eyes if too close.



Techniques


Equipment Techniques:


Last edited by Gray on Thu Aug 01, 2019 7:50 pm; edited 1 time in total
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3900

Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment Empty Re: Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment

This post has in-line assessment comments.Thu Aug 01, 2019 7:49 pm
Approved!
Welcome back, mate!

Laurel O’Halloran wrote:

Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment


Character Name: Laurel O’Halloran
Number of Equipment Pieces: 2
Highest tiered equipment: 3
Total Equipment Stat Points: +30



Equipment Name: Monohoshizao
Equipment Type: Kiseru
Equipment Tier: Tier 3
Equipment Stats: +15 Attack

Equipment Description: This smoking pipe was crafted with a shaft made from snakewood and a bowl and mouthpiece of corundum, both gathered from Amazon Lily. Just over 90 cm (2’11.5”) in length, Monohoshizao is much longer and heavier than any typical kiseru, which makes it all the greater for a weapon. The bowl can serve as a bludgeon, of course, while the mouthpiece (the lip, specifically) is tapered enough to break skin with enough force.

Equipment Name: Tools of the Trade
Equipment Type: Thief tools
Equipment Tier: Tier 3
Equipment Stats: +15 Reflex

Equipment Description: While Laurel’s Devil Fruit powers render her old gear somewhat redundant, she considers some pieces of gear as essential tools which no sane phantom thief would leave home without. If she anticipates seastone locks, for instance, she puts on opera gloves that reach up to her elbows to serve as a modest shield between her skin and the seastone material. Hidden between the layers of the gloves is a set of tiny, sophisticated, fragile tools, each glove carrying four: namely a hammer, a chisel, a tiny saw, a torsion wrench, tweezers, and half-diamond, hook, and prod picks. While they’re all too small and delicate to actually use as weapons, they’re not something one would want going for the eyes if too close.



Techniques


Equipment Techniques:
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