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Laurel O’Halloran
Tracker

Name : Laurel O'Halloran
Epithet : Hundred-Faced O’Halloran
Age : 48
Height : 6’8”
Weight : 174 lbs.
Species : Human
Faction : Pirates
World Position : Supernova
Crew : Apollo’s Pompokolin
Ship : Xu Fu
Crew Position : Captain
Devil Fruit : Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Bake-Danuki
Haki Level : 6
Hitpoints (HP) : 285
Attack (ATK) : 300
Defense (DEF) : 120
Reflex (RX) : 420
Willpower (WP) : 370
Level : 50
Experience Points : 5000
Bounty : 177,000,000
Shop Discount : -10%
Berries Berries : 50,000
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on Tue Dec 27, 2016 11:24 pm

Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment


Character Name: Laurel O’Halloran
Number of Equipment Pieces: 2
Highest tiered equipment: 3
Total Equipment Stat Points: +30



Equipment Name: Monohoshizao
Equipment Type: Kiseru
Equipment Tier: Tier 3
Equipment Stats: +15 Attack

Equipment Description: This smoking pipe was crafted with a shaft made from snakewood and a bowl and mouthpiece of corundum, both gathered from Amazon Lily. Just over 90 cm (2’11.5”) in length, Monohoshizao is much longer and heavier than any typical kiseru, which makes it all the greater for a weapon. The bowl can serve as a bludgeon, of course, while the mouthpiece (the lip, specifically) is tapered enough to break skin with enough force.

Equipment Name: Tools of the Trade
Equipment Type: Thief tools
Equipment Tier: Tier 3
Equipment Stats: +15 Reflex

Equipment Description: While Laurel’s Devil Fruit powers render her old gear somewhat redundant, she considers some pieces of gear as essential tools which no sane phantom thief would leave home without. If she anticipates seastone locks, for instance, she puts on opera gloves that reach up to her elbows to serve as a modest shield between her skin and the seastone material. Hidden between the layers of the gloves is a set of tiny, sophisticated, fragile tools, each glove carrying four: namely a hammer, a chisel, a tiny saw, a torsion wrench, tweezers, and half-diamond, hook, and prod picks. While they’re all too small and delicate to actually use as weapons, they’re not something one would want going for the eyes if too close.



Techniques


Equipment Techniques:
Oborozuki
By: Monohoshizao
Type: Stat Morph
Class: Light
Range: 20m
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Debuffs: -25% RX (Target)
Description: Laurel takes in a long draw of tobacco from her pipe and blows it out in front of her, filling the immediate area with a thick pall of smoke. This doesn’t do any damage, but instead interferes heavily with the sight, smell, and breathing of her target. It is possible to remove the smoke with heavy winds, or in the happenstance that the opponent is able to manipulate smoke.

Tsubame Gaeshi
By: Monohoshizao
Type: Flat Damage
Type: Light
Range: 400m
Cooldown: 1 Post
Description: Dashing towards her target until within range, Laurel strikes at her target with her kiseru with a fierce and swift downward cut from above, followed immediately afterwards with an upward motion from below.


Last edited by Laurel O’Halloran on Thu Aug 01, 2019 11:36 am; edited 4 times in total
Gray
Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment Cool-t10
Tracker

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" / 310 cm
Weight : 1043 lbs / 473 kg
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 9
[[haospec]][[busospec]][[kenbunspec]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 700
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Shop Discount : -20%
Berries Berries : 25,000,000,000
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Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment Empty Re: Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment

on Wed Dec 28, 2016 6:10 am
Both the equipment and the techniques are looking great! Only one correction needed: For your techniques, when you assign a stat debuff to opponents, you must have an equivalent debuff to yourself or an equivalent buff to your opponents. I'd probably recommend giving yourself a -30 to attack for the duration of Loguetown Fog since you'll likely use the technique to escape rather than fight.

Secondly, along with the Technique Cooldown, would you mind adding the technique duration so that it can be seen at first glance? For example: "Technique Cooldown: 10 posts | 3 post duration".

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Laurel O’Halloran
Tracker

Name : Laurel O'Halloran
Epithet : Hundred-Faced O’Halloran
Age : 48
Height : 6’8”
Weight : 174 lbs.
Species : Human
Faction : Pirates
World Position : Supernova
Crew : Apollo’s Pompokolin
Ship : Xu Fu
Crew Position : Captain
Devil Fruit : Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Bake-Danuki
Haki Level : 6
Hitpoints (HP) : 285
Attack (ATK) : 300
Defense (DEF) : 120
Reflex (RX) : 420
Willpower (WP) : 370
Level : 50
Experience Points : 5000
Bounty : 177,000,000
Shop Discount : -10%
Berries Berries : 50,000
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Posts : 59
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Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment Empty Re: Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment

on Wed Dec 28, 2016 12:33 pm
Done and done - I've actually shot for a Defense debuff, as there's also potential for the skill to setting up an ambush, so I'd rather not gimp that.

Also changed the name of Loguetown Fog to something slightly more fitting thematically. Overnight headaches while working have a way of clouding judgement. /pun
Gray
Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment Cool-t10
Tracker

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" / 310 cm
Weight : 1043 lbs / 473 kg
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 9
[[haospec]][[busospec]][[kenbunspec]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 700
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Shop Discount : -20%
Berries Berries : 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[freakofnature]][[childofdestiny]]
[[punchoutguru]][[windcaller]]
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Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment Empty Re: Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment

on Wed Dec 28, 2016 12:40 pm
You forgot the second fix~
@Gray wrote:Both the equipment and the techniques are looking great! Only one correction needed: For your techniques, when you assign a stat debuff to opponents, you must have an equivalent debuff to yourself or an equivalent buff to your opponents. I'd probably recommend giving yourself a -30 to attack for the duration of Loguetown Fog since you'll likely use the technique to escape rather than fight.

Secondly, along with the Technique Cooldown, would you mind adding the technique duration so that it can be seen at first glance? For example: "Technique Cooldown: 10 posts | 3 post duration".

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Laurel O’Halloran
Tracker

Name : Laurel O'Halloran
Epithet : Hundred-Faced O’Halloran
Age : 48
Height : 6’8”
Weight : 174 lbs.
Species : Human
Faction : Pirates
World Position : Supernova
Crew : Apollo’s Pompokolin
Ship : Xu Fu
Crew Position : Captain
Devil Fruit : Inu Inu no Mi, Model: Bake-Danuki
Haki Level : 6
Hitpoints (HP) : 285
Attack (ATK) : 300
Defense (DEF) : 120
Reflex (RX) : 420
Willpower (WP) : 370
Level : 50
Experience Points : 5000
Bounty : 177,000,000
Shop Discount : -10%
Berries Berries : 50,000
[[dragonheart]]
Posts : 59
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Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment Empty Re: Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment

on Wed Dec 28, 2016 12:43 pm
Huh, so I did. Welp, that's fixed now too!
Gray
Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment Cool-t10
Tracker

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" / 310 cm
Weight : 1043 lbs / 473 kg
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 9
[[haospec]][[busospec]][[kenbunspec]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 700
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Shop Discount : -20%
Berries Berries : 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[freakofnature]][[childofdestiny]]
[[punchoutguru]][[windcaller]]
[[atkt6_sp]][[deft6]][[rxt6]][[wpt6]]
Posts : 2073
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Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment Empty Re: Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment

on Wed Dec 28, 2016 12:55 pm
Approved!

@Laurel O’Halloran wrote:

Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment


Character Name: Laurel O’Halloran
Number of Equipment Pieces: 2
Highest tiered equipment: 3
Total Equipment Stat Points: +30

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Equipment Name: Monohoshizao
Equipment Type: Kiseru
Equipment Tier: 3
Equipment Stats: +15 Attack

Equipment Description: This smoking pipe was crafted with a shaft made from snakewood and a bowl and mouthpiece of corundum, both gathered from Amazon Lily. Just over 90 cm (2’11.5”) in length, Monohoshizao is much longer and heavier than any typical kiseru, which makes it all the greater for a weapon. The bowl can serve as a bludgeon, of course, while the mouthpiece (the lip, specifically) is tapered enough to break skin with enough force.

Equipment Name: Tools of the Trade
Equipment Type: Opera Gloves with concealed thief tools
Equipment Tier: 3
Equipment Stats: +15 Reflex

Equipment Description:. While Laurel’s Devil Fruit powers render her old gear somewhat redundant, she considers some pieces of gear as essential tools which no sane phantom thief would leave home without. If she anticipates seastone locks, for instance, she puts on opera gloves that reach up to her elbows to serve as a modest shield between her skin and the seastone material. Hidden between the layers of the gloves is a set of tiny, sophisticated, fragile tools, each glove carrying four: namely a hammer, a chisel, a tiny saw, a torsion wrench, tweezers, and half-diamond, hook, and prod picks. While they’re all too small and delicate to actually use as weapons, they’re not something one would want going for the eyes if too close.

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------


Techniques
Equipment Techniques:
Oborozuki
Technique By: Monohoshizao
Technique Tier: 3
Technique Range: 20m
Technique Cooldown: 10 posts | 3-Post Duration
Technique Description: Laurel takes in a long draw of tobacco from her pipe and blows it out in front of her, filling the immediate area with a thick pall of smoke. This doesn’t do any damage, but instead interferes heavily with the sight, smell, and breathing of anyone caught in the blast, lowering their Reflex by 50 - though it also creates a false sense of security for Laurel, lowering her Defense by 50 as well. Under normal conditions, the smoke and its interference last up to 3 posts. It is possible to remove the smoke earlier with heavy winds, or in the unfortunate (for Laurel) happenstance that an enemy Devil Fruit user is able to manipulate smoke. Commonly used by Laurel as a means to escape an unfavorable encounter, or catch the enemy by surprise.

Tsubame Gaeshi
Technique By: Monohoshizao
Technique Tier: 3
Technique Range: Melee
Technique Cooldown: 7 posts
Technique Description: This technique involves Laurel striking with her kiseru with a fierce and swift downward cut from above, followed immediately afterwards with an upward motion from below.


Last edited by Gray on Thu Aug 01, 2019 7:50 pm; edited 1 time in total

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Acacia
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Tracker

Name : Grimm Aldous Acacia
Epithet : Kurotane (Black Seed)
Age : 27
Height : 6'7" / 201 cm
Weight : 240 lbs / 109 kg
Species : Human
Faction : New Revolutionary Army
Crew : Bonbon X
Ship : Wonderland Hatch
Crew Position : First Mate
Devil Fruit : Mochi Mochi no Mi
Haki Level : 5
Hitpoints (HP) : 250
Attack (ATK) : 395
Defense (DEF) : 250
Reflex (RX) : 350
Willpower (WP) : 300
Level : 70
Experience Points : 7063
Bounty : 250,000,000
Berries Berries : 582,800,000
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Posts : 110
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Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment Empty Re: Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment

on Sun Dec 17, 2017 12:01 am
I'm sorry I forgot to unlock this! The equipment techniques need to be updated according to the new updates in the equipment template!

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Gray
Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment Cool-t10
Tracker

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" / 310 cm
Weight : 1043 lbs / 473 kg
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 9
[[haospec]][[busospec]][[kenbunspec]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 700
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Shop Discount : -20%
Berries Berries : 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[freakofnature]][[childofdestiny]]
[[punchoutguru]][[windcaller]]
[[atkt6_sp]][[deft6]][[rxt6]][[wpt6]]
Posts : 2073
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Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment Empty Re: Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment

on Tue Dec 19, 2017 7:30 pm
Approved!
@Laurel O’Halloran wrote:

Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment


Character Name: Laurel O’Halloran
Number of Equipment Pieces: 2
Highest tiered equipment: 3
Total Equipment Stat Points: +30



Equipment Name: Monohoshizao
Equipment Type: Kiseru
Equipment Tier: Tier 3
Equipment Stats: +15 Attack

Equipment Description: This smoking pipe was crafted with a shaft made from snakewood and a bowl and mouthpiece of corundum, both gathered from Amazon Lily. Just over 90 cm (2’11.5”) in length, Monohoshizao is much longer and heavier than any typical kiseru, which makes it all the greater for a weapon. The bowl can serve as a bludgeon, of course, while the mouthpiece (the lip, specifically) is tapered enough to break skin with enough force.

Equipment Name: Tools of the Trade
Equipment Type: Thief tools
Equipment Tier: Tier 3
Equipment Stats: +15 Reflex

Equipment Description: While Laurel’s Devil Fruit powers render her old gear somewhat redundant, she considers some pieces of gear as essential tools which no sane phantom thief would leave home without. If she anticipates seastone locks, for instance, she puts on opera gloves that reach up to her elbows to serve as a modest shield between her skin and the seastone material. Hidden between the layers of the gloves is a set of tiny, sophisticated, fragile tools, each glove carrying four: namely a hammer, a chisel, a tiny saw, a torsion wrench, tweezers, and half-diamond, hook, and prod picks. While they’re all too small and delicate to actually use as weapons, they’re not something one would want going for the eyes if too close.



Techniques


Equipment Techniques:
Oborozuki
Technique By: Monohoshizao
Technique Type: Light Technique
Technique Range: 20m
Technique Cooldown: 7
Technique Duration: 2 posts
Debuffs: Target: RX -20% | Self: DEF -20%
Technique Description: Laurel takes in a long draw of tobacco from her pipe and blows it out in front of her, filling the immediate area with a thick pall of smoke. This doesn’t do any damage, but instead interferes heavily with the sight, smell, and breathing of her target, though it also creates a false sense of security for Laurel as well. It is possible to remove the smoke earlier with heavy winds, or in the happenstance that the opponent is able to manipulate smoke.

Tsubame Gaeshi
Technique By: Monohoshizao
Technique Type: Light Technique
Technique Range: 400m
Technique Cooldown: 5 posts
Technique Description: Dashing towards her target until within range, Laurel strikes at her target with her kiseru with a fierce and swift downward cut from above, followed immediately afterwards with an upward motion from below.


Last edited by Gray on Thu Aug 01, 2019 7:50 pm; edited 1 time in total

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Gray
Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment Cool-t10
Tracker

Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror (Formerly "Black Fist")
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" / 310 cm
Weight : 1043 lbs / 473 kg
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Position : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 9
[[haospec]][[busospec]][[kenbunspec]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 700
Attack (ATK) : 750
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 655
Willpower (WP) : 600
Level : 100
Experience Points : 10000
Bounty : 5,000,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Shop Discount : -20%
Berries Berries : 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[freakofnature]][[childofdestiny]]
[[punchoutguru]][[windcaller]]
[[atkt6_sp]][[deft6]][[rxt6]][[wpt6]]
Posts : 2073
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Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment Empty Re: Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment

on Thu Aug 01, 2019 7:49 pm
Approved!
Welcome back, mate!

@Laurel O’Halloran wrote:

Laurel O’Halloran’s Equipment


Character Name: Laurel O’Halloran
Number of Equipment Pieces: 2
Highest tiered equipment: 3
Total Equipment Stat Points: +30



Equipment Name: Monohoshizao
Equipment Type: Kiseru
Equipment Tier: Tier 3
Equipment Stats: +15 Attack

Equipment Description: This smoking pipe was crafted with a shaft made from snakewood and a bowl and mouthpiece of corundum, both gathered from Amazon Lily. Just over 90 cm (2’11.5”) in length, Monohoshizao is much longer and heavier than any typical kiseru, which makes it all the greater for a weapon. The bowl can serve as a bludgeon, of course, while the mouthpiece (the lip, specifically) is tapered enough to break skin with enough force.

Equipment Name: Tools of the Trade
Equipment Type: Thief tools
Equipment Tier: Tier 3
Equipment Stats: +15 Reflex

Equipment Description: While Laurel’s Devil Fruit powers render her old gear somewhat redundant, she considers some pieces of gear as essential tools which no sane phantom thief would leave home without. If she anticipates seastone locks, for instance, she puts on opera gloves that reach up to her elbows to serve as a modest shield between her skin and the seastone material. Hidden between the layers of the gloves is a set of tiny, sophisticated, fragile tools, each glove carrying four: namely a hammer, a chisel, a tiny saw, a torsion wrench, tweezers, and half-diamond, hook, and prod picks. While they’re all too small and delicate to actually use as weapons, they’re not something one would want going for the eyes if too close.



Techniques


Equipment Techniques:
Oborozuki
By: Monohoshizao
Type: Stat Morph
Class: Light
Range: 20m
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Debuffs: -25% RX (Target)
Description: Laurel takes in a long draw of tobacco from her pipe and blows it out in front of her, filling the immediate area with a thick pall of smoke. This doesn’t do any damage, but instead interferes heavily with the sight, smell, and breathing of her target. It is possible to remove the smoke with heavy winds, or in the happenstance that the opponent is able to manipulate smoke.

Tsubame Gaeshi
By: Monohoshizao
Type: Flat Damage
Type: Light
Range: 400m
Cooldown: 1 Post
Description: Dashing towards her target until within range, Laurel strikes at her target with her kiseru with a fierce and swift downward cut from above, followed immediately afterwards with an upward motion from below.

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