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This post has in-line assessment comments.Thu Mar 23, 2017 1:42 am

Hito Hito no Mi: Raijin


Devil Fruit: Hito Hito no Mi: Raijin (Human Human Fruit: Raijin)
Devil Fruit Type: Zoan

Devil Fruit Appearance: Its like an enlarged raspberry with a red exterior with light blue swirls
Devil Fruit Description: This Mythic Zoan allows the user to take on Full and Hybrid forms of Raijin, the Japanese God of Thunder. Along with the god's physical strength, the user gains the ability to conjure and manipulate thunder and lightning. The user is able to amplify the power of the thunder and lightning through the use of conjured drums. The user is also able to summon and command a Raijuu, or lightning wolf.

Devil Fruit Passive Abilities:

Forms:

-Lightning generation and manipulation: Being the god of storms, the Raijinn User is able to generate and manipulate lightning.  Along this line, at higher levels of control Niko is able to utilize electromagnetism on metallic objects such as his staff. Mostly for flavor, the range of the electromagnetism is pretty small.

-Electromagnetic Tuning: The user is able to utilize Electromagnetic waves to listen greater distances than a normal human would be able to. This mainly gets used for direction finding purposes.

- Thunder generation: The user is able to generate sonic concussions and claps of thunder by generating sound, such as snapping one's fingers or clapping one's hands.

-Drum summoning: Niko is able to summon special Raijin drums in all forms however he can only summon so many in each form. In Human form, Niko is only able to summon at most two. In Hybrid, Niko can summon up to four drums. In full forms, Niko can summon up to Six drums.

- Drum manipulation: Niko is able to manipulate his drums within a certain distance from himself. (Similar to how the chop-chop fruit works with how Buggy can only maintain control over his split parts so long as they are within his range of influence from his feet. ) Niko often uses his drums as launched projectiles. If they go outside of Niko's range of influence, Niko can dispell the drum, but it takes at least two turns for him to be able to resummon a dispelled drum. Niko's range of influence over his drums is four times the length of his current height, adjusting to both his hybrid form and full form heights. At normal height, Niko has a control range of 32 feet from his body. In hybrid, 48 feet. In full form, 120 feet.

- Lightning Immunity/ resistance: In hybrid form, if Niko would be struck by a lightning based attack, if it is less than 50% of his defense, it is negated. In his full form, if the lightning based attack is less than 60% of his defense, it is negated. But if it is less than 80% of his defense, the damage is reduced by one tier. Can actually safely consume lightning not generated by himself.

-Cloud manipulation: Due to the weather related nature of the Raijin, Niko is able to generate clouds given the right climate (dependent on moisture levels, dryness).

-Cloud Jumping: Being a god of storms, Niko is able to briefly gain footing on clouds. However if he stays on the cloud too long he will fall through same as anyone else would.

Main Elemental/ special damage types associated with fruit:
- Lightning/ Electric shock
-Sound/ Sonic shock-waves


Fighting Style: Storm Combat
Weapon Utilization: Metal Separating staff, Raijin Drums
Description:  Storm Combat mainly focuses on mixing both armed and unarmed martial arts styles with lightning and thunder charged attacks from his Devil Fruit. Niko's extensive training in his childhood gave him the physical strength and stamina to learn new fighting techniques during his travels, and incorporate them for use with his devil fruit. Niko utilizes his fighting abilities in combination with a metal segmented staff and the drums granted to him by his devil fruit, to execute attacks charged with both thunder and lightning along with other storm elements.


Techniques


(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)

Light Attacks:

Medium Attacks:

Heavy Attacks:

AOE Attacks:



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[tracker=/t589-butch-castle#2390]
Name : Butch Castle
Epithet : "No-Good"
Age : 19
Height : 5'8½" / 174 cm
Weight : 143 lbs. / 65 kg
Species : Human
Faction : Bounty Hunter
Crew : N/A
Ship : Little Castle
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Apr 23, 2017 12:41 pm
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Niko wrote:

Hito Hito no Mi: Raijin


Devil Fruit: Hito Hito no Mi: Raijin (Human Human Fruit: Raijin)
Devil Fruit Type: Zoan

Devil Fruit Appearance: Its like an enlarged raspberry with a red exterior with light blue swirls
Devil Fruit Description:  This Mythic Zoan allows the user to take on Full and Hybrid forms of Raijin, the Japanese God of Thunder. Along with the god's physical strength, the user gains the ability to conjure and manipulate thunder and lightning. The user is able to amplify the power of the thunder and lightning through the use of conjured drums. The user is also able to summon and command a Raijuu, or lightning wolf.

Devil Fruit Passive Abilities:
-In Hybrid Form: Grows Four feet taller (12'1"), and gets slightly thicker. Skin becomes a light red with light blue markings about the body. An emblem and horns grow from the forehead and the ears become slightly pointed. Gains +25 to attack and defense and Reflex decreases by 50 due to his increased size.

- In Full God Form: Niko grows to a whopping 30 ft tall, with his body expanding as well, enlarging in the torso and arms. (Similar to Sengoku's full Daibutsu form) In this form, his skin becomes a deep red, and the blue marks seem to take on an electric glow about them, and the horns become massive as well.  In this form, Niko Gains 50 points in attack and Defense, and +25 points to Reflex. After changing back, Niko takes an equal toll to all boosted stats. Niko rarely uses this form early on due to the exhaustive toll it takes on his body. Niko generally saves this form for more dire and serious situations. [If you want the debuff to apply after your transformation has ended, you'll need to make this into a heavy technique. Otherwise, I'd just have to trust in your good will to not use your full God Form for half the thread or until the fight is over before ending the transformation to suffer the consequences.]

-Lightning generation and manipulation: Being the god of storms, the Raijinn User is able to generate and manipulate lightning.  Along this line, at higher levels of control Niko is able to utilize electromagnetism on metallic objects such as his staff.

-Electromagnetic Tuning: The user is able to utilize Electromagnetic waves to listen greater distances than a normal human would be able to. [Try not to use this as an excuse to metagame. The range of this ability should be considerably lower than Enel's.]

- Thunder generation: The user is able to generate sonic concussions and claps of thunder by generating sound, such as snapping one's fingers or clapping one's hands. [Only as long as the damage dealt by this (if at all) is no higher than an unnamed technique's.]

-Drum summoning: Niko is ablt to summon special Raijin drums in all forms however he can only summon so many in each form. In Human form, Niko is only able to summon at most two. In Hybrid, Niko can summon up to four drums. In four[full form] forms, Niko can summon up to eight drums.

- Drum manipulation: Niko is able to manipulate his drums within a certain distance from himself. (Similar to how the chop-chop fruit works with how Buggy can only maintain control over his split parts so long as they are within his range of influence from his feet. ) Niko often uses his drums as launched projectiles. If they go outside of Niko's range of influence, Niko can dispell the drum, but it takes at least two turns for him to be able to resummon a dispelled drum. Niko's range of influence over his drums is four times the length of his current height, adjusting to both his hybrid form and full form heights. At normal height, Niko has a control range of 32 feet from his body. In hybrid, 48 feet. In full form, 120 feet.

-Immune to Lightning/Electricity based attacks. Can actually safely consume lightning not generated by himself.


-Godly body: Because of the godly nature of Niko's fruit, Niko tends to heal from wounds and get back on his feet quicker than many normal people typically do. This is by no means an immediate regeneration effect. He experiences hunger, thirst, and fatigue at a slower rate. The only exception being after he's used his full form, at lower levels of strength this will put him out of commission for at the very least half a day. [This ability is too vague. Unless it's only for cosmetic effect, I'd suggest you remove it.]

Elemental/ special damage types associated with fruit:
- Shock damage: Shock damage can cause minor to serious electric burns and paralysis. Causing Reflex to take a temporary drop.[Nope. If you're going to give debuffs, you need to balance it out.]
-Sound/ Sonic damage: Sound type attacks can affect opponents by creating disorientation from either ringing to the ears or temporary deafness. This type of damage causes reflex to drop temporarily. [Same as above.]



Fighting Style: Storm Combat
Weapon Utilization: A separating staff that can split into up to eight sections.
Specialization: It's a little of both. Bit of melee combat with some ranged attacks.
Description: Storm Combat mainly focuses on mixing both armed and unarmed martial arts styles with lightning and thunder charged attacks. Niko's extensive training in his childhood gave him the physical strength and stamina to learn new fighting techniques during his travels, and incorporate them for use with his devil fruit. Niko utilizes his fighting abilities in combination with a metal segmented staff and the drums granted to him by his devil fruit, to execute attacks charged with both thunder and lightning.


Techniques



Light Attacks:

Medium Attacks:

Heavy Attacks:

AOE Attacks:

Butch
Butch
No Good
[tracker=/t589-butch-castle#2390]
Name : Butch Castle
Epithet : "No-Good"
Age : 19
Height : 5'8½" / 174 cm
Weight : 143 lbs. / 65 kg
Species : Human
Faction : Bounty Hunter
Crew : N/A
Ship : Little Castle
Crew Role : N/A
Balance : [ber] 256,650,000
[[childofdestiny]]
[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 117

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This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Jul 19, 2017 6:45 pm
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Niko wrote:

Hito Hito no Mi: Raijin


Devil Fruit: Hito Hito no Mi: Raijin (Human Human Fruit: Raijin)
Devil Fruit Type: Zoan

Devil Fruit Appearance: Its like an enlarged raspberry with a red exterior with light blue swirls
Devil Fruit Description: This Mythic Zoan allows the user to take on Full and Hybrid forms of Raijin, the Japanese God of Thunder. Along with the god's physical strength, the user gains the ability to conjure and manipulate thunder and lightning. The user is able to amplify the power of the thunder and lightning through the use of conjured drums. The user is also able to summon and command a Raijuu, or lightning wolf.

Devil Fruit Passive Abilities:

Forms:

-Lightning generation and manipulation: Being the god of storms, the Raijinn User is able to generate and manipulate lightning. Along this line, at higher levels of control Niko is able to utilize electromagnetism on metallic objects such as his staff. [So long as you don’t start using this like a magnet fruit, it’s fine. Try to limit this ability to cosmetic effects or manipulating your own equipment.]

-Electromagnetic Tuning: The user is able to utilize Electromagnetic waves to listen greater distances than a normal human would be able to. This mainly gets used for direction finding purposes.

- Thunder generation: The user is able to generate sonic concussions and claps of thunder by generating sound, such as snapping one's fingers or clapping one's hands.

-Drum summoning: Niko is able to summon special Raijin drums in all forms however he can only summon so many in each form. In Human form, Niko is only able to summon at most two. In Hybrid, Niko can summon up to four drums. In ful forms, Niko can summon up to Six drums.

- Drum manipulation: Niko is able to manipulate his drums within a certain distance from himself. (Similar to how the chop-chop fruit works with how Buggy can only maintain control over his split parts so long as they are within his range of influence from his feet. ) Niko often uses his drums as launched projectiles. If they go outside of Niko's range of influence, Niko can dispell the drum, but it takes at least two turns for him to be able to resummon a dispelled drum. Niko's range of influence over his drums is four times the length of his current height, adjusting to both his hybrid form and full form heights. At normal height, Niko has a control range of 32 feet from his body. In hybrid, 48 feet. In full form, 120 feet.

-Immune to Lightning/Electricity based attacks. Can actually safely consume lightning not generated by himself. [Check out Ryuji’s Thunder Bird Fruit. His immunity to electricity is limited to when he is in his hybrid and full forms, and even then, only when his opponent's’ attack is a specific amount below his defense. While the stat thresholds for immunity can be a bit higher for you(because he does have the power of flight over you), I still want you to import that pattern of damage immunity from him.]

-Cloud manipulation: Due to the weather related nature of the Raijin, Niko is able to generate clouds given the right climate (dependent on moisture levels, dryness).

-Cloud Jumping: Being a god of storms, Niko is able to briefly gain footing on clouds. However if he stays on the cloud too long he will fall through same as anyone else would.

Elemental/ special damage types associated with fruit:
- Shock damage: Shock damage can cause minor to serious electric burns and paralysis.
-Sound/ Sonic damage: Sound type attacks can affect opponents by creating disorientation from either ringing in the ears or temporary deafness. [This sort of damage will, of course, be determined by the difference in attack vs defense. So, I’d suggest you remove this bit. A special passive mentioning damage extent might only confuse someone into wrongly thinking that every lightning/sound attack you deal inflicts these effects.]


Fighting Style: Storm Combat
Weapon Utilization: Metal Separating staff, Raijin Drums
Description: Storm Combat mainly focuses on mixing both armed and unarmed martial arts styles with lightning and thunder charged attacks. Niko's extensive training in his childhood gave him the physical strength and stamina to learn new fighting techniques during his travels, and incorporate them for use with his devil fruit. Niko utilizes his fighting abilities in combination with a metal segmented staff and the drums granted to him by his devil fruit, to execute attacks charged with both thunder and lightning.


Techniques


(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)

Light Attacks:

Medium Attacks:

Heavy Attacks:

AOE Attacks:



Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Niko wrote:

Hito Hito no Mi: Raijin


Devil Fruit: Hito Hito no Mi: Raijin (Human Human Fruit: Raijin)
Devil Fruit Type: Zoan

Devil Fruit Appearance: Its like an enlarged raspberry with a red exterior with light blue swirls
Devil Fruit Description: This Mythic Zoan allows the user to take on Full and Hybrid forms of Raijin, the Japanese God of Thunder. Along with the god's physical strength, the user gains the ability to conjure and manipulate thunder and lightning. The user is able to amplify the power of the thunder and lightning through the use of conjured drums. The user is also able to summon and command a Raijuu, or lightning wolf.

Devil Fruit Passive Abilities:

Forms:

-Lightning generation and manipulation: Being the god of storms, the Raijinn User is able to generate and manipulate lightning.  Along this line, at higher levels of control Niko is able to utilize electromagnetism on metallic objects such as his staff. Mostly for flavor, the range of the electromagnetism is pretty small.

-Electromagnetic Tuning: The user is able to utilize Electromagnetic waves to listen greater distances than a normal human would be able to. This mainly gets used for direction finding purposes.

- Thunder generation: The user is able to generate sonic concussions and claps of thunder by generating sound, such as snapping one's fingers or clapping one's hands.

-Drum summoning: Niko is able to summon special Raijin drums in all forms however he can only summon so many in each form. In Human form, Niko is only able to summon at most two. In Hybrid, Niko can summon up to four drums. In full forms, Niko can summon up to Six drums.

- Drum manipulation: Niko is able to manipulate his drums within a certain distance from himself. (Similar to how the chop-chop fruit works with how Buggy can only maintain control over his split parts so long as they are within his range of influence from his feet. ) Niko often uses his drums as launched projectiles. If they go outside of Niko's range of influence, Niko can dispell the drum, but it takes at least two turns for him to be able to resummon a dispelled drum. Niko's range of influence over his drums is four times the length of his current height, adjusting to both his hybrid form and full form heights. At normal height, Niko has a control range of 32 feet from his body. In hybrid, 48 feet. In full form, 120 feet.

- Lightning Immunity/ resistance: In hybrid form, if Niko would be struck by a lightning based attack, if it is less than 50% of his defense, it is negated. In his full form, if the lightning based attack is less than 60% of his defense, it is negated. But if it is less than 80% of his defense, the damage is reduced by one tier. Can actually safely consume lightning not generated by himself.

-Cloud manipulation: Due to the weather related nature of the Raijin, Niko is able to generate clouds given the right climate (dependent on moisture levels, dryness).

-Cloud Jumping: Being a god of storms, Niko is able to briefly gain footing on clouds. However if he stays on the cloud too long he will fall through same as anyone else would.

Main Elemental/ special damage types associated with fruit:
- Lightning/ Electric shock
-Sound/ Sonic shock-waves


Fighting Style: Storm Combat
Weapon Utilization: Metal Separating staff, Raijin Drums
Description:  Storm Combat mainly focuses on mixing both armed and unarmed martial arts styles with lightning and thunder charged attacks from his Devil Fruit. Niko's extensive training in his childhood gave him the physical strength and stamina to learn new fighting techniques during his travels, and incorporate them for use with his devil fruit. Niko utilizes his fighting abilities in combination with a metal segmented staff and the drums granted to him by his devil fruit, to execute attacks charged with both thunder and lightning along with other storm elements.


Techniques


(The following techniques can either be all devil fruit techniques, or a combination of devil fruit, and natural/weapon techniques)

Light Attacks:

Medium Attacks:

Heavy Attacks:

AOE Attacks:

Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Thu Sep 07, 2017 4:56 pm
Since your fighting style is still running on the old system, you might have a huge handicap! So, I'm unlocking this thread so you can update it using the new template provided here.
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