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Channelling: Oni-Akuma Way  Empty Channelling: Oni-Akuma Way

This post has in-line assessment comments.Sun Apr 23, 2017 8:52 pm

Channelling: Oni-Akuma Way
Channelling: Oni-Akuma Way  D5fedbe124be2410a970fb85d1bef44f


Fighting Style: Channelling: Oni-Akuma Way
Weapon Utilisation: Yes - Yuuki-Onna
Specialization: Sword Style
Description:
Inherited from his Master, Giselle, 'Gaki' or Lazarus learns to channel elemental energy in his sword strikes by aligning himself to an ancestor in Horned Clan Lineage. For generations, beings with Horns were said to possess the ability to tap into the Supernatural Realm, channel ancestor's Supernatural abilities as their own. Giselle noted that Lazarus's cold but kind heart would align him with ancestor who went by the Moniker of Yeti. As such, his blade strikes aligned itself with the element of ice, using his horns to harbour the spiritual energy, transposed directly to his blade. A blue aura can be seen dripping off the blade when techniques of this style is used, focusing on quick but strongly placed strikes, rendering opponent's froze in it's wake.


Techniques



Light Attacks:

Medium Attacks:

Heavy Attacks:

AOE Attacks:






Last edited by Lazarus on Mon Apr 24, 2017 1:57 pm; edited 2 times in total
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
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Channelling: Oni-Akuma Way  Empty Re: Channelling: Oni-Akuma Way

This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Apr 24, 2017 1:10 pm
While I am a bit hesitant to allow "supernatural" aspects that haven't already been established in canon, I'll just pretend it;s the technology of the sword that allows you to create the freezing effects. Keep in mind though that you shouldn't go too crazy with the freezing effects in the future unless you feed the sword an ice paramecia. (Keep it limited to freezing slashes and thrusts like you have now.)

Anyways, this is ready to be approved except for one small thing in the AoE. Your description says that the duration is one post while the duration field says it is 3 posts. Also, if you're going to "freeze" someone, unless it's only for cosmetic effect, you should associate a stat debuff with it. For example, you can give them a -50% reflex while giving yourself a -50% attack. Also, please include a stat check where the frozen effect only applies if their defense is... say <50% of your attack? Of course, you only get a debuff if someone is actually affected by the -50% reflex.
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Channelling: Oni-Akuma Way
Channelling: Oni-Akuma Way  D5fedbe124be2410a970fb85d1bef44f


Fighting Style: Channelling: Oni-Akuma Way
Weapon Utilisation: Yes - Yuuki-Onna
Specialization: Sword Style
Description:
Inherited from his Master, Giselle, 'Gaki' or Lazarus learns to channel elemental energy in his sword strikes by aligning himself to an ancestor in Horned Clan Lineage. For generations, beings with Horns were said to possess the ability to tap into the Supernatural Realm, channel ancestor's Supernatural abilities as their own. Giselle noted that Lazarus's cold but kind heart would align him with ancestor who went by the Moniker of Yeti. As such, his blade strikes aligned itself with the element of ice, using his horns to harbour the spiritual energy, transposed directly to his blade. A blue aura can be seen dripping off the blade when techniques of this style is used, focusing on quick but strongly placed strikes, rendering opponent's froze in it's wake.


Techniques



Light Attacks:

Medium Attacks:

Heavy Attacks:

AOE Attacks:




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Channelling: Oni-Akuma Way  Empty Re: Channelling: Oni-Akuma Way

This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Apr 24, 2017 1:41 pm
Done o.o~
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3907

Channelling: Oni-Akuma Way  Empty Re: Channelling: Oni-Akuma Way

This post has in-line assessment comments.Mon Apr 24, 2017 1:57 pm
Channelling: Oni-Akuma Way  Fdzj9w
Lazarus wrote:

Channelling: Oni-Akuma Way
Channelling: Oni-Akuma Way  D5fedbe124be2410a970fb85d1bef44f


Fighting Style: Channelling: Oni-Akuma Way
Weapon Utilisation: Yes - Yuuki-Onna
Specialization: Sword Style
Description:
Inherited from his Master, Giselle, 'Gaki' or Lazarus learns to channel elemental energy in his sword strikes by aligning himself to an ancestor in Horned Clan Lineage. For generations, beings with Horns were said to possess the ability to tap into the Supernatural Realm, channel ancestor's Supernatural abilities as their own. Giselle noted that Lazarus's cold but kind heart would align him with ancestor who went by the Moniker of Yeti. As such, his blade strikes aligned itself with the element of ice, using his horns to harbour the spiritual energy, transposed directly to his blade. A blue aura can be seen dripping off the blade when techniques of this style is used, focusing on quick but strongly placed strikes, rendering opponent's froze in it's wake.


Techniques



Light Attacks:

Medium Attacks:

Heavy Attacks:

AOE Attacks:




Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3907

Channelling: Oni-Akuma Way  Empty Re: Channelling: Oni-Akuma Way

This post has in-line assessment comments.Thu Sep 07, 2017 5:06 pm
Since your fighting style is still running on the old system, you might have a huge handicap! So, I'm unlocking this thread so you can update it using the new template provided here.
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