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This post has in-line assessment comments.Tue Aug 08, 2017 3:34 pm

Drago Loomz


Drago Loomz N_vtelen

Basic Character Information

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First Name: Loomz
Last Name: Drago
Epithet: Odd-Eyes
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Faction: Pirate
Profession:

Weapon Specialist: Loomz learned the mastery of a large amount of weapon types such as Swords, Axes, Whips, Pistols or Cannons, especially for the last two. Even though he knows how to use a sword properly, he isn't a swordmaster at all. This is because his Devil Fruit, the Paramecia-type Buki Buki no Mi, he learned the usage of the weapons he could make using his powers, and he's well-informed as well with the weapons topic. He's the master of his main weapon, Rero.

Thief: In his early ages, he was bullied by the people of his hometown. After he learned what he want to do and got the courage to follow his dream, he had no choice but to steal from other people of the town, because he had no money and nobody was willing to give him any support. That's why he's a good thief, he can easily steal wallets from pockets without being noticed.

Physical Appearance


Height: 4 feet 9 inches (145 cm)
Weight: 92 lbs (42 kg)

Hair Style: Prickly hair, at the forehead two long locks of hair (when disheveled three), it's also symmetrical.
Hair Color: Left side black, while the right side is white.
Eye Color: Left is red, right is green. That's why he's been called Odd-Eyes in his town, since born.
Scars: He got many scars, but they were all healt by the time, he don't have a permanent scar at the time.
Clothing and Accessories:
Loomz have very unique clothing. He always weares a long red scarf. In fact, it's even longer than himself. Still, it does not prevent him from moving. On the upper body he usually wears a white T-shirt, and above it a long jacket, with a big zipper, that indeed functions as...a zipper. He wears most of the time shorts, and shoes with different colors: black and white (with a red stripe). This two colors: mentioned black and white, are his favorite ones, also his jacket stands from this two colors (black on one side, white on the other side), and also his "tusks" on his face bears these colors. This "tusks" are very important to him. "These are my tusks, these two makes me strong." - as he states to a stranger who asked him what those are. His only accessory is his personal weapon, named Rero, which is even more important to him than his "tusks". He wears it in his back attached to his jacket. Rero is a boomerang made from metal.

Description:
Loomz is 18 years old, but despite to his age, he's short statured. At first sight, he may look like a little kid. But under his clothes, there are strong muscles, which he gained during his training with his master, Rero. Thanks to that, his arms and legs are well-built. He is also slim. Because of how small he is, his enemy's which can't properly determine the strength of others, can easily be fooled.


The Past


Main Traits: Adventurous, Creative, Troublesome, Messy, Loyal
Likes: People who have the courage to follow his/her dreams, Warm, The sea, Bananas, Weapons, Money
Dislikes: Being alone, Others mentioning his size, Disloyal people, Snakes (He is afraid of them), Snow, Cold, A certain pirate
Hometown: Lvneel, North Blue
Personality:
Loomz is a kid with great battle skill, great trust towards his friends -at this point namely Rero and Gram-, and an ability to persevere, but he also has an obsession with money -in fact, he's he's good at money robbing- and is not soon to show his feelings, often hiding them or blaming other factors. But when he finds someone who at his opinion has the propability to be his friend, he shows him his true nature, a boy who wants to conquer the world, to gain friends, and who wants to be acknowledged. At his early ages, he hated all humans, but after he witnessed how good is to have a friend, ha became to trust more the people around him.

He can often be greedy, and he loves fooling around with his friends. Often, he even fools them to a point, that he even anger them. Despite this he does care about them.

He is very creative, with his Devil Fruit powers, when stealing, and when it comes to fool around. Though he's creative, he's messy at the time. Always forget to tidy up around him. When it comes to eating, he can't fill with it, except for vegetables, he hates them. He hates them as much as he is afraid of snakes. What he really loves are adventures, he love those kind of dangerous ones from the time in the forest. As well as all kinds of weapons, he think they're fascinating, because how much power they can bear. Yet he don't know what love is or what's interesting in a woman., because he never had the opportunity to see those things.

In combat, he first try to test his/her opponent how strong is he/she. He tries to be as much creative as he can and to use the environment for his sake. He uses his Devil Fruit powers, but even though he can create weapons with his bodyparts, for the memory of his master he uses his main weapon, Rero too. He likes good fights as these give him the opportunity to grow even more strong. He promised that when he's friends are in danger, he will always fight for him and never lose a friend again. When this kind of situation comes, he's prepared to fight with all his might even if it means death, because "without being friends means I will once again become a weird thing. I will never let this happen!"-he says.

History:
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
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Drago Loomz Empty Re: Drago Loomz

This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Aug 09, 2017 5:17 pm
While everything else is acceptable in your history, I'm afraid you'll need to take out any references to Behemoth. Behemoth has absolutely no interest in the Blues, and likely wouldn't ever leave the New World.

You can replace him a pirate that's not in the Important Characters page. (You can make up your own New World Pirate).
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Drago Loomz Empty Re: Drago Loomz

This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Aug 09, 2017 6:25 pm
Understood. I will change it tomorrow. Some grammar failure too what I discovered when re-reading. Alsooo you mentioned that I can change Behemoth by creating a New World Pirate. That sure sounds interesting. You meant to create an NPC Character for that?
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3900

Drago Loomz Empty Re: Drago Loomz

This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Aug 09, 2017 6:32 pm
Loomz wrote:Understood. I will change it tomorrow. Some grammar failure too what I discovered when re-reading. Alsooo you mentioned that I can change Behemoth by creating a New World Pirate. That sure sounds interesting. You meant to create an NPC Character for that?

No, no. xD If I created an Important NPC from every single person's history, there'd be no end to it.
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Drago Loomz Empty Re: Drago Loomz

This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Aug 09, 2017 6:34 pm
Oh, that sounds logically xddd But can I create one for myself which I will be using much later?
Gray
Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray
Epithet : "The Conqueror"; "Black Fist"
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Cyborg Human
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Balance : [bel] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]

[[improviseadaptovercome]]
Posts : 3900

Drago Loomz Empty Re: Drago Loomz

This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Aug 09, 2017 6:40 pm
Loomz wrote:Oh, that sounds logically xddd But can I create one for myself which I will be using much later?

Absolutely! Just don't be specific if you plan to give him devil fruit powers.
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This post has in-line assessment comments.Wed Aug 09, 2017 6:44 pm
Okey, thank you!
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