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Inquisitor Draw Style Empty Inquisitor Draw Style

This post has assessment comments.Mon Mar 09, 2020 10:52 am

Inquisitor Draw Stlyle


Fighting Style: Inquisitor Draw Style
Weapon Utilization: This style employs one handed swords.
Description: Drawing inspiration from Iaijutsu, this style was developed for the military arm of a religious order. One who could not be seen carrying naked steel from place to place as they were also trying to maintain order and security within the church, as such it has also been nicknamed as the “missionaries secret.”

This is a quick bladed style that emphasizes speed and precision over wantonly overpowering one’s opponent. General practitioners are known for being fast on their feet and perceptive to different directions of attacking their opponents. Legendary users of the style (as few as there are.) Are said to be able to draw so fast that they can create vacuums of pressure in the air around them creating a much wider arc than their sword could normally produce.

Toggled and Passive Abilities:

Missionaries’ Secret [Toggle] As long as Lopa has her blade sheathed she is ready to draw it at a moments notice, this confers a 20% bonus to her Reflexes as she’s more vigilant about when to defend herself or attack, but it also confers a penalty of -20% to Defense since her blade isn’t at the ready to defend herself at all times.



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Medium Techniques:

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AoE Techniques:






Last edited by Lopa C. Bonnie on Mon Mar 09, 2020 7:30 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror / Black Fist
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 10
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Hitpoints (HP) : 750
Attack (ATK) : 800
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 715
Willpower (WP) : 650
Level : 100
Prestige : 8
Experience Points : 18000
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Berries : [ber] 25,000,000,000
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Inquisitor Draw Style Empty Re: Inquisitor Draw Style

This post has assessment comments.Mon Mar 09, 2020 4:40 pm
[ Well done with the fighting style! I just had a few comments (marked in red) for ya. ]

Lopa C. Bonnie wrote:

Inquisitor Draw Stlyle


Fighting Style: Inquisitor Draw Style
Weapon Utilization: This style employs one handed swords.
Description: Drawing inspiration from Iaijutsu, this style was developed for the military arm of a religious order. One who could not be seen carrying naked steel from place to place as they were also trying to maintain order and security within the church, as such it has also been nicknamed as the “missionaries secret.”

This is a quick bladed style that emphasizes speed and precision over wantonly overpowering one’s opponent. General practitioners are known for being fast on their feet and perceptive to different directions of attacking their opponents. Legendary users of the style (as few as there are.) Are said to be able to draw so fast that they can create vacuums of pressure in the air around them creating a much wider arc than their sword could normally produce.

Toggled and Passive Abilities:

Missionaries’ Secret [Toggle] As long as Lopa has her blade sheathed she is ready to draw it at a moments notice, this confers a 20% bonus to her reflexes as she’s more vigilant about when to defend herself or attack, but it also confers a penalty of -20% bonus to attack since her blade isn’t at the ready to defend herself at all times. [ This is fine, but, the flavour text makes it sound more like her Defense should be reduced instead of her Attack? ]



Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:




Gray
The Conqueror / Black Fist
[tracker=/t131-tracker-gray-starks#504]
Name : Gray Starks
Epithet : The Conqueror / Black Fist
Age : 49
Height : 10'2" (310 cm)
Weight : 1043 lbs (473 kg)
Species : Human Cyborg
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Lurking Legend (Former Yonkou)
Crew : Black Fist Pirates (Destroyed)
Ship : Sangria's Vane (Destroyed)
Crew Role : Captain (Former)
Devil Fruit : Pressure-Pressure Fruit
Haki Level : 10
[[haoasc]][[busoasc]][[kenbunasc]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 750
Attack (ATK) : 800
Defense (DEF) : 600
Reflex (RX) : 715
Willpower (WP) : 650
Level : 100
Prestige : 8
Experience Points : 18000
Bounty : [ber=r] 5,000,000,000
EXP Bonus : +0.20 (to all allies)
Income Bonus : +0.20
Shop Discount : -30%
Berries : [ber] 25,000,000,000
[[strollingdeath]][[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[childofdestiny]][[freakofnature]]
[[punchoutguru]][[dulcetvirtuoso]]
[[atkt6_sp]][[deft6]][[rxt6]][[wpt6]]
[[1needlelog]][[3needlelog]]
Posts : 3315
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Inquisitor Draw Style Empty Re: Inquisitor Draw Style

This post has assessment comments.Mon Mar 09, 2020 7:48 pm
Thanks for the quick updates! Excellently done fighting style.

Approved!

Lopa C. Bonnie wrote:

Inquisitor Draw Stlyle


Fighting Style: Inquisitor Draw Style
Weapon Utilization: This style employs one handed swords.
Description: Drawing inspiration from Iaijutsu, this style was developed for the military arm of a religious order. One who could not be seen carrying naked steel from place to place as they were also trying to maintain order and security within the church, as such it has also been nicknamed as the “missionaries secret.”

This is a quick bladed style that emphasizes speed and precision over wantonly overpowering one’s opponent. General practitioners are known for being fast on their feet and perceptive to different directions of attacking their opponents. Legendary users of the style (as few as there are.) Are said to be able to draw so fast that they can create vacuums of pressure in the air around them creating a much wider arc than their sword could normally produce.

Toggled and Passive Abilities:

Missionaries’ Secret [Toggle] As long as Lopa has her blade sheathed she is ready to draw it at a moments notice, this confers a 20% bonus to her Reflexes as she’s more vigilant about when to defend herself or attack, but it also confers a penalty of -20% ┬áto Defense since her blade isn’t at the ready to defend herself at all times.



Techniques



Light Techniques:

Medium Techniques:

Heavy Techniques:

AoE Techniques:




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