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Himura Momoshiki
Tracker

Name : Himura Momoshiki
Epithet : Himura, the "Law Shark"
Age : 22
Height : 12'2"
Species : Fishman (Great White)
Faction : Marines
Haki Level : 0
Hitpoints (HP) : 100
Attack (ATK) : 0
Defense (DEF) : 0
Reflex (RX) : 0
Willpower (WP) : 0
Level : 1
Experience Points : 100
Berries Berries : 50,000
Posts : 9
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Himura Momoshiki  Empty Himura Momoshiki

on Sun Jul 19, 2020 5:15 pm

HIMURA MOMOSHIKI
Himura Momoshiki  Cbe5264f7a95ccd51637aa72dc680433



Basic Character Information


Starting Bonus: Pocket Change | [Starting Bonus Roll]

First Name: Himura
Middle Name/Initial: n/a
Last Name: Momoshiki
Epithet: Himura, "the Law Shark"
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Race: Fishman (Great White Shark)
Faction: Marine
Profession: Navigator | Bird Watcher 



Physical Appearance


Height: 12'2"
Weight: 521 lbs

Hair Style: Himura has shoulder-length wavy hair, which often falls into his face and covers the right side of his face. In combat, Himura has been known to push his hair back into a ponytail, with a few strands falling into a face.
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Blue
Scars: None
Clothing and Accessories: Himura wears a version of the standard-issue Marine uniform, one with long-sleeve jacket. Though, it should be noted that Himura refuses to wear the neckerchief. His navy blue pants are usually tucked into his combat boots, and he commonly wears a navy blue headband. When he is not on duty, and for casual or everyday attire, Himura’s usually wears some sort of red clothing. Commonly, Himura would wear a red, sleeveless, pinstriped turtleneck shirt and matching arm-warmers and dark black pants tucked into combat boots. On some occasions, he would dress as a stereotypical pirate, and wear an open red half-buttoned up shirt that exposes his chest. For pants, Himura would wear dark green pants that are rolled up to his knee, and sandals. Over his shoulders he would wear black pants. Whatever outfit he wears, Himura would wear a belt strapped across his chest which he uses to carry his weapon. 

Description: The man known as Himura is a grey-skinned great white shark fishman. Being a great-white shark fishman, Himura is rather tall, standing about twelve foot two inches in height, and weighs about five hundred twenty-one pounds. Unlike most great-white shark fishman, Himura is not as physically intimidating or muscular, and in fact, he tends to be rather slender and lanky. However, he does posses a lean build, simply put, Himura is not some buff and muscular monstrosity like others. There are three sets of curved facial markings under his eyes, sharp teeth and gills on his shoulder blades. 




The Past


Main Traits: Laid-Back, Honorable, Blunt, and Observant
Likes: Nature, the Sea, Swimming, Sleeping, and Bird Watching
Dislikes: Excessive Violence, dishonorable lacks, work, and crowds
Unique laugh: Shahahahaha, Shahahahaha!!

Hometown: East Blue
Personality: A level-headed and laid-back person, Himura does not seem capable of being in an alarmed or panic state. Perhaps its overconfidence, or too many brownies, but it is very rare for Himura to show concern or worry about a situation or a scenario. While this can be a little irritating for some of his comrades, this cool and level-headed demeanor can be rather assuring to civilians who simply needs someone to comfort or assure them that everything would be alright. Though, it should be noted that this does that mean he is incapable of being driven to an alarming state, more so, that he rarely shows alarm or worry outwardly. In battle, Himura is known to make sarcastic jokes and jabs, while remaining calm and somewhat serious. Likewise, Himura prefers to talk things out and handling things diplomatically, and when pushed to a ‘pointless fight’ he is commonly known to complain throughout the fight. Then again, Himura is known to complain with any type of work that he is forced to do and does not want to do.

Admittedly, Himura is a lazy person who’d prefer to just lounge around drinking and eating, instead of being physically fit, and he is infamous for conning his way out of doing work by pushing it off on his comrades. Though he is infamous for pushing work onto his comrades so that he can remain lazy, Himura is known to be a courageous and compassionate fishman. He treats his comrades like family and shows genuine concern for their well-being and safety. He is the type of person that if he was a captain or commander, he will never give someone under his command an assignment that he didn’t feel they couldn’t handle, nor would he send his company members on suicide missions. In fact, he finds it incredibly disgusting when a Captain treats his company poorly or sends them out on suicide missions. Himura has butted heads with multiple Captains, multiple times for this harsh treatment. In a similar manner, Himura does not closely follow the rules, and he is not willing to take risks that would endanger the lives of his company or innocent civilians, with that being said, Himura is not afraid to sacrifice himself in order to save other people.

Himura can be considered a nice guy, or well mostly a nice guy. He does have a bad habit of speaking his mind and well, speaking bluntly without any thought to what he is saying. When people first meet him, Himura can come off as a little introverted and aloof, and he doesn’t really seem to be that much of a talker. Though, when he gets comfortable around people or when drunk, Himura can become a surprisingly boisterous and even talkative person. Until then however, Himura usually sticks to the side-lines and observes situations and people from affair, and only really engaging in conversations with complete strangers when absolutely necessary or when he wants to.


History:

Born in the year 1806, Himura comes from Fishman Island, in the Red Line. When he was five years old, Himura’s village was raided by pirates where he and his mother was taken into slavery by the Celestial Dragons. Before the shipment of slaves could be completed, a Marine ship intercepted the Pirates. In the following struggle, many of the slaves were killed, including Himura’s mother. The slaves that survived were set free, save for Himura, whom the captain took in as a son. The reason why the captain adopted Himura is unknown, the marine would simply say that ‘Himura had a look to him that he liked’, whereas, his colleagues would point out that the Captain’s son had recently died and that in a moment of grief the Captain adopted Himura. The Marine Captain would take Himura to East Blue, where, he and his wife would raise Himura as their own.

The Marine Captain who adopted Himura would groom him into becoming a Marine, in the hopes that Himura would help bridge the gap between humans and fishmen. When Himura turned six years old, his adoptive father would hire a sensei in fishman karate to educate him on the water control techniques, as well as the culture of his people. Himura would form a close friendship with his sensei, and come to view him as a secondary father figure and a gate way to the Fishmen world. At the age of ten, Himura would attain a black belt in Fishman Karate, and his sensei would help him develop his own fighting style that revolves around the usage of a bastard word; a weapon which his adoptive father would teach him how to use and handle. Himura would continue to undergo his adoptive father’s and his teacher’s training until the age of sixteen. At the age of eighteen, Himura would join the marines where he would work as a navigator.




Last edited by Himura Momoshiki on Sun Jul 19, 2020 11:58 pm; edited 1 time in total
Castor O. Nox
Himura Momoshiki  G7UGK6I
Tracker

Name : Castor O. Nox
Epithet : Sanpaku
Age : 24
Height : 5'7
Weight : 160lbs
Species : Three-Eye Tribesman
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran
Crew : Nox Pirates
Ship : The Wailing Calamity
Crew Position : Captain | Navigator | Book Collector
Devil Fruit : Goro Goro no Mi
Haki Level : 9
[[haospec]][[busospec]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 380
Attack (ATK) : 450
Defense (DEF) : 450
Reflex (RX) : 525
Willpower (WP) : 500
Level : 77
Experience Points : 7748
Bounty : 480,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Shop Discount : 20%
Berries Berries : 28,279,688‬
[[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[bookworm]][[untouchable]][[childofdestiny]]
[[punchoutguru]][[barrelcrazed]]
[[atkt6_sp]][[deft6]][[deft6]][[rxt5]]
Posts : 430
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Himura Momoshiki  Empty Re: Himura Momoshiki

on Sun Jul 19, 2020 11:32 pm
@Himura Momoshiki wrote:

HIMURA MOMOSHIKI
Himura Momoshiki  Cbe5264f7a95ccd51637aa72dc680433



Basic Character Information


Starting Bonus: Pocket Change | [Starting Bonus Roll]

First Name: Himura
Middle Name/Initial: n/a
Last Name: Momoshiki
Epithet: Himura, "the Law Shark"
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Race: Fishman (Great White Shark)
Faction: Revolutionary Army
Profession: Navigator | Bird Watcher 



Physical Appearance


Height: 12'2"
Weight: 521 lbs

Hair Style: Himura has shoulder-length wavy hair, which often falls into his face and covers the right side of his face. In combat, Himura has been known to push his hair back into a ponytail, with a few strands falling into a face.
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Blue
Scars: None
Clothing and Accessories: Himura wears a version of the standard-issue Marine uniform, one with long-sleeve jacket. Though, it should be noted that Himura refuses to wear the neckerchief. His navy blue pants are usually tucked into his combat boots, and he commonly wears a navy blue headband. When he is not on duty, and for casual or everyday attire, Himura’s usually wears some sort of red clothing. Commonly, Himura would wear a red, sleeveless, pinstriped turtleneck shirt and matching arm-warmers and dark black pants tucked into combat boots. On some occasions, he would dress as a stereotypical pirate, and wear an open red half-buttoned up shirt that exposes his chest. For pants, Himura would wear dark green pants that are rolled up to his knee, and sandals. Over his shoulders he would wear black pants. Whatever outfit he wears, Himura would wear a belt strapped across his chest which he uses to carry his weapon. 

Description: The man known as Himura is a grey-skinned great white shark fishman. Being a great-white shark fishman, Himura is rather tall, standing about twelve foot two inches in height, and weighs about five hundred twenty-one pounds. Unlike most great-white shark fishman, Himura is not as physically intimidating or muscular, and in fact, he tends to be rather slender and lanky. However, he does posses a lean build, simply put, Himura is not some buff and muscular monstrosity like others. There are three sets of curved facial markings under his eyes, sharp teeth and gills on his shoulder blades. 




The Past


Main Traits: Laid-Back, Honorable, Blunt, and Observant
Likes: Nature, the Sea, Swimming, Sleeping, and Bird Watching
Dislikes: Excessive Violence, dishonorable lacks, work, and crowds
Unique laugh: Shahahahaha, Shahahahaha!!

Hometown: East Blue
Personality: A level-headed and laid-back person, Himura does not seem capable of being in an alarmed or panic state. Perhaps its overconfidence, or too many brownies, but it is very rare for Himura to show concern or worry about a situation or a scenario. While this can be a little irritating for some of his comrades, this cool and level-headed demeanor can be rather assuring to civilians who simply needs someone to comfort or assure them that everything would be alright. Though, it should be noted that this does that mean he is incapable of being driven to an alarming state, more so, that he rarely shows alarm or worry outwardly. In battle, Himura is known to make sarcastic jokes and jabs, while remaining calm and somewhat serious. Likewise, Himura prefers to talk things out and handling things diplomatically, and when pushed to a ‘pointless fight’ he is commonly known to complain throughout the fight. Then again, Himura is known to complain with any type of work that he is forced to do and does not want to do.

Admittedly, Himura is a lazy person who’d prefer to just lounge around drinking and eating, instead of being physically fit, and he is infamous for conning his way out of doing work by pushing it off on his comrades. Though he is infamous for pushing work onto his comrades so that he can remain lazy, Himura is known to be a courageous and compassionate fishman. He treats his comrades like family and shows genuine concern for their well-being and safety. He is the type of person that if he was a captain or commander, he will never give someone under his command an assignment that he didn’t feel they couldn’t handle, nor would he send his company members on suicide missions. In fact, he finds it incredibly disgusting when a Captain treats his company poorly or sends them out on suicide missions. Himura has butted heads with multiple Captains, multiple times for this harsh treatment. In a similar manner, Himura does not closely follow the rules, and he is not willing to take risks that would endanger the lives of his company or innocent civilians, with that being said, Himura is not afraid to sacrifice himself in order to save other people.

Himura can be considered a nice guy, or well mostly a nice guy. He does have a bad habit of speaking his mind and well, speaking bluntly without any thought to what he is saying. When people first meet him, Himura can come off as a little introverted and aloof, and he doesn’t really seem to be that much of a talker. Though, when he gets comfortable around people or when drunk, Himura can become a surprisingly boisterous and even talkative person. Until then however, Himura usually sticks to the side-lines and observes situations and people from affair, and only really engaging in conversations with complete strangers when absolutely necessary or when he wants to.


History:

Born in the year 1806, Himura comes from Fishman Island, in the Red Line. When he was five years old, Himura’s village was raided by pirates where he and his mother was taken into slavery by the Celestial Dragons. Before the shipment of slaves could be completed, a Marine ship intercepted the Pirates. In the following struggle, many of the slaves were killed, including Himura’s mother. The slaves that survived were set free, save for Himura, whom the captain took in as a soon. The reason why the captain adopted Himura is unknown, the marine would simply say that ‘Himura had a look to him that he liked’, whereas, his colleagues would point out that the Captain’s son had recently died and that in a moment of grief the Captain adopted Himura. The Marine Captain would take Himura to East Blue, where, he and his wife would raise Himura as their own.

The Marine Captain who adopted Himura would groom him into becoming a Marine, in the hopes that Himura would help bridge the gap between humans and fishmen. When Himura turned six years old, his adoptive father would hire a sensei in fishman karate to educate him on the water control techniques, as well as the culture of his people. Himura would form a close friendship with his sensei, and come to view him as a secondary father figure and a gate way to the Fishmen world. At the age of ten, Himura would attain a black belt in Fishman Karate, and his sensei would help him develop his own fighting style that revolves around the usage of a bastard word; a weapon which his adoptive father would teach him how to use and handle. Himura would continue to undergo his adoptive father’s and his teacher’s training until the age of sixteen. At the age of eighteen, Himura would join the marines where he would work as a navigator.



Hey Himura! Welcome to Revival Dawn! I hope you enjoy your time here! I'll be evaluating your thread, nothing major this time around, just a few minor hiccups and you'll be good to go!

History Section wrote:
er. The slaves that survived were set free, save for Himura, whom the captain took in as a soon.

I believe you meant 'son' and not 'soon'. XD

The only other thing it'd need you to answer is Himura a marine or a revolutionary member because your faction still reads Revolutionary but your description and history point otherwise?


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Himura Momoshiki
Tracker

Name : Himura Momoshiki
Epithet : Himura, the "Law Shark"
Age : 22
Height : 12'2"
Species : Fishman (Great White)
Faction : Marines
Haki Level : 0
Hitpoints (HP) : 100
Attack (ATK) : 0
Defense (DEF) : 0
Reflex (RX) : 0
Willpower (WP) : 0
Level : 1
Experience Points : 100
Berries Berries : 50,000
Posts : 9
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Himura Momoshiki  Empty Re: Himura Momoshiki

on Sun Jul 19, 2020 11:58 pm
Bump Bump!!! Fixed my mistakes ^.^
Castor O. Nox
Himura Momoshiki  G7UGK6I
Tracker

Name : Castor O. Nox
Epithet : Sanpaku
Age : 24
Height : 5'7
Weight : 160lbs
Species : Three-Eye Tribesman
Faction : Pirate
World Position : Super Veteran
Crew : Nox Pirates
Ship : The Wailing Calamity
Crew Position : Captain | Navigator | Book Collector
Devil Fruit : Goro Goro no Mi
Haki Level : 9
[[haospec]][[busospec]]
Hitpoints (HP) : 380
Attack (ATK) : 450
Defense (DEF) : 450
Reflex (RX) : 525
Willpower (WP) : 500
Level : 77
Experience Points : 7748
Bounty : 480,000,000
Income Multiplier : +10%
Shop Discount : 20%
Berries Berries : 28,279,688‬
[[baneoftheweak]][[riseandshine]][[bookworm]][[untouchable]][[childofdestiny]]
[[punchoutguru]][[barrelcrazed]]
[[atkt6_sp]][[deft6]][[deft6]][[rxt5]]
Posts : 430
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Himura Momoshiki  Empty Re: Himura Momoshiki

on Mon Jul 20, 2020 12:16 am
@Himura Momoshiki wrote:

HIMURA MOMOSHIKI
Himura Momoshiki  Cbe5264f7a95ccd51637aa72dc680433



Basic Character Information


Starting Bonus: Pocket Change | [Starting Bonus Roll]

First Name: Himura
Middle Name/Initial: n/a
Last Name: Momoshiki
Epithet: Himura, "the Law Shark"
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Race: Fishman (Great White Shark)
Faction: Marine
Profession: Navigator | Bird Watcher 



Physical Appearance


Height: 12'2"
Weight: 521 lbs

Hair Style: Himura has shoulder-length wavy hair, which often falls into his face and covers the right side of his face. In combat, Himura has been known to push his hair back into a ponytail, with a few strands falling into a face.
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Blue
Scars: None
Clothing and Accessories: Himura wears a version of the standard-issue Marine uniform, one with long-sleeve jacket. Though, it should be noted that Himura refuses to wear the neckerchief. His navy blue pants are usually tucked into his combat boots, and he commonly wears a navy blue headband. When he is not on duty, and for casual or everyday attire, Himura’s usually wears some sort of red clothing. Commonly, Himura would wear a red, sleeveless, pinstriped turtleneck shirt and matching arm-warmers and dark black pants tucked into combat boots. On some occasions, he would dress as a stereotypical pirate, and wear an open red half-buttoned up shirt that exposes his chest. For pants, Himura would wear dark green pants that are rolled up to his knee, and sandals. Over his shoulders he would wear black pants. Whatever outfit he wears, Himura would wear a belt strapped across his chest which he uses to carry his weapon. 

Description: The man known as Himura is a grey-skinned great white shark fishman. Being a great-white shark fishman, Himura is rather tall, standing about twelve foot two inches in height, and weighs about five hundred twenty-one pounds. Unlike most great-white shark fishman, Himura is not as physically intimidating or muscular, and in fact, he tends to be rather slender and lanky. However, he does posses a lean build, simply put, Himura is not some buff and muscular monstrosity like others. There are three sets of curved facial markings under his eyes, sharp teeth and gills on his shoulder blades. 




The Past


Main Traits: Laid-Back, Honorable, Blunt, and Observant
Likes: Nature, the Sea, Swimming, Sleeping, and Bird Watching
Dislikes: Excessive Violence, dishonorable lacks, work, and crowds
Unique laugh: Shahahahaha, Shahahahaha!!

Hometown: East Blue
Personality: A level-headed and laid-back person, Himura does not seem capable of being in an alarmed or panic state. Perhaps its overconfidence, or too many brownies, but it is very rare for Himura to show concern or worry about a situation or a scenario. While this can be a little irritating for some of his comrades, this cool and level-headed demeanor can be rather assuring to civilians who simply needs someone to comfort or assure them that everything would be alright. Though, it should be noted that this does that mean he is incapable of being driven to an alarming state, more so, that he rarely shows alarm or worry outwardly. In battle, Himura is known to make sarcastic jokes and jabs, while remaining calm and somewhat serious. Likewise, Himura prefers to talk things out and handling things diplomatically, and when pushed to a ‘pointless fight’ he is commonly known to complain throughout the fight. Then again, Himura is known to complain with any type of work that he is forced to do and does not want to do.

Admittedly, Himura is a lazy person who’d prefer to just lounge around drinking and eating, instead of being physically fit, and he is infamous for conning his way out of doing work by pushing it off on his comrades. Though he is infamous for pushing work onto his comrades so that he can remain lazy, Himura is known to be a courageous and compassionate fishman. He treats his comrades like family and shows genuine concern for their well-being and safety. He is the type of person that if he was a captain or commander, he will never give someone under his command an assignment that he didn’t feel they couldn’t handle, nor would he send his company members on suicide missions. In fact, he finds it incredibly disgusting when a Captain treats his company poorly or sends them out on suicide missions. Himura has butted heads with multiple Captains, multiple times for this harsh treatment. In a similar manner, Himura does not closely follow the rules, and he is not willing to take risks that would endanger the lives of his company or innocent civilians, with that being said, Himura is not afraid to sacrifice himself in order to save other people.

Himura can be considered a nice guy, or well mostly a nice guy. He does have a bad habit of speaking his mind and well, speaking bluntly without any thought to what he is saying. When people first meet him, Himura can come off as a little introverted and aloof, and he doesn’t really seem to be that much of a talker. Though, when he gets comfortable around people or when drunk, Himura can become a surprisingly boisterous and even talkative person. Until then however, Himura usually sticks to the side-lines and observes situations and people from affair, and only really engaging in conversations with complete strangers when absolutely necessary or when he wants to.


History:

Born in the year 1806, Himura comes from Fishman Island, in the Red Line. When he was five years old, Himura’s village was raided by pirates where he and his mother was taken into slavery by the Celestial Dragons. Before the shipment of slaves could be completed, a Marine ship intercepted the Pirates. In the following struggle, many of the slaves were killed, including Himura’s mother. The slaves that survived were set free, save for Himura, whom the captain took in as a son. The reason why the captain adopted Himura is unknown, the marine would simply say that ‘Himura had a look to him that he liked’, whereas, his colleagues would point out that the Captain’s son had recently died and that in a moment of grief the Captain adopted Himura. The Marine Captain would take Himura to East Blue, where, he and his wife would raise Himura as their own.

The Marine Captain who adopted Himura would groom him into becoming a Marine, in the hopes that Himura would help bridge the gap between humans and fishmen. When Himura turned six years old, his adoptive father would hire a sensei in fishman karate to educate him on the water control techniques, as well as the culture of his people. Himura would form a close friendship with his sensei, and come to view him as a secondary father figure and a gate way to the Fishmen world. At the age of ten, Himura would attain a black belt in Fishman Karate, and his sensei would help him develop his own fighting style that revolves around the usage of a bastard word; a weapon which his adoptive father would teach him how to use and handle. Himura would continue to undergo his adoptive father’s and his teacher’s training until the age of sixteen. At the age of eighteen, Himura would join the marines where he would work as a navigator.



Mhm. Minor edits and I really enjoyed this application. The fact he's so big and lanky, has an intimidating factor but still has a kind heart, gives him the gentle giant feel. Well, where his allies are concerned, interested to see his interactions with pirates etc. Anyway, enough ramblings, approved! Get out there and clean these seas up!

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